Unit 4 A better me（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

Unit 4 A better me单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我” 范畴，聚焦青少年心理压力、情绪管理、自我成长，学会正视烦恼、调整心态，成为更好的自己。 2. 写作维度 本单元以心理成长类书信、短文写作为主，包含两个写作方向：一是倾诉学业、人际带来的压力与烦恼，分析烦恼产生的原因；二是分享缓解压力、调节情绪的实用方法，表达自我提升的目标。写作常使用 if 条件句、提建议句型，贴合校园生活实际。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 10 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. negative emotions 负面情绪 2. deal with /cope with 处理；应对 3. communicate with 与…… 沟通 4. take exercise regularly 定期运动 5. mood swings 情绪波动 6. stay up late 熬夜 7. balanced diet 均衡饮食 8. concentrate better 更专注 9. overcome shyness 克服害羞 10. electronic products 电子产品 11. eye exercises 眼保健操 12. allocate time 分配时间 13. keep positive 保持积极 14. bear pressure 承受压力 15. fall out with friends 和朋友闹矛盾 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Many teenagers feel pressure to do well in school. 翻译：许多青少年为取得好成绩倍感压力。 2. Many students bear great pressure to improve their grades. 翻译：很多学生背负着提升成绩的巨大压力。 中间句（4 句） 1. Regular exercise is a good way to deal with stress. 翻译：规律运动是缓解压力的好方法。 2. Chatting with good friends is a good way to cope with mood swings. 翻译：和好友谈心是缓解情绪波动的好办法。 3. If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations. 翻译：如果压抑负面情绪，情况可能会变得更糟。 4. When you feel stressed, you can talk to teachers for useful advice. 翻译：当你感到压力大时，可以找老师寻求有用建议。 结尾句（2 句） 1. Let’s learn to handle negative emotions and live a healthier life. 翻译：让我们学会处理负面情绪，拥有更健康的生活。 2. If we work hard and stay positive, we will have a better future. 翻译：如果我们努力且保持乐观，将会拥有更好的未来。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P52)：Many teenagers feel pressure to do well in school. 仿写：很多学生背负着提升成绩的巨大压力。 2. 教材原句 (P64)：Regular exercise is a good way to deal with stress. 仿写：和好友谈心是缓解情绪波动的好办法。 3. 教材原句 (P53)：I feel awful whenever I see her. 仿写：每次和朋友闹矛盾，我都会十分难过。 【答案】 1. Many students bear great pressure to improve their grades. 2. Chatting with good friends is a good way to cope with mood swings. 3. Every time I fall out with my friends, I will feel very upset. 典例 （2025·山东泰安·中考真题）良好的情绪管理有助于人的身心健康。学会正确处理负面情绪，可以更好地应对生活中的各种困难和挑战。某英语报刊正在以“Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions (负面情绪)”为题向广大中学生征文，请你结合自己的经历写一篇英语短文，谈谈正确处理负面情绪的方法及重要意义，向报刊投稿。提示如下： 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 3.词数：80—100。 Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：观点记叙文（报刊征文）； ② 时态：叙事用一般过去时，方法、意义用一般现在时； ③ 要点：自身负面情绪经历、调节情绪的方法、处理情绪的重要性；词数 80-100，禁止真实人名校名。 谋篇布局 开头：简述自身考试失利、产生负面情绪的亲身经历。 中间：分点写沟通、运动两种调节方法，再阐述正确处理情绪的重要性。 结尾：发出倡议，学会调节情绪、健康生活。 佳作展示 Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions Last month, I failed an important exam. I felt really sad. To deal with these negative emotions, first, I communicated with my teacher. She gave me useful advice on study methods. Then, I started taking exercise regularly, like jogging in the morning. It helped me relax and regain energy. Dealing with negative emotions properly is important. It helps solve problems. By talking to others, we can get solutions. Also, it avoids causing more trouble. If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations. Let’s learn to handle negative emotions and live a healthier life. 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] ①deal with 处理 ②communicate with 和……沟通 ③take exercise regularly 定期锻炼身体 ④solve problems 解决问题 [高分句型] ①Dealing with negative emotions properly is important.（动名词作主语） ②If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations.（条件状语从句） （一） （2026·广东广州·二模）为了响应学校“健康生活，快乐成长”的倡议，学校英语报正在开展以“How to live a healthy life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿： 内容包括： 1. What is a healthy life? 2. How can we live a healthy life? 3. How does a healthy life help us grow and study? 注意：文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；词数：80-100 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2026·广东深圳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你因要进行英语课前展示 (presentation) 而感到紧张，因此你向外教John求助，告诉他你遇到的问题。对方给了你建议，你采纳后取得了很好的效果。请你用英语写一封电子邮件向他表示感谢。 要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to thank you for your advice last week. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Li Hua （三） （2026·广东深圳·二模）为响应教育部《关于全面推进健康学校建设的指导意见》，我校围绕 “综合防控近视”，已在校内开展 “明亮双眼，光明未来（Bright Vision, Bright Future）” 计划。具体举措包括：每日体育综合活动时长不少于2小时；保障课间休息15分钟；严格落实每日两次眼保健操等。 假如你是该校学生李华，请你给全校同学写一封倡议书，介绍本次护眼活动的举措，谈谈保护视力的重要性，并提出日常护眼的个人建议（如少看电子产品等）。 写作要求： 1. 词数不少于 80 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节； 3. 不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：体育综合活动 outdoor sports 电子产品 electronic products Dear schoolmates, To protect our eyesight, our school has launched a two-week campaign named “Bright Vision, Bright Future”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （四） （2026·广东深圳·二模）假设你是李华，将参加你校 English Club 组织的主题为”Use AI Correctly, Learn More Effectively”的沙龙。请写一篇发言稿，分享某AI工具的功能、使用效果、感悟，并鼓励同学们积极使用，高效学习。 注意： 1．词数为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （2025·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，你校英语文化节举办了一个主题为“AI助你时空穿越” (AI Helps You Travel Through Time) 的活动。请你通过AI时空邮局给去年9月1日刚进入初三的自己写一封信。请在信中问候一年前的自己，给出三条建议 (学习，生活，心态等)，并希望通过这封信弥补遗憾，帮助现在的自己变得更好。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear younger me, How time flies! Now you are about to start the important year. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua （六） （2025·广东广州·一模）你校本周在举办体育节，你的英语老师邀请你在英语课上以“运动与我”为主题进行演讲。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语演讲稿。 注意： 1. 可在原有思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不算入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Sports and I My dear teacher and classmates, Today, I’m very happy to have the chance to talk about a topic that is very important to me: Sports and I.______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! （七） （2024·河北保定·一模）中国自古以来就是礼仪之邦，文明礼仪是中华民族的优良传统，是做人的美德，更是一个现代文明人必备的素养。作为新一代的青少年，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养？请以“I Am a Student with Good Manners”为题，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文。 提示：(1) To be polite, what do you usually do at school? (2) What do you usually do at home? (3) In public, how do you behave politely? 要求：(1) 短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥; (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; (3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 I Am a Student with Good Manners It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. At school, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （2023·广东广州·三模）青少年是祖国的未来。为促进青少年成长发展，学校英语俱乐部组织了一个主题为“青少年如何全面发展自我”的交流分享会，请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何从锻炼身体，发展兴趣爱好和学习知识等三个方面来实现青少年的全面发展。内容需包括以下要点： How For examples build up bodies … develop interests … get knowledge … 注意： （1）词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 As teenagers, we are the future of our country. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here are my opinions._______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 4 A better me单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我” 范畴，聚焦青少年心理压力、情绪管理、自我成长，学会正视烦恼、调整心态，成为更好的自己。 2. 写作维度 本单元以心理成长类书信、短文写作为主，包含两个写作方向：一是倾诉学业、人际带来的压力与烦恼，分析烦恼产生的原因；二是分享缓解压力、调节情绪的实用方法，表达自我提升的目标。写作常使用 if 条件句、提建议句型，贴合校园生活实际。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 4 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. negative emotions 负面情绪 2. deal with /cope with 处理；应对 3. communicate with 与…… 沟通 4. take exercise regularly 定期运动 5. mood swings 情绪波动 6. stay up late 熬夜 7. balanced diet 均衡饮食 8. concentrate better 更专注 9. overcome shyness 克服害羞 10. electronic products 电子产品 11. eye exercises 眼保健操 12. allocate time 分配时间 13. keep positive 保持积极 14. bear pressure 承受压力 15. fall out with friends 和朋友闹矛盾 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Many teenagers feel pressure to do well in school. 翻译：许多青少年为取得好成绩倍感压力。 2. Many students bear great pressure to improve their grades. 翻译：很多学生背负着提升成绩的巨大压力。 中间句（4 句） 1. Regular exercise is a good way to deal with stress. 翻译：规律运动是缓解压力的好方法。 2. Chatting with good friends is a good way to cope with mood swings. 翻译：和好友谈心是缓解情绪波动的好办法。 3. If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations. 翻译：如果压抑负面情绪，情况可能会变得更糟。 4. When you feel stressed, you can talk to teachers for useful advice. 翻译：当你感到压力大时，可以找老师寻求有用建议。 结尾句（2 句） 1. Let’s learn to handle negative emotions and live a healthier life. 翻译：让我们学会处理负面情绪，拥有更健康的生活。 2. If we work hard and stay positive, we will have a better future. 翻译：如果我们努力且保持乐观，将会拥有更好的未来。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P52)：Many teenagers feel pressure to do well in school. 仿写：很多学生背负着提升成绩的巨大压力。 2. 教材原句 (P64)：Regular exercise is a good way to deal with stress. 仿写：和好友谈心是缓解情绪波动的好办法。 3. 教材原句 (P53)：I feel awful whenever I see her. 仿写：每次和朋友闹矛盾，我都会十分难过。 【答案】 1. Many students bear great pressure to improve their grades. 2. Chatting with good friends is a good way to cope with mood swings. 3. Every time I fall out with my friends, I will feel very upset. 典例 （2025·山东泰安·中考真题）良好的情绪管理有助于人的身心健康。学会正确处理负面情绪，可以更好地应对生活中的各种困难和挑战。某英语报刊正在以“Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions (负面情绪)”为题向广大中学生征文，请你结合自己的经历写一篇英语短文，谈谈正确处理负面情绪的方法及重要意义，向报刊投稿。提示如下： 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； 3.词数：80—100。 Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：观点记叙文（报刊征文）； ② 时态：叙事用一般过去时，方法、意义用一般现在时； ③ 要点：自身负面情绪经历、调节情绪的方法、处理情绪的重要性；词数 80-100，禁止真实人名校名。 谋篇布局 开头：简述自身考试失利、产生负面情绪的亲身经历。 中间：分点写沟通、运动两种调节方法，再阐述正确处理情绪的重要性。 结尾：发出倡议，学会调节情绪、健康生活。 佳作展示 Learn to Deal with Negative Emotions Last month, I failed an important exam. I felt really sad. To deal with these negative emotions, first, I communicated with my teacher. She gave me useful advice on study methods. Then, I started taking exercise regularly, like jogging in the morning. It helped me relax and regain energy. Dealing with negative emotions properly is important. It helps solve problems. By talking to others, we can get solutions. Also, it avoids causing more trouble. If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations. Let’s learn to handle negative emotions and live a healthier life. 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] ①deal with 处理 ②communicate with 和……沟通 ③take exercise regularly 定期锻炼身体 ④solve problems 解决问题 [高分句型] ①Dealing with negative emotions properly is important.（动名词作主语） ②If we keep negative feelings inside, they may lead to worse situations.（条件状语从句） （一） （2026·广东广州·二模）为了响应学校“健康生活，快乐成长”的倡议，学校英语报正在开展以“How to live a healthy life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿： 内容包括： 1. What is a healthy life? 2. How can we live a healthy life? 3. How does a healthy life help us grow and study? 注意：文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；词数：80-100 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Live a Healthy Life A healthy life means a strong body, a positive mind, and good habits. It matters a lot in our life. To live healthily, we should eat a balanced diet and stay away from junk food. Regular exercise is important, too. We also need eight hours’ sleep a night and avoid staying up late. Besides, managing stress wisely helps keep us relaxed. When our bodies are full of energy, we can concentrate better and remember things more easily. A calm and positive mind helps us face challenges without giving up. Let’s embrace a healthy lifestyle and enjoy growing up. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：这是一篇事理说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：健康生活的定义、如何健康生活以及健康生活对成长和学习的益处 确定人称：以第一人称行文 注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；词数80-100 [第二步：写作布局] 四段式结构 第一段：点明健康生活的定义及其重要性 第二段：具体阐述健康生活的方式 第三段：总结健康生活对学习和成长的益处 第四段：发出呼吁 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：健康生活的定义 定义：a strong body/a positive mind/good habits/optimistic attitude/physical and mental health等 要点二：健康生活的方式 饮食：eat a balanced diet/stay away from junk food/eat more fruit and vegetables/take in enough nutrition等 运动：regular exercise/do sports every day/keep active/take morning exercises等 习惯：need eight hours’ sleep/avoid staying up late/manage stress wisely/relax oneself/take up hobbies/go to bed early and get up early等 要点三：健康生活的益处 益处：concentrate better and remember things more easily/help us face challenges without giving up/improve learning efficiency/keep energetic all day等 （二） （2026·广东深圳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你因要进行英语课前展示 (presentation) 而感到紧张，因此你向外教John求助，告诉他你遇到的问题。对方给了你建议，你采纳后取得了很好的效果。请你用英语写一封电子邮件向他表示感谢。 要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to thank you for your advice last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John, I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to thank you for your advice last week. I used to speak fast and had trouble expressing my ideas clearly. You suggested that I should speak slowly and record myself so that I could improve my pronunciation. What’s more, you advised me to practice in front of a mirror to overcome my shyness. I followed your advice and practiced every day. As a result, I made great progress. During the presentation, I felt much calmer and spoke more clearly. I am truly thankful for your kindness and support. Best wishes Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（感谢信），用一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：说明写信目的、描述遇到的问题、介绍外教给出的建议、采纳建议后的变化与结果、表达感谢 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名与学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明写信目的，表达感谢 主体段：描述遇到的问题、外教的建议及采纳建议后的进步 结尾段：再次表达感谢，收尾礼貌用语 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：写信背景与目的 背景引入：I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to thank you for your advice last week. 拓展词汇和表达：I’m writing to express my thanks to you/Thank you for your help with my presentation等 要点二：遇到的问题与外教的建议 遇到的问题：I used to speak fast and had trouble expressing my ideas clearly. 外教的建议：speak slowly and record myself to improve my pronunciation/practice in front of a mirror to overcome my shyness/feel nervous about speaking in public/forget what to say easily/advise me to practice with friends/tell me to prepare key points in advance等 要点三：采纳建议后的变化与结果 行动与结果：I followed your advice and practiced every day. As a result, I made great progress. During the presentation, I felt much calmer and spoke more clearly/became more confident/did a good job in the presentation/got praise from classmates等 要点四：结尾感谢 感谢表达：I am truly thankful for your kindness and support/I really appreciate your help/Thank you for your patient guidance等 （三） （2026·广东深圳·二模）为响应教育部《关于全面推进健康学校建设的指导意见》，我校围绕 “综合防控近视”，已在校内开展 “明亮双眼，光明未来（Bright Vision, Bright Future）” 计划。具体举措包括：每日体育综合活动时长不少于2小时；保障课间休息15分钟；严格落实每日两次眼保健操等。 假如你是该校学生李华，请你给全校同学写一封倡议书，介绍本次护眼活动的举措，谈谈保护视力的重要性，并提出日常护眼的个人建议（如少看电子产品等）。 写作要求： 1. 词数不少于 80 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节； 3. 不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：体育综合活动 outdoor sports 电子产品 electronic products Dear schoolmates, To protect our eyesight, our school has launched a two-week campaign named “Bright Vision, Bright Future”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文: Dear schoolmates, To protect our eyesight, our school has launched a two-week campaign named “Bright Vision, Bright Future”. Our school has already taken some useful steps. We have at least two hours of outdoor sports every day. The break between classes is 15 minutes, and we do eye exercises twice a day. Good eyesight is very important for our study and life. If we don’t protect our eyes, we may have to wear glasses, which is not convenient. Here are my suggestions. First, use electronic products less. Second, read in good light and keep a distance from books. Third, spend more time outside and look at nature. Let’s protect our eyes together! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确认文体：这是一封倡议书（应用文），时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：需介绍学校护眼活动举措/保护视力的重要性/日常护眼的个人建议 确定人称：第一人称 (I/we) 注意事项：词数不少于80；不得出现真实的姓名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给出开头，介绍学校护眼活动举措 主体段：说明保护视力的重要性 结尾段：提出日常护眼建议并发出呼吁 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学校护眼活动举措 护眼举措：at least two hours of outdoor sports every day/15 minutes break between classes/do eye exercises twice a day/daily outdoor activities等 具体说明：Our school has already taken some useful steps. We have at least two hours of outdoor sports every day. The break between classes is 15 minutes, and we do eye exercises twice a day. 要点二：保护视力的重要性 重要性说明：very important for our study and life/eyes are the windows to the heart等 后果描述：may have to wear glasses/not convenient/can cause eye strain等 具体说明：Good eyesight is very important for our study and life. If we don’t protect our eyes, we may have to wear glasses, which is not convenient. 要点三：日常护眼建议 建议一：use electronic products less/spend less time on phones and computers等 建议二：read in good light/keep a distance from books/don’t read in bed等 建议三：spend more time outside/look at nature/do outdoor activities等 连接词：First/Second/Third等 具体说明：Here are my suggestions. First, use electronic products less. Second, read in good light and keep a distance from books. Third, spend more time outside and look at nature. （四） （2026·广东深圳·二模）假设你是李华，将参加你校 English Club 组织的主题为”Use AI Correctly, Learn More Effectively”的沙龙。请写一篇发言稿，分享某AI工具的功能、使用效果、感悟，并鼓励同学们积极使用，高效学习。 注意： 1．词数为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, everyone! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Hi, everyone! I’d like to share how I use DeepSeek, an AI tool, to learn more effectively. It explains difficult concepts, checks my writing, and even generates useful exercises. With its help, I’ve improved my English essays and math problem-solving speed. It feels like having a patient, 24/7 tutor. However, AI is a helper, not a replacement for thinking. Let’s use AI wisely—ask questions, verify answers, and think critically. It makes learning easier and deeper when we stay in control. Join me in using AI to learn smarter! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：发言稿，用一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：某AI工具的功能、使用效果、感悟，鼓励同学们积极使用 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：引出要分享的AI工具 主体段：分别介绍AI工具的功能、使用效果和感悟 结尾段：鼓励同学们积极使用AI工具高效学习 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：AI工具的功能 工具选择：DeepSeek/ChatGPT/豆包等 功能描述：explains difficult concepts/answers questions/provides learning materials/translates languages等，checks my writing/corrects grammar mistakes/evaluates writing quality等，generates useful exercises/creates quizzes/designs learning tasks等 要点二：使用效果 学习提升：I’ve improved my English essays/I’ve enhanced my language skills/I’ve made progress in my studies等，math problem-solving speed/learning efficiency/knowledge acquisition等 使用感受：It feels like having a patient, 24/7 tutor/It’s like having a helpful learning companion/It makes learning more convenient等 要点三：感悟与鼓励 感悟：AI is a helper, not a replacement for thinking/AI is a tool to assist, not to replace human effort/We should use AI properly等 鼓励：Let’s use AI wisely—ask questions, verify answers, and think critically/Let’s make good use of AI—seek knowledge, check information, and develop critical thinking等，It makes learning easier and deeper when we stay in control/We can achieve better learning results by controlling the use of AI/With proper use of AI, learning will be more effective等，Join me in using AI to learn smarter/Let’s use AI together for smarter learning/Come and use AI to improve our learning等 （五） （2025·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，你校英语文化节举办了一个主题为“AI助你时空穿越” (AI Helps You Travel Through Time) 的活动。请你通过AI时空邮局给去年9月1日刚进入初三的自己写一封信。请在信中问候一年前的自己，给出三条建议 (学习，生活，心态等)，并希望通过这封信弥补遗憾，帮助现在的自己变得更好。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear younger me, How time flies! Now you are about to start the important year. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear younger me, How time flies! Now you are about to start the important year. I hope everything is going well with you. I would like to give you some advice to help you do better. First, you should study harder. Try to make a good plan and follow it every day. It is important for you to allocate enough time to every subject. It is wise of you to spend more time on your weak subjects. Second, you need to take care of your health. Doing some exercise can help you stay strong and relaxed. There is no doubt that having a balanced diet is also good for your health. It is a good habit to have more vegetables and fruit every day. Third, keep a good attitude. When you feel tired or stressed, talk to your teachers or friends. They can give you support. Always remember to smile because laughter is the best medicine. I hope you can follow the advice above to avoid regrets. If you work hard and stay positive, you will have a better future. Let’s fight for the big exam together! Believe in yourself and never give up! You will see a better you after the hard work. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，引出建议； 第二步，从学习、健康、心态三个方面给出建议； 第三步，总结期许，强化信念。 [亮点词汇] ①believe in yourself 相信你自己 ②take care of 照顾 [高分句型] ①It is important for you to allocate enough time to every subject.  (it作形式主语) ②If you work hard and stay positive, you will have a better future.  (if引导的条件状语从句) （六） （2025·广东广州·一模）你校本周在举办体育节，你的英语老师邀请你在英语课上以“运动与我”为主题进行演讲。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语演讲稿。 注意： 1. 可在原有思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不算入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Sports and I My dear teacher and classmates, Today, I’m very happy to have the chance to talk about a topic that is very important to me: Sports and I. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Sports and I My dear teacher and classmates, Today, I’m very happy to have the chance to talk about a topic that is very important to me: Sports and I. I love sports because they keep me healthy and happy. My favorite sport is basketball, as it helps build my teamwork skills. I enjoy playing with friends after class. Once, we took part in a friendly match, which taught me the importance of cooperation and perseverance. Sports not only make me stronger physically, but also more confident in facing challenges. I hope everyone can find their own favorite sport and truly enjoy it. That way, we can stay energetic together. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，介绍自己喜欢的运动和自己的运动经历； 第三步，点评运动带给自己的积极影响，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②not only…but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] ①I love sports because they keep me healthy and happy. （原因状语从句） ②Once, we took part in a friendly match, which taught me the importance of cooperation and perseverance.（定语从句） （七） （2024·河北保定·一模）中国自古以来就是礼仪之邦，文明礼仪是中华民族的优良传统，是做人的美德，更是一个现代文明人必备的素养。作为新一代的青少年，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养？请以“I Am a Student with Good Manners”为题，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文。 提示：(1) To be polite, what do you usually do at school? (2) What do you usually do at home? (3) In public, how do you behave politely? 要求：(1) 短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥; (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; (3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 I Am a Student with Good Manners It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. At school, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Am a Student with Good Manners It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. At school, we should always greet our teachers and classmates with a smile and a hello. I respect my teachers. I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other. At home, I respect my parents and our grandparents. Also, I love my family members and do things by myself. Then, I usually say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, I never talk with food in my mouth. Besides, I follow the traffic rules when walking or riding. In public, I don’t speak loudly. What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere. As a middle school student, I believe I should do more for our country. So I will work harder to build a bright future! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍作为一名中学生，在学习和生活中，如何提升自身的文明素养，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己在学校、在家以及在公共场合是如何做的； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be friendly to对某人友好 ②all the time总是 ③in public在公共场合 [高分句型] ①I am friendly to my classmates and we often help each other. (and连接的并列句) ②What’s more, to keep the environment clean, I don’t drop litter everywhere. (动词不定式作目的状语) ③I believe I should do more for our country. (宾语从句) （八） （2023·广东广州·三模）青少年是祖国的未来。为促进青少年成长发展，学校英语俱乐部组织了一个主题为“青少年如何全面发展自我”的交流分享会，请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何从锻炼身体，发展兴趣爱好和学习知识等三个方面来实现青少年的全面发展。内容需包括以下要点： How For examples build up bodies … develop interests … get knowledge … 注意： （1）词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 As teenagers, we are the future of our country. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here are my opinions. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：  As teenagers, we are the future of our country. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here are my opinions. Firstly, we should strengthen our bodies by doing some sports, such as running, swimming and playing basketball. In this way, we can keep strong and healthy. What’s more, developing some interests is a good way to make ourselves fully developed. We can learn to play the piano, sing songs, dance, and draw pictures and so on. In addition, we should try our best to get knowledge by studying hard and reading more books. If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully-developed person. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作时应从如何锻炼身体、怎样发展兴趣爱好和如何学习知识等三个方面来阐述青少年应该如何全面发展。注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山直接引出作为青少年我们应该全面发展； 第二步，具体阐述。从身体、爱好和学习这三个方面来表达青少年应该如何全面发展的看法； 第三步，书写结语。再次强调为了成为全面发展的青少年，将这几点做好的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②In this way用这种方法 ③What’s more而且，更重要的是 ④In addition除此以外 [高分句型] ①In addition, we should try our best to get knowledge by studying hard and reading more books.（and连接并列成分） ②If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully-developed person.（if引导的条件状语从句） $