Unit 5 My time, my joy.（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“人与自我”范畴的课余休闲活动及兴趣爱好写作，构建“主题解读—素材积累—范例分析—实战演练”学习支架。主题解读明确单元主题与两大写作维度，素材积累提供鲜活词汇、功能句式及佳句仿写，范例分析结合中考真题解析审题与谋篇，实战演练涵盖多地区模拟题，助力学生形成从输入到输出的写作能力。 该资料以核心素养为导向，特色鲜明。通过思维导图梳理写作逻辑，提升思维品质；鲜活素材如“fascinating books”“relieve stress”等词汇及让步从句句式，强化语言能力；中考真题范例与多题型实战演练，培养学习能力。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后学生可通过仿写与练习查漏补缺，有效提升写作水平。

Unit 5 My time, my joy.单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我” 范畴，围绕课余休闲活动、兴趣爱好，体会充实闲暇时光带来的快乐与成长。 2. 写作维度 本单元围绕爱好、课余生活类作文，分为两大写作维度：一是介绍自己的休闲爱好，描写开展这项活动的过程与乐趣；二是谈论合理安排空闲时间的意义，说明爱好对学习、身心的积极作用。写作多用一般现在时，运用 although 让步从句增添文采。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 10 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. leisure hours /spare time 闲暇时光 2. calm down 静下心 3. broaden one’s horizons 拓宽眼界 4. in advance 提前 5. develop interests 培养爱好 6. fascinating books 精彩书籍 7. knowledgeable adj. 知识渊博的 8. science fiction 科幻小说 9. adventure novels 冒险小说 10. take notes 做笔记 11. voluntary work 志愿活动 12. physical training 体育锻炼 13. in return 作为回报 14. communicate skills 沟通能力 15. relieve stress 缓解压力 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Playing Chinese chess helps me calm down and think. 翻译：下象棋能让我静下心、学会思考。 2. Hobbies can make our lives colorful and interesting. 翻译：爱好能让我们的生活丰富多彩。 中间句（4 句） 1. Although Angela was not prepared, she seemed relaxed and did really well. 翻译：虽然安吉拉没有准备，但她从容发挥、表现出色。 2. Though I didn't practice in advance, I stayed relaxed and performed excellently. 翻译：虽然我没有提前练习，但我依旧从容发挥出色。 3. Reading not only improves my language skills but also broadens my horizons. 翻译：阅读不仅提升我的语言能力，还拓宽我的眼界。 4. When I feel stressed, reading makes me relaxed and forget my worries. 翻译：当我感到压力时，阅读能让我放松、忘却烦恼。 结尾句（2 句） 1. What we do in our leisure hours determines what we are. 翻译：我们如何度过闲暇时光，决定我们成为什么样的人。 2. How we spend our spare time shapes who we become. 翻译：我们如何度过课余时光，塑造我们成为什么样的人。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P78)：Playing Chinese chess helps me calm down and think. 仿写：阅读能让我静下心，拓宽眼界。 2. 教材原句 (P69)：Although Angela was not prepared, she seemed relaxed and did really well. 仿写：虽然我没有提前练习，但我依旧从容发挥出色。 3. 教材原句 (P81)：What we do in our leisure hours determines what we are. 仿写：我们如何度过课余时光，塑造我们成为什么样的人。 典例 （2026·吉林·中考真题）兴趣点亮生活。请以“Interests make my life interesting”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括： (1) 表达兴趣在生活中的重要性； (2) 叙述一件与自己兴趣有关的事； (3) 谈谈兴趣给你带来的积极影响； (4) 发出培养兴趣的号召。 写作要求： (1) 层次清晰，语言流畅； (2) 词数在90~100之间，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 书写规范，卷面整洁； (4) 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Interests make my life interesting Everyone has interests.____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：观点记叙文； ② 时态：阐述道理用一般现在时，叙事用一般过去时； ③ 写作要点：兴趣的重要性、一件和兴趣相关的事、兴趣带来的积极影响、号召培养爱好；词数 90-100，无真实姓名校名。 谋篇布局 开头：承接给定开头，比喻点明兴趣对生活的重要作用。 中间：介绍阅读爱好，讲述读太空书籍的经历，说明阅读带来的改变。 结尾：发出号召，鼓励大家主动培养兴趣。 佳作展示 Interests make my life interesting Everyone has interests. They are like lights in our dark life. They make daily life colorful and meaningful. My favorite interest is reading books. Last month, I read a fascinating book about space exploration. It was truly amazing. I learned many new things from it happily. Reading helps me relax completely after busy study. It also opens my eyes to the wonderful world. Because of reading, I become more confident and knowledgeable. I think interests are necessary for everyone. They bring us happiness and great power. Let’s develop our own interests actively now. Make our life interesting and meaningful together. 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] fascinating adj. 精彩迷人的 space exploration 太空探索 knowledgeable adj. 学识丰富的 develop interests 培养爱好 [高分句型] They are like lights in our dark life.（比喻句，提升文采） （一） （2026·广东深圳·模拟预测）生活处处有美好,分享让快乐加倍、让温暖传递。生活中有许多事物值得我们分享，如好书、美食、好习惯、美好心情等。请以“I’d like to share ______ with you”为题写一篇文章。文章需包含以下要点： （1）介绍你想要分享的事物； （2）结合自身经历，阐述你分享它的原因； （3）谈谈分享带给你的收获与感悟。 注意： （1）词数100左右； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2025·广东广州·二模）学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请根据以下思维导图给出的内容提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数：80词左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 I love reading ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2024·广东深圳·一模）假设你是李华。你校英语公众号正在举办“多彩艺术课程促我成长”的征文活动，请你结合个人体验就其中一门艺术课程或一次艺术活动写一篇文章。要点如下： 1. 课程或活动内容； 2. 个人成长； 3. 表达感谢。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Growing up with ______________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （2022·广东广州·二模）“双减”政策出台之后，你校英语报通过问卷对校内200名学生开展主题为“How do you spend your time at weekends?”的调查。请根据下表内容描述调查结果，并提出你的建议和理由(至少1个)。 要求：1. 词数：80字左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数) 2. 短文必须包括所有要点，并适当拓展； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 How do you spend your time at weekends? Recently we did a survey among 200 students in our school in order to learn more about how students spend their time at weekends.    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （2026·江西宜春·模拟预测）有人会把跳舞当作业余爱好。校报英语板块正在以“My Hobby”为主题进行征文。请你写一篇英语短文去投稿，先说说你的爱好是什么，再谈谈相关细节（如练习频率、活动内容等），最后说明你喜欢它的原因。 写作要点： 1. What is your hobby? 2. What do you do for your hobby? (How often, what activities, …) 3. Why do you like this hobby? 要求： 1．短文需包含所有写作要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，可适当发挥； 2．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名； 3．词数 80—120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hobbies can make our lives colorful and interesting.__________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （2026·北京朝阳·二模）假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展英语周活动，现进行前期调研，调研内容为“Favorite Activity in the Free Time”。要求参与者提交英文调研报告，为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查，下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文，简要说明图表内容，并给班级同学提出业余时间的活动建议。根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出的内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名、姓名和地名。 提示词语：show, spend less time, care for others, communication skills 内容提示：● What can you learn from the results? ● Offer some advice to your classmates on activities in the free time. I did a survey among 40 classmates on activities in the free time.________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2026·河北保定·三模）假定你是学校英文报记者，上周你对九年级学生关于“暑期最想学习的一项技能”进行了问卷调查。请你根据下面的调查结果，用英语写一篇调查报告，并谈谈你暑期最想学习的一项技能及理由。 注意：（1）描述调查结果，并谈谈你暑期最想学习的一项技能及理由，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Last week, I did a survey about what skills students in Grade 9 want to learn the most during the summer vacation. Here are the results. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （2026·山西太原·三模）在忙碌的学习生活中，一个让自己快乐的爱好，就像一束温暖的光。它可以是画画、弹琴、运动、阅读，也可以是养花、做手工、跳舞……这个爱好让我们放松心情，找到属于自己的小天地。你校英语社团将举行主题为“A hobby that makes me better”的演讲比赛，请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。内容包括： * what your hobby is and why you love it * one of your experiences about how this hobby brought you happiness * what you have learned from this hobby 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear friends, I’m glad to stand here and give you a speech. Today my topic is “A hobby that makes me better”. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening! $Unit 5 My time, my joy.单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我” 范畴，围绕课余休闲活动、兴趣爱好，体会充实闲暇时光带来的快乐与成长。 2. 写作维度 本单元围绕爱好、课余生活类作文，分为两大写作维度：一是介绍自己的休闲爱好，描写开展这项活动的过程与乐趣；二是谈论合理安排空闲时间的意义，说明爱好对学习、身心的积极作用。写作多用一般现在时，运用 although 让步从句增添文采。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 17 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. leisure hours /spare time 闲暇时光 2. calm down 静下心 3. broaden one’s horizons 拓宽眼界 4. in advance 提前 5. develop interests 培养爱好 6. fascinating books 精彩书籍 7. knowledgeable adj. 知识渊博的 8. science fiction 科幻小说 9. adventure novels 冒险小说 10. take notes 做笔记 11. voluntary work 志愿活动 12. physical training 体育锻炼 13. in return 作为回报 14. communicate skills 沟通能力 15. relieve stress 缓解压力 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Playing Chinese chess helps me calm down and think. 翻译：下象棋能让我静下心、学会思考。 2. Hobbies can make our lives colorful and interesting. 翻译：爱好能让我们的生活丰富多彩。 中间句（4 句） 1. Although Angela was not prepared, she seemed relaxed and did really well. 翻译：虽然安吉拉没有准备，但她从容发挥、表现出色。 2. Though I didn't practice in advance, I stayed relaxed and performed excellently. 翻译：虽然我没有提前练习，但我依旧从容发挥出色。 3. Reading not only improves my language skills but also broadens my horizons. 翻译：阅读不仅提升我的语言能力，还拓宽我的眼界。 4. When I feel stressed, reading makes me relaxed and forget my worries. 翻译：当我感到压力时，阅读能让我放松、忘却烦恼。 结尾句（2 句） 1. What we do in our leisure hours determines what we are. 翻译：我们如何度过闲暇时光，决定我们成为什么样的人。 2. How we spend our spare time shapes who we become. 翻译：我们如何度过课余时光，塑造我们成为什么样的人。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P78)：Playing Chinese chess helps me calm down and think. 仿写：阅读能让我静下心，拓宽眼界。 2. 教材原句 (P69)：Although Angela was not prepared, she seemed relaxed and did really well. 仿写：虽然我没有提前练习，但我依旧从容发挥出色。 3. 教材原句 (P81)：What we do in our leisure hours determines what we are. 仿写：我们如何度过课余时光，塑造我们成为什么样的人。 【答案】 1. Reading helps me calm down and broaden my horizons. 2. Though I didn't practice in advance, I stayed relaxed and performed excellently. 3. How we spend our spare time shapes who we become. 典例 （2026·吉林·中考真题）兴趣点亮生活。请以“Interests make my life interesting”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括： (1) 表达兴趣在生活中的重要性； (2) 叙述一件与自己兴趣有关的事； (3) 谈谈兴趣给你带来的积极影响； (4) 发出培养兴趣的号召。 写作要求： (1) 层次清晰，语言流畅； (2) 词数在90~100之间，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 书写规范，卷面整洁； (4) 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Interests make my life interesting Everyone has interests.____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：观点记叙文； ② 时态：阐述道理用一般现在时，叙事用一般过去时； ③ 写作要点：兴趣的重要性、一件和兴趣相关的事、兴趣带来的积极影响、号召培养爱好；词数 90-100，无真实姓名校名。 谋篇布局 开头：承接给定开头，比喻点明兴趣对生活的重要作用。 中间：介绍阅读爱好，讲述读太空书籍的经历，说明阅读带来的改变。 结尾：发出号召，鼓励大家主动培养兴趣。 佳作展示 Interests make my life interesting Everyone has interests. They are like lights in our dark life. They make daily life colorful and meaningful. My favorite interest is reading books. Last month, I read a fascinating book about space exploration. It was truly amazing. I learned many new things from it happily. Reading helps me relax completely after busy study. It also opens my eyes to the wonderful world. Because of reading, I become more confident and knowledgeable. I think interests are necessary for everyone. They bring us happiness and great power. Let’s develop our own interests actively now. Make our life interesting and meaningful together. 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] fascinating adj. 精彩迷人的 space exploration 太空探索 knowledgeable adj. 学识丰富的 develop interests 培养爱好 [高分句型] They are like lights in our dark life.（比喻句，提升文采） （一） （2026·广东深圳·模拟预测）生活处处有美好,分享让快乐加倍、让温暖传递。生活中有许多事物值得我们分享，如好书、美食、好习惯、美好心情等。请以“I’d like to share ______ with you”为题写一篇文章。文章需包含以下要点： （1）介绍你想要分享的事物； （2）结合自身经历，阐述你分享它的原因； （3）谈谈分享带给你的收获与感悟。 注意： （1）词数100左右； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I’d like to share reading with you Books are our best friends, and I’d like to share the joy of reading with you. Last year, I went through a hard time. It was a book about the life of a brave girl that cheered me up. It taught me to stay strong when facing difficulties. After that, I made reading a daily habit. It helps me relax and learn new things. I also often share good books with my friends, and we talk about them together. Reading has changed me a lot. It not only makes me a better person, but also brings people closer. I hope more people can enjoy the magic of reading. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：分享类记叙文，用一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：分享的事物、自身经历与分享原因、分享收获感悟 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；词数100左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出值得分享的事物 主体段：介绍分享事物，结合自身经历阐述分享原因 结尾段：总结分享收获，表达美好希望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：分享事物 事物选择：a book/a song/a video等 简单介绍：It was a book about the life of a brave girl that cheered me up/tells a story about friendship and love/has beautiful music/has wonderful lyrics/has a moving story等 要点二：自身经历与分享原因 自身经历：Last year, I went through a hard time./read it last year and it touched my heart deeply/listened to the music when I was young/watched the movie with my friends等 分享原因：It taught me to stay strong when facing difficulties./taught me the importance of caring for others/makes me relaxed./It helps me learn more new things./It enriches my life等 要点三：分享收获 感悟收获：not only makes me a better person, but also brings people closer./not only made new friends who also love the book, but also learned that sharing doubles joy/I learn that persistence makes progress./Sharing makes happiness double.等 感悟：hope more people can enjoy the magic of reading./hope you can read it and feel the same warmth/hope you can also try it/hope you can watch the movie one day等 （二） （2025·广东广州·二模）学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请根据以下思维导图给出的内容提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数：80词左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 I love reading _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 I love reading Reading is one of my favorite hobbies. I usually read books in my free time, especially on weekends and during holidays. So far, I have collected over 50 books, and my bookshelf is full of stories and knowledge. I enjoy reading science fiction and adventure novels because they take me to exciting imaginary worlds. For example, The Three-Body Problem made me interested in space and technology. I also like history books, which help me understand the past and learn valuable lessons. My reading habit is to read for at least 30 minutes every day. I always take notes while reading, which helps me remember important ideas. Sometimes, I discuss interesting books with my friends, and we share our thoughts. Reading not only improves my language skills but also broadens my horizons. It makes me more creative and thoughtful. I believe books are the best teachers, and I will never stop exploring the wonderful world of reading! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作围绕个人阅读爱好展开，包括阅读习惯、喜欢的书籍类型及阅读带来的好处等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明个人阅读爱好。提到阅读是自己的爱好之一，并描述了阅读时间和藏书情况； 第二步，具体阐述阅读内容。介绍了自己喜欢的书籍类型，如科幻冒险小说和历史书，并举例说明；同时描述了自己的阅读习惯，如每天阅读、做笔记和与朋友讨论书籍； 第三步，书写结语。总结了阅读带来的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①favorite hobbies 最喜欢的爱好 ②take...to... 把……带到…… ③learn valuable lessons 学到宝贵的教训 ④not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… ⑤broaden one’s horizons 拓宽某人的视野 [高分句型] ①I enjoy reading science fiction and adventure novels because they take me to exciting imaginary worlds. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I always take notes while reading, which helps me remember important ideas. (which引导非限制性定语从句) （三） （2024·广东深圳·一模）假设你是李华。你校英语公众号正在举办“多彩艺术课程促我成长”的征文活动，请你结合个人体验就其中一门艺术课程或一次艺术活动写一篇文章。要点如下： 1. 课程或活动内容； 2. 个人成长； 3. 表达感谢。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Growing up with ______________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Growing up with Painting Art courses are important in school. We have many interesting classes in our school. However, my favorite art class is painting. I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. With my crayons, I can paint a wonderful world. Apart from painting pictures, we can also learn some traditional art in this class, such as paper cutting, Beijing Opera, pottery and so on. Thanks to such classes, not only my painting ability has improved a lot, but also I have learned a lot about Chinese culture. All in all, I really enjoying painting classes because I can have the chance to do something that I take an interest in. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“结合个人体验描述自己最喜欢的一门艺术课程”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的课程内容； 第二步，描述在课程中自己的成长和表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①such as比如 ②all in all总之 [高分句型] ①I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m.（定语从句） ②I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. （because引导的原因状语从句） （四） （2022·广东广州·二模）“双减”政策出台之后，你校英语报通过问卷对校内200名学生开展主题为“How do you spend your time at weekends?”的调查。请根据下表内容描述调查结果，并提出你的建议和理由(至少1个)。 要求：1. 词数：80字左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数) 2. 短文必须包括所有要点，并适当拓展； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 How do you spend your time at weekends? Recently we did a survey among 200 students in our school in order to learn more about how students spend their time at weekends.    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: How do you spend your time at weekends? Recently we did a survey among 200 students in our school in order to learn more about how students spend their time at weekends. 25% of the students choose to do some voluntary work. They want to be a volunteer and help others through the work because they think it is quite meaningful. 40% of the students like to do some housework at the weekend and help their parents in this way. They want to do something in return and show their gratitude to their parents. 50% of the students choose to do more physical training to keep healthy. They think they need to spare some time in a week to do some exercise, for health is the most important thing in their life. 75% of the students like to stay at home and do some reading. They think it can help them learn more knowledge and broaden their horizon. As for me, I like to climb Baiyun Mountain with my family. Breathing fresh air can make me relaxed. And I also enjoy the time with my family. 【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要围绕“‘怎样度过周末”这一主题展开叙述。内容包括根据图表描述调查结果，并提出自己的做法和理由，即题目要求的内容和图表的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。 写作指导：本文写作应该使用第一人称和第三人称。时态应根据情境运用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山，提出最近进行了关于“如何度过周末”的调查；第二部分根据图表展开叙述调查结果，要具体并简单阐明他们如此度过周末的理由；第三部分表达自己的看法和做法，并说明理由。 （五） （2026·江西宜春·模拟预测）有人会把跳舞当作业余爱好。校报英语板块正在以“My Hobby”为主题进行征文。请你写一篇英语短文去投稿，先说说你的爱好是什么，再谈谈相关细节（如练习频率、活动内容等），最后说明你喜欢它的原因。 写作要点： 1. What is your hobby? 2. What do you do for your hobby? (How often, what activities, …) 3. Why do you like this hobby? 要求： 1．短文需包含所有写作要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，可适当发挥； 2．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名； 3．词数 80—120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hobbies can make our lives colorful and interesting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】【One Possible Version】 Hobbies can make our lives colorful and interesting. My favorite hobby is reading books. I really enjoy reading in my free time. I usually read for about an hour every evening after I finish my homework. On weekends, I spend more time reading different kinds of books, such as storybooks, science books and history books. Sometimes I go to the school library to read with my classmates and share our wonderful stories together. I like reading because it brings me much happiness. It not only opens my eyes to the outside world but also helps me learn more useful knowledge. When I feel stressed, reading makes me relaxed and forget my worries. I believe reading is a meaningful hobby and I will keep it forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①自己的爱好是什么；②爱好相关细节（练习频率、活动内容等）；③喜爱这个爱好的原因 确定人称：第一人称（I/My） 注意事项：文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名；词数80—120词，给定开头不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接给出的开篇句，直接点明自己最喜欢的爱好 主体段：介绍爱好的日常练习频率、开展的相关活动，补充具体细节 结尾段：分层说明喜爱该爱好的理由，表明自己会一直坚持这项爱好 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍爱好是什么 爱好选择：reading books/dancing/playing basketball/drawing等 要点二：爱好相关细节 练习频率：read for an hour every evening/practice dancing every weekend/play sports twice a week等 活动内容：read different kinds of books/go to the school library/share books with classmates/draw pictures with friends/play ball games with teammates等 要点三：喜欢这个爱好的原因 情绪感受：make me relaxed/bring me much happiness/help me forget worries等 收获提升：open my eyes to the world/learn useful knowledge/make me strong/improve my skills/make more friends等 （六） （2026·北京朝阳·二模）假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展英语周活动，现进行前期调研，调研内容为“Favorite Activity in the Free Time”。要求参与者提交英文调研报告，为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查，下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文，简要说明图表内容，并给班级同学提出业余时间的活动建议。根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出的内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名、姓名和地名。 提示词语：show, spend less time, care for others, communication skills 内容提示：● What can you learn from the results? ● Offer some advice to your classmates on activities in the free time. I did a survey among 40 classmates on activities in the free time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 I did a survey among 40 classmates on activities in the free time. The results show that 50% of them play video games, 25% take exercise, 15% do some reading, and only 10% do volunteer work. From the results, I learn that most students spend too much time playing games. They miss the chance to improve themselves in other ways. I’d like to give some advice. First, spend less time on video games and do more reading. It opens your mind. Second, take exercise every day to keep healthy. Third, try volunteer work. It helps you care for others and improve communication skills. Let’s make good use of our free time. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文（调查报告与建议），用一般现在时 明确要点：调查结果（50%玩电子游戏、25%锻炼、15%阅读、10%做志愿工作）、从结果中学到的（大多数学生花太多时间玩游戏，错过了通过其他方式提升自己的机会）、给同学的建议（少花时间玩电子游戏多阅读、每天锻炼保持健康、尝试志愿工作帮助关爱他人和提高沟通能力） 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第一人称复数（we） 注意事项：需包含所有要点，词数不少于50，不得出现真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：说明调查对象及人数（40名同学），列出调查结果（50%玩电子游戏、25%锻炼、15%阅读、10%做志愿工作） 第二段：从结果中得出的结论（大多数学生花太多时间玩游戏，错过了通过其他方式提升自己的机会） 第三段：给出建议（少花时间玩游戏多阅读、每天锻炼保持健康、尝试志愿工作帮助关爱他人和提高沟通能力） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：调查结果 结果描述：I did a survey among 40 classmates/The results show that 50% play video games, 25% take exercise, 15% do some reading, and 10% do volunteer work等 要点二：从结果中学到的 表达：most students spend too much time playing games/They miss the chance to improve themselves in other ways等 要点三：建议一 建议：spend less time on video games and do more reading/cut down gaming time and read more books等 理由：It opens your mind/Reading helps you gain knowledge等 要点四：建议二 建议：take exercise every day to keep healthy/exercise daily to stay fit等 要点五：建议三 建议：try volunteer work/join some volunteer activities等 理由：helps you care for others and improve communication skills/develop empathy and better communication skills等 要点六：总结呼吁 呼吁表达：make good use of our free time/spend free time on meaningful activities等 （七） （2026·河北保定·三模）假定你是学校英文报记者，上周你对九年级学生关于“暑期最想学习的一项技能”进行了问卷调查。请你根据下面的调查结果，用英语写一篇调查报告，并谈谈你暑期最想学习的一项技能及理由。 注意：（1）描述调查结果，并谈谈你暑期最想学习的一项技能及理由，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Last week, I did a survey about what skills students in Grade 9 want to learn the most during the summer vacation. Here are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Last week, I did a survey about what skills students in Grade 9 want to learn the most during the summer vacation. Here are the results. According to the survey, 35% of the students want to learn to cook. 25% of them would like to learn to swim. The number of students who want to learn to play an instrument is the same as those who want to learn to draw, which is 20%. For me, I want to learn swimming best. It is a great way to keep healthy, and it can also help me protect myself in danger. I believe I will have a wonderful summer vacation learning this skill. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：调查报告，描述开展调查动作用一般过去时，陈述调查数据、表达个人想法用一般现在时 明确要点：完整阐述饼图全部调查数据结果；说明自己暑期最想学习的一项技能并写明对应理由 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：文中不得透露真实人名、校名、地名；词数80词左右，题目给出的开头不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用题目预设开头，点明调查主题与调查对象 主体段：依次罗列四类学习意愿对应的百分比，点明学乐器与学画画人数占比相等的细节 结尾段：说出自己最想学习的技能，分层阐述选择理由，收尾展望暑假生活 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：描述调查结果 数据表达：35% of the students want to learn to cook/Thirty-five percent of students choose to learn cooking；25% of them would like to learn to swim/A quarter of students plan to take swimming lessons；The number of students who want to learn to play an instrument is the same as those who want to learn to draw, which is 20%/Students choosing to learn an instrument make up 20 percent, equal to the percentage of students wanting to learn drawing 要点二：个人想学的技能及理由 技能选择：learn swimming/learn to cook/learn to draw/learn to play an instrument 理由表达：keep healthy/help me protect myself in danger/practical life skill/help parents/become more independent/record beautiful moments/calm down/improve artistic taste/relieve study pressure/enrich free time/develop artistic taste （八） （2026·山西太原·三模）在忙碌的学习生活中，一个让自己快乐的爱好，就像一束温暖的光。它可以是画画、弹琴、运动、阅读，也可以是养花、做手工、跳舞……这个爱好让我们放松心情，找到属于自己的小天地。你校英语社团将举行主题为“A hobby that makes me better”的演讲比赛，请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。内容包括： * what your hobby is and why you love it * one of your experiences about how this hobby brought you happiness * what you have learned from this hobby 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear friends, I’m glad to stand here and give you a speech. Today my topic is “A hobby that makes me better”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening! 【答案】A possible version: Dear friends, I’m glad to stand here and give you a speech. Today my topic is “A hobby that makes me better”. My hobby is cooking. I love it because it turns simple things into something nice and warm. I still remember one rainy afternoon. It was boring so I decided to bake some cookies. I mixed the ingredients, cut out the shapes, and waited for them to turn golden. When they were done, I gave some to my mom. Her face lit up with a big smile. “You made my day,” she said. That simple word made me happy. Cooking has made me more patient, more careful to bring joy to others. A small hobby can make not only me better but also the people around me feel loved. That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主（叙述经历时用过去时）。 明确要点：爱好是什么及原因、一次带来快乐的具体经历、从中学到了什么。 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）。 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；词数不少于80词。 [第二步：构思布局] 五段式结构： 开头段：已给出（引入话题“A hobby that makes me better”）。 主体段一：介绍爱好及喜爱的原因。 主体段二：讲述一个具体事例。 主体段三：描述该爱好如何带来快乐或改变。 结尾段：总结感悟，升华主题（爱好的意义），并致谢。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：爱好及原因 爱好选择：cooking/reading/playing basketball/painting等。 原因描述：turns simple things into something nice and warm/It helps me relax/It is full of fun/It makes me creative等。 要点二：具体经历 时间背景：one rainy afternoon/One weekend/Last summer/When I was sad等。 具体行动：I decided to bake some cookies/mixed the ingredients, cut out the shapes, and waited for them to turn golden/I spent hours doing/wait for them to bake/take them out of the oven等。 结果/感受：Her face lit up with a big smile/That simple word made me happy./I felt a sense of achievement/My family were happy/I forgot my worries等。 要点三：收获与感悟 个人成长：more patient/more careful/more confident等。 对他人的影响：feel loved/bring joy to others/share love等。 $