专题突破练（八）写作（2）-【高考领航】2027年高考英语总复习四测通关卷

**基本信息** 聚焦高考英语记叙文续写，通过家庭责任、父子和解、友情修复、团队救助四大生活情境，训练情节连贯与情感表达能力，融合语言能力与思维品质培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |Passage 1|1篇|记叙文续写（给定开头，补全情节）|以“家务认知转变”为主线，构建“事件触发-情感觉醒-行为改变”逻辑链| |Passage 2|1篇|记叙文续写（给定开头，补全情节）|围绕“父子矛盾化解”，形成“任务驱动-内心挣扎-行动实践”情节发展线| |Passage 3|1篇|记叙文续写（给定开头，补全情节）|依托“友情冲突修复”，展现“冲突发生-反思愧疚-主动和解”情感变化过程| |Passage 4|1篇|记叙文续写（给定开头，补全情节）|通过“伤鸟救助”，构建“发现问题-团队协作-解决问题”合作叙事逻辑|

专题突破练(八)　写作(2) Passage 1 One possible version： Before sleeping, Amy set the clock 40 minutes earlier. The next morning, Amy sprang out of bed as soon as the alarm rang and tiptoed into the kitchen. She boiled eggs and made toast. She even squeezed fresh orange juice to go with the toast. When her mother came to the kitchen, Amy said cheerfully, “Surprise, Mom! I'm really good at preparing breakfast! Now, you can rest a bit more until you're fully recovered.” As time went on, Amy's attitude to household work began to change. She no longer saw it as a duty, but as a way to contribute to the family. She took on more tasks—sweeping the floors, tidying the living room, and even joining her mother in the garden on weekends. Mrs. Thompson was overjoyed by the change. What's more, Amy discovered that working side by side with her mother had become their special time to talk and bond—and their relationship grew closer than ever. Passage 2 One possible version： But as luck would have it, my father did answer the door. Taking a deep breath, I stepped inside and said, “Dad, I just came over to tell you that I love you.” My father's face softened, and the wrinkles seemed to disappear as he began to cry. He reached out and hugged me, whispering in my ear, “I love you too, son, but I've never been able to say it.” We had dinner together that night, chatting and laughing as if making up for all the lost joy of those years, and I was completely immersed in a happiness I hadn't felt for so long. Two days after that visit, my father had a heart attack and ended up in the hospital, unconscious. Deeply depressed, I rushed to the hospital to see him. Dad couldn't speak, unaware of my presence as he lay on the bed. Tears welling up in my eyes, I couldn't help sobbing. Though feeling deep sorrow, I was sure of one thing that did relieve my grief—I had told my dad, “I love you”. Suddenly, the true meaning of the teacher's assignment dawned on me: Cherish what you have and don't miss the opportunity to express your love to your beloved ones. Passage 3 One possible version： Gathering all my courage, I walked over to him. I couldn't bear the thought of losing his friendship. “Ben，” I said, my voice trembling, “I'm really sorry for what I said this morning. I was upset about my drawing, but I shouldn't have taken it out on you.” Ben looked at me, his eyes softening. After a pause, he broke into a smile. “It's okay，” he said. “I know you didn't mean it.” Relief washed over me, and I smiled back. “Thanks, Ben. You're a great friend.” We walked out of the classroom together with our drawings. As we walked along the path, Ben held his sketchbook open, pointing out the little details he had added to his beach scene. I showed him my drawing, the messy sky now fixed with extra shading. “It's not great, but at least it's finished，” I joked, and we both burst into laughter. That day, I realized that true friendship isn't about being perfect—it's about understanding, forgiving, and always being there for each other, no matter what. Passage 4 One possible version： By Friday, something different happened. The little sparrow raised her head and pecked at blueberries from my finger. Slowly, she struggled to her feet, turning her head from side to side. At that moment, a wave of joy welled up in our hearts. The sparrow came back to life. We cheered—our efforts paid off. Three weeks later, we cautiously removed the small stick from her wing. For a moment, she managed to hop onto the edge of the box and fluttered her wings for the first time, showing her wing was nearly healed. Then came the news that the vet said the sparrow was ready to fly. We carried her to the oak tree, where we'd found her. Immediately, she spread her wings and flew. With a cheerful call, she circled once, then swooped down and landed softly on my shoulder, as if expressing her gratitude. She seemed reluctant to leave. After circling again and again, she disappeared into the sky. At that moment I fully understood that not only humans, but all creatures, are capable of deep bonds and gratitude. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题突破练(八)　写作(2) Passage 1 Mrs.Thompson often reminded her daughter, Amy, that helping with housework was not only a responsibility, but also a way of showing care for the family. But to Amy, household chores were a tiresome burden and a waste of her precious time. Every time her mother asked her to wash the dishes after dinner, Amy would protest, “It's unfair! Why should I have to do the dishes？” Usually, Mrs.Thompson would sigh and do it herself. One Monday evening, as Amy got up from the table, Mrs.Thompson began coughing badly and her face grew very pale. “I'm not feeling well，” she said and went to her bedroom without even mentioning the dishes. Amy was about to leave the dirty plates in the sink as usual, but something stopped her. She remembered her mother's tired eyes and weak voice, realizing how tired her mother had looked lately—doing a demanding job and taking care of the household all by herself. Quietly, Amy walked her mother to her room, and then returned to the kitchen. She stared at the mountain of dishes, took a deep breath, and rolled up her sleeves. Just as she was drying the last plate, she heard a gentle voice from behind. “Amy？” Mrs.Thompson, who was standing in the doorway, her eyes wide with surprise and warmth, said very gently. Amy turned around and, feeling a little embarrassed, she mumbled, “Well... Since you're not feeling well, I thought I'd help out tonight.” “Thank you, sweetheart，” Mrs.Thompson said very gently. “That means a lot to me.” That night, as Amy lay in bed, she couldn't stop thinking about the gentleness in her mother's voice. “Maybe, Mom was right，” Amy thought. “Doing housework isn't just a chore. It is a way to show love.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Before sleeping, Amy set the clock 40 minutes earlier.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As time went on, Amy's attitude to household work began to change.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 In an adult class I attended, we were recently given the homework, which was to “go to someone you love within the next week and tell them you love them. It has to be someone you have never said those words to before or at least haven't shared those words with for a long time.” When I walked out of the classroom, I first felt confused then became a little angry about the task. Actually, most of the men in our group were over 35 and were raised in a generation who were taught that expressing emotions was not “macho(男子汉的)”. Showing feelings or crying(Heaven forbid！) was just not done, so this was a very threatening assignment for most of us. I didn't feel that I had anyone to say those words to, but as I began driving home my conscience started talking to me. It was telling me that I knew exactly who I needed to say “I love you” to. You see, five years ago, my father and I had a disagreement that we never truly resolved it since that time. We avoided seeing each other unless we absolutely had to at family gatherings. But even then, we hardly spoke to each other. However, by the time I got home, I had convinced myself I was going to tell my father I loved him. It was weird, but just making that decision seemed to lift a heavy load off my chest. The next morning I got up early. I was so excited I could hardly sleep. At 9：00, I called my father to see if I could come over after work. My father responded with some hesitation, but he finally agreed. At 5：30, I was at my parents' house ringing the doorbell, praying that my father would answer the door. I was afraid if mom answered, I would chicken out and tell her instead. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 But as luck would have it, my father did answer the door.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Two days after that visit, my father had a heart attack and ended up in the hospital, unconscious.______________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 It all started on a rainy Monday morning. The classroom was quiet except for the sound of pencils scratching(沙沙作响) on paper. I was sitting next to Ben, my best friend, and we were both working on an art project for the school competition. I had spent hours sketching(素描) a beautiful park, while Ben was drawing a beach scene. As I carefully shaded the trees in my picture, Ben accidentally hit my arm. My pencil slipped, leaving a huge mark across the sky I had drawn. Frustrated, I turned to him and said angrily, “Can't you be more careful？” Ben looked at me with wide eyes and said softly, “I'm sorry, I didn't mean to.” But instead of accepting his apology, I said sharply, “You always ruin everything！” Ben's face fell, and he turned back to his drawing without saying another word. I felt a bit of guilt but ignored it, focusing on fixing my ruined drawing. Later, during break, Ben came up to me and said, “Do you want to play soccer with us？” His voice was kind, but I was still upset. “No，” I replied coldly. Ben's face turned red, and he walked away. As I watched him join the other kids, laughing and playing, I felt a heavy weight in my chest. I knew I had hurt him, but I was too proud to say sorry. The rest of the day passed slowly. During art class, I glanced at Ben's drawing. It was beautiful—a peaceful beach with waves crashing against the shore. I remembered how Ben had helped me last week when I couldn't finish my math homework，and how he had shared his lunch with me when I forgot mine. He was always kind, always there for me. When the bell rang, I saw Ben packing his bag. His shoulders looked slumped(下垂), and he avoided my eyes. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Gathering all my courage, I walked over to him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We walked out of the classroom together with our drawings.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 The rain beat hard against the classroom window as I hurried to my desk. Suddenly, I spotted something small and brown curled up in a puddle(小水洼) under an oak tree beside the building—too still to be a leaf. Curious, I rushed out for a closer look. However, when I knelt down, my breath caught: a sparrow with one wing broken, feathers knotted, eyes half-closed. “Don't move，” I whispered, wrapping her in my handkerchief, and then dashed back. Ms.Sophie, my English teacher, helped me make a nest from a shoebox and tissues. “We need to act fast，” she said. “Who knows about birds？” Mia, who fed stray cats daily, raised her hand, “My uncle is a vet—he can show us how to cure the wing.” Jake, our art club member, grabbed his drawing book, “I'll draw diagrams so we won't mess up.” Lila, who usually kept to herself, spoke up: “I can research what sparrows eat online.” That afternoon, our group crowded around the shoebox. Mia gently held the sparrow while Jake carefully attached a small stick to her broken wing. Lila read aloud from her phone: “Warm water and crushed blueberries, but only a drop at a time.” I took notes, recording feeding times and when we changed the bedding. At one point, the sparrow chirped(发啁啾声) softly, and we all froze, grinning. For the first time, we weren't just classmates—we were a team, each doing what we did best. Problems popped up. The sparrow refused food the next day, and Lila panicked. “Did we hurt her？” Mia checked and shook her head. “Maybe she's scared. Let's leave her alone for a while.” We took turns sitting by the window, talking softly so she would get used to our voices. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 By Friday, something different happened.______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then came the news that the vet said the sparrow was ready to fly._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $