Unit6写作训练2026-2027学年人教版英语九年级上册

太空探索 · 话题写作 Unit 6 Beyond Earth · 写作专项 · 教师版 ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ 一、写作主题 ⏱ 建议 2 分钟 — 读题、圈关键词 题目：A Space Exploration Plan in the Future 设想一个未来的太空探索项目（月球基地、火星任务、新望远镜、太空旅行等），写一篇 80-120 词的英语短文，描述这个项目将如何展开——谁将参与、什么将被建造、哪些技术将被使用、它对人类意味着什么。要求至少使用 3 处将来时被动语态（will be + done）。 体裁 人称 时态 字数 语法重点 说明文 / 展望文 （descriptive + predictive writing） 第三人称（it/they） 将来（will + do）+ 将来被动（will be + done） 穿插现在（描述现状） 80-120 词 将来被动语态 ≥ 3 处 （will be + 过去分词） 三时态被动可灵活使用 课本依据 本题对应 U6 单元主题 Beyond Earth 的写作输出。 五要素：① 项目名称+时间 ② 参与方 ③ 将建造/发射什么 ④ 将使用哪些技术 ⑤ 对人类的意义 教师注解 写作课前建议：先用 3 分钟带学生复习 U6 Grammar Focus (P55) 的将来被动句型。 板书核心公式：will be + 过去分词。强调 will 后 be 保持原形，过去分词拼写不能错。 可选话题 ABCD 中，A（月球基地）和 B（火星任务）学生最熟悉，推荐首选。 二、素材工坊 — 写前必填 ⏱ 建议 5 分钟 — 独立填写，中英文均可 先填表再动笔。写不出来 = 没想清楚。中英文混填也可以。 要素 你的素材（关键词/短语即可） 课本参考（月球基地） 项目名称 + 时间 Moon Base / International Moon Research Station planned for the 2030s 参与方 （谁在做？） China, together with other nations scientists and engineers from around the world 将建造/发射什么？ （3-4项） living modules / research labs / solar panels communication systems / greenhouses 将使用哪些技术？ 3D printing for construction / AI systems recycling water and air technology 对人类的意义 （至少两点） ① a step towards deeper space exploration ② nations working together for science ③ new resources and knowledge 教师注解 素材工坊是写前关键步骤。建议给学生 5 分钟独立填写，然后同桌交换互查。 常见问题：学生填「建造什么」只写一个词（如 base），引导他们展开为 3-4 个具体设施。 「意义」列如果学生写不出来，提示：对科学、对人类、对国际合作三个角度各想一点。 三、精读导入 — 在阅读中学写作 ⏱ 建议 10 分钟 — 默读 2' + 寻踪 3' + 句型提取 5' 3.1 读短文，完成三个任务 任务：① 理解大意 ② 用下划线标出所有将来时被动语态（will be + done） ③ 圈出可用于写作的句型 Have you ever imagined living on the moon? Scientists believe that in the next few decades, the first permanent moon base will be built. This will not be a project of just one country — it will be carried out by scientists and engineers from many nations working together. The moon base will consist of several parts. First, living modules will be constructed using special materials that can protect astronauts from radiation and extreme temperatures. Then, research laboratories will be set up so that scientists can study the moon's surface and conduct experiments. Solar panels will be installed to provide energy for the entire base. Advanced technology will be used to make life on the moon possible. A closed water recycling system will be developed so that every drop of water can be reused. Food will be grown in special greenhouses under artificial light. 3D printers will be employed to produce tools and spare parts directly on site. The moon base is more than just a scientific station. It will serve as a stepping stone for deeper space exploration. If the base is built successfully, human missions to Mars will follow in the 2040s. New resources will be discovered and new knowledge will be gained. Most importantly, this project will show that when nations cooperate, amazing things can be achieved. Perhaps one day, children will look up at the moon and know that humans are living there — not as visitors, but as residents. That future will be created by the choices we make today. （字数：约 255 词 | 将来被动语态 ≥ 10 处） 教师注解 阅读教学建议（8-10 分钟）： ① 学生默读（2 min）→ ② 同桌互找将来被动语态（3 min）→ ③ 全班对答案，老师板书关键句型（3 min） 将来被动语态出处（共 12 处）：will be built / will be carried out / will be constructed / will be set up / will be installed / will be used / will be developed / will be grown / will be employed / will be discovered / will be gained / will be created 3.2 将来被动寻踪 — 找出文中 will be + done 短文中用了大量将来时被动语态。找出至少 6 处，摘抄关键词填入下表。 序号 将来被动语态（摘抄 will be + 过去分词部分） 原句的主语是什么？ 1 will be built the first permanent moon base 2 will be carried out it (the project) 3 will be constructed living modules 4 will be set up research laboratories 5 will be installed solar panels 6 will be used advanced technology 7 will be developed a closed water recycling system 8 will be grown food 9 will be employed 3D printers 教师注解 3.2 答案已填入上表（共 9 条，超出要求的 6 条下限）。 课堂上让学生先自己找，再对答案。前 6 条是必找项，7-9 条是加分项。 其余 3 处（will be discovered / will be gained / will be created）为拓展选找，基础好的学生可挑战全部 12 处。 3.3 句型提取 — 从阅读到写作 把你在短文中找到的句子，按写作功能分类填入下表。 写作功能 短文原句（摘抄） 提炼句型模板 描述将建造什么 the first permanent moon base will be built ______ will be built / constructed 描述将由谁执行 it will be carried out by scientists and engineers from many nations ______ will be carried out by ______ 描述将使用什么技术 advanced technology will be used to make life on the moon possible ______ will be used / employed to ______ 描述将安装/设置什么 solar panels will be installed to provide energy ______ will be installed / set up 描述将发现/获得什么 new resources will be discovered and new knowledge will be gained ______ will be discovered / gained 四、写作工具箱 4.1 太空探索话题核心词汇 写到「太空探索」不要只会 space 和 rocket。按下表分类选词，每类至少用一个。 类别 基础词 升级词 例句片段 太空设施 space station, rocket moon base, space telescope, module, Mars rover, orbiting laboratory A moon base will be built in the 2030s. 探索动作 explore, go to launch, land on, set foot on, carry out, conduct Human missions to Mars will be carried out. 建造/开发 build, make construct, develop, design, install, set up, employ Solar panels will be installed for energy. 技术 technology advanced technology, 3D printing, recycling system, artificial intelligence 3D printers will be employed to produce tools. 人/组织 scientist, country astronaut, engineer, researcher, nations, crew, team Scientists from many nations will cooperate. 意义/影响 important, good a stepping stone, lead to, open the door to, make...possible It will serve as a stepping stone for Mars. 4.2 将来被动写作句型 — 太空计划专用 以下句型覆盖了太空探索计划的全部表达需求。★★★ 是满分区分点。 功能 句型模板 示例 难度 引出主题 In the coming decades, ______ will be ______. In the coming decades, a moon base will be established. ★★ 建造计划① ______ will be built / constructed on ______. Living modules will be constructed on the moon. ★★ 建造计划② ______ will be set up / installed to ______. Research labs will be set up to study the moon's surface. ★★ 技术应用① ______ will be used / employed to ______. 3D printing will be used to produce spare parts. ★★ 技术应用② ______ will be developed so that ______ can be done. A recycling system will be developed so that water can be reused. ★★★ 多国合作 ______ will be carried out by ______ from ______. The project will be carried out by scientists from many nations. ★★★ 发现/获得 New ______ will be discovered / gained. New resources will be discovered on the moon. ★★ 递进意义① ______ will serve as a stepping stone for ______. The moon base will serve as a stepping stone for Mars. ★★★ 递进意义② If ______ is built, ______ will follow. If the base is built, Mars missions will follow. ★★★ 望远镜专用 A new ______ will be sent into space to ______. A new telescope will be sent into space to study distant galaxies. ★★ 太空旅行专用 Space trips will be offered to ______ in the future. Space trips will be offered to ordinary people in the future. ★★ 总结展望 This project will show that ______ can be achieved. It will show that amazing things can be achieved. ★★ 4.3 连接词 — 让文章有节奏 不要把所有句子写成孤立的简单句。用以下连接词让文章流畅。 功能 连接词/短语 使用位置 时间推进 In the coming decades, In the 2030s, First, Then, One day 从当前展望未来 → 逐项展开计划 递进/追加 also, not only... but also..., more importantly, in addition 追加第二个、第三个计划细节 因果/手段 so that, so as to, to make...possible 描述技术的目的和用途 条件/假设 If..., ...will... / When..., ...will... 描述计划实现后的下一步 总结 Most importantly, Perhaps one day, This will show that... 结尾段升华意义 中考加分技巧 ① 将来被动语态用 3-5 处最佳——太少不扣题，太多刻意堆砌 ② 穿插 1-2 处现在时被动（is/are done）描述当前事实，与将来被动对比，层次更丰富 ③ 将来被动最容易丢分的地方：will be + done 中 be 忘记 → will built ✗ → will be built ✓ ④ 动词过去分词拼写必须过关：built, sent, launched, developed, designed, installed, used 教师注解 工具箱使用建议：不要一次性讲完三个表。 ① 词汇表（4.1）：让学生圈出自己想用的 5-6 个升级词，写进素材工坊 ② 句型表（4.2）：让学生根据自己选的话题，在 10 个句型中圈出至少 3 个会用到的 ③ 连接词表（4.3）：要求至少用 2 个不同功能的连接词 五、范文拆解 — 月球研究基地 阅读范文，完成：① 标出五要素分别在第几段 ② 圈出所有将来被动语态 ③ 找出你最喜欢的 2 个句型。 In the coming decades, a moon research station will be built by China together with other nations. The station will include several key parts. Living modules will be constructed first. Research labs will be set up for experiments. Solar panels will be installed for energy. Advanced technology will be used to support life on the moon. Water will be recycled by a closed system. Food will be grown in greenhouses. 3D printers will produce tools on site. The moon station will serve as a stepping stone for Mars. If it is built successfully, human missions to Mars will follow. Most importantly, this project will show that amazing things can be achieved when nations cooperate. The moon may one day become our second home. （正文字数：约 123 词 | 将来被动语态：7 处） 范文结构分析 段落 内容要素 核心句型 将来被动语态 Para 1 ① 项目基本信息（建什么+谁参与） will be built by... will be built ✓ Para 2 ② 将建造什么（设施3项） will be constructed / will be set up will be installed will be constructed ✓ / will be set up ✓ will be installed ✓ Para 3 ③ 将使用哪些技术 will be used / will be recycled will be grown will be used ✓ / will be recycled ✓ will be grown ✓ Para 4 ④ 意义+下一步计划 will serve as / will follow （条件句主将从现） Para 5 ⑤ 总结与展望 will show that... / may become... （主动收束，may 表可能性） 范文亮点 ① 五要素完整，一段一功能 ② 将来被动语态 7 处，自然融入 ③ 时间线：In the coming decades → First... → If...will... → may one day ④ 句式：by...被动 / so that目的 / If条件 / may可能性 ⑤ 首尾呼应：moon research station → our second home 教师注解 范文讲评重点： ① 让学生逐段找出将来被动语态（will be + done），用荧光笔标出 ② 对比 Para 4 的 if 从句：is built（现在被动）vs will follow（将来主动）→ 主将从现 ③ 提问：Para 5 为什么用 may become 而不是 will become？（may 表可能性，will 太绝对） ④ 范文 7 处将来被动：will be built / will be constructed / will be set up / will be installed / will be used / will be recycled / will be grown → 全部及物动词，无一例 intransitive 误用 其他话题快速拓展范例： · 火星任务：A manned mission to Mars will be launched in the 2040s. Advanced life support systems will be developed for the long journey. If the mission succeeds, it will open the door to deeper space exploration. · 太空望远镜：A new space telescope will be sent into orbit around 2026. It will be used to study distant galaxies and search for Earth-like planets. New discoveries about the universe will be made. · 太空旅行：In the future, space trips will be offered to ordinary people. Special spacecraft will be designed for passenger travel. Hotels in space may even be built one day. 六、写作框架 — 搭骨架，再填血肉 基础版用 3 段（开头概述 2 句 + 主体细节 4-5 句 + 结尾意义 2 句），进阶版用 5 段细化。 Para 1 · 开头 — 项目概述（≈18 词） In the coming decades, ______ (项目名称) will be built / launched / established. This project will be carried out by ______ (参与方). Para 2 · 设施 — 将建造什么（≈28 词） The ______ will consist of several key parts. First, ______ will be constructed. Then, ______ will be set up for ______ (用途). ______ will be installed to provide ______. Para 3 · 技术 — 将使用哪些技术（≈28 词） To make ______ possible, advanced technology will be used. ______ will be developed so that ______. ______ will be employed to ______. Para 4 · 意义 — 为什么重要（≈22 词） ______ will serve as a stepping stone for ______. If ______ is built successfully, ______ will follow. New ______ will be gained and new ______ will be discovered. Para 5 · 总结 — 展望与评价（≈18 词） Most importantly, this project will show that ______ can be achieved. Perhaps one day, ______ will become ______. 字数分配提醒 P1≈18 + P2≈28 + P3≈28 + P4≈22 + P5≈18 = 114 词，正好在 80-120 区间。 不够 80 词？P2 或 P3 各加一项设施/技术。超 120 词？砍修饰词，保持简洁。 七、分层练习 ⏱ 练习一 5' + 练习二 8' + 练习三 20' = 共约 33 分钟 练习一：将来被动造句 ★ （6 题） 把下列中文句子翻译成英文，每句必须使用将来时被动语态（will be + done）。 1. 在未来的几十年里，第一个月球基地将被建造。 提示：(In the coming decades / the first moon base / build) 答案：In the coming decades, the first moon base will be built. in the coming decades → 将来时。base 被建造 → will be + 过去分词 built。 2. 居住舱将使用特殊材料来建造。 提示：(Living modules / construct / using special materials) 答案：Living modules will be constructed using special materials. modules 被建造 → 将来被动 will be constructed。using... 表方式。 3. 太阳能板将被安装来为基地提供能源。 提示：(Solar panels / install / to provide energy / for the base) 答案：Solar panels will be installed to provide energy for the base. panels 被安装 → 将来被动 will be installed。to provide... 表目的。 4. 水循环系统将被开发，这样每一滴水都可以被重复使用。 提示：(A water recycling system / develop / so that / every drop of water / can / reuse) 答案：A water recycling system will be developed so that every drop of water can be reused. system 被开发 → 将来被动 will be developed。so that 引导目的从句，can be reused 是情态被动。 5. 3D打印机将被用来在月球上直接生产工具。 提示：(3D printers / employ / to produce tools / directly on the moon) 答案：3D printers will be employed to produce tools directly on the moon. printers 被使用 → 将来被动 will be employed。employ 在此 = use。 6. 如果基地被成功建造，人类火星任务将会紧随其后。 提示：(If / the base / build successfully / human missions to Mars / follow) 答案：If the base is built successfully, human missions to Mars will follow. 主将从现：if 从句 → 现在被动 is built；主句 → 将来主动 will follow。注意 follow 是主动！ 教师注解 练习一讲评重点： ① 第4题：so that...can be reused —— 情态被动 (can be done) 嵌套在目的从句中，是高分句型 ② 第6题：最容易错的一题。学生看到「被建造」容易写 will be built，但 if 从句要用现在时 is built 同时「紧随其后」的 follow 是主动语态，不能写 will be followed ③ 逐题让学生上黑板写，全班找错，比直接对答案效果好 练习二：段落写作 ⭐⭐ （写一个约 40 词的段落） 从以下两个任务中任选一个，写一个段落。 任务 A：描述月球基地将建造哪些设施（3-4 项），至少用 2 处将来被动语态。 任务 B：描述太空探索对人类的两项重要意义，使用 will serve as / will be gained / will be discovered。 我选任务 _____ 我的段落： 教师注解 练习二参考范例： 任务 A 范例：The moon base will include several important facilities. First, living modules will be constructed for astronauts to live in. Research laboratories will be set up for experiments. Solar panels will be installed to provide power. 3D printers will be used to make tools. （≈42 词，4 处将来被动） 任务 B 范例：The moon base will serve as a stepping stone for deeper space exploration. New knowledge about the universe will be gained through experiments on the moon. Valuable resources will be discovered and may be used to support future missions. （≈41 词，will serve as + will be gained + will be discovered） 练习三：完整作文 ⭐⭐⭐ 题目：A Space Exploration Plan in the Future 要求：80-120 词 / 五要素齐全 / 至少 3 处将来被动语态（will be + done）/ 句式多样化 / 用至少 2 个连接词 可选话题（均来自 U6 课本内容）： A. 月球国际研究站（Moon Research Station） B. 火星载人任务（Manned Mission to Mars） C. 新一代太空望远镜（A New Space Telescope） D. 太空旅行（Space Travel for Ordinary People） 我选的话题：______________ 教师注解 作文批改重点（按权重排序）： ① 将来被动格式正确（will be + 过去分词，be 不能变形）—— 一票否决项 ② 五要素是否齐全 —— 缺一项扣 2 分 ③ 过去分词拼写 —— built/sent/launched/developed/designed/installed 每错扣 1 分 ④ 主将从现 —— if/when 从句是否用了现在时 ⑤ 连接词使用 —— 至少 2 个不同类型的连接词 ⑥ 字数 —— <80 扣 2 分，>130 扣 1 分 火星任务参考例文（约 118 词，将来被动 7 处）： In the coming decades, a manned mission to Mars will be launched by several nations working together. A powerful rocket will be built to carry astronauts on the long journey. The spacecraft will carry special equipment to keep astronauts alive. New materials will be developed to protect them from radiation. A small research station will be set up on Mars. Experiments will be carried out to search for signs of ancient life. Soil and rocks will be collected and studied. If the mission is completed successfully, it will serve as a stepping stone for deeper space exploration. This project will show that humans can travel beyond the moon, and a new chapter of space travel will be opened. 八、写后自检清单 ⏱ 建议 3 分钟 — 逐条打 ✓，全部通过再交 写完作文后，逐条检查。每项通过打 ✓。全部 ✓ 再交给老师。 ☐ 内容完整：五个要素（项目是什么/谁参与/建造什么/用什么技术/什么意义）都写到了吗？ ☐ 将来被动 ≥ 3 处：数一数 will be + done 出现了几次？（≥ 3 次且不刻意堆砌） ☐ will be 格式：每个 will be + done 中的 be 都是原形吗？（绝不能 will is/are + done！） ☐ 过去分词拼写：built, sent, launched, developed, designed, installed, used 全拼对了吗？ ☐ 时态搭配：有穿插现在时被动（is/are done）描述当前事实吗？ ☐ 连接词 ≥ 2 个：用了 First / Then / so that / If / Most importantly 等连接词吗？ ☐ 字数：80-120 词？（默数一遍，不够就加 P2/P3 细节，超了就删修饰词） ☐ 主将从现：If / When 从句用了一般现在时吗？（如 If the base is built, ... will ...） ☐ 不及物动词未误用被动：land, happen, take place 等没有错写成被动吧？ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 太空探索 · 话题写作 Unit 6 Beyond Earth · 写作专项 · 学生版 ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ 一、写作主题 ⏱ 建议 2 分钟 — 读题、圈关键词 题目：A Space Exploration Plan in the Future 设想一个未来的太空探索项目（月球基地、火星任务、新望远镜、太空旅行等），写一篇 80-120 词的英语短文，描述这个项目将如何展开——谁将参与、什么将被建造、哪些技术将被使用、它对人类意味着什么。要求至少使用 3 处将来时被动语态（will be + done）。 体裁 人称 时态 字数 语法重点 说明文 / 展望文 （descriptive + predictive writing） 第三人称（it/they） 将来（will + do）+ 将来被动（will be + done） 穿插现在（描述现状） 80-120 词 将来被动语态 ≥ 3 处 （will be + 过去分词） 三时态被动可灵活使用 课本依据 本题对应 U6 单元主题 Beyond Earth 的写作输出。 五要素：① 项目名称+时间 ② 参与方 ③ 将建造/发射什么 ④ 将使用哪些技术 ⑤ 对人类的意义 二、素材工坊 — 写前必填 ⏱ 建议 5 分钟 — 独立填写，中英文均可 先填表再动笔。写不出来 = 没想清楚。中英文混填也可以。 要素 你的素材（关键词/短语即可） 课本参考（月球基地） 项目名称 + 时间 Moon Base / International Moon Research Station planned for the 2030s 参与方 （谁在做？） China, together with other nations scientists and engineers from around the world 将建造/发射什么？ （3-4项） living modules / research labs / solar panels communication systems / greenhouses 将使用哪些技术？ 3D printing for construction / AI systems recycling water and air technology 对人类的意义 （至少两点） ① a step towards deeper space exploration ② nations working together for science ③ new resources and knowledge 三、精读导入 — 在阅读中学写作 ⏱ 建议 10 分钟 — 默读 2' + 寻踪 3' + 句型提取 5' 3.1 读短文，完成三个任务 任务：① 理解大意 ② 用下划线标出所有将来时被动语态（will be + done） ③ 圈出可用于写作的句型 Have you ever imagined living on the moon? Scientists believe that in the next few decades, the first permanent moon base will be built. This will not be a project of just one country — it will be carried out by scientists and engineers from many nations working together. The moon base will consist of several parts. First, living modules will be constructed using special materials that can protect astronauts from radiation and extreme temperatures. Then, research laboratories will be set up so that scientists can study the moon's surface and conduct experiments. Solar panels will be installed to provide energy for the entire base. Advanced technology will be used to make life on the moon possible. A closed water recycling system will be developed so that every drop of water can be reused. Food will be grown in special greenhouses under artificial light. 3D printers will be employed to produce tools and spare parts directly on site. The moon base is more than just a scientific station. It will serve as a stepping stone for deeper space exploration. If the base is built successfully, human missions to Mars will follow in the 2040s. New resources will be discovered and new knowledge will be gained. Most importantly, this project will show that when nations cooperate, amazing things can be achieved. Perhaps one day, children will look up at the moon and know that humans are living there — not as visitors, but as residents. That future will be created by the choices we make today. （字数：约 255 词 | 将来被动语态 ≥ 10 处） 3.2 将来被动寻踪 — 找出文中 will be + done 短文中用了大量将来时被动语态。找出至少 6 处，摘抄关键词填入下表。 序号 将来被动语态（摘抄 will be + 过去分词部分） 原句的主语是什么？ 1 will be built the first permanent moon base 2 will be carried out it (the project) 3 will be constructed living modules 4 will be set up research laboratories 5 will be installed solar panels 6 will be used advanced technology 7 will be developed a closed water recycling system 8 will be grown food 9 will be employed 3D printers 3.3 句型提取 — 从阅读到写作 把你在短文中找到的句子，按写作功能分类填入下表。 写作功能 短文原句（摘抄） 提炼句型模板 描述将建造什么 the first permanent moon base will be built ______ will be built / constructed 描述将由谁执行 ______ will be carried out by ______ 描述将使用什么技术 ______ will be used / employed to ______ 描述将安装/设置什么 ______ will be installed / set up 描述将发现/获得什么 ______ will be discovered / gained 四、写作工具箱 4.1 太空探索话题核心词汇 写到「太空探索」不要只会 space 和 rocket。按下表分类选词，每类至少用一个。 类别 基础词 升级词 例句片段 太空设施 space station, rocket moon base, space telescope, module, Mars rover, orbiting laboratory A moon base will be built in the 2030s. 探索动作 explore, go to launch, land on, set foot on, carry out, conduct Human missions to Mars will be carried out. 建造/开发 build, make construct, develop, design, install, set up, employ Solar panels will be installed for energy. 技术 technology advanced technology, 3D printing, recycling system, artificial intelligence 3D printers will be employed to produce tools. 人/组织 scientist, country astronaut, engineer, researcher, nations, crew, team Scientists from many nations will cooperate. 意义/影响 important, good a stepping stone, lead to, open the door to, make...possible It will serve as a stepping stone for Mars. 4.2 将来被动写作句型 — 太空计划专用 以下句型覆盖了太空探索计划的全部表达需求。★★★ 是满分区分点。 功能 句型模板 示例 难度 引出主题 In the coming decades, ______ will be ______. In the coming decades, a moon base will be established. ★★ 建造计划① ______ will be built / constructed on ______. Living modules will be constructed on the moon. ★★ 建造计划② ______ will be set up / installed to ______. Research labs will be set up to study the moon's surface. ★★ 技术应用① ______ will be used / employed to ______. 3D printing will be used to produce spare parts. ★★ 技术应用② ______ will be developed so that ______ can be done. A recycling system will be developed so that water can be reused. ★★★ 多国合作 ______ will be carried out by ______ from ______. The project will be carried out by scientists from many nations. ★★★ 发现/获得 New ______ will be discovered / gained. New resources will be discovered on the moon. ★★ 递进意义① ______ will serve as a stepping stone for ______. The moon base will serve as a stepping stone for Mars. ★★★ 递进意义② If ______ is built, ______ will follow. If the base is built, Mars missions will follow. ★★★ 望远镜专用 A new ______ will be sent into space to ______. A new telescope will be sent into space to study distant galaxies. ★★ 太空旅行专用 Space trips will be offered to ______ in the future. Space trips will be offered to ordinary people in the future. ★★ 总结展望 This project will show that ______ can be achieved. It will show that amazing things can be achieved. ★★ 4.3 连接词 — 让文章有节奏 不要把所有句子写成孤立的简单句。用以下连接词让文章流畅。 功能 连接词/短语 使用位置 时间推进 In the coming decades, In the 2030s, First, Then, One day 从当前展望未来 → 逐项展开计划 递进/追加 also, not only... but also..., more importantly, in addition 追加第二个、第三个计划细节 因果/手段 so that, so as to, to make...possible 描述技术的目的和用途 条件/假设 If..., ...will... / When..., ...will... 描述计划实现后的下一步 总结 Most importantly, Perhaps one day, This will show that... 结尾段升华意义 中考加分技巧 ① 将来被动语态用 3-5 处最佳——太少不扣题，太多刻意堆砌 ② 穿插 1-2 处现在时被动（is/are done）描述当前事实，与将来被动对比，层次更丰富 ③ 将来被动最容易丢分的地方：will be + done 中 be 忘记 → will built ✗ → will be built ✓ ④ 动词过去分词拼写必须过关：built, sent, launched, developed, designed, installed, used 五、范文拆解 — 月球研究基地 阅读范文，完成：① 标出五要素分别在第几段 ② 圈出所有将来被动语态 ③ 找出你最喜欢的 2 个句型。 In the coming decades, a moon research station will be built by China together with other nations. The station will include several key parts. Living modules will be constructed first. Research labs will be set up for experiments. Solar panels will be installed for energy. Advanced technology will be used to support life on the moon. Water will be recycled by a closed system. Food will be grown in greenhouses. 3D printers will produce tools on site. The moon station will serve as a stepping stone for Mars. If it is built successfully, human missions to Mars will follow. Most importantly, this project will show that amazing things can be achieved when nations cooperate. The moon may one day become our second home. （正文字数：约 123 词 | 将来被动语态：7 处） 范文结构分析 段落 内容要素 核心句型 将来被动语态 Para 1 ① 项目基本信息（建什么+谁参与） will be built by... will be built ✓ Para 2 ② 将建造什么（设施3项） will be constructed / will be set up will be installed will be constructed ✓ / will be set up ✓ will be installed ✓ Para 3 ③ 将使用哪些技术 will be used / will be recycled will be grown will be used ✓ / will be recycled ✓ will be grown ✓ Para 4 ④ 意义+下一步计划 will serve as / will follow （条件句主将从现） Para 5 ⑤ 总结与展望 will show that... / may become... （主动收束，may 表可能性） 范文亮点 ① 五要素完整，一段一功能 ② 将来被动语态 7 处，自然融入 ③ 时间线：In the coming decades → First... → If...will... → may one day ④ 句式：by...被动 / so that目的 / If条件 / may可能性 ⑤ 首尾呼应：moon research station → our second home 六、写作框架 — 搭骨架，再填血肉 基础版用 3 段（开头概述 2 句 + 主体细节 4-5 句 + 结尾意义 2 句），进阶版用 5 段细化。 Para 1 · 开头 — 项目概述（≈18 词） In the coming decades, ______ (项目名称) will be built / launched / established. This project will be carried out by ______ (参与方). Para 2 · 设施 — 将建造什么（≈28 词） The ______ will consist of several key parts. First, ______ will be constructed. Then, ______ will be set up for ______ (用途). ______ will be installed to provide ______. Para 3 · 技术 — 将使用哪些技术（≈28 词） To make ______ possible, advanced technology will be used. ______ will be developed so that ______. ______ will be employed to ______. Para 4 · 意义 — 为什么重要（≈22 词） ______ will serve as a stepping stone for ______. If ______ is built successfully, ______ will follow. New ______ will be gained and new ______ will be discovered. Para 5 · 总结 — 展望与评价（≈18 词） Most importantly, this project will show that ______ can be achieved. Perhaps one day, ______ will become ______. 字数分配提醒 P1≈18 + P2≈28 + P3≈28 + P4≈22 + P5≈18 = 114 词，正好在 80-120 区间。 不够 80 词？P2 或 P3 各加一项设施/技术。超 120 词？砍修饰词，保持简洁。 七、分层练习 ⏱ 练习一 5' + 练习二 8' + 练习三 20' = 共约 33 分钟 练习一：将来被动造句 ★ （6 题） 把下列中文句子翻译成英文，每句必须使用将来时被动语态（will be + done）。 1. 在未来的几十年里，第一个月球基地将被建造。 提示：(In the coming decades / the first moon base / build) 2. 居住舱将使用特殊材料来建造。 提示：(Living modules / construct / using special materials) 3. 太阳能板将被安装来为基地提供能源。 提示：(Solar panels / install / to provide energy / for the base) 4. 水循环系统将被开发，这样每一滴水都可以被重复使用。 提示：(A water recycling system / develop / so that / every drop of water / can / reuse) 5. 3D打印机将被用来在月球上直接生产工具。 提示：(3D printers / employ / to produce tools / directly on the moon) 6. 如果基地被成功建造，人类火星任务将会紧随其后。 提示：(If / the base / build successfully / human missions to Mars / follow) 练习二：段落写作 ⭐⭐ （写一个约 40 词的段落） 从以下两个任务中任选一个，写一个段落。 任务 A：描述月球基地将建造哪些设施（3-4 项），至少用 2 处将来被动语态。 任务 B：描述太空探索对人类的两项重要意义，使用 will serve as / will be gained / will be discovered。 我选任务 _____ 我的段落： 练习三：完整作文 ⭐⭐⭐ 题目：A Space Exploration Plan in the Future 要求：80-120 词 / 五要素齐全 / 至少 3 处将来被动语态（will be + done）/ 句式多样化 / 用至少 2 个连接词 可选话题（均来自 U6 课本内容）： A. 月球国际研究站（Moon Research Station） B. 火星载人任务（Manned Mission to Mars） C. 新一代太空望远镜（A New Space Telescope） D. 太空旅行（Space Travel for Ordinary People） 我选的话题：______________ 八、写后自检清单 ⏱ 建议 3 分钟 — 逐条打 ✓，全部通过再交 写完作文后，逐条检查。每项通过打 ✓。全部 ✓ 再交给老师。 ☐ 内容完整：五个要素（项目是什么/谁参与/建造什么/用什么技术/什么意义）都写到了吗？ ☐ 将来被动 ≥ 3 处：数一数 will be + done 出现了几次？（≥ 3 次且不刻意堆砌） ☐ will be 格式：每个 will be + done 中的 be 都是原形吗？（绝不能 will is/are + done！） ☐ 过去分词拼写：built, sent, launched, developed, designed, installed, used 全拼对了吗？ ☐ 时态搭配：有穿插现在时被动（is/are done）描述当前事实吗？ ☐ 连接词 ≥ 2 个：用了 First / Then / so that / If / Most importantly 等连接词吗？ ☐ 字数：80-120 词？（默数一遍，不够就加 P2/P3 细节，超了就删修饰词） ☐ 主将从现：If / When 从句用了一般现在时吗？（如 If the base is built, ... will ...） ☐ 不及物动词未误用被动：land, happen, take place 等没有错写成被动吧？ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $