Unit 1 People of Achievement 著名人物（单元写作精练）英语人教版选择性必修第一册

**基本信息** 以“著名人物”为主题，构建“词汇-短语-句型-模板-真题”五级写作方法体系，系统培养语言表达与文化认知能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作词汇短语|4类核心词汇+4组必背短语|按“身份-品质-行为-影响”维度分类，高频褒义形容词与逻辑词汇精准匹配写作场景|从基础词汇积累到功能短语应用，构建人物描述的语言要素网络| |写作句型|3类15个功能句型|分“开头引入-中间叙事-结尾升华”三环节，融合非谓语、强调句等高级语法结构|遵循“引入人物-阐述事迹-提炼精神”的写作逻辑链，实现从句到段的连贯表达| |写作模板|1个通用模板|提供“生平-奋斗-成就-影响”四要素框架，适配不同人物写作需求|模板化结构降低写作难度，同时保留个性化表达空间| |真题与练习|1道高考真题+8道模拟题|覆盖征文、倡议、演讲等多元写作情境，强化知识迁移与应用能力|从基础翻译到完整写作，难度梯度递进，契合新授课从输入到输出的教学逻辑|

Unit 1 People of Achievement著名人物 单元写作精练 【主题】著名人物 【写作词汇短语】 1、 核心写作词汇 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. 人物身份/先驱成就类 achievement n. 功绩，成就 pioneer n. 先驱，开拓者 contributor n. 贡献者 genius n. 天才 scholar n. 学者 inventor n. 发明家 founder n. 奠基人 objective n. 奋斗目标 recognition n. 认可，赞誉 vital adj. 至关重要的 extraordinary adj. 非凡的，卓越的 remarkable adj. 杰出的 crucial adj. 关键性的 2. 人物品质形容词（作文高频褒义） committed 全心奉献的 determined 意志坚定的 persistent 坚持不懈的 selfless 无私的 modest 谦逊的 diligent 勤奋的 patriotic 爱国的 brilliant 才华出众的 strong-willed 意志顽强的 enthusiastic 满腔热忱的 fearless 无畏的 knowledgeable 学识渊博的 3. 动作行为动词（描述科研、奋斗） commit v. 投身，奉献 devote v. 致力于 conduct v. 开展（研究） overcome v. 克服 accomplish v. 完成（伟业） achieve v. 取得（成就） inspire v. 激励，鼓舞 transform v. 改变，革新 flee v. 逃离（困境） survive v. 熬过，挺过 4. 逻辑/影响类词汇 consequence n. 结果，后果 institution n. 研究院，学术机构 circumstance n. 境遇，环境 heritage n. 遗产 impact n. 巨大影响 二、单元必背写作短语 （一）奉献与奋斗 1. be committed to (doing) sth 致力于…… 2. commit oneself to doing sth 全身心投入做某事 3. devote one’s entire life to 毕生致力于 4. make great contributions to 为……做出巨大贡献 5. carry out scientific research 开展科学研究 6. overcome all hardships/difficulties 克服重重困难 7. stick to one’s goal 坚守目标 8. never give up in the face of failure 面对失败永不放弃 （二）经历与职业 1. be born in… 出生于…… 2. graduate from…university 毕业于某大学 3. take up a position as… 担任……职位 4. come to power 掌权（时代背景） 5. throughout one’s lifetime 一生，毕生 6. happen to discover 偶然发现 7. flee one’s country 逃离祖国 （三）成就与影响 1. gain worldwide recognition 获得世界认可 2. win numerous awards 斩获多项奖项 3. make a vital difference to 对……产生重大深远影响 4. lead to great breakthroughs 带来重大突破 5. set a fine example for us 为我们树立优秀榜样 6. be regarded as a pioneer of… 被视作……领域先驱 7. to the public 在世人眼中 8. pass away 逝世（委婉书面表达） （四）固定句型搭配 1. be vital to/for sth 对……至关重要 2. It is vital to do sth 做某事至关重要 【写作句型】 （一）开头段：引出敬佩人物 1. The person I admire most is …, a world-famous pioneer in the field of science. 我最敬佩的人是……，一位享誉世界的科学先驱。 2. Of all the people of achievement, I respect … more than anyone else. 在所有杰出伟人之中，我最敬重…… 3. There are countless respectable figures in history, among whom … leaves the deepest impression on me. 历史上有无数值得尊敬的人物，其中……令我印象最深。 （二）中间段：生平、事迹、奋斗（定语从句/非谓语/让步） 1. Born in a poor family in 1930, he showed extraordinary talent in agriculture from an early age. 1930年他生于贫寒家庭，年少时就在农学方面展露非凡天赋。（非谓语开篇） 2. Despite countless failures and tough circumstances, he remained committed to his research day and night. 尽管历经无数失败与艰苦环境，他依旧日夜投身研究。（despite让步高级句式） 3. Having spent over fifty years carrying out experiments, he finally achieved his life-long objective. 五十余年潜心实验，他最终实现了毕生追求的目标。（having done 高级状语） 4. He once faced unfair treatment, which forced him to leave the academic institutions he worked for. 他曾遭受不公待遇，这迫使他离开了供职的学术机构。（非限定性定语从句） 5. It was his strong will and selfless devotion that brought him such remarkable achievements. 正是他顽强的意志与无私的奉献，造就了他非凡的成就。（强调句，作文提分） （三）结尾段：人物评价、精神启发 1. What impresses me most is his modest attitude despite all his great success. 最打动我的是，即便功成名就，他依旧谦逊低调。 2. His deeds inspire us to stick to our dreams and devote ourselves to what we believe in. 他的事迹激励我们坚守理想，投身自己所信仰的事业。 3. He fully deserves the worldwide recognition and is the pride of our nation. 他完全配得上全世界的赞誉，是我们民族的骄傲。 4. Only by learning from his persistent spirit can we overcome obstacles on our way to success. 唯有学习他坚持不懈的精神，我们才能攻克成功路上的难关。（倒装句） 5. From him, I learn that persistent efforts will eventually lead to great achievements. 从他身上我懂得，持之以恒的努力终会铸就伟大成就。 【写作模板】 The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 【原题呈现】 （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】The person I respect We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher, who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文。 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法。 要求： 1.人物简介： 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 第二步：列提纲（重点短语） As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently; 第三步：连词成句 1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly. 2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. 3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因 2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。 【基础必做】 一、翻译下列重要短语 1. be committed to ____________ 2. devote oneself to ____________ 3. make contributions to ____________ 4. overcome all difficulties ____________ 5. carry out scientific research ____________ 6. gain worldwide recognition ____________ 7. be regarded as a pioneer ____________ 8. have a lasting impact on ____________ 二、完成句子 1). 屠呦呦毕生致力于中医药研究，最终发现了青蒿素。（devote...to） Tu Youyou ________________________ and finally discovered artemisinin. 2). 尽管历经无数失败，他依然坚守自己的科研目标。（stick to） Despite countless failures, he still ________________________. 3). 这位科学家因在医学领域的重大贡献而获得了世界认可。（gain recognition） The scientist ________________________ for his great contributions in the medical field. 4). 袁隆平被认为是杂交水稻领域的先驱之一。（be regarded as） Yuan Longping ________________________ one of the pioneers in the field of hybrid rice. 5). 他克服了重重困难，成功完成了这项重要实验。（overcome difficulties） He ________________________ and successfully completed this important experiment. 6). 这位医生的研究对治疗这种疾病产生了深远影响。（have an impact on） The doctor’s research ________________________ the treatment of this disease. 7). 我很敬佩那些全身心投入科学事业的人们。（be committed to） I admire those who ________________________ the cause of science. 8). 她花了多年时间开展实验，才取得了这一重大突破。（carry out research） It took her years of ________________________ before she made this major breakthrough. 一、翻译短语 1. 致力于；全身心投入 2. 献身于；致力于 3. 为……做出贡献 4. 克服重重困难 5. 开展科学研究 6. 获得世界认可 7. 被视为先驱 8. 对……产生持久影响 二、完成句子 1. devoted her entire life to traditional Chinese medicine research 2. stuck to his scientific research goal 3. gained worldwide recognition 4. is regarded as 5. overcame many difficulties 6. has a far-reaching impact on 7. are committed to 8. carrying out research 【提升必做】 1．（25-26高二上·河北邯郸·阶段检测）科学改变推动时代进步，假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语主题征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的科学家。 1. 人物简介； 2. 令人敬佩的原因。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 There are many scientists who have driven social development, among whom, the one I admire most is Yuan Longping, an outstanding agricultural scientist known as the “father of hybrid rice”. A few decades ago, lack of food was one of the main problems threatening Chinese people. After years of study, Yuan Longping successfully developed the world’s first hybrid rice which dramatically increased rice production. His approach to rice breeding also serves as a solution to food problems around the globe. There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance. His story gives me inspiration and motivates me to love science. And I would like to make contributions to it 【详解】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。考生所在学校正在举办英语主题征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的人。 1.词汇积累 杰出的：outstanding → brilliant 著名的：known → renowned 充当：serve as → act as 激励：motivate → inspire 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：His story gives me inspiration and motivates me to love science. 拓展句：His story gives me inspiration, motivating me to love science. 【点睛】[高分句型1] After years of study, Yuan Longping successfully developed the world’s first hybrid rice which dramatically increased rice production. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] There is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 2．（25-26高二上·江西·阶段检测）假定你是李华，你校科技节即将来临，校英语报新开设了专栏“The Scientific Mind”，现征集稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： （1）介绍一位你最敬佩的科学家及其一项主要成就； （2）谈谈他/她身上哪一种特质最让你钦佩，对你有何启发 注意： （1）写作词数应为100个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文1 The scientist I admire most is Marie Curie. She is famous for discovering the elements radium and polonium, which paved the way for modern research in radioactivity. Her work forever changed the field of science. What I find most admirable is her incredible perseverance. She conducted her research under extremely difficult conditions for many years and faced immense personal challenges, during which time her determination was tested but never wavered. Years of effort finally paid off and she ultimately achieved her history-making discoveries. Curie’s perseverance inspires me to persist in my own studies, especially when facing difficult subjects or problems. Her example is a lasting reminder that consistent effort is the key to overcoming obstacles and achieving my goals. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生介绍一位自己最敬佩的科学家及其一项主要成就。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 著名的：famous→renowned 极好的：incredible→remarkable 毅力：perseverance→tenacity 极大的：immense→tremendous 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：The scientist I admire most is Marie Curie. She is famous for discovering the elements radium and polonium, which paved the way for modern research in radioactivity. Her work forever changed the field of science. 拓展句：The scientist I admire most is Marie Curie, who is famous for discovering the elements radium and polonium, which have paved the way for modern research in radioactivity and whose work has forever changed the field of science. 【点睛】【高分句型1】She conducted her research under extremely difficult conditions for many years and faced immense personal challenges, during which time her determination was tested but never wavered.(运用介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Her example is a lasting reminder that consistent effort is the key to overcoming obstacles and achieving my goals.(运用that引导的同位语从句) 3．（25-26高二上·陕西西安·阶段检测）假定你是李华，学校“致敬科技榜样”主题活动正在开展，你班计划向全校同学发起“向钱学森先生学习”的倡议。请根据以下要点写一封倡议书： 1. 简述钱学森事迹(放弃国外优渥待遇归国、投身航天事业)； 2. 说明学习他的原因； 3. 提出具体学习举措。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，保证行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 A Proposal to Learn from Scientist Qian Xuesen Dear fellow students, To honor the spirit of scientific role models, our class is starting an initiative to learn from the renowned scientist Qian Xuesen. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear fellow students, To honor the spirit of scientific role models, our class is starting an initiative to learn from the renowned scientist Qian Xuesen. Qian Xuesen was a great scientist who gave up his comfortable life and high-paying job abroad to return to China. He devoted himself to China’s aerospace industry, making significant contributions to its development. We should learn from him because his patriotism and dedication inspire us all. His spirit teaches us to serve our country with perseverance and selflessness. To learn from Qian Xuesen, I propose: first, study science subjects diligently; second, participate in science clubs or competitions; third, cultivate innovative thinking. Let’s take action together to contribute to our nation’s future. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为“向钱学森先生学习”的倡议写一封倡议书。 【详解】1.词汇积累 投入：devote oneself to→commit oneself to 奉献：dedication→devotion 培养：cultivate→foster 参加：participate in→attend 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Qian Xuesen was a great scientist who gave up his comfortable life and high-paying job abroad to return to China. 拓展句：Qian Xuesen was a great scientist who gave up his comfortable life and high-paying job abroad because he was determined to devote himself to his motherland’s development and return to China. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Qian Xuesen was a great scientist who gave up his comfortable life and high-paying job abroad to return to China.（运用了who引导定语从句） 【高分句型2】To learn from Qian Xuesen, I propose: first, study science subjects diligently; second, participate in science clubs or competitions; third, cultivate innovative thinking.（运用了不定式作目的状语） 4．（25-26高二上·贵州六盘水·期中）假定你是李华，你校英语报正组织英语作文比赛，请以“我最尊敬的一位科学家”为话题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2.你的感悟。 注意：1. 字数100词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Scientist I Respect the Most The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen, a renowned Chinese aerospace engineer. Often called the “Father of China’s Missile and Space Program,” he studied abroad but returned to China despite numerous challenges. His dedication and expertise laid the foundation for China’s achievements in rocketry and space exploration. Qian’s story teaches me that true success lies in contributing to one’s country and society. His perseverance and love for his homeland inspire me to work hard and remain committed to my goals, no matter the difficulties. He is a true hero in my heart. The Scientist I Respect the Most The scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou, a Chinese pharmaceutical chemist. In the 1970s, she and her team successfully extracted artemisinin from sweet wormwood, a discovery that revolutionized malaria treatment and saved millions of lives globally. For this groundbreaking work, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015. Her story deeply inspires me. It teaches me that perseverance and believing in the value of traditional knowledge can lead to world-changing achievements. Her dedication to science, often through countless experiments and without modern facilities, motivates me to pursue my goals with passion and resilience. The Scientist I Respect the Most The scientist I respect the most is Yuan Longping, known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice.” He dedicated his life to developing high-yield hybrid rice varieties. His revolutionary work significantly increased China's grain output and has been crucial in ensuring food security for not only China but also many other countries. From him, I learn the profound spirit of dedication and simple persistence. His dream of "enjoying the cool under the hybrid rice plants as tall as sorghum" shows a great mind connected to the people. He inspires me to apply my knowledge to solve real-world problems and contribute to society. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“我最尊敬的一位科学家”为话题，写一篇短文参赛，内容涵盖人物简介、事迹以及个人感悟。 【详解】1.词汇积累 尽管：despite→ in spite of 奉献：dedication→ commitment 激励：inspire→ motivate 真正的：true→ genuine 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen, a renowned Chinese aerospace engineer. 拓展句：The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen, who is a renowned Chinese aerospace engineer. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen, a renowned Chinese aerospace engineer.（运用了省略引导词that的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Qian’s story teaches me that true success lies in contributing to one’s country and society.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 5．（25-26高二上·山东济南·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Max 对高中英语教材上的中国科学家非常感兴趣，他想让你推荐一位你最钦佩的中国科学家，请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 你钦佩的科学家是谁; 2. 你钦佩他/她的理由。 Dear Max, I am glad to receive your email, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Max, I am glad to receive your email. Among all the Chinese scientists in our high-school English textbooks, the one I admire most is Yuan Longping. I admire him mainly for two reasons. Firstly, his dedication to agricultural research is truly inspiring. He spent his whole life striving to increase rice yields to feed the world's growing population. His hybrid rice technology has significantly improved global food security. Secondly, despite numerous difficulties and setbacks, he never gave up. His perseverance and unwavering belief in his mission have left a deep mark on me. His spirit encourages me to face challenges bravely in my own life. I sincerely hope you can learn more about him and be inspired by his great achievements. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇应用文，要求考生向对中国科学家感兴趣的英国朋友 Max 推荐自己最钦佩的中国科学家，并阐述钦佩理由。 【详解】词汇积累： 奉献：dedication→devotion 努力：strive→endeavor 显著地：significantly→remarkably 毅力，坚持不懈：perseverance→persistence 句式拓展： 同义句转换 原句：He spent his whole life striving to increase rice yields to feed the world's growing population. 拓展句：Spending his whole life striving to increase rice yields, he aimed to feed the world's growing population. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】Among all the Chinese scientists in our high- school English textbooks, the one I admire most is Yuan Longping.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句） 【高分句型 2】 I sincerely hope you can learn more about him and be inspired by his great achievements.（运用了省略that的宾语从句） 6．（25-26高二上·山西临汾·期中）假定你校英语校报将开设一个新专栏，致敬中国伟大的科学家，请你以“The Chinese Scientist I Admire”为题写一篇短文，赞颂一位科学家的事迹和精神。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Chinese Scientist I Admire ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                  The Chinese Scientist I Admire The Chinese scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping, known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He spent his whole life researching hybrid rice, which helped solve the food shortage problem for millions of people around the world. Despite great difficulties, he never gave up his dream of feeding more people. He also remained modest and dedicated to his work until the end of his life. Yuan Longping’s spirit of perseverance and selflessness sets a great example for us all. His contributions will always be remembered. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The Chinese Scientist I Admire”为题写一篇短文向校英语报新开设的专栏投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 尽管：despite→in spite of 投入的，献身的：dedicated→devoted 谦逊的：modest→humble 坚持：perseverance→persistence 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Despite great difficulties, he never gave up his dream of feeding more people. 拓展句：Great difficulties as he faced, he he never gave up his dream of feeding more people. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The Chinese scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping, known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.（运用了省略关系代词who/that的定语从句） 【高分句型2】He spent his whole life researching hybrid rice, which helped solve the food shortage problem for millions of people around the world.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 7．（25-26高二上·重庆·期中）假定你是李华，你校正在组织以“People of Achievement”为主题的英文演讲比赛，要求以自己崇拜的人为主题，写一封演讲稿。 要求：1.人物是谁 2.人物的事迹 3.该人物对你的影响 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 People of Achievement ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear friends, Today, I would like to share with you the person I admire most — Yuan Longping, the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. What makes Yuan Longping so remarkable is not only his scientific contributions but also his perseverance and selflessness. He worked tirelessly in the fields, facing numerous challenges and failures, but he never gave up. His commitment to helping people achieve food security inspired millions. As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that made him successful, and his spirit has inspired me a lot. I sincerely hope that everyone can learn from the people we admire and make great contributions to the world. Thank you for listening! 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以自己崇拜的人为主题，写一封演讲稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 面对：face→confront 帮助：help→assist 实现：achieve→realize 引人注目的：remarkable→striking 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Today, I would like to share with you the person I admire most — Yuan Longping, the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. 拓展句：Today, I would like to share with you the person I admire most — Yuan Longping, who is the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. 【点睛】[高分句型1] What makes Yuan Longping so remarkable is not only his scientific contributions but also his perseverance and selflessness.（运用了what引导主语从句） [高分句型2] It is his devotion that made him successful, and his spirit has inspired me a lot.（运用了强调句） 8．（25-26高二上·云南昆明·期中）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“The Celebrity (名人) I admire most”为主题的分享活动，请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括： 1. 名人简介; 2. 爱戴原因; 3. 所得启示。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The Celebrity I admire most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Celebrity I admire most The celebrity I admire most is Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”. After graduation, Yuan Longping began to commit himself to the research of hybrid rice. Through his effort, Yuan overcame technical difficulties and succeeded in developing the first hybrid rice, thus enabling farmers to improve their output greatly. For his great contributions to the world, Yuan Longping was awarded the Medal of the Republic, the highest state honor. Yuan Longping passed away in May 2021. In my heart, he is a hero and role model for the people, inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。要求考生就学校英文报正在举办的以“The Celebrity (名人) I admire most”为主题的分享活动，写一篇短文投稿，介绍自己最爱戴的名人，以及爱戴的原因和所得到的启示。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 致力于：commit oneself to→devote oneself to 克服：overcome→get over 提高：improve→enhance 激励：inspire→motivate 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：In my heart, he is a hero and role model for the people, inspiring more people to make great contributions to our country. 拓展句：In my heart, he is a hero and role model for the people, who inspires more people to make great contributions to our country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The celebrity I admire most is Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”. (运用了省略了关系代词的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Through his effort, Yuan overcame technical difficulties and succeeded in developing the first hybrid rice, thus enabling farmers to improve their output greatly. (运用了现在分词作结果状语) $Unit 1 People of Achievement著名人物 单元写作精练 【主题】著名人物 【写作词汇短语】 1、 核心写作词汇 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. 人物身份/先驱成就类 achievement n. 功绩，成就 pioneer n. 先驱，开拓者 contributor n. 贡献者 genius n. 天才 scholar n. 学者 inventor n. 发明家 founder n. 奠基人 objective n. 奋斗目标 recognition n. 认可，赞誉 vital adj. 至关重要的 extraordinary adj. 非凡的，卓越的 remarkable adj. 杰出的 crucial adj. 关键性的 2. 人物品质形容词（作文高频褒义） committed 全心奉献的 determined 意志坚定的 persistent 坚持不懈的 selfless 无私的 modest 谦逊的 diligent 勤奋的 patriotic 爱国的 brilliant 才华出众的 strong-willed 意志顽强的 enthusiastic 满腔热忱的 fearless 无畏的 knowledgeable 学识渊博的 3. 动作行为动词（描述科研、奋斗） commit v. 投身，奉献 devote v. 致力于 conduct v. 开展（研究） overcome v. 克服 accomplish v. 完成（伟业） achieve v. 取得（成就） inspire v. 激励，鼓舞 transform v. 改变，革新 flee v. 逃离（困境） survive v. 熬过，挺过 4. 逻辑/影响类词汇 consequence n. 结果，后果 institution n. 研究院，学术机构 circumstance n. 境遇，环境 heritage n. 遗产 impact n. 巨大影响 二、单元必背写作短语 （一）奉献与奋斗 1. be committed to (doing) sth 致力于…… 2. commit oneself to doing sth 全身心投入做某事 3. devote one’s entire life to 毕生致力于 4. make great contributions to 为……做出巨大贡献 5. carry out scientific research 开展科学研究 6. overcome all hardships/difficulties 克服重重困难 7. stick to one’s goal 坚守目标 8. never give up in the face of failure 面对失败永不放弃 （二）经历与职业 1. be born in… 出生于…… 2. graduate from…university 毕业于某大学 3. take up a position as… 担任……职位 4. come to power 掌权（时代背景） 5. throughout one’s lifetime 一生，毕生 6. happen to discover 偶然发现 7. flee one’s country 逃离祖国 （三）成就与影响 1. gain worldwide recognition 获得世界认可 2. win numerous awards 斩获多项奖项 3. make a vital difference to 对……产生重大深远影响 4. lead to great breakthroughs 带来重大突破 5. set a fine example for us 为我们树立优秀榜样 6. be regarded as a pioneer of… 被视作……领域先驱 7. to the public 在世人眼中 8. pass away 逝世（委婉书面表达） （四）固定句型搭配 1. be vital to/for sth 对……至关重要 2. It is vital to do sth 做某事至关重要 【写作句型】 （一）开头段：引出敬佩人物 1. The person I admire most is …, a world-famous pioneer in the field of science. 我最敬佩的人是……，一位享誉世界的科学先驱。 2. Of all the people of achievement, I respect … more than anyone else. 在所有杰出伟人之中，我最敬重…… 3. There are countless respectable figures in history, among whom … leaves the deepest impression on me. 历史上有无数值得尊敬的人物，其中……令我印象最深。 （二）中间段：生平、事迹、奋斗（定语从句/非谓语/让步） 1. Born in a poor family in 1930, he showed extraordinary talent in agriculture from an early age. 1930年他生于贫寒家庭，年少时就在农学方面展露非凡天赋。（非谓语开篇） 2. Despite countless failures and tough circumstances, he remained committed to his research day and night. 尽管历经无数失败与艰苦环境，他依旧日夜投身研究。（despite让步高级句式） 3. Having spent over fifty years carrying out experiments, he finally achieved his life-long objective. 五十余年潜心实验，他最终实现了毕生追求的目标。（having done 高级状语） 4. He once faced unfair treatment, which forced him to leave the academic institutions he worked for. 他曾遭受不公待遇，这迫使他离开了供职的学术机构。（非限定性定语从句） 5. It was his strong will and selfless devotion that brought him such remarkable achievements. 正是他顽强的意志与无私的奉献，造就了他非凡的成就。（强调句，作文提分） （三）结尾段：人物评价、精神启发 1. What impresses me most is his modest attitude despite all his great success. 最打动我的是，即便功成名就，他依旧谦逊低调。 2. His deeds inspire us to stick to our dreams and devote ourselves to what we believe in. 他的事迹激励我们坚守理想，投身自己所信仰的事业。 3. He fully deserves the worldwide recognition and is the pride of our nation. 他完全配得上全世界的赞誉，是我们民族的骄傲。 4. Only by learning from his persistent spirit can we overcome obstacles on our way to success. 唯有学习他坚持不懈的精神，我们才能攻克成功路上的难关。（倒装句） 5. From him, I learn that persistent efforts will eventually lead to great achievements. 从他身上我懂得，持之以恒的努力终会铸就伟大成就。 【写作模板】 The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 【原题呈现】 （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【基础必做】 一、翻译下列重要短语 1. be committed to ____________ 2. devote oneself to ____________ 3. make contributions to ____________ 4. overcome all difficulties ____________ 5. carry out scientific research ____________ 6. gain worldwide recognition ____________ 7. be regarded as a pioneer ____________ 8. have a lasting impact on ____________ 二、完成句子 1). 屠呦呦毕生致力于中医药研究，最终发现了青蒿素。（devote...to） Tu Youyou ________________________ and finally discovered artemisinin. 2). 尽管历经无数失败，他依然坚守自己的科研目标。（stick to） Despite countless failures, he still ________________________. 3). 这位科学家因在医学领域的重大贡献而获得了世界认可。（gain recognition） The scientist ________________________ for his great contributions in the medical field. 4). 袁隆平被认为是杂交水稻领域的先驱之一。（be regarded as） Yuan Longping ________________________ one of the pioneers in the field of hybrid rice. 5). 他克服了重重困难，成功完成了这项重要实验。（overcome difficulties） He ________________________ and successfully completed this important experiment. 6). 这位医生的研究对治疗这种疾病产生了深远影响。（have an impact on） The doctor’s research ________________________ the treatment of this disease. 7). 我很敬佩那些全身心投入科学事业的人们。（be committed to） I admire those who ________________________ the cause of science. 8). 她花了多年时间开展实验，才取得了这一重大突破。（carry out research） It took her years of ________________________ before she made this major breakthrough. 【提升必做】 1．（25-26高二上·河北邯郸·阶段检测）科学改变推动时代进步，假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语主题征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的科学家。 1. 人物简介； 2. 令人敬佩的原因。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（25-26高二上·江西·阶段检测）假定你是李华，你校科技节即将来临，校英语报新开设了专栏“The Scientific Mind”，现征集稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： （1）介绍一位你最敬佩的科学家及其一项主要成就； （2）谈谈他/她身上哪一种特质最让你钦佩，对你有何启发 注意： （1）写作词数应为100个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（25-26高二上·陕西西安·阶段检测）假定你是李华，学校“致敬科技榜样”主题活动正在开展，你班计划向全校同学发起“向钱学森先生学习”的倡议。请根据以下要点写一封倡议书： 1. 简述钱学森事迹(放弃国外优渥待遇归国、投身航天事业)； 2. 说明学习他的原因； 3. 提出具体学习举措。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，保证行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 A Proposal to Learn from Scientist Qian Xuesen Dear fellow students, To honor the spirit of scientific role models, our class is starting an initiative to learn from the renowned scientist Qian Xuesen. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4．（25-26高二上·贵州六盘水·期中）假定你是李华，你校英语报正组织英语作文比赛，请以“我最尊敬的一位科学家”为话题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2.你的感悟。 注意：1. 字数100词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26高二上·山东济南·期中）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Max 对高中英语教材上的中国科学家非常感兴趣，他想让你推荐一位你最钦佩的中国科学家，请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 你钦佩的科学家是谁; 2. 你钦佩他/她的理由。 Dear Max, I am glad to receive your email, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6．（25-26高二上·山西临汾·期中）假定你校英语校报将开设一个新专栏，致敬中国伟大的科学家，请你以“The Chinese Scientist I Admire”为题写一篇短文，赞颂一位科学家的事迹和精神。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Chinese Scientist I Admire ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（25-26高二上·重庆·期中）假定你是李华，你校正在组织以“People of Achievement”为主题的英文演讲比赛，要求以自己崇拜的人为主题，写一封演讲稿。 要求：1.人物是谁 2.人物的事迹 3.该人物对你的影响 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 People of Achievement ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（25-26高二上·云南昆明·期中）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“The Celebrity (名人) I admire most”为主题的分享活动，请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括： 1. 名人简介; 2. 爱戴原因; 3. 所得启示。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 The Celebrity I admire most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $