Unit 1 The Changing World（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材仁爱科普版九年级上册

本初中英语讲义聚焦Unit 1 The Changing World单元写作，紧扣新课标“人与社会—社会发展与生活变迁”主题群，以“如何理解变化”为核心问题。围绕居住条件等六大变化维度及《Changes in Leisure Activities》等高频考题，构建“事实罗列—今昔对比—辩证评价—情感抒发”的写作逻辑，搭配现在完成时等时态分层使用及事实与观点区分的能力考点，形成从主题理解到规范表达的完整学习支架。 该资料亮点在于系统的语言要素支撑与思维训练结合，通过分类话题词汇（含派生高分词）、分层句式（开头/中间/结尾句）及教材原句仿写夯实语言能力，借助辩证过渡句（如“现代生活便利但有人怀念旧日”）培养思维品质，融入民族自豪感等情感渗透文化意识。课中辅助教师搭建教学框架，课后学生可通过典例分析与实战演练（如福建乡村变化邮件、Changes Around Us演讲稿）巩固知识、查漏补缺。

Unit 1 The Changing World单元同步写作讲义 一、话题解读 本单元主题The Changing World（变迁的世界），单元核心大问题：How do you understand changes?，紧扣新课标 “人与社会 — 社会发展与生活变迁” 主题群。 写作核心素材：教材固定六大变化维度 — 居住条件、交通出行、通讯方式、休闲活动、城市环境、国家发展；单元写作高频考题为《Changes in Leisure Activities》《Great Changes in My Hometown》，80–120 词今昔对比短文。 核心语法支撑：现在完成时（have/has done） 为写作核心，搭配since/for/in recent years/over the years描述长期变化；结合used to、一般过去时写过去，一般现在时写当下，三类时态分层使用是得分关键。 写作核心逻辑与立意 客观罗列过去落后状态（事实）→对比当下生活改善（事实）→简单辩证评价变化利弊（观点）→抒发民族自豪感、珍惜当下、展望美好生活，符合单元育人导向。单元专属写作能力考点：区分事实（真实可验证的变化现象）与观点（个人感受、评价、期许），写作必须兼顾二者。 词汇积累 （一）话题词汇积累 1. 教材核心基础词汇 communication n. 通讯；leisure adj. 休闲的；apartment n. 公寓；narrow adj. 狭窄的；modern adj. 现代的；rapid adj. 快速的；condition n. 条件；transportation n. 交通 2. 派生高分词汇（单元语法 - ment 后缀） develop v. 发展→development n. 发展；improve v. 改善→improvement n. 改善；achieve v. 成就→achievement n. 成就；move v. 变动→movement n. 变化 3. 教材原版高频短语（写作直接套用） great changes have taken place 发生巨大变化 in recent years /over the years 近年来 living conditions 生活条件 get in touch 取得联系 hang out 闲逛 of all ages 各个年龄段 afford to do sth. 负担得起做某事 keep up with 跟上 with the development of society 随着社会发展 句式积累 开头句： 一、开头句（开篇点题，总述变化） Great changes have taken place around us in recent years.近几年来，我们身边发生了巨大的变化。 As society develops, people’s way of life has changed greatly.随着社会发展，人们的生活方式发生了巨大改变。 What great changes we can see in my hometown nowadays!如今我们在家乡能看到多么巨大的变化啊！ I’m amazed at how much people’s leisure activities have changed.人们的休闲活动变化之大让我十分惊叹。 中间句：（今昔对比 + 细节描写 + 辩证过渡，贴合教材素材） 基础对比句 In the past, people only wrote letters to keep in touch, but now they use smartphones. 过去人们只能写信联系彼此，如今大家都使用智能手机。 People used to watch open-air movies for fun, while now they have many kinds of entertainments. 过去人们只能看露天电影消遣，而现在有多种多样的娱乐方式。 Years ago, houses were small and streets were narrow, but now we have bright apartments and wide roads. 多年前房屋狭小、街道狭窄，现在我们拥有宽敞公寓和宽阔马路。 高分拓展句（教材原句改编） Many families can afford to travel to different places far away on weekends. 许多家庭现在负担得起周末去远方各地旅行。 With the development of technology, communication becomes quick and easy. 随着科技发展，通讯变得快捷又便利。 People’s living conditions have improved a lot since the 1980s. 自 20 世纪 80 年代以来，人们的生活条件改善了许多。 辩证过渡句（单元考点：事实 + 观点） Modern life is much more convenient. However, some people miss the simple old days. 现代生活便利很多，但有些人怀念简单的旧日时光。 Though online chatting is fast, face-to-face communication still matters a lot. 虽然线上聊天十分快捷，但面对面交流依旧很重要。 结尾句：（抒发情感、总结升华、展望未来） Thanks to the rapid development of our country, we live a much better life. 多亏国家的飞速发展，我们过上了好得多的生活。 I feel really proud of all the great changes in China. 我为中国发生的所有巨大变化感到无比自豪。 We should cherish today’s life and keep up with the changing world. 我们应当珍惜当下生活，跟上不断变化的世界。 I believe our hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. 我相信我们的家乡未来会变得越来越美。 All in all, the world has changed for the better, and we will have a brighter future. 总而言之，世界正向好发展，我们将会拥有更加光明的未来。 佳句仿写 1.教材原句（听说板块） People could only write letters or make phone calls in the past, but now they can get in touch so easily through modern communication. 句式亮点：经典今昔对比，细节描写通讯变迁 仿写：过去人们只能在家附近闲逛，而如今他们可以轻松地走遍全国。 ____________________________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句（主题阅读核心句） Great changes have taken place in China since the 1980s. 句式亮点：现在完成时万能开篇，适用于所有变迁作文 仿写：新政策出台后，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句（写作板块原句） Many people can afford to travel to many different places far away from their homes. 句式亮点：afford to do 高分搭配，体现生活水平提升 仿写：现在越来越多的家庭买得起汽车，周末还能自驾出游。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句（辩证观点句） Though life becomes convenient now, some people still miss the simple old days. 句式亮点：though 让步状语从句，兼顾利弊，体现思辨（单元难点） 仿写：尽管线上通讯十分便捷，但我们有时仍然需要面对面交流。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 5.教材原句（语法核心句） People’s living conditions have improved a lot with the development of society. 句式亮点：现在完成时 + with 伴随结构，阅卷高分句型 仿写：随着教育事业的发展，学生们的学习条件得到了极大改善。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 6.教材原句（单元主旨句） We should keep up with the changing world. 句式亮点：简短励志结尾，升华主题 仿写：我们学生应当不断学习，跟上飞速发展变化的世界。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 在过去的几年里，石门发生了很大的变化，请根据下面内容提示写一篇以“Changes in my hometown”为题的短文，谈谈你家乡——石门过去、现在的变化，并展望家乡的未来。 内容提示：1.房屋  2.环境(山川、河流、天空等)  3.交通  4.旅游 Changes in my hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：房屋变化、环境变化、交通变化、旅游变化、对未来的期许 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 谋篇布局 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明主题 主体段：围绕家乡的变化展开介绍 结尾段：展望未来，升华主题 [要点展开] 要点一：家乡的变化 房屋变化：old and small/tall buildings appear/lived in low old houses/high flats with big windows等 环境变化：mountains are greener/much rubbish/build clean parks/the water is clean等 交通变化：have buses and subways/narrow dirt roads/wide smooth roads等 旅游变化：Many tourists come to visit/many new homestays open for tourists/thousands of tourists come等 要点二：对未来的期许 期许说明：become more modern and beautiful/More people will know about my lovely hometown/develop faster/bring us a much better life等 佳作展示 例文 Changes in my hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, houses were old and small. Now, tall buildings appear everywhere. The environment was dirty, but now mountains are greener and rivers are clearer. Traffic was inconvenient, but now we have buses and subways. Many tourists come to visit because of the beautiful scenery. I believe my hometown will become more modern and beautiful in the future. I love my hometown. （一） 假设你是李华, 你的朋友Henry对福建很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示, 用英语给他写一封邮件, 描述近年来福建乡村的变化。词数80左右。 要点: 1. 必须包含所有提示信息, 可适当发挥, 邮件格式已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 意思清楚, 表达通顺, 行文连贯, 书写规范。 Dear Henry, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） 假如你校英语角 (English Corner) 近期将举办一场以“Changes Around Us”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下图示，写一篇演讲稿。 Past Now Learning ways Traveling ways Shopping ways Your opinion ... 要求： 1. 内容须包含图表所有信息； 2. 须有适当的开头和结尾； 3. 词数100左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 假如你是来自石家庄某中学的王涛，你的美国笔友Jack最近写信向你询问这几年你本人、你的生活和你的家乡的变化，请根据思维导图提示，给他回信介绍一下这些变化并描述你的感受。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 假如你是 Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2.人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1.喜欢读书，每周花 6 个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2.空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 ……(自由发挥) 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 3.词数在 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考作文 Dear Amy, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony （五） 国家发展给家乡带来了翻天覆地的改变，关注家乡发展，推进家乡建设是我们肩负的责任。假如你是滕飞，请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文向校英语社投稿，谈谈你家乡的变化以及你的看法。 提示：1.How has your hometown changed? 2.How do you like these changes? 3.What will you do to make your hometown better? 写作要求：1.参考以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何你的真实信息 (校名、姓名和地名等)； 4.词数80—120(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Some Changes in My Hometown    With the support of our government, great changes have taken place in my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 The Changing World单元同步写作讲义 一、话题解读 本单元主题The Changing World（变迁的世界），单元核心大问题：How do you understand changes?，紧扣新课标 “人与社会 — 社会发展与生活变迁” 主题群。 写作核心素材：教材固定六大变化维度 — 居住条件、交通出行、通讯方式、休闲活动、城市环境、国家发展；单元写作高频考题为《Changes in Leisure Activities》《Great Changes in My Hometown》，80–120 词今昔对比短文。 核心语法支撑：现在完成时（have/has done） 为写作核心，搭配since/for/in recent years/over the years描述长期变化；结合used to、一般过去时写过去，一般现在时写当下，三类时态分层使用是得分关键。 写作核心逻辑与立意 客观罗列过去落后状态（事实）→对比当下生活改善（事实）→简单辩证评价变化利弊（观点）→抒发民族自豪感、珍惜当下、展望美好生活，符合单元育人导向。单元专属写作能力考点：区分事实（真实可验证的变化现象）与观点（个人感受、评价、期许），写作必须兼顾二者。 词汇积累 （一）话题词汇积累 1. 教材核心基础词汇 communication n. 通讯；leisure adj. 休闲的；apartment n. 公寓；narrow adj. 狭窄的；modern adj. 现代的；rapid adj. 快速的；condition n. 条件；transportation n. 交通 2. 派生高分词汇（单元语法 - ment 后缀） develop v. 发展→development n. 发展；improve v. 改善→improvement n. 改善；achieve v. 成就→achievement n. 成就；move v. 变动→movement n. 变化 3. 教材原版高频短语（写作直接套用） great changes have taken place 发生巨大变化 in recent years /over the years 近年来 living conditions 生活条件 get in touch 取得联系 hang out 闲逛 of all ages 各个年龄段 afford to do sth. 负担得起做某事 keep up with 跟上 with the development of society 随着社会发展 句式积累 开头句： 一、开头句（开篇点题，总述变化） Great changes have taken place around us in recent years.近几年来，我们身边发生了巨大的变化。 As society develops, people’s way of life has changed greatly.随着社会发展，人们的生活方式发生了巨大改变。 What great changes we can see in my hometown nowadays!如今我们在家乡能看到多么巨大的变化啊！ I’m amazed at how much people’s leisure activities have changed.人们的休闲活动变化之大让我十分惊叹。 中间句：（今昔对比 + 细节描写 + 辩证过渡，贴合教材素材） 基础对比句 In the past, people only wrote letters to keep in touch, but now they use smartphones. 过去人们只能写信联系彼此，如今大家都使用智能手机。 People used to watch open-air movies for fun, while now they have many kinds of entertainments. 过去人们只能看露天电影消遣，而现在有多种多样的娱乐方式。 Years ago, houses were small and streets were narrow, but now we have bright apartments and wide roads. 多年前房屋狭小、街道狭窄，现在我们拥有宽敞公寓和宽阔马路。 高分拓展句（教材原句改编） Many families can afford to travel to different places far away on weekends. 许多家庭现在负担得起周末去远方各地旅行。 With the development of technology, communication becomes quick and easy. 随着科技发展，通讯变得快捷又便利。 People’s living conditions have improved a lot since the 1980s. 自 20 世纪 80 年代以来，人们的生活条件改善了许多。 辩证过渡句（单元考点：事实 + 观点） Modern life is much more convenient. However, some people miss the simple old days. 现代生活便利很多，但有些人怀念简单的旧日时光。 Though online chatting is fast, face-to-face communication still matters a lot. 虽然线上聊天十分快捷，但面对面交流依旧很重要。 结尾句：（抒发情感、总结升华、展望未来） Thanks to the rapid development of our country, we live a much better life. 多亏国家的飞速发展，我们过上了好得多的生活。 I feel really proud of all the great changes in China. 我为中国发生的所有巨大变化感到无比自豪。 We should cherish today’s life and keep up with the changing world. 我们应当珍惜当下生活，跟上不断变化的世界。 I believe our hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. 我相信我们的家乡未来会变得越来越美。 All in all, the world has changed for the better, and we will have a brighter future. 总而言之，世界正向好发展，我们将会拥有更加光明的未来。 佳句仿写 1.教材原句（听说板块） People could only write letters or make phone calls in the past, but now they can get in touch so easily through modern communication. 句式亮点：经典今昔对比，细节描写通讯变迁 仿写：过去人们只能在家附近闲逛，而如今他们可以轻松地走遍全国。 ____________________________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句（主题阅读核心句） Great changes have taken place in China since the 1980s. 句式亮点：现在完成时万能开篇，适用于所有变迁作文 仿写：新政策出台后，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句（写作板块原句） Many people can afford to travel to many different places far away from their homes. 句式亮点：afford to do 高分搭配，体现生活水平提升 仿写：现在越来越多的家庭买得起汽车，周末还能自驾出游。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句（辩证观点句） Though life becomes convenient now, some people still miss the simple old days. 句式亮点：though 让步状语从句，兼顾利弊，体现思辨（单元难点） 仿写：尽管线上通讯十分便捷，但我们有时仍然需要面对面交流。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 5.教材原句（语法核心句） People’s living conditions have improved a lot with the development of society. 句式亮点：现在完成时 + with 伴随结构，阅卷高分句型 仿写：随着教育事业的发展，学生们的学习条件得到了极大改善。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 6.教材原句（单元主旨句） We should keep up with the changing world. 句式亮点：简短励志结尾，升华主题 仿写：我们学生应当不断学习，跟上飞速发展变化的世界。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. People could only hang out near their homes in the past, but now they can travel across the country easily. 2.Great changes have taken place in my hometown since new policies came out. 3.Now more families can afford to buy cars and take road trips on weekends. 4.Though online communication is fast, we still need face-to-face talks sometimes. 5.Students’ learning conditions have improved a lot with the development of education. 6.We students should keep learning and keep up with the fast-changing world. 典例 在过去的几年里，石门发生了很大的变化，请根据下面内容提示写一篇以“Changes in my hometown”为题的短文，谈谈你家乡——石门过去、现在的变化，并展望家乡的未来。 内容提示：1.房屋  2.环境(山川、河流、天空等)  3.交通  4.旅游 Changes in my hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：房屋变化、环境变化、交通变化、旅游变化、对未来的期许 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 谋篇布局 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明主题 主体段：围绕家乡的变化展开介绍 结尾段：展望未来，升华主题 [要点展开] 要点一：家乡的变化 房屋变化：old and small/tall buildings appear/lived in low old houses/high flats with big windows等 环境变化：mountains are greener/much rubbish/build clean parks/the water is clean等 交通变化：have buses and subways/narrow dirt roads/wide smooth roads等 旅游变化：Many tourists come to visit/many new homestays open for tourists/thousands of tourists come等 要点二：对未来的期许 期许说明：become more modern and beautiful/More people will know about my lovely hometown/develop faster/bring us a much better life等 佳作展示 例文 Changes in my hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, houses were old and small. Now, tall buildings appear everywhere. The environment was dirty, but now mountains are greener and rivers are clearer. Traffic was inconvenient, but now we have buses and subways. Many tourists come to visit because of the beautiful scenery. I believe my hometown will become more modern and beautiful in the future. I love my hometown. （一） 假设你是李华, 你的朋友Henry对福建很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示, 用英语给他写一封邮件, 描述近年来福建乡村的变化。词数80左右。 要点: 1. 必须包含所有提示信息, 可适当发挥, 邮件格式已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 意思清楚, 表达通顺, 行文连贯, 书写规范。 Dear Henry, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Henry, I am glad that you are interested in Fujian’s villages. Let me introduce its great changes to you. The village used to be backward. It had no nice buildings, narrow dirty roads and people lived a poor life. Now it becomes modern. Villagers are much richer and they go to work by bus, taxi or private cars. The development improves people’s life but also brings pollution. I hope we can develop the village and protect the environment at the same time. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件应用文，时态混合一般过去时、一般现在时 明确要点：村庄过去的样貌、村庄发生的具体变化、对乡村变化的个人看法 确定人称：第一人称I 注意事项：邮件开头结尾格式固定不计入总词数，正文词数控制在80词左右，不可出现真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 采用四段式结构： 开头段：回应对方兴趣，引出介绍乡村变化的写作主题 第二段：介绍村庄过去落后的整体环境、道路与生活状况 第三段：描写村庄如今现代化发展、村民收入与日常出行方式 结尾段：辩证评价发展的利弊，提出兼顾发展与环保的个人观点 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：村庄过去的样貌 整体风貌：backward/undeveloped area等 道路条件：narrow and dirty roads/muddy narrow paths等 生活状况：live a poor life/lead a hard life等 要点二：村庄如今的变化 整体发展：become modern/get well-developed等 经济条件：much richer/richer than before/live a wealthier life等 出行方式：go to work by bus/taxi/private cars/take public transport等 要点三：对变化的看法 发展优势：improve people’s life/raise living standards等 现存弊端：cause environmental pollution/bring waste pollution等 个人想法：develop the village and protect the environment/balance development and eco-protection等 （二） 假如你校英语角 (English Corner) 近期将举办一场以“Changes Around Us”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下图示，写一篇演讲稿。 Past Now Learning ways Traveling ways Shopping ways Your opinion ... 要求： 1. 内容须包含图表所有信息； 2. 须有适当的开头和结尾； 3. 词数100左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Changes Around Us Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to talk about some changes around us. First, let’s talk about ways of learning. In the past, we used to go to libraries and look up information in books. But now, we can easily search for anything on the Internet. Next, traveling ways have also improved greatly. People used to travel by green train or coach. Now, we have high-speed trains and planes. When it comes to shopping, there’s a big difference too. In the past, we had to go to shops to buy things. But now, online shopping is very popular. These changes make our lives more convenient and efficient. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英语演讲稿，时态混合使用（一般过去时描述过去、一般现在时描述当下） 明确要点：学习方式、出行方式、购物方式今昔对比，以及个人观点，覆盖表格全部图文信息 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：词数控制在100词左右，包含标准演讲开头问候与结尾致谢，不出现真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 开头部分：问候听众，点明演讲主题——身边的诸多变化 中间部分：分三小点对比学习、出行、购物的过去与现在 结尾部分：抒发个人观点，总结变化带来的好处，礼貌收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：Learning ways Past: go to libraries, look up information in books, learn in the fixed classrooms, borrow paper books, take handwritten notes等 Now: search for all information easily on the Internet, watch online courses, download learning materials, communicate with teachers online等 要点二：Traveling ways Past: travel by green trains or coaches, wait for tickets in queues, carry heavy luggage, spend days on the road等 Now: take high-speed trains and planes, book tickets with mobile phones, enjoy fast journeys, travel across cities in hours等 要点三：Shopping ways Past: go to physical shops to buy goods, compare products in person, carry shopping bags, bargain with shop owners等 Now: do online shopping at home, receive home deliveries, pay with mobile wallets, check customer reviews等 要点四：Your opinion make our daily lives more convenient and efficient, save plenty of time, make our life much easier, cut down lots of trouble, let us live a better life等 （三） 假如你是来自石家庄某中学的王涛，你的美国笔友Jack最近写信向你询问这几年你本人、你的生活和你的家乡的变化，请根据思维导图提示，给他回信介绍一下这些变化并描述你的感受。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Dear Jack, I’m glad to tell you something about the changes in me, my life and my hometown. I used to be short, but now I’m tall. I was shy before, but now I’m more outgoing. As for study, English was difficult for me. But now I can speak English better. I used to chat with my friends face to face, but now we chat on the internet. I used to go shopping in small shops, but now I shop online.   Great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment is better and better. Transportation has become more convenient. There are more buses and subways. People are happier.   I feel proud of these changes. Yours, Wang Tao 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信，用一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：个人变化 (外貌、性格、学习)、生活变化 (交流方式、购物方式)、家乡变化 (环境、交通、人们状态) 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：表达写信目的，引出话题 主体段：分别介绍个人、生活和家乡的具体变化 结尾段：为个人和家乡的变化感到自豪 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：个人变化 外貌描述：used to be short, but now I’m tall/used to be thin, but now I’m strong/used to wear glasses, but now I don’t/used to have long hair, but now I have short hair等 性格描述：was shy before, but now I’m more outgoing/was quiet before, but now I’m active等 学习描述：English was difficult for me/Math was hard for me等 要点二：生活变化 交流方式：chat with my friends face to face/talk with my classmates in person等 购物方式：go shopping in small shops/buy things in supermarkets等 网络使用：chat on the internet/shop online等 要点三：家乡变化 环境描述：The environment is better and better/The air is fresher and cleaner等 交通描述：Transportation has become more convenient/There are more buses and subways等 人们状态：People are happier/Life is more comfortable等 （四） 假如你是 Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2.人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1.喜欢读书，每周花 6 个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2.空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 ……(自由发挥) 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 3.词数在 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考作文 Dear Amy, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony 【答案】例文 Dear Amy,       I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time.           In the past, our houses were small and old. The roads were dirty and narrow, and pollution was serious. We traveled by bike or bus and kept in touch mainly by letters. Now we’ve moved into new apartments. The environment is much better with more parks. The subway and Internet make our life more convenient.            In my free time, I spend about 6 hours a week reading books from the library. Reading helps me gain knowledge and open my eyes. I also love traveling to taste delicious food and experience different cultures. I plan to visit Shanghai Disneyland this May Day.            I’m proud of our new life and look forward to your visit. Yours Tony 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，全文以一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时、一般将来时为主 明确要点：①介绍家乡过去的样貌；②介绍家乡如今的变化；③介绍课余读书爱好及读书的好处；④介绍课余旅游爱好与五一出行计划；⑤自由抒发个人感受 确定人称：第一人称I (Tony) 注意事项：语法通顺、行文连贯；必须包含表格全部信息并适当拓展；词数90词左右，给定开头不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实校名、人名、地名 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：固定开篇句，自我介绍写信目的，告知将介绍家乡变化与课余生活 主体段第一层：分层对比家乡过去、现在的生活环境、交通、通信情况 主体段第二层：依次介绍两项课余生活，读书习惯与旅行爱好，补充细节与计划 结尾段：抒发个人内心感受，发出来访邀请，配套书信规范署名 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡变化 过去场景素材：small and old/dirty and narrow/in a terrible state等 过去状况描述：pollution were serious/travel by bike or bus/ride a bicycle等 过去通信方式：keep in touch by letters/send paper mails等 如今变化素材：new apartments/more parks/tall buildings等 便利设施说明：subway/Internet/airplane/chat online等 生活改善效果：make life more convenient/improve living environment等 要点二：课余读书生活 阅读时长素材：spend 6 hours a week/read every weekend等 借阅渠道选择：borrow books from library/borrow story books等 读书好处说明：gain knowledge/open my eyes/relax myself/broaden my mind等 要点三：课余旅游生活 旅行爱好素材：love traveling/travel around cities/visit scenic spots等 旅行体验：taste local delicious food/experience different cultures/get away from daily routines等 出行计划说明：visit Shanghai Disneyland/take a trip during holidays等 要点四：个人感受 内心评价素材：proud of new changes/happy with present life等 结尾表达内容：look forward to your visit/wait for your coming等 （五） 国家发展给家乡带来了翻天覆地的改变，关注家乡发展，推进家乡建设是我们肩负的责任。假如你是滕飞，请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文向校英语社投稿，谈谈你家乡的变化以及你的看法。 提示：1.How has your hometown changed? 2.How do you like these changes? 3.What will you do to make your hometown better? 写作要求：1.参考以上提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现任何你的真实信息 (校名、姓名和地名等)； 4.词数80—120(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Some Changes in My Hometown    With the support of our government, great changes have taken place in my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Some Changes in My Hometown With the support of our government, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the narrow roads were very dirty when it rained, and there was a serious shortage of fun places. However, the government has brought about wonderful changes. Now we have tall buildings with high-tech digital systems, and wide highways that link our town to the capital. What’s more, new attractions where people can relax with ease have been built. I believe that these changes have greatly benefited us. We are all happy with our new modern life. As a junior high student, I will lead a green lifestyle by planting trees. I also promise to be friendly and helpful to everyone. I’m sure that if we all work together, we can create an even better socialist hometown! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，综合运用一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时 明确要点：家乡变化的具体表现、对这些变化的看法、为家乡做贡献的打算 确定人称：第一人称（I/my, we/our） 注意事项：参考以上提示内容，可适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；文中不得出现任何个人真实信息（校名、姓名和地名等）；词数80—120（开头已给出，不计入总词数） [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，回顾家乡过去的面貌（开头已给出“With the support of our government, great changes have taken place in my hometown.”） 主体段：详细介绍家乡翻天覆地的变化（路变宽、高楼出现、景色变美、人民生活便利等），并说明自己的看法（对变化感到高兴、自豪） 结尾段：表达为家乡建设贡献力量的决心，呼吁大家一起努力 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡的变化 交通：the narrow roads have become wide highways, tall buildings with high-tech digital systems are built, roads are covered with trees and flowers等 休闲设施：new attractions where people can relax with ease have been built, more places for entertainment等 生活便利：the government has brought about wonderful changes, our life is much better than before等 要点二：对变化的看法 积极感受：I am very happy to see these changes, I am proud of my hometown, these changes are great for us, we all benefit from them等 珍惜当下：we should protect the new environment, we all enjoy the new life等 要点三：打算为家乡做贡献 实际行动：as a junior high student, I will lead a green lifestyle by planting trees, I will study harder for the future of my hometown, I promise to be friendly and helpful to everyone等 未来展望：I’m sure that if we all work together, we can create an even better socialist hometown, we can make our hometown more beautiful等 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $