Unit 1 The Changing World（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材仁爱科普版九年级上册

本初中英语讲义聚焦Unit 1 The Changing World单元写作，紧扣新课标“人与社会—社会发展与生活变迁”主题群，以“如何理解变化”为核心问题。围绕居住条件等六大变化维度及《Changes in Leisure Activities》等高频考题，构建“事实罗列—今昔对比—辩证评价—情感抒发”的写作逻辑，搭配现在完成时等时态分层使用及事实与观点区分的能力考点，形成从主题理解到规范表达的完整学习支架。 该资料亮点在于系统的语言要素支撑与思维训练结合，通过分类话题词汇（含派生高分词）、分层句式（开头/中间/结尾句）及教材原句仿写夯实语言能力，借助辩证过渡句（如“现代生活便利但有人怀念旧日”）培养思维品质，融入民族自豪感等情感渗透文化意识。课中辅助教师搭建教学框架，课后学生可通过典例分析与实战演练（如福建乡村变化邮件、Changes Around Us演讲稿）巩固知识、查漏补缺。

Unit 1 The Changing World单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，归属于课标主题群社会服务与人际沟通、历史、社会与文化，核心子主题包含：**家乡和社会的变迁、人口发展问题、志愿服务与社区公共服务。区别于单纯围绕交友、自我介绍的人际话题，本单元以 “时代与世界的变化” 为核心载体，将日常人际交流、社会观察、家国认知、全球视野融为一体。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 （一）核心名词（通讯 / 住房 / 交通 / 休闲 / 教育 / 医疗） 1. communication 通讯；交流 2. living conditions 居住条件 3. transportation 交通；交通工具 4. leisure activities 休闲活动 5. education 教育 6. medical treatment 医疗 7. apartment 公寓套房 8. block 街区；楼房群 9. technology 科技；技术 10. development 发展（develop v. 发展） 11. achievement 成就（achieve v. 取得） 12. improvement 改善；进步（improve v. 改善） 13. opinion 观点；看法 14. fact 客观事实 15. summary 总结；概括 16. period 时期；年代 17. hometown 家乡 18. countryside 乡村 19. city 城市 20. high-speed railway 高铁 （二）形容词 & 副词（今昔对比专用） 1. narrow adj. 狭窄的 ↔ wide 宽阔的 2. modern adj. 现代化的 3. rapid adj. 快速的 — rapidly adv. 快速地 4. comfortable adj. 舒适的 5. simple adj. 简单的；朴素的 6. convenient adj. 方便的 7. crowded adj. 拥挤的 8. quiet adj. 安静的 9. colorful adj. 丰富多彩的 10. easy adj. 便捷的 （三）核心动词 & 动词短语（教材原文高频） 1. take place 发生 2. develop rapidly 快速发展 3. make great progress 取得巨大进步 4. get used to 习惯于 5. keep in touch with 与…… 保持联系 6. afford to do 负担得起；有能力做 7. hang out 闲逛 8. search for 查找；探寻 9. distinguish…from… 区分…… 和…… 10. summarize 总结；概括 11. move to 搬到 12. come back from 从…… 返回 13. go through 经历 14. keep up with 跟上（时代变化） （四）时间对比类短语（写作必背） 1. in the past 在过去 2. nowadays /at present 如今；现在 3. over the years 这些年来 4. since the 1980s 自 20 世纪 80 年代以来 5. so far 到目前为止 6. in recent years 近几年 7. in one’s spare time 在某人空闲时 句式积累 开头句： 1. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.这些年来，我的家乡发生了巨大变化。 2. With the development of society, people’s daily life has changed a lot. 随着社会的发展，人们的日常生活改变了许多。 3. I’d like to talk about some changes in people’s life.我想聊一聊人们生活中的一些变化。 4. How do you understand the great changes around us?你如何看待我们身边巨大的变化？ 5. Life today is quite different from the life in the past.如今的生活和过去大不相同。 中间句:（今昔对比、事实描述、观点表达） 描述过去（一般过去时） 1. In the past, people lived in small and crowded houses.过去，人们住在狭小拥挤的房子里。 2. People could only write letters to keep in touch long ago.很久以前人们只能写信联系彼此。 3. Grandpa often watched open-air movies in his childhood.爷爷小时候经常看露天电影。 4. There were narrow streets and few cars in the old days.从前街道狭窄，小汽车很少。 描述现在（现在完成时，单元核心语法） 1. But now, everything has changed for the better.但是现在，一切都变得更好了。 2. We can communicate easily with smartphones nowadays.如今我们用手机就能轻松联络。 3. Medical treatment has greatly improved these years.这些年医疗条件得到了极大改善。 4. People can travel all over the world by high-speed trains.人们可以乘坐高铁环游各地。 过渡 & 观点句 1. Compared with the past, our life is much more convenient today.和过去相比，我们现在的生活方便多了。 2. However, some people still think the old days were more fun.然而，有些人依旧觉得过去的日子更有意思。 3. It is a fact that people’s living conditions have become better.人们居住条件变好是客观事实。 4. In my opinion, online shopping saves us lots of time.在我看来，网购为我们节省了很多时间。 结尾句:（总结全文、升华情感、展望未来） 1. In any case, we should keep up with the changing world.无论如何，我们应当跟上不断变化的世界。 2. I feel really proud of the great progress our country has made.我为国家取得的巨大进步感到无比自豪。 3. We should cherish the happy life we have today.我们应当珍惜当下幸福的生活。 4. I hope our hometown will change for the better in the future.我希望我的家乡未来会变得越来越好。 5. All in all, these changes bring us a more comfortable life.总而言之，这些变化带给我们更舒适的生活。 佳句仿写 一、单元写作核心主题：Changes in life / Changes in my hometown（生活 / 家乡的变化） 板块 1：教材原句 + 仿写（基础对比句） 1. 教材原句：Great changes have taken place in China since the 1980s. 仿写：这些年来我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：In the past, big families were crowded into small houses. 仿写：过去，我的爷爷奶奶住在狭小又简陋的屋子里。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：People rode bicycles or took buses to and from work long ago. 仿写：三十年前，人们只能骑自行车出行。 4. 教材原句：Now there are large blocks of modern apartments everywhere. 仿写：如今，我们镇上到处都是宽敞舒适的公寓。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 教材原句：People could only write letters to keep in touch in the old days. 仿写：以前，我的父母只能靠书信和远方的亲人联系。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 教材原句：We can chat easily with each other on smartphones nowadays. 仿写：现在我们可以用手机随时随地视频通话。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 教材原句：In the past, people had few colorful leisure activities. 仿写：过去大人们的休闲方式十分单一。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 教材原句：Now people can travel far away by high-speed trains and planes. 仿写：如今我们能坐高铁去全国各地旅游。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 板块 2：观点表达句（教材 Fact & Opinion 板块原句仿写） 1. 教材原句：I think shopping online is much easier and simpler. 仿写：我认为现在的生活比过去方便太多了。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Some people find the old days more fun and peaceful. 仿写：有些人觉得从前的生活更加简单温馨。 3. 教材原句：It is not healthy to skip breakfast every day. 仿写：长时间低头看手机对我们的健康不好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：Technology has greatly changed people’s daily life. 仿写：科技极大地改善了我们的医疗条件。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 板块 3：过渡衔接句（阅读原文原句仿写） 1. 教材原句：However, life in the city is busy and crowded. 仿写：然而，城市的生活节奏太快，十分喧闹。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Compared with the past, our living conditions are much better. 仿写：和从前相比，现在孩子们的教育资源更加丰富。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：With the improvement of medical treatment, people live longer. 仿写：随着交通的发展，回乡探亲变得十分便捷。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 板块 4：结尾升华句（教材主题阅读收尾原句仿写） 1. 教材原句：We should keep up with the changing world. 仿写：我们应该跟上时代发展的脚步。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：I feel proud of all the great progress our country has made. 仿写：我为家乡日新月异的变化感到骄傲。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：I hope life will keep changing for the better in the future. 仿写：我希望未来我们的生活会变得更加美好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 生活在不断发生变化，过去和现在的生活有着明显差异。请以“Life now and then”为题目，根据以下提示，写一篇短文，阐述你对“如今生活更美好”的看法。 提示： 1．对过去生活的回忆； 2．现在生活的变化（可从住房、教育、交通、娱乐等方面进行阐述）； 3．表达自己的观点； 注意事项： 1．短文词数：100词左右。 2．短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。 Life now and then ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 确定文体：夹叙夹议短文，主要用一般过去时描写过去生活、一般现在时描写当下生活 ② 明确要点：回忆过去生活、阐述如今生活的变化、表达如今生活更美好的个人观点 ③ 确定人称：第三人称介绍大众生活，第一人称（I）抒发个人看法 ④注意事项：词数100词左右，覆盖所有提示要点，行文流畅，不得出现真实人名、地名 谋篇布局 三段式结构： 开头段：以总起句点明今昔生活差异巨大，接着介绍过去的生活状况 主体段：对照过去，从住房、教育、娱乐、交通多个维度介绍现在生活变化 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 佳作展示 例文 Life now and then There are great changes between life now and then. In the past, people lived in tiny houses. Many children, especially girls, had no chance to go to school. Besides, people had few ways to relax themselves in their free time. Travelling also cost much time because of poor transport. But now, we live in big and comfortable houses. Every child can get a good education. And we can watch films or listen to music to relax ourselves. Transport and travel are much easier today too. We can take buses, trains, ships even planes everywhere. The only thing is that there is so much traffic. I think life is much better today. I like the life today. 佳作赏析 要点一：对过去生活的回忆 住房：tiny houses/narrow space/old small houses等； 教育：had no chance to go to school/no schooling chance/girls left school等 娱乐：few ways to relax themselves/talked outdoors/little fun activities等 交通：cost much time/poor transport/rode bikes/long travel time等 要点二：现在生活变化 住房：big comfortable houses/separate rooms/bright rooms等 教育：good education/free schooling/different after-school lessons等 娱乐：watch films/listen to music/surf the Internet等 交通：much easier/take buses/take trains/take ships/take planes/high-speed railway/cost little time等 要点三：个人观点 看法：life is much better today/I like the life today/more life choices/higher living standard等 （一） 儿童是国家的未来，少年强则国强。随着中国的发展和社会的进步，中国儿童的生活发生了很大的变化。请根据下面表格内容和要求，写一篇英语短文，来介绍中国儿童生活发生的变化。 In the past Now 1. had no good food 2. couldn’t dress warmly 3. had no chance to go to school 4. … 1. have a balanced diet 2. wear different kinds of clothes 3. receive a good education 4. … 要求： 1. 短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 时光飞逝，转眼间我们已踏入九年级的课堂。回望初中这两年的点点滴滴，你是否察觉到自己身上多了不少新变化？请根据下图提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 分享上初中后你的显著变化； 2. 至少增补一个变化； 3. 谈谈你对这些变化的看法。 注意： 1. 必须包含图中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Some Changes in My Life How time flies! Two years of middle school have passed, and I’ve changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 生活给予我们的一切！丰富忙碌的初中生活，悄然改变着你我。自“双减”政策实施以来，对比前两年，你进入初三的学习生活、兴趣爱好等方面都发生了很大变化。假如你是Wang Ping，请以“We have changed a lot”为题，请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文，描述这些变化并谈谈你的观点。 In the past At present Homework over 150 minutes about 90 minutes Sleep less than 7 hours at least 9 hours Exercise only in P. E. class at least an hour Weekends take math and physics classes read, play sports with friends Your opinion too much pressure… colorful and meaningful… 要求： 1．短文应包含提示中的全部写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 假如你是九年一班的李平，你校英语报正在评选“进步之星” (Star of Progress)， 请你根据以下表格中的信息，用英语给负责此次活动的老师写一封自荐信。 In the Past Now shy and lonely outgoing and helpful poor at English able to learn English in proper ways less interested in traditional Chinese culture like paper-cutting and calligraphy (书法)… 写作要求: (1)适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； (2）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰;； (3）词数90左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇: select: v. 评选  recommend oneself for…: 推荐自己参加…… take an active part in...: 积极参加…… Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. _________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to be selected. Thank you!                                          Yours, Li Ping （五） 在乡村振兴的政策扶持下，沿河的生态更宜居、乡风更文明、环境治理更有效。近期，沿河某电视台英文频道正在向全县中学生征集“微沿河”的英文介绍。请参考图文信息，以________ (Great/Amazing/Big…) Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍自己家乡的变化。 写作要求： 1. 请补全标题；2. 记录真实故事，表达个人情感；3. 词数为80左右；4. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ________ (Great/Amazing/Big…) Changes in My Hometown ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 请根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in My Hometown的短文。 内容要点： 过去 现在 1. 旧房 1. 高楼 2. 河水肮脏 2. 河水清澈 3. 步行、骑自行车上班 3. 乘公交车、小汽车上班 4. 道路狭窄 4. 环形路宽阔 5. 居住条件差 5. 居住环境舒适 注意： （1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名； （2）词数80个左右。 Changes in My Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 春去冬来，现在你已经进入到九年级，初中生活就快结束了。回想过去两年的学习和生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？也成长了许多？请你就此写一篇英语短文，谈一谈这两年多，你身上发生了哪些变化以及你对这些变化的看法。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80～100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 1 The Changing World单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，归属于课标主题群社会服务与人际沟通、历史、社会与文化，核心子主题包含：**家乡和社会的变迁、人口发展问题、志愿服务与社区公共服务。区别于单纯围绕交友、自我介绍的人际话题，本单元以 “时代与世界的变化” 为核心载体，将日常人际交流、社会观察、家国认知、全球视野融为一体。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 （一）核心名词（通讯 / 住房 / 交通 / 休闲 / 教育 / 医疗） 1. communication 通讯；交流 2. living conditions 居住条件 3. transportation 交通；交通工具 4. leisure activities 休闲活动 5. education 教育 6. medical treatment 医疗 7. apartment 公寓套房 8. block 街区；楼房群 9. technology 科技；技术 10. development 发展（develop v. 发展） 11. achievement 成就（achieve v. 取得） 12. improvement 改善；进步（improve v. 改善） 13. opinion 观点；看法 14. fact 客观事实 15. summary 总结；概括 16. period 时期；年代 17. hometown 家乡 18. countryside 乡村 19. city 城市 20. high-speed railway 高铁 （二）形容词 & 副词（今昔对比专用） 1. narrow adj. 狭窄的 ↔ wide 宽阔的 2. modern adj. 现代化的 3. rapid adj. 快速的 — rapidly adv. 快速地 4. comfortable adj. 舒适的 5. simple adj. 简单的；朴素的 6. convenient adj. 方便的 7. crowded adj. 拥挤的 8. quiet adj. 安静的 9. colorful adj. 丰富多彩的 10. easy adj. 便捷的 （三）核心动词 & 动词短语（教材原文高频） 1. take place 发生 2. develop rapidly 快速发展 3. make great progress 取得巨大进步 4. get used to 习惯于 5. keep in touch with 与…… 保持联系 6. afford to do 负担得起；有能力做 7. hang out 闲逛 8. search for 查找；探寻 9. distinguish…from… 区分…… 和…… 10. summarize 总结；概括 11. move to 搬到 12. come back from 从…… 返回 13. go through 经历 14. keep up with 跟上（时代变化） （四）时间对比类短语（写作必背） 1. in the past 在过去 2. nowadays /at present 如今；现在 3. over the years 这些年来 4. since the 1980s 自 20 世纪 80 年代以来 5. so far 到目前为止 6. in recent years 近几年 7. in one’s spare time 在某人空闲时 句式积累 开头句： 1. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.这些年来，我的家乡发生了巨大变化。 2. With the development of society, people’s daily life has changed a lot. 随着社会的发展，人们的日常生活改变了许多。 3. I’d like to talk about some changes in people’s life.我想聊一聊人们生活中的一些变化。 4. How do you understand the great changes around us?你如何看待我们身边巨大的变化？ 5. Life today is quite different from the life in the past.如今的生活和过去大不相同。 中间句:（今昔对比、事实描述、观点表达） 描述过去（一般过去时） 1. In the past, people lived in small and crowded houses.过去，人们住在狭小拥挤的房子里。 2. People could only write letters to keep in touch long ago.很久以前人们只能写信联系彼此。 3. Grandpa often watched open-air movies in his childhood.爷爷小时候经常看露天电影。 4. There were narrow streets and few cars in the old days.从前街道狭窄，小汽车很少。 描述现在（现在完成时，单元核心语法） 1. But now, everything has changed for the better.但是现在，一切都变得更好了。 2. We can communicate easily with smartphones nowadays.如今我们用手机就能轻松联络。 3. Medical treatment has greatly improved these years.这些年医疗条件得到了极大改善。 4. People can travel all over the world by high-speed trains.人们可以乘坐高铁环游各地。 过渡 & 观点句 1. Compared with the past, our life is much more convenient today.和过去相比，我们现在的生活方便多了。 2. However, some people still think the old days were more fun.然而，有些人依旧觉得过去的日子更有意思。 3. It is a fact that people’s living conditions have become better.人们居住条件变好是客观事实。 4. In my opinion, online shopping saves us lots of time.在我看来，网购为我们节省了很多时间。 结尾句:（总结全文、升华情感、展望未来） 1. In any case, we should keep up with the changing world.无论如何，我们应当跟上不断变化的世界。 2. I feel really proud of the great progress our country has made.我为国家取得的巨大进步感到无比自豪。 3. We should cherish the happy life we have today.我们应当珍惜当下幸福的生活。 4. I hope our hometown will change for the better in the future.我希望我的家乡未来会变得越来越好。 5. All in all, these changes bring us a more comfortable life.总而言之，这些变化带给我们更舒适的生活。 佳句仿写 一、单元写作核心主题：Changes in life / Changes in my hometown（生活 / 家乡的变化） 板块 1：教材原句 + 仿写（基础对比句） 1. 教材原句：Great changes have taken place in China since the 1980s. 仿写：这些年来我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：In the past, big families were crowded into small houses. 仿写：过去，我的爷爷奶奶住在狭小又简陋的屋子里。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：People rode bicycles or took buses to and from work long ago. 仿写：三十年前，人们只能骑自行车出行。 4. 教材原句：Now there are large blocks of modern apartments everywhere. 仿写：如今，我们镇上到处都是宽敞舒适的公寓。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 教材原句：People could only write letters to keep in touch in the old days. 仿写：以前，我的父母只能靠书信和远方的亲人联系。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 教材原句：We can chat easily with each other on smartphones nowadays. 仿写：现在我们可以用手机随时随地视频通话。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 教材原句：In the past, people had few colorful leisure activities. 仿写：过去大人们的休闲方式十分单一。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 教材原句：Now people can travel far away by high-speed trains and planes. 仿写：如今我们能坐高铁去全国各地旅游。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 板块 2：观点表达句（教材 Fact & Opinion 板块原句仿写） 1. 教材原句：I think shopping online is much easier and simpler. 仿写：我认为现在的生活比过去方便太多了。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Some people find the old days more fun and peaceful. 仿写：有些人觉得从前的生活更加简单温馨。 3. 教材原句：It is not healthy to skip breakfast every day. 仿写：长时间低头看手机对我们的健康不好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：Technology has greatly changed people’s daily life. 仿写：科技极大地改善了我们的医疗条件。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 板块 3：过渡衔接句（阅读原文原句仿写） 1. 教材原句：However, life in the city is busy and crowded. 仿写：然而，城市的生活节奏太快，十分喧闹。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Compared with the past, our living conditions are much better. 仿写：和从前相比，现在孩子们的教育资源更加丰富。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：With the improvement of medical treatment, people live longer. 仿写：随着交通的发展，回乡探亲变得十分便捷。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 板块 4：结尾升华句（教材主题阅读收尾原句仿写） 1. 教材原句：We should keep up with the changing world. 仿写：我们应该跟上时代发展的脚步。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：I feel proud of all the great progress our country has made. 仿写：我为家乡日新月异的变化感到骄傲。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：I hope life will keep changing for the better in the future. 仿写：我希望未来我们的生活会变得更加美好。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 板块 1：基础对比句 1. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years. 2. In the past, my grandparents lived in small and simple houses. 3. Thirty years ago, people could only go out by bike. 4. Nowadays, there are big and comfortable apartments everywhere in our town. 5. In the old days, my parents could only keep in touch with relatives far away by letters. 6. Now we can make video calls anytime and anywhere with mobile phones. 7. In the past, adults had very few kinds of leisure activities. 8. Now we can travel all over the country by high-speed trains. 板块 2：观点表达句（Fact & Opinion） 1. I think life today is much more convenient than it was in the past. 2. Some people think life in the old days was simpler and warmer. 3. Looking down at mobile phones for a long time is bad for our health. 4. Technology has greatly improved our medical treatment conditions. 板块 3：过渡衔接句 1. However, life in the city has a fast pace and it is very noisy. 2. Compared with the past, children have much richer educational resources now. 3. With the development of transportation, it becomes very convenient to go back home to visit relatives. 板块 4：结尾升华句 1. We should keep up with the development of the times. 2. I am proud of the rapid changes in my hometown. 3. I hope our life will become much better in the future. 典例 生活在不断发生变化，过去和现在的生活有着明显差异。请以“Life now and then”为题目，根据以下提示，写一篇短文，阐述你对“如今生活更美好”的看法。 提示： 1．对过去生活的回忆； 2．现在生活的变化（可从住房、教育、交通、娱乐等方面进行阐述）； 3．表达自己的观点； 注意事项： 1．短文词数：100词左右。 2．短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。 Life now and then ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 确定文体：夹叙夹议短文，主要用一般过去时描写过去生活、一般现在时描写当下生活 ② 明确要点：回忆过去生活、阐述如今生活的变化、表达如今生活更美好的个人观点 ③ 确定人称：第三人称介绍大众生活，第一人称（I）抒发个人看法 ④注意事项：词数100词左右，覆盖所有提示要点，行文流畅，不得出现真实人名、地名 谋篇布局 三段式结构： 开头段：以总起句点明今昔生活差异巨大，接着介绍过去的生活状况 主体段：对照过去，从住房、教育、娱乐、交通多个维度介绍现在生活变化 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 佳作展示 Life now and then There are great changes between life now and then. In the past, people lived in tiny houses. Many children, especially girls, had no chance to go to school. Besides, people had few ways to relax themselves in their free time. Travelling also cost much time because of poor transport. But now, we live in big and comfortable houses. Every child can get a good education. And we can watch films or listen to music to relax ourselves. Transport and travel are much easier today too. We can take buses, trains, ships even planes everywhere. The only thing is that there is so much traffic. I think life is much better today. I like the life today. 佳作赏析 要点一：对过去生活的回忆 住房：tiny houses/narrow space/old small houses等； 教育：had no chance to go to school/no schooling chance/girls left school等 娱乐：few ways to relax themselves/talked outdoors/little fun activities等 交通：cost much time/poor transport/rode bikes/long travel time等 要点二：现在生活变化 住房：big comfortable houses/separate rooms/bright rooms等 教育：good education/free schooling/different after-school lessons等 娱乐：watch films/listen to music/surf the Internet等 交通：much easier/take buses/take trains/take ships/take planes/high-speed railway/cost little time等 要点三：个人观点 看法：life is much better today/I like the life today/more life choices/higher living standard等 （一） 儿童是国家的未来，少年强则国强。随着中国的发展和社会的进步，中国儿童的生活发生了很大的变化。请根据下面表格内容和要求，写一篇英语短文，来介绍中国儿童生活发生的变化。 In the past Now 1. had no good food 2. couldn’t dress warmly 3. had no chance to go to school 4. … 1. have a balanced diet 2. wear different kinds of clothes 3. receive a good education 4. … 要求： 1. 短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. In the past, the lives of children were very difficult. They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly. Most of them had no chance to go to school because their parents had no money to pay for their education. But now everything has changed. Children can have a balanced diet. They can wear different kinds of clothes and receive a good education. What’s more, they have more chances to develop their hobbies. Thanks to these changes, they can now have a better life, which helps them create a better future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：围绕过去和现在的食物、衣服和学习机会这三个要点展开。 确定人称：第三人称 注意事项：词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得出现真实校名、人名。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开头开门见山，说明孩子们的生活发生了很多变化，为下文详细解释作出铺垫； 主体段：围绕过去和现在的食物、衣服和学习机会来对比过去和现在的变化； 结尾段：总结全文，感谢这些变化。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：食物 过去：They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly./They suffered from hunger and cold because they had almost no food or warm clothes./With almost no food to eat and no warm clothes, they lived a hard life.等 现在：Children can have a balanced diet./It’s possible for children to have a balanced diet./Children can maintain a well-balanced diet.等 要点二：衣服 过去：They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly./They hardly had any food to eat and had no warm clothes to wear./They had little food and lacked warm clothing.等 现在：They can wear different kinds of clothes./They are able to wear various kinds of clothes./Different kinds of clothes can be worn by them.等 要点三：学习机会 过去：Most of them had no chance to go to school because their parents had no money to pay for their education./The majority of them were unable to go to school, for their parents couldn’t afford their education fees./Most of them were denied the opportunity of schooling because their families couldn’t cover educational costs.等 现在：They can receive a good education. What’s more, they have more chances to develop their hobbies./Not only can they receive a sound education, but they also get more chances to cultivate their hobbies./It is possible for them to receive excellent education, and furthermore, they are provided with more chances to develop personal interests.等 （二） 时光飞逝，转眼间我们已踏入九年级的课堂。回望初中这两年的点点滴滴，你是否察觉到自己身上多了不少新变化？请根据下图提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 分享上初中后你的显著变化； 2. 至少增补一个变化； 3. 谈谈你对这些变化的看法。 注意： 1. 必须包含图中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Some Changes in My Life How time flies! Two years of middle school have passed, and I’ve changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Some Changes in My Life How time flies! Two years of middle school have passed, and I’ve changed a lot. I used to be shy and dared not speak in public. Now I’m outgoing and take an active part in activities to make friends. I had straight black hair, but now I have curly brown hair. I disliked exercising in the past, yet I often play soccer with friends these days. Besides, I’ve put more effort into my school subjects. I’m happy with these changes. Growing up means progress, and I’ll keep improving myself to be an excellent person. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时结合使用 明确要点：①过去与现在的性格、外貌、运动三类对比变化；②补充一处学习方面的新变化；③表达对自身成长变化的看法 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：词数控制80词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名，必须包含图表全部提示要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：给定开篇句，总起点明两年初中生活自身发生许多变化 主体段：依次对比性格、外貌、运动的今昔差异，再补充学习上的变化 结尾段：抒发对变化的感受，升华成长进步的主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：性格变化 过去状态：shy/dared not speak in public/quiet/afraid of communicating with others等 现在状态：outgoing/take an active part in activities to make friends/talk with classmates freely/make lots of friends等 要点二：外貌变化 过去外貌：straight black hair/long straight black hair等 现在外貌：curly brown hair/short curly brown hair等 要点三：运动习惯变化 过去习惯：disliked exercising/in the past/hated doing sports等 现在习惯：often play soccer with friends these days/do sports after class/play ball games with partners等 要点四：新增变化（学习） 变化内容：put more effort into my school subjects/work harder at lessons/pay more attention to study等 要点五：看法 、感悟以及打算 个人感受：happy with these changes/proud of these changes等 成长感悟：Growing up means progress/These changes show I’m growing up等 未来打算：keep improving myself to be an excellent person/keep making progress/become a better person等        （三） 生活给予我们的一切！丰富忙碌的初中生活，悄然改变着你我。自“双减”政策实施以来，对比前两年，你进入初三的学习生活、兴趣爱好等方面都发生了很大变化。假如你是Wang Ping，请以“We have changed a lot”为题，请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文，描述这些变化并谈谈你的观点。 In the past At present Homework over 150 minutes about 90 minutes Sleep less than 7 hours at least 9 hours Exercise only in P. E. class at least an hour Weekends take math and physics classes read, play sports with friends Your opinion too much pressure… colorful and meaningful… 要求： 1．短文应包含提示中的全部写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 We have changed a lot In the past, I had over 150 minutes of homework every day and slept less than 7 hours. I only exercised in P.E. class. On weekends, I took math and physics classes. I felt too much pressure. Now, things are different. I have about 90 minutes of homework and at least 9 hours of sleep. I exercise for at least an hour every day. On weekends, I enjoy reading and playing sports with friends. Life becomes more colorful and meaningful. I think these changes are good for us. We can study better and live healthier. I hope we can keep this balance in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文（描述“双减”前后的变化） 时态：一般过去时（描述过去的情况），一般现在时（描述现在的情况和观点）。 明确要点： ①过去与现在的作业时间对比； ②过去与现在的睡眠时间对比； ③过去与现在的运动时间对比； ④过去与现在的周末活动对比； ⑤你的观点（过去压力大，现在丰富多彩有意义）。 确定人称：以第一人称“I”叙述。 注意事项：不出现真实信息，条理清晰，行文连贯。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总述过去和现在的变化。 主体段：从作业、睡眠、运动、周末活动四个方面对比过去和现在的不同。 结尾段：表达观点——这些变化对我们有益，希望能保持平衡。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一（作业）： over 150 minutes of homework→about 90 minutes/had too much homework→now have less homework等 要点二（睡眠）： less than 7 hours of sleep→at least 9 hours/stayed up late→now go to bed early等 要点三（运动）： only in P.E. class→at least an hour every day/seldom exercised→now do sports regularly/played sports once a week→now exercise daily等 要点四（周末活动）： took math and physics classes→read, play sports with friends/had no free time→now have time to relax等 要点五（你的观点）： felt stressed→now feel happy/life was boring→now life is colorful等 （四） 假如你是九年一班的李平，你校英语报正在评选“进步之星” (Star of Progress)， 请你根据以下表格中的信息，用英语给负责此次活动的老师写一封自荐信。 In the Past Now shy and lonely outgoing and helpful poor at English able to learn English in proper ways less interested in traditional Chinese culture like paper-cutting and calligraphy (书法)… 写作要求: (1)适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； (2）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰;； (3）词数90左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇: select: v. 评选  recommend oneself for…: 推荐自己参加…… take an active part in...: 积极参加…… Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. _________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to be selected. Thank you!                                          Yours, Li Ping 【答案】 参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. I want to recommend myself for the Star of Progress. In the past, I was shy and lonely and seldom talked with classmates. But now I am outgoing and always ready to help others. I used to be poor at English and failed many tests. However, I find proper learning methods now and my grades improve a lot. Besides, I cared little about traditional Chinese culture before. Now I fall in love with paper-cutting and calligraphy, and I take an active part in related school activities. I truly have made great progress in all sides. I hope to be selected. Thank you! Yours, Li Ping 【详解】写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体和时态：应用文（自荐信），以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，需混合使用多种时态（描述过去用一般过去时和used to，描述现在用一般现在时，强调变化用现在完成时）。 明确要点：1.过去的状态（性格内向、英语差、对传统文化兴趣低）；2.现在的变化（性格外向乐于助人、掌握英语学习方法、爱上剪纸和书法）；3.总结进步并表达入选愿望。 确定人称：第一人称（I）。 注意事项：词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不得出现真实信息。 [第二步：构思布局] 一段式结构： 整个文章由一个主体段构成，按逻辑层次层层推进：先承接已给开头说明自荐目的→对比性格变化→对比英语学习变化→对比文化兴趣变化→总结进步并表达入选愿望。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去状态 shy and lonely/seldom talked with classmates/used to be poor at English/failed many tests/cared little about traditional Chinese culture/used to keep quiet in class/afraid of making mistakes等 要点二：现在变化 am outgoing and always ready to help others/find proper learning methods/grades improve a lot/fall in love with paper-cutting and calligraphy/take an active part in related school activities/actively join class discussions/help classmates with English/learn about Chinese culture through hands-on activities等 要点三：总结与愿望 have made great progress in all sides/hope to be selected/want to be a good example for others/encourage more students to improve themselves等 （五） 在乡村振兴的政策扶持下，沿河的生态更宜居、乡风更文明、环境治理更有效。近期，沿河某电视台英文频道正在向全县中学生征集“微沿河”的英文介绍。请参考图文信息，以________ (Great/Amazing/Big…) Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍自己家乡的变化。 写作要求： 1. 请补全标题；2. 记录真实故事，表达个人情感；3. 词数为80左右；4. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ________ (Great/Amazing/Big…) Changes in My Hometown ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Great Changes in My Hometown     My hometown, Yanhe, lies in the northeast of Guizhou. In recent years, great changes have taken place here.     First, our hometown has become more livable. The environment is much cleaner and greener than before. Second, people’s behavior is more civilized. We can see people helping each other everywhere. Third, the environmental management is more effective. The river is clear and the air is fresh.    I hope our country will become stronger and our hometown will be more beautiful in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：征文说明文，以一般现在时、现在完成时为主 明确要点：补全标题；先介绍家乡地理位置；从宜居、乡风文明、环境治理三方面写变化；结尾抒发感恩之情与对国家、家乡的期盼，词数80左右 确定人称：第一人称（my hometown/I） 注意事项：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：补全标题，点明家乡位置，总述近些年家乡发生巨大变化 主体段：分三层依次描写宜居环境、文明乡风、高效环境治理三方面改变，搭配细节体现真实生活 结尾段：抒发内心感恩，表达对家乡、祖国未来发展的美好期许 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：地理位置介绍 方位短语：in the northeast of Guizhou等 句型：My hometown lies in.../My hometown is located in...等 要点二：家乡三类变化 宜居相关词汇：cleaner/greener houses/comfortable living conditions等 乡风文明词汇：help each other/polite and warm-hearted citizens等 环境治理词汇：clear rivers/fresh air/no more rubbish/effective management/beautiful public gardens/orderly streets等 分层句型：First/Second/Third,... 要点三：结尾情感与期盼 情感短语：feel thankful for the good policies/take pride in hometown等 期盼句型：I hope our country will become stronger/I believe it will be more beautiful等 （六） 请根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in My Hometown的短文。 内容要点： 过去 现在 1. 旧房 1. 高楼 2. 河水肮脏 2. 河水清澈 3. 步行、骑自行车上班 3. 乘公交车、小汽车上班 4. 道路狭窄 4. 环形路宽阔 5. 居住条件差 5. 居住环境舒适 注意： （1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名； （2）词数80个左右。 Changes in My Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, there were old houses and the river was dirty. People went to work on foot or by bike. The roads were narrow and living conditions were poor. Now, tall buildings stand everywhere. The river is clear. People take buses or cars to work. The ring roads are wide. We live in a comfortable environment. I love my hometown because it is becoming better and better. I hope it will be more beautiful in the future. 【详解】【第一步：审题立意】   确定文体：材料作文Changes in My Hometown 明确要点：对照表格完成今昔对比，覆盖住房、河水、出行方式、道路、居住条件5项内容；词数80词左右，不得出现真实地名、人名、校名。 确定人称：第一人称。 【第二步：构思布局】   开头：总起，点明家乡发生了巨大变化。 主体：先描写过去老旧、环境较差的生活样貌，再描写如今高楼林立、生态宜居、出行便捷的新面貌。 结尾：抒发对家乡的喜爱与美好期许。 【第三步：要点展开】   要点一：过去的家乡 old houses/dirty river/go to work on foot or by bike/narrow roads/poor living conditions/in the past 要点二：如今的家乡 tall buildings/clear river/take buses or drive cars to work/wide ring roads/comfortable living environment/now/become better and better （七） 春去冬来，现在你已经进入到九年级，初中生活就快结束了。回想过去两年的学习和生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？也成长了许多？请你就此写一篇英语短文，谈一谈这两年多，你身上发生了哪些变化以及你对这些变化的看法。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80～100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version:     How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot.     I used to be a bit shy and didn’t like to communicate with others. Also my grades were just so-so. But now I take part in many clubs and interesting school activities. I’ve made lots of friends, and we study, exercise and chat together. My grades have improved greatly and I’m much more confident.     I really value these changes in myself, and I believe I will become better and better in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，核心用used to 一般过去时对比过去，一般现在时写当下，结尾可用一般将来时写愿望 明确要点：① 清晰写出升入初中这两年里，你身上发生的具体变化； ② 表达你对于这些自身变化的想法、感受与评价 确定人称：全文使用第一人称I/my 注意事项：不得出现真实人名、学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，感叹时光流逝，点明已经就读初中两年，总述自己成长、改变了很多 主体段：分前后对比两层书写 第一层：介绍刚上初中时自己的缺点、旧状态； 第二层：对应写出现在发生了哪些具体转变，搭配小事例支撑内容 结尾段：表达对这些改变的看法，总结收获，对之后的学习生活做出简单展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开头感叹 How time flies/Time goes so fast/It has been two years since I entered middle school等 要点二：过去性格 used to be shy/didn’t like to communicate/kept quiet in class/afraid of speaking in public等 要点三：过去学习 grades were just so-so/didn’t do well in some subjects/found it hard to keep up等 要点四：过去其他方面 had few friends/rarely joined activities/lacked confidence等 要点五：现在变化1——性格与社交 take part in clubs and activities/made lots of friends/study/exercise/chat together等 要点六：现在变化2——学习 grades have improved greatly/become much more confident/dare to ask questions等 要点七：现在变化3——其他拓展 learn to work with others/become more responsible/enjoy school life more等 要点八：对变化的看法 value these changes/proud of myself/believe I will become better/growth is a wonderful journey等 $