Unit 6 Beyond Earth. 太空梦（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“太空探索”为主题，构建“主题引入-语言积累-审题构思-范文解析-分层练习”的闭环写作训练体系，融合语言能力与文化意识培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作主题与结构|1个核心主题，2类写作视角|“梦想三要素”（是什么/为何/意义）与“成就三维度”（成就/挑战/未来）结构法|从个人到国家视角，形成主题认知逻辑链| |词汇句式积累|20个核心词汇，15个短语，25个功能句式|“场景化分类记忆法”（按太空活动/成就/情感分类）|从基础词汇到复杂句式，构建语言表达梯度| |审题构思|1道原题，3步审题法|“要点定位-时态匹配-结构搭建”审题流程|从文体分析到段落布局，形成写作思维路径| |范文与亮点|1篇范文，3类要点解析|“亮点句式替换法”（同义表达拓展）|通过范文解构，实现从输入到输出的转化| |分层练习|12道梯度题（基础5+提升7）|“仿写-应用-创新”三级训练法|从基础模仿到综合应用，提升学习能力|

Unit 6 Beyond Earth .太空梦 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题是“太空探素”，聚焦人类对宇宙的探索与畅想，围绕这一话题，本单元对应的写作话题为探讨个人太空梦想或中国航天事业。既可以从个人视角描绘对太空生活、星际旅行的憧憬，也可以从国家视角介绍中国在载人航天、探月等领域的突破与规划。描写个人梦想可围绕“梦想是什么、为何有此梦想、梦想实现的意义”展开；介绍我国航天成就可围绕“我国对太空的探索与成就，太空探索的困难和挑战，太空探索的影响、意义及未来”展开。写自己的太空梦想时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时；写我国对太空的探索与成就时，可用一般过去时和现在完成时，描述太空探索的困难和挑战、影响、意义及未来时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时。 【教材典句】 ①Since the beginning of human history,people have looked up at the stars and wondered what they were like. ②Humans have set foot on the moon,successfully landed rovers on Mars,and even photographed other galaxies. ③It might take hundreds of thousands of years to get there！ ④Scientists,however,believe that visiting the stars is not a completely wild dream. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① space n. 太空；宇宙 ② astronaut n. 航天员，宇航员 ③ rocket n. 火箭 ④ spacecraft n. 宇宙飞船 ⑤ launch v. & n. 发射 ⑥ exploration n. 探索 ⑦ universe n. 浩瀚宇宙 ⑧ station n. 空间站 ⑨ lunar adj. 月球的 ⑩ mission n. 航天任务 ⑪ carrier n. 运载器 ⑫ parachute n. 降落伞 ⑬ commercial adj. 商业的 ⑭ breakthrough n. 突破 ⑮ dream n. & v. 梦想；追梦 ⑯ courage n. 勇气 ⑰ develop v. 发展，研发 ⑱ unknown adj. 未知的 ⑲ talent n. 人才 ⑳ weightless adj. 失重的 短语积累 ① space exploration 太空探索 ② manned spaceship 载人飞船 ③ satellite launch center 卫星发射中心 ④ Long March rocket 长征系列火箭 ⑤ manned lunar landing 载人登月 ⑥ commercial space travel 商业太空旅行 ⑦ pass strict physical exams 通过严苛体检 ⑧ carry starry dreams 怀揣星辰梦想 ⑨ break through difficulties 克服重重难关 ⑩ build our own space station 自主建造空间站 ⑪ the Kármán Line 卡门线（太空边界） ⑫ return to Earth safely 安全返回地球 ⑬ make great breakthroughs 取得重大突破 ⑭ carry out space missions 执行航天任务 ⑮ push aerospace industry forward 推动航天产业发展 【句式积累】 开头句 ① I have dreamed of floating in space ever since I watched the rocket launch on TV. 自从在电视上观看火箭发射，我就一直梦想着能在太空失重漂浮。 ② China’s space program has achieved unbelievable progress in the past decades. 数十年间，中国航天事业取得了令人难以置信的发展。 ③ Have you ever imagined taking a trip to the moon and walking on its surface? 你是否想象过前往月球旅行，在月表漫步？ ④ I feel extremely proud of all the great achievements our space industry has made. 我为我国航天产业取得的所有辉煌成就倍感自豪。 ⑤ Today I will share my space dream as well as China’s space plans with you. 今天我将和大家分享我的太空梦想，以及中国的航天发展规划。 中间句 ① Shenzhou-23 carried three astronauts to space in 2026, including the first Hong Kong astronaut Li Jiaying. 2026 年神舟二十三号搭载三名航天员升空，其中包含首位香港航天员李嘉颖。 ② One astronaut will stay on the space station for a whole year to study space’s influence on human bodies. 一名航天员将驻留空间站一整年，研究太空环境对人体产生的影响。 ③ The Long March 2F rocket, nicknamed "Divine Arrow", keeps a perfect 100% success launch record. 昵称 “神箭” 的长征二号 F 火箭，保持着百分百圆满成功的发射纪录。 ④ China plans to finish manned lunar landing and deep moon exploration before the year 2030. 中国计划在 2030 年前完成载人登月，开展深度月球探测工作。 ⑤ Many famous people have booked seats on our country’s first commercial spaceflight. 众多知名人士已经预订了我国首次商业太空飞行的船票。 ⑥ To become an astronaut, people need long hard training and pass strict physical examinations. 想要成为航天员，需要长期艰苦训练，并且通过严格的体检。 ⑦ Every rocket launch carries all Chinese people’s wishes of exploring the endless stars. 每一次火箭升空，都承载着全体中国人探索无尽星辰的美好心愿。 ⑧ China’s space industry welcomes talents from every region of the country, showing great inclusiveness. 中国航天事业吸纳全国各地的优秀人才，拥有极强的包容性。 ⑨ After crossing the Kármán Line, the spacecraft will float in real space and come back with parachutes. 飞船飞越卡门线后进入真正的太空，之后依靠降落伞返回地球。 ⑩ My dream is to be an aerospace scientist and help our country unlock the secrets of the universe. 我的梦想是成为一名航天科学家，助力祖国解开宇宙深藏的奥秘。 结尾句 ① This wonderful space dream pushes me to study hard and face all difficulties bravely. 这份美好的太空梦想激励我刻苦学习，勇敢面对一切困难。 ② All space breakthroughs tell us that we can realize any dream as long as we keep trying. 所有航天突破都告诉我们：只要坚持不懈，任何梦想都能实现。 ③ I’m sure China will go deeper into space and finish more amazing space tasks in the future. 我坚信未来中国将迈向更深的太空，完成更多震撼的航天任务。 ④ As teenagers, we should hold starry dreams and prepare ourselves to join space exploration one day. 身为青少年，我们应当心怀星辰理想，做好准备未来投身太空探索事业。 ⑤ The universe is boundless and full of mysteries, and our journey to the stars has just started. 宇宙浩瀚无边、藏满奥秘，人类奔赴星辰的旅程才刚刚拉开序幕。 【原题呈现】 假设你是李华，你校英语公众号正在征集以“My Space Dream”为主题的文章，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文短文投稿，谈谈你的太空梦。 提示: 1. What will you do if you are in space? 2. How will you make your space dream come true? 参考词汇:astronaut, explore, space walk, experiment, look at, science knowledge, exercise, … 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） My Space Dream I have a dream.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：梦想类记叙文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：在太空中会做什么、如何实现太空梦想 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有提示内容 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，点明太空梦想 主体段一：描述如果在太空中会做的事情 主体段二：说明实现梦想的具体途径 结尾段：表达决心 【范文欣赏】 My Space Dream I have a dream. I want to be an astronaut and travel into space one day. If I am in space, I will take a space walk and look at the earth from far away. It must be amazing. I will also do science experiments to learn more about the universe. I believe space is full of secrets waiting for us. To make my dream come true, I will study hard, especially in science and math. I will also exercise every day to keep fit. I know the road is long, but I will never give up. 【亮点解析】 要点一：太空中的活动 太空行走：take a space walk/walk in space/float in space等 观赏地球：look at the earth from far away/see our blue planet等 科学实验：do science experiments/learn about the universe/study stars等 其他活动：grow plants in space/take photos of the moon等 要点二：实现梦想的途径 努力学习：study hard/work hard at school/focus on science and math等 锻炼身体：exercise every day/keep fit/be strong等 培养品质：never give up/stay curious/work hard等 长期规划：follow my dream/prepare myself/learn from astronauts等 要点三：决心表达 决心话语：I know the road is long, but I will never give up./I believe I can do it.等 梦想展望：one day my dream will come true/keep reaching for the stars等 【基础必做】 1.教材原句：It is hoped that a manned mission to the moon will follow around 2030. 仿写：人们希望这项研究能提供一些有用的信息。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It is hoped that the study will provide some useful information. 2.教材原句：Since the beginning of human history, people have looked up at the stars and wondered what they were like. 仿写：我们从两点钟开始就在这里等了。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】We’ve been waiting here since two o’clock. 3.教材原句：However, as technology and science developed, we learnt the truth about stars. 仿写：随着年龄的增长,她更加自信了。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As she grew older, she became more confident. 4.教材原句：It seems likely that one day we will reach the stars. 仿写： 看样子他可能要错过本队的下一场比赛了。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It seems likely that he will miss the team’s next game. 5.I learn more about it and I become more interested in it.（用“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The more I learn about it, the more I become interested in it. 【提升必做】 1．2024年10月30日，神舟十九号载人飞船的顺利发射，再一次激发了同学们的“太空梦”。假设你是 Li Ming，请根据下面的提示写一篇英语小短文，并在学校英语校刊上分享的梦想。 提示： 1. 长大后想当一名宇航员； 2. 小时候看《西游记》时，就想像孙悟空能在空中飞；上中学后了解到中国第一位宇航员杨利伟的故事，并决心成为一名宇航员； 3. 现在努力学习各个学科，养成良好的生活习惯，加强体育锻炼以保持健康。 生词示词：《西游记》— Journey To the West, 孙悟空— the Monkey King 要求： 1. 需包括提示的全部内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； 3. 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, I’m Li Ming. I’d like to share my dream in the future. ______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? What’s your dream in the future? 【答案】 Hello, I’m Li Ming. I’d like to share my dream in the future. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up. When I was young, I watched Journey To the West on TV, I hoped to fly in the sky like the Monkey King. When I was at middle school, I learned the story of Yang Liwei, the first Chinese astronaut in space. I decided to be an astronaut like him. To make my dream come true, I’m going to work hard at all my subjects at school. Also, I am going to have healthy eating habits and do more exercise to keep healthy. I’m sure my dream will come true. What about you? What’s your dream in the future? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明要分享未来梦想，引出成为宇航员的梦想。 第二步，具体阐述。依次说明梦想产生的原因，包括童年电视影响和中学航天事迹激励，以及为实现梦想的具体行动，如学习和健康管理方面的规划。 第三步，书写结语。询问读者梦想，引发共鸣。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②work hard努力学习 ③come true实现 ［高分句型］ ①When I was young, I watched Journey To the West on TV, I hoped to fly in the sky like the Monkey King. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I’m sure my dream will come true. (宾语从句) 2．2024年4月26日，神舟十八号3名航天员顺利进驻中国空间站。2024年10月30日，神舟十九号载人飞船已经发射成功。这说明我国的载人航天技术获得了突飞猛进的发展，为人类探索太空做出了巨大的贡献。请你以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 你拥有怎样的太空梦； 2. 你想登上哪个星球，你会在这个星球做什么； 3. 你的感想如何。 注意： 1. 不少于80词； 2. 书写工整； 3. 不得透漏真实姓名。 My Space Dream ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Space Dream Ever since I was a child, I’ve been fascinated by the stars and the endless universe. Even today, every time I watch the sky at night, I imagine what is happening among the twinkling stars. I hope to be an astronaut in the future so that I can walk in space. I want to walk on Mars and meet living creatures there. Besides, I want to feed animals there. I know it’s not easy to be an astronaut, so I study hard and try to learn more about space in order to be a good astronaut‌. I am eager to be a part of it. 【详解】[总体分析]       ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；       ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；       ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。       [写作步骤]       第一步，介绍自己的太空梦；       第二步，介绍登上火星后的打算；       第三步，书写感想。       [亮点词汇]    ①ever since自从 ②in the future将来 ③be eager to渴望 [高分句型]       ①I hope to be an astronaut in the future so that I can walk in space.(目的状语从句)    ②I know it’s not easy to be an astronaut, so I study hard and try to learn more about space in order to be a good astronaut‌.(宾语从句；并列句) 3．2023年5月30日神舟十六载人飞船成功发射，6月4日，神舟十五载人飞船成功着陆。中国正在加速实现“太空梦”。一个个目标实现就会铸成梦想实现。作为风华正茂的你，为了实现你的梦想，肯定达成了一个又一个目标。请用英语记叙其中一次实现目标的经历。 要求： （1）简介你的梦想。 （2）简述你实现目标的一次经历。 （3）谈谈你的感受。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Since I was still a little girl, I have been dreaming of being an English teacher in the future. I know I have to be very good at English. I still remember that when I was in middle school, I had difficulty in speaking English. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do it well. At that time, I made a decision to try my best. First, I spent much time on the pronunciation of each word we have learned. Then I asked my English teacher for advice after school. Besides, the most important thing I must do every day was that I kept on reading loudly by following the tapes again and again. Gradually, I could answer more and more questions in English. Thanks to my insistence, I became very confident in speaking English. In a word, doing small things and working hard are very important if you want to achieve the goal. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考试应注意“要求”中所给要点，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，简要介绍自己的梦想。 第二步，具体阐述你实现目标的一次经历。 第三步，书写结语，抒发情感。 [亮点词汇] ①make a decision做决定 ②try one’s best尽力 ③again and again一次又一次 [高分句型] ①I still remember that when I was in middle school, I had difficulty in speaking English.（that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句） ②No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do it well.（no matter+疑问词引导的让步状语从句） ③Besides, the most important thing I must do every day was that I kept on reading loudly by following the tapes again and again.（省略引导词that引导的限制性定语从句，that引导的表语从句） 4．假如你是李华，你的梦想是登上太空。请你以“My Trip To Space”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向校报投稿。 写作要点： 1. 你的太空梦想是什么； 2. 想象中太空的美丽景色； 3. 你在太空想做的事情； 4. 你的感悟与未来计划。 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右，误差不超过10词； 2. 包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Trip To Space My biggest dream is to travel into space one day._______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Trip To Space My biggest dream is to travel into space one day. I really want to explore the mysterious universe. If I fly into space, I will enjoy the amazing sights first. I can see our blue Earth and countless bright stars around it. It must be wonderful. I plan to take photos and do some simple space experiments there. I also hope to experience the fun of weightlessness floating freely in the spaceship. Space exploration is great. To make my dream come true, I will study all subjects hard and do sports every day. I believe my dream will come true in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般将来时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：自身太空梦想；太空美丽景致；太空打算做的事；内心感悟与圆梦计划 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：不透露真实个人、学校信息，词数100左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明自己最大的梦想是遨游太空 主体段：分层描写太空绝美景色，再写自己在太空想要完成的事情 结尾段：抒发对太空探索的感悟，写明为圆梦付出的努力与未来规划 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：太空梦想 梦想表达：My biggest dream is to travel into space one day./I really want to explore the mysterious universe./I hope to fly to space and explore the universe.等 要点二：想象中的太空景色 景色描写：enjoy the amazing sights/blue Earth/countless bright stars/silent mysterious universe/shining planets等 要点三：在太空想做的事 行为：take photos/do some simple space experiments/experience the fun of weightlessness floating freely in the spaceship/look closely at the Earth/record my journey等 要点四：感悟与未来计划 感悟：Space exploration is great./Space exploration is meaningful and amazing.等 计划：study all subjects hard/do sports every day/keep doing daily exercise/learn space-related knowledge等 5．假设你是中国宇航员李华，正在中国空间站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在空间站中一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。词数80左右。 注意事项: 1.须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear young friends,　 I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China.I am so glad to meet all of you here today._____________________　 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】 Dear young friends, I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. Now I’d like to share a day in space with you. In the morning, I usually do some exercise to keep healthy. Then I start my work. I do different kinds of experiments and sometimes go for spacewalks. In my free time, I like reading books and talking with my family on the computer. At night, I have to sleep in a sleeping bag because of zero gravity. Living in space is really amazing and I feel proud of my country. I hope you can study hard and explore space in the future. Thank you! 【详解】第一步：审题立意 确定文体：发言稿应用文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：以中国宇航员李华的身份向年轻朋友分享太空生活的一天，包括日常安排，表达太空生活的奇妙感与对国家的自豪感，最后鼓励年轻人努力学习、未来探索太空 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：内容贴合宇航员的真实太空生活，语言亲切有感染力，符合演讲的号召性 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构 开头段：使用题目给定开篇语句 主体段：按照时间顺序介绍太空一天：晨间锻炼→日常工作→闲暇活动→夜间休息 结尾段：抒发内心感受，寄语青少年努力学习探索太空 第三步：要点展开 要点一：晨间太空锻炼   do some exercise to keep healthy/work out to stay fit in space等 要点二：工作内容 do different kinds of experiments/go for spacewalks/carry out various space experiments/take space walks outside the capsule等 要点三：休闲时光 like reading books/talking with my family on the computer/enjoy reading/spend time chatting with my family online等 要点四：夜间睡觉特殊方式   sleep in a sleeping bag/because of zero gravity/rest inside a special sleeping bag/due to weightlessness等 要点五：内心感受与期望 Living in space is really amazing/feel proud of my country/study hard and explore space in the future/Life in space is fantastic/take pride in our motherland/work hard at your lessons and discover space one day等 6．2023年5月30日，神舟十六号载人飞船的成功发射，是我国航天事业的又一重大里程碑。它不仅标志着我国航天业的飞速发展，更让我们对未来的探索和发展充满了期待和信心。假如你校将举办一场主题为“My Space Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请根据下列提示写一篇演讲稿，简单阐述近年来我国航天事业的发展情况并谈谈你为实现航天梦将做何准备。 提示： （1）What do you think of our space industry? （2）What do you think of flying to the moon? （3）What are you going to do? Why? 注意： （1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：take exercise，get knowledge Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. ________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 【答案】 Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. As we know, in recent years, China has made great progress in its space industry. We Chinese are all proud of it! Since I was a child, I have been dream of becoming an astronaut, because flying into the moon is so cool. I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will try my best to achieve it. So I am going to study hard and get more knowledge about space. What’s more, I plan to take more exercise to get a strong body. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day. Thanks for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据所给问题提示，介绍自己的航天梦以及为实现航天梦将做何准备，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍近年来中国的航天事业的情况； 第二步，介绍自己的航天梦，以及为实现它该如何做； 第三步，表达自己的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①make great progress in...在某方面取得巨大的进步 ②be proud of以……为傲 ③try my best to do sth竭尽全力做某事 ④keep on doing继续做某事 [高分句型] ①Since I was a child, I have been dream of becoming an astronaut, because flying into the moon is so cool. (since引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句) ②Where there is a will, there is a way.(名言警句) ③I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day.(that引导的宾语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句) 7．我校校刊本周的主题是“我的梦——航天梦”。为此，校刊需要招募几名同学来做志愿者。招募的志愿者是我校对航天感兴趣的中学生们。假设你是李华，一直对太空和航天感兴趣，因此你想应聘为志愿者。请你用英文写一封自荐信，信的内容应该包括：曾经在学校参加过的航天系列的活动及成果；为实现航天梦所做过的努力以及申请作为志愿者的目的。 提示词语： volunteer, be interested in, solar system(太阳系), make a model spaceship, astronaut, read books, training, look forward to 提示问题:1.Which activity about space did you join? 2.What did you do to achieve your dream? 3.Why do you want to be a volunteer? Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I’m a middle school student and I’m fifteen. ___________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I’m a middle school student and I’m fifteen. I started to be interested in the solar system when I was eight. I have already entered lots of our school science competitions such as making a model spaceship. And so far, I have won two first prizes. I want to be an astronaut when I grow up. To achieve the dream, I have read a lot of books about space and had lots of training. Now I really hope to be a volunteer because I want to learn more about space. And I will meet new friends who have the same interests, so we can share our knowledge. I’m looking forward to getting your answer. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：阐述曾经在学校参加过的航天系列的活动及成果； 第二步：展开阐述为实现航天梦所做过的努力； 第三步：阐述申请作为志愿者的目的。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②lots of许多 ③so far到目前为止 [高分句型] ① I started to be interested in the solar system when I was eight.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②And I will meet new friends who have the same interests, so we can share our knowledge. （who引导的定语从句） $Unit 6 Beyond Earth .太空梦 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题是“太空探素”，聚焦人类对宇宙的探索与畅想，围绕这一话题，本单元对应的写作话题为探讨个人太空梦想或中国航天事业。既可以从个人视角描绘对太空生活、星际旅行的憧憬，也可以从国家视角介绍中国在载人航天、探月等领域的突破与规划。描写个人梦想可围绕“梦想是什么、为何有此梦想、梦想实现的意义”展开；介绍我国航天成就可围绕“我国对太空的探索与成就，太空探索的困难和挑战，太空探索的影响、意义及未来”展开。写自己的太空梦想时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时；写我国对太空的探索与成就时，可用一般过去时和现在完成时，描述太空探索的困难和挑战、影响、意义及未来时，可用一般现在时和一般将来时。 【教材典句】 ①Since the beginning of human history,people have looked up at the stars and wondered what they were like. ②Humans have set foot on the moon,successfully landed rovers on Mars,and even photographed other galaxies. ③It might take hundreds of thousands of years to get there！ ④Scientists,however,believe that visiting the stars is not a completely wild dream. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① space n. 太空；宇宙 ② astronaut n. 航天员，宇航员 ③ rocket n. 火箭 ④ spacecraft n. 宇宙飞船 ⑤ launch v. & n. 发射 ⑥ exploration n. 探索 ⑦ universe n. 浩瀚宇宙 ⑧ station n. 空间站 ⑨ lunar adj. 月球的 ⑩ mission n. 航天任务 ⑪ carrier n. 运载器 ⑫ parachute n. 降落伞 ⑬ commercial adj. 商业的 ⑭ breakthrough n. 突破 ⑮ dream n. & v. 梦想；追梦 ⑯ courage n. 勇气 ⑰ develop v. 发展，研发 ⑱ unknown adj. 未知的 ⑲ talent n. 人才 ⑳ weightless adj. 失重的 短语积累 ① space exploration 太空探索 ② manned spaceship 载人飞船 ③ satellite launch center 卫星发射中心 ④ Long March rocket 长征系列火箭 ⑤ manned lunar landing 载人登月 ⑥ commercial space travel 商业太空旅行 ⑦ pass strict physical exams 通过严苛体检 ⑧ carry starry dreams 怀揣星辰梦想 ⑨ break through difficulties 克服重重难关 ⑩ build our own space station 自主建造空间站 ⑪ the Kármán Line 卡门线（太空边界） ⑫ return to Earth safely 安全返回地球 ⑬ make great breakthroughs 取得重大突破 ⑭ carry out space missions 执行航天任务 ⑮ push aerospace industry forward 推动航天产业发展 【句式积累】 开头句 ① I have dreamed of floating in space ever since I watched the rocket launch on TV. 自从在电视上观看火箭发射，我就一直梦想着能在太空失重漂浮。 ② China’s space program has achieved unbelievable progress in the past decades. 数十年间，中国航天事业取得了令人难以置信的发展。 ③ Have you ever imagined taking a trip to the moon and walking on its surface? 你是否想象过前往月球旅行，在月表漫步？ ④ I feel extremely proud of all the great achievements our space industry has made. 我为我国航天产业取得的所有辉煌成就倍感自豪。 ⑤ Today I will share my space dream as well as China’s space plans with you. 今天我将和大家分享我的太空梦想，以及中国的航天发展规划。 中间句 ① Shenzhou-23 carried three astronauts to space in 2026, including the first Hong Kong astronaut Li Jiaying. 2026 年神舟二十三号搭载三名航天员升空，其中包含首位香港航天员李嘉颖。 ② One astronaut will stay on the space station for a whole year to study space’s influence on human bodies. 一名航天员将驻留空间站一整年，研究太空环境对人体产生的影响。 ③ The Long March 2F rocket, nicknamed "Divine Arrow", keeps a perfect 100% success launch record. 昵称 “神箭” 的长征二号 F 火箭，保持着百分百圆满成功的发射纪录。 ④ China plans to finish manned lunar landing and deep moon exploration before the year 2030. 中国计划在 2030 年前完成载人登月，开展深度月球探测工作。 ⑤ Many famous people have booked seats on our country’s first commercial spaceflight. 众多知名人士已经预订了我国首次商业太空飞行的船票。 ⑥ To become an astronaut, people need long hard training and pass strict physical examinations. 想要成为航天员，需要长期艰苦训练，并且通过严格的体检。 ⑦ Every rocket launch carries all Chinese people’s wishes of exploring the endless stars. 每一次火箭升空，都承载着全体中国人探索无尽星辰的美好心愿。 ⑧ China’s space industry welcomes talents from every region of the country, showing great inclusiveness. 中国航天事业吸纳全国各地的优秀人才，拥有极强的包容性。 ⑨ After crossing the Kármán Line, the spacecraft will float in real space and come back with parachutes. 飞船飞越卡门线后进入真正的太空，之后依靠降落伞返回地球。 ⑩ My dream is to be an aerospace scientist and help our country unlock the secrets of the universe. 我的梦想是成为一名航天科学家，助力祖国解开宇宙深藏的奥秘。 结尾句 ① This wonderful space dream pushes me to study hard and face all difficulties bravely. 这份美好的太空梦想激励我刻苦学习，勇敢面对一切困难。 ② All space breakthroughs tell us that we can realize any dream as long as we keep trying. 所有航天突破都告诉我们：只要坚持不懈，任何梦想都能实现。 ③ I’m sure China will go deeper into space and finish more amazing space tasks in the future. 我坚信未来中国将迈向更深的太空，完成更多震撼的航天任务。 ④ As teenagers, we should hold starry dreams and prepare ourselves to join space exploration one day. 身为青少年，我们应当心怀星辰理想，做好准备未来投身太空探索事业。 ⑤ The universe is boundless and full of mysteries, and our journey to the stars has just started. 宇宙浩瀚无边、藏满奥秘，人类奔赴星辰的旅程才刚刚拉开序幕。 【原题呈现】 假设你是李华，你校英语公众号正在征集以“My Space Dream”为主题的文章，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文短文投稿，谈谈你的太空梦。 提示: 1. What will you do if you are in space? 2. How will you make your space dream come true? 参考词汇:astronaut, explore, space walk, experiment, look at, science knowledge, exercise, … 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） My Space Dream I have a dream.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：梦想类记叙文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：在太空中会做什么、如何实现太空梦想 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖所有提示内容 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，点明太空梦想 主体段一：描述如果在太空中会做的事情 主体段二：说明实现梦想的具体途径 结尾段：表达决心 【范文欣赏】 My Space Dream I have a dream. I want to be an astronaut and travel into space one day. If I am in space, I will take a space walk and look at the earth from far away. It must be amazing. I will also do science experiments to learn more about the universe. I believe space is full of secrets waiting for us. To make my dream come true, I will study hard, especially in science and math. I will also exercise every day to keep fit. I know the road is long, but I will never give up. 【亮点解析】 要点一：太空中的活动 太空行走：take a space walk/walk in space/float in space等 观赏地球：look at the earth from far away/see our blue planet等 科学实验：do science experiments/learn about the universe/study stars等 其他活动：grow plants in space/take photos of the moon等 要点二：实现梦想的途径 努力学习：study hard/work hard at school/focus on science and math等 锻炼身体：exercise every day/keep fit/be strong等 培养品质：never give up/stay curious/work hard等 长期规划：follow my dream/prepare myself/learn from astronauts等 要点三：决心表达 决心话语：I know the road is long, but I will never give up./I believe I can do it.等 梦想展望：one day my dream will come true/keep reaching for the stars等 【基础必做】 1.教材原句：It is hoped that a manned mission to the moon will follow around 2030. 仿写：人们希望这项研究能提供一些有用的信息。 ________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：Since the beginning of human history, people have looked up at the stars and wondered what they were like. 仿写：我们从两点钟开始就在这里等了。 ________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：However, as technology and science developed, we learnt the truth about stars. 仿写：随着年龄的增长,她更加自信了。 ________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句：It seems likely that one day we will reach the stars. 仿写： 看样子他可能要错过本队的下一场比赛了。 ________________________________________________________________ 5.I learn more about it and I become more interested in it.（用“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 1．2024年10月30日，神舟十九号载人飞船的顺利发射，再一次激发了同学们的“太空梦”。假设你是 Li Ming，请根据下面的提示写一篇英语小短文，并在学校英语校刊上分享的梦想。 提示： 1. 长大后想当一名宇航员； 2. 小时候看《西游记》时，就想像孙悟空能在空中飞；上中学后了解到中国第一位宇航员杨利伟的故事，并决心成为一名宇航员； 3. 现在努力学习各个学科，养成良好的生活习惯，加强体育锻炼以保持健康。 生词示词：《西游记》— Journey To the West, 孙悟空— the Monkey King 要求： 1. 需包括提示的全部内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； 3. 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, I’m Li Ming. I’d like to share my dream in the future. ______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? What’s your dream in the future? 2．2024年4月26日，神舟十八号3名航天员顺利进驻中国空间站。2024年10月30日，神舟十九号载人飞船已经发射成功。这说明我国的载人航天技术获得了突飞猛进的发展，为人类探索太空做出了巨大的贡献。请你以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 你拥有怎样的太空梦； 2. 你想登上哪个星球，你会在这个星球做什么； 3. 你的感想如何。 注意： 1. 不少于80词； 2. 书写工整； 3. 不得透漏真实姓名。 My Space Dream ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．2023年5月30日神舟十六载人飞船成功发射，6月4日，神舟十五载人飞船成功着陆。中国正在加速实现“太空梦”。一个个目标实现就会铸成梦想实现。作为风华正茂的你，为了实现你的梦想，肯定达成了一个又一个目标。请用英语记叙其中一次实现目标的经历。 要求： （1）简介你的梦想。 （2）简述你实现目标的一次经历。 （3）谈谈你的感受。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，你的梦想是登上太空。请你以“My Trip To Space”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向校报投稿。 写作要点： 1. 你的太空梦想是什么； 2. 想象中太空的美丽景色； 3. 你在太空想做的事情； 4. 你的感悟与未来计划。 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右，误差不超过10词； 2. 包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Trip To Space My biggest dream is to travel into space one day._______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是中国宇航员李华，正在中国空间站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在空间站中一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。词数80左右。 注意事项: 1.须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear young friends,　 I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China.I am so glad to meet all of you here today._____________________　 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 6．2023年5月30日，神舟十六号载人飞船的成功发射，是我国航天事业的又一重大里程碑。它不仅标志着我国航天业的飞速发展，更让我们对未来的探索和发展充满了期待和信心。假如你校将举办一场主题为“My Space Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请根据下列提示写一篇演讲稿，简单阐述近年来我国航天事业的发展情况并谈谈你为实现航天梦将做何准备。 提示： （1）What do you think of our space industry? （2）What do you think of flying to the moon? （3）What are you going to do? Why? 注意： （1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：take exercise，get knowledge Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. ________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 7．我校校刊本周的主题是“我的梦——航天梦”。为此，校刊需要招募几名同学来做志愿者。招募的志愿者是我校对航天感兴趣的中学生们。假设你是李华，一直对太空和航天感兴趣，因此你想应聘为志愿者。请你用英文写一封自荐信，信的内容应该包括：曾经在学校参加过的航天系列的活动及成果；为实现航天梦所做过的努力以及申请作为志愿者的目的。 提示词语： volunteer, be interested in, solar system(太阳系), make a model spaceship, astronaut, read books, training, look forward to 提示问题:1.Which activity about space did you join? 2.What did you do to achieve your dream? 3.Why do you want to be a volunteer? Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I’m a middle school student and I’m fifteen. ___________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua $