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No parent ever pictures having to count on their child for lifesaving help, but sometimes these things are beyond what we can control. A mom and dad in Oklahoma must be especially proud of their little boy after he rose to the occasion with rare and praiseworthy courage when their lives were in danger.
The story began when tornadoes hit the area of Marietta, Oklahoma, at the end of April. Wayne Baker, a husband and father who lives in the area, noticed an odd stillness in the air. He didn’t hesitate, gathering his wife, Lindy, and their son, nine-year-old Branson, jumping in their truck and heading for a neighbor’s storm shelter.
But on the way there, the tornado caught up with them with howling winds and spinning clouds. In a second, a massive tree was lifted from the earth and hurled (猛扔) towards their truck, destroying the vehicle like a fragile toy. Wayne and Lindy were badly injured and trapped. Wayne’s back, neck and arm were broken, and he also lost part of a finger. Lindy’s back, neck, jaw, ribs (肋骨) and right hand were broken. She had gone through the windshield and remained halfway in the vehicle and halfway out. It was pretty horrible.
Fortunately, young Branson was not injured in the backseat. Most of us, at any age, wouldn’t want to take a single step in such horrible conditions. Yet somehow, this nine-year-old boy found the strength to go for help.
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Despite the chaos and danger, Branson managed to climb out of the broken car.
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When Branson explained the situation, they immediately sprang into action.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
Tornadoes hit Marietta, Oklahoma--- _________________ --- The family drove to a storm shelter--- _________________ --- Parents were severely injured and trapped in the broken truck--- _________________ --- Unhurt Branson decided to seek help in dangerous conditions
4. 细节问答
What disaster struck the area at the end of April? :___________________________________
Where did the family plan to go for safety?:_________________________________
What destroyed their truck on the way?:________________________________________________
What happened to Branson’s parents in the accident?:__________________________________________
What was Branson’s condition after the tornado?:_____________________________________________
What decision did the little boy make in the horrible situation?:_________________________________________________
What quality does Branson have?:________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
俄克拉荷马州遭遇龙卷风袭击→_________________ →贝克一家驱车前往避难所躲避灾害→龙卷风突袭,大树砸毁卡车→_________________ →九岁的布兰森安然无恙,不顾危险决意外出求助→_________________ →(续写)布兰森艰难爬出破损车辆,冒狂风寻找路人求助→(续写)救援人员迅速施救,父母获救,小男孩的勇敢被众人称赞
6.情感线
disaster-stricken and terrifying→___________→desperate and helpless→___________→brave and determined→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句
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9. 本文主题
励志成长类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Despite the chaos and danger, Branson managed to climb out of the broken car.
衔接句1——What difficulties did Branson face? What did he do to ask for help?
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Paragraph 2: When Branson explained the situation, they immediately sprang into action.
衔接句2——What rescue work did people do? What was the final result and influence?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:尽管局势混乱危险,布兰森成功爬出了破损的汽车。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:布兰森说明情况后,众人立刻展开了行动。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
4、 段落续写
Despite the chaos and danger, Branson managed to climb out of the broken car.
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When Branson explained the situation, they immediately sprang into action.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
Branson(勇敢坚毅、沉着冷静、有担当的九岁男孩);Branson’s parents(遭遇灾害、身受重伤、被困的成年人);rescuers/neighbors(热心施救、乐于助人的普通人)
2.视角
第三人称
3.时空线
Tornadoes hit Marietta, Oklahoma--- Wayne sensed unusual weather--- The family drove to a storm shelter--- A tornado destroyed their truck and injured his parents--- Unhurt Branson decided to seek help in dangerous conditions
4. 细节问答
What disaster struck the area at the end of April? :Tornadoes hit Marietta, Oklahoma.
Where did the family plan to go for safety?:They planned to go to a neighbor’s storm shelter.
What destroyed their truck on the way?:A massive tree hurled by the tornado destroyed their truck.
What happened to Branson’s parents in the accident?:They were badly injured and trapped in the broken truck with multiple fractures and severe wounds.
What was Branson’s condition after the tornado?:He was luckily uninjured.
What decision did the little boy make in the horrible situation?:He decided to go out bravely to seek help for his trapped parents.
What quality does Branson have?:He is brave, calm, responsible and strong-willed.
What does the story tell us?:Bravery and sense of responsibility can help people overcome extreme difficulties and create miracles.
5.情节线
俄克拉荷马州遭遇龙卷风袭击→男主察觉异常,带家人避险→贝克一家驱车前往避难所躲避灾害→龙卷风突袭,大树砸毁卡车,父母重伤被困→九岁的布兰森安然无恙,不顾危险决意外出求助→小男孩独自冒险外出寻找救援→(续写)布兰森艰难爬出破损车辆,冒狂风寻找路人求助→(续写)救援人员迅速施救,父母获救,小男孩的勇敢被众人称赞
6.情感线
disaster-stricken and terrifying→shocked and frightened→desperate and helpless→calm and determined→proud and touching(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:一场龙卷风摧毁了车辆,致使布兰森的父母重伤被困,年仅九岁的他强忍恐惧、不畏危险外出求助,凭借勇敢和担当拯救了父母。
英文:A tornado destroyed the family’s truck and left Branson’s parents severely injured and trapped, but the 9-year-old boy overcame fear and danger to seek help and saved his parents with his bravery and responsibility.
8. 句式
状语从句:But on the way there, the tornado caught up with them with howling winds and spinning clouds.
非谓语动词:He didn’t hesitate, gathering his wife, Lindy, and their son, nine-year-old Branson, jumping in their truck and heading for a neighbor’s storm shelter.
宾语从句:No parent ever pictures having to count on their child for lifesaving help.
定语从句:A mom and dad in Oklahoma must be especially proud of their little boy after he rose to the occasion with rare and praiseworthy courage when their lives were in danger.
9. 本文主题
励志成长类:年少亦有担当,无畏的勇气与强烈的责任感,能让人直面绝境、创造奇迹。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Despite the chaos and danger, Branson managed to climb out of the broken car.
衔接句1——What difficulties did Branson face? What did he do to ask for help?
Branson braved the fierce wind and messy ruins, struggled forward and finally came across several passers-by for help.
Paragraph 2: When Branson explained the situation, they immediately sprang into action.
衔接句2——What rescue work did people do? What was the final result and influence?
Rescuers rushed to the spot, rescued his parents in time, and the little boy’s bravery won high praise from everyone.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:尽管局势混乱危险,布兰森成功爬出了破损的汽车。
→①狂风呼啸、环境恶劣,他强忍恐惧不敢停歇→②年幼的他艰难前行,一路奔跑寻找救援→③终于遇到路人,急切地诉说父母的困境;
第二段:布兰森说明情况后,众人立刻展开了行动。
→④众人火速赶往事故现场,小心翼翼展开救援→⑤成功救出受伤的父母,及时送往医院救治→⑥小男孩的勇敢担当令人动容,让父母无比骄傲。
四、段落续写范文
Despite the chaos and danger, Branson managed to climb out of the broken car. The fierce wind was still roaring wildly, and broken branches and rubbish were flying everywhere around him. Trembling with fear, the little boy refused to give up. Knowing his parents were in great danger, he held back his tears and struggled to walk forward in the terrible weather. After walking a long and tough way, he finally spotted several workers nearby and ran towards them desperately.
When Branson explained the situation, they immediately sprang into action. They rushed to the damaged truck at full speed, carefully removed the broken vehicle parts and rescued Branson’s parents trapped inside. Soon, the ambulance arrived and sent the injured couple to hospital for treatment. Thanks to Branson’s courage and persistence, his parents survived the terrible disaster. The brave little boy won widespread praise, and his parents felt extremely proud of their responsible son.
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