Unit 2 My dream job 写作专项学案 2026-2027学年沪教版（五四学制）九年级英语上册

该初中英语导学案聚焦沪教英语（五四学制）九上Unit2写作专项“My dream job”，核心知识点为定语从句（who/which/that）及简单句、并列句、复合句、并列复合句的多样化运用。通过审题梳理（文体、时态、三层行文逻辑）、范文精讲及分段思路拆解，搭建从题目理解到结构掌握的学习支架。 资料特色在于提供三段式写作模板、高分素材（定语从句句型、好词、过渡短语、谚语）及范文与译文，助力学生提升语言能力（句式与语法综合运用）、思维品质（逻辑组织与主旨升华）和学习能力（自主写作策略），学科特色方法明确，习题设计实用，有效提升写作效率与表达质量。

沪教英语（五四学制）九上Unit2写作专项学案：My dream job 一、写作原题 写作场景：校报面向全体学生征集题为My dream job的英文稿件，撰写一篇报刊记叙文，介绍自己理想的职业。 写作要求： 1. 行文穿插简单句、并列句、复合句、并列复合句四种句式，做到句式多样化，为本单元写作核心得分技巧； 2. 依托本单元核心语法定语从句（Relative clauses with who, which or that），修饰人物、事物，丰富语句内容； 3. 条理写明你理想的职业、选择这份工作的缘由、自身具备的优势； 4. 在文末写下未来规划与职业感悟，升华主旨。 本单元写作核心考点：定语从句，用who修饰人，which修饰物，that既可修饰人也可修饰物。 二、审题梳理 1. 文体：说明文式记叙文，考场通用三段式行文结构 2. 时态划分 · 介绍理想职业、个人特长、当下想法：一般现在时 · 讲述过往经历铺垫爱好、今后努力计划：一般过去时、一般将来时 3. 行文逻辑三层架构 ① 开篇点明自己向往的理想职业，可用定语从句引出职业； ② 主体段落分层阐述择业原因、自身特长、相关经历，灵活穿插四类句式与定语从句； ③ 结尾写下未来的努力计划，抒发对于职业、工作意义的感悟，回扣本单元大问题：Why do people work? 3、 范文精讲 I want to be a scientist who studies living things. Many people don’t care about nature these days. I want to help by doing research. I’ve read about animals that are in trouble. It’s important to let people know how valuable nature is and how to protect it. I’m good at Biology and Geography, and I like doing experiments. I also enjoy researching and solving problems, and that’s why I’m in my school’s Science Club and the World Wide Fund for Nature. I know it will be hard to become a life scientist, but I’ll try my best to make it happen. 分段思路拆解 第一段（开篇点题）：直接亮出梦想职业，使用定语从句who studies living things修饰 scientist，立刻落实本单元语法考点，开门见山。 第二段（主体缘由）：先用简单句点明社会现状，再借助定语从句that are in trouble修饰 animals，解释自己想要从事这份工作的初心。 第三段（自身优势）：使用并列句说明自己擅长的学科与兴趣爱好，再用并列复合句，交代自己参与的社团，佐证自己有能力奔赴理想职业。 第四段（收尾升华）：并列句写出前路的困难与自身决心，结合单元主旨，表达自己想要凭借工作实现自我价值。 四、写作模板 第一段（开篇，点明我的理想职业，使用定语从句） My dream job is to be a __________ who __________. This career has attracted me for a long time. I have always hoped to devote myself to this job. 第二段（文章主体，择业理由 + 个人特长，多处穿插定语从句，变换四种句式） I choose this job mainly for two reasons. First, __________. There are lots of people who need help from this occupation. What’s more, I have many advantages that fit this job well. I am good at __________ and I take part in activities which can improve my related skills step by step. I keep practising in my spare time, so I become more prepared for my future career. 第三段（结尾，未来规划 + 感悟升华，回扣单元主旨 Why do people work?） I realize that the road ahead is never easy, but I will spare no effort to realise my dream. I believe people work not only to make a living, but also to bring warmth and value to the whole world. This is the true meaning of work. 五、写作高分素材（高分定语从句句型、好词、过渡短语、结尾谚语） （一）核心定语从句高分句型（直接背诵） 1. I hope to become a teacher who can guide teenagers to find their own goals. 我想要成为一名能够引导青少年找寻人生目标的教师。 2. I prefer jobs which can bring positive changes to ordinary people’s daily life. 我偏爱可以给普通人的生活带来积极改变的职业。 3. The dream that I hold firmly pushes me to keep moving forward every day. 我坚守的这份理想，日复一日督促我不断前行。 4. People who love their work can always gain happiness from their career. 热爱自己工作的人总能从职业之中收获幸福感。 （二）优质形容词 / 好词（刻画职业素养、个人特质） · 个人优势类：patient, responsible, outgoing, careful, determined, warm-hearted · 职业价值类：meaningful, valuable, rewarding, influential, worthwhile · 内心感悟类：fulfilled, proud, motivated, delighted （三）叙事过渡好句，用来切换不同句式 1. Ever since I was little, I have had this special dream deep inside my heart. 从我年幼时，这份独特的理想便深埋心底。 2. Apart from personal interest, I also wish to bring benefits to other people. 除却个人兴趣，我也希望可以造福他人。 3. Plenty of small experiences have gradually strengthened my determination. 诸多小事慢慢坚定了我的决心。 4. Working is a way for us to realise our personal worth in society. 工作是我们在社会中实现自我价值的一种途径。 （四）作文结尾万能英文谚语 1. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。 2. Diligence is the mother of good luck. 勤勉乃是幸运之源。 3. The greatest pleasure comes from devoting ourselves to what we love. 最大的快乐源自投身热爱的事业。 4. Work gives people not only money but also spiritual satisfaction. 工作带给人们的不只是收入，还有精神层面的满足。 六、范文 My dream job I want to be a book restorer who repairs ancient damaged books. This special traditional career has left a deep impression on me ever since I read an interview about skilled craftsmen. Many old books which carry precious history are broken and forgotten nowadays. I hope I can save these valuable treasures with my own hands. I am careful and patient, and I have developed the habit of reading ancient books in my free time. I also take courses about traditional culture, and that is why I learn basic repairing skills in my spare time. I know the work that a book restorer does is dull and tiring sometimes, but I never lose my passion for it. I will keep learning related knowledge and improve my practical skills in the years ahead. I finally understand why people work: work helps us pass on precious culture and achieve our life value. I will stick to my dream and try my best to become an excellent book restorer in the future. 范文中文译文 我的理想职业 我想要成为一名古籍修复师，修补受损的老旧典籍。自从读过一篇能工巧匠的访谈之后，这份特殊的职业便深深吸引了我。 如今许多承载珍贵历史的古籍遭到破损，渐渐被人们遗忘。我希望能用自己的双手挽救这些宝贵的财富。我细心且有耐心，平日里养成了研读古籍的习惯。我还会参加传统文化课程，这也是我利用课余时间学习基础修复技艺的原因。我清楚古籍修复的工作偶尔枯燥乏味，但我始终怀揣热忱。 往后我会持续学习相关知识，打磨实操能力。我终于明白了人们为何工作：工作能够让我们传承珍贵文化，实现自身的人生价值。我会坚守理想，努力成为一名优秀的古籍修复师。 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $