Unit 1 Teenagers today 当代青少年（单元写作精练）英语新教材外研版九年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦当代青少年主题，构建“主题-语言-结构”三维写作体系，系统培养语言能力与责任担当意识。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作主题|3大必考题型|按“人与自我/社会”分类，明确记叙文、议论文、观点短文核心方向|从主题范畴到具体题型，形成“话题-文体”对应逻辑| |词汇句式积累|3类词汇+3组句式|分“优秀品质/责任担当/家国使命”积累词汇，按“开头-中间-结尾”提炼功能句式|语言要素服务主题表达，构建“词-句-篇”递进链条| |题型结构指导|3类题型结构模板|提供“总-分-总”写作框架，细化各题型Beginning/Body/Ending要点|结构模板与题型特征匹配，培养逻辑思维与表达能力| |原题与练习|4道原题+基础提升练习|结合真实情境设计任务，强化“输入-输出”转化|从基础翻译仿写过渡到完整写作，实现能力梯度提升|

Unit 1 Teenagers today当代青少年 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 话题范畴：人与自我、人与社会，聚焦当代青少年优秀品质、责任担当、时代使命与国家发展。 三大必考题型： ①记叙文：介绍青少年模范人物 ②议论文：如何做有担当的青少年 ③观点短文：我的青春使命 【词汇积累】 1. 优秀品质类 responsible有担当；hard-working勤奋；brave勇敢；persistent坚韧；warm-hearted热心；positive积极；self-disciplined自律；modest谦逊 set a good example树立榜样；never give up永不放弃；overcome difficulties克服困难 2. 责任担当类 shoulder the responsibility承担责任；take on duties履行义务；share housework分担家务； follow school rules遵守校规； take part in volunteer work参与志愿活动； care for the community关心社区 3. 家国使命类 contribute to country为国家作出贡献； realize self-worth实现自我价值； combine personal dreams with national needs把个人理想与国家需求结合； pass down Chinese culture传承中华文化 the duty of the times falls on us 我们肩负时代使命 【句式积累】 一、开头引入（总起句） 1. Teenagers today are the future of our country.如今的青少年是国家的未来。 2. As the new generation, today’s teenagers play an important role in our country’s development.作为新一代青年，当代青少年在国家发展中发挥着举足轻重的作用。 二、中间分述句 1. It is our duty to develop good qualities and take our responsibilities.（形式主语） 培养优良品质、承担责任是我们的责任。 2. Not only should we study hard, but we also need to care about society.（倒装） 我们不仅要努力学习，还要心系社会。 3. We can make a difference by small daily actions. 我们可以通过日常点滴小事贡献自己的一份力量。 4. The role model teaches us how to face challenges bravely.（宾语从句） 优秀榜样教会我们勇敢面对挑战。 三、结尾升华（总结句） 1. I will try my best to be a responsible teenager.我会尽全力做一名有担当的青少年。 2. Only when we shoulder our responsibility can our motherland have a brighter future.唯有我们肩负使命，祖国才能拥有更加光明的未来 。 题型1：介绍青少年模范人物 Beginning（总）：引出榜样，概括其优秀品质（总体评价） Body（分）：1. 基本信息；2. 典型事迹（过去时）；3. 体现的责任与精神 Ending（总）：榜样带来的启发，号召向其学习 题型2：如何成为有责任担当的青少年 Beginning（总）：点明青少年培养担当的重要性 Body（分）：1. 在学校：勤学守纪，帮助同学；2. 在家：体谅父母，分担家务；3. 在社会：参与志愿，爱护环境 Ending（总）：总结，小事积累造就有担当青年 题型3：我的青少年使命（第一人称） Beginning（总）：新时代青年肩负特殊使命 Body（分）：1. 学好知识，提升自我；2. 传承传统文化；3. 心系国家，从小事奉献 Ending（总）：立志将青春力量献给祖国发展 【原题呈现】 1．为了树立榜样，促进学生成长，我校学生会近日开展主题为“A Young Model in My Mind”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范青年”孙颖莎。内容提示如下： 要求： 1)须包含提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥，内容要条理清晰，有逻辑; 2)词数：100-120词(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。 3)参考词汇：奥运冠军 Olympic champion   乒乓球 table tennis A Young Model in My Mind My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce a young model to you_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 承担青少年的使命 2. 树立好榜样 3. 参与志愿活动 4. 克服学习中的困难 5. 为国家发展做贡献 6. 行动起来 7.我们肩负时代使命 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：It is our duty to do sth. 例句：It is teenagers’ duty to develop good qualities. 翻译： (1) 传承中华文化是我们的责任。 (2) 主动帮助他人是青少年的义务。 句型2：Not only 倒装句 例句：Not only should we study hard, but we also need to care about society. 翻译： （1）我们不仅要自律，还要有担当。 （2）我们不仅要遵守校规，还要主动分担家务。 【提升必做】 1. 写一篇文章 表达你作为青少年对国家未来的责任与期望，也可以谈谈你计划如何为祖国做贡献。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．青少年面临多重挑战，也在挑战中不断成长。你校英语俱乐部举行了 “成长与挑战”主题讲演活动，请你根据以下提示，以“Growing Up as a Teenager”为题完成一篇英语讲演稿，分享你在挑战中实现自我成长的经历及收获。 提示： （1）你在成长过程中遇到过哪些挑战? （2）你是如何面对挑战或克服困难的? （3）这些经历让你学到了什么或对你未来有何影响? 要求： （1）内容必须包括以上所有要点，须按照要求适当发挥，补充细节。 （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 （3）不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （4）文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。 Growing Up as a Teenager The teenage years are like a journey with both sunshine and rain. During this special time, we face challenges that help us grow. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是阳光中学九（1）班的李华，学校英语社团公众平台计划做一期主题为“榜样人物（role model）”的系列推送。现向全校同学征集榜样人物故事。请你根据以下要点写一封推荐信，推荐你心中的榜样人物并阐述推荐理由。 要求： 1. 参考下表，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Personal information name, animal sign, favourite colour, ... Good qualities ... (至少两点) Some help he/she offered you ... Something you have learned from him/her ... Dear editor, I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m writing to recommend ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope that her/his story can be featured in your series and encourage more students. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4．青春意味着蓬勃的力量，责任则赋予其价值。青春与责任相伴相生，勇于担当，方能不负韶华。为促进青少年更好地成长，学校将举办以“Growth and Responsibility”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的成长感悟与担当。 写作要点： 1. 你的理解：什么是青少年责任； 2. 你的行动：从家庭、学习、社会活动三个方面，列举自己的具体做法； 3. 你的感悟：责任对于青少年成长的重要意义。 写作要求： 1. 短文须包含以上所有写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实班级、姓名和校名。 3. 词数不少于100词（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share my ideas about the theme “Growth and Responsibility”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Teenagers today当代青少年 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 话题范畴：人与自我、人与社会，聚焦当代青少年优秀品质、责任担当、时代使命与国家发展。 三大必考题型： ①记叙文：介绍青少年模范人物 ②议论文：如何做有担当的青少年 ③观点短文：我的青春使命 【词汇积累】 1. 优秀品质类 responsible有担当；hard-working勤奋；brave勇敢；persistent坚韧；warm-hearted热心；positive积极；self-disciplined自律；modest谦逊 set a good example树立榜样；never give up永不放弃；overcome difficulties克服困难 2. 责任担当类 shoulder the responsibility承担责任；take on duties履行义务；share housework分担家务； follow school rules遵守校规； take part in volunteer work参与志愿活动； care for the community关心社区 3. 家国使命类 contribute to country为国家作出贡献； realize self-worth实现自我价值； combine personal dreams with national needs把个人理想与国家需求结合； pass down Chinese culture传承中华文化 the duty of the times falls on us 我们肩负时代使命 【句式积累】 一、开头引入（总起句） 1. Teenagers today are the future of our country.如今的青少年是国家的未来。 2. As the new generation, today’s teenagers play an important role in our country’s development.作为新一代青年，当代青少年在国家发展中发挥着举足轻重的作用。 二、中间分述句 1. It is our duty to develop good qualities and take our responsibilities.（形式主语） 培养优良品质、承担责任是我们的责任。 2. Not only should we study hard, but we also need to care about society.（倒装） 我们不仅要努力学习，还要心系社会。 3. We can make a difference by small daily actions. 我们可以通过日常点滴小事贡献自己的一份力量。 4. The role model teaches us how to face challenges bravely.（宾语从句） 优秀榜样教会我们勇敢面对挑战。 三、结尾升华（总结句） 1. I will try my best to be a responsible teenager.我会尽全力做一名有担当的青少年。 2. Only when we shoulder our responsibility can our motherland have a brighter future.唯有我们肩负使命，祖国才能拥有更加光明的未来 。 题型1：介绍青少年模范人物 Beginning（总）：引出榜样，概括其优秀品质（总体评价） Body（分）：1. 基本信息；2. 典型事迹（过去时）；3. 体现的责任与精神 Ending（总）：榜样带来的启发，号召向其学习 题型2：如何成为有责任担当的青少年 Beginning（总）：点明青少年培养担当的重要性 Body（分）：1. 在学校：勤学守纪，帮助同学；2. 在家：体谅父母，分担家务；3. 在社会：参与志愿，爱护环境 Ending（总）：总结，小事积累造就有担当青年 题型3：我的青少年使命（第一人称） Beginning（总）：新时代青年肩负特殊使命 Body（分）：1. 学好知识，提升自我；2. 传承传统文化；3. 心系国家，从小事奉献 Ending（总）：立志将青春力量献给祖国发展 【原题呈现】 1．为了树立榜样，促进学生成长，我校学生会近日开展主题为“A Young Model in My Mind”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范青年”孙颖莎。内容提示如下： 要求： 1)须包含提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥，内容要条理清晰，有逻辑; 2)词数：100-120词(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。 3)参考词汇：奥运冠军 Olympic champion   乒乓球 table tennis A Young Model in My Mind My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce a young model to you_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接开头，引出介绍对象孙颖莎； 第二步、分点介绍她的出生背景、训练经历与成就； 第三步、抒发个人感受，提炼从她身上学到的品质。 [亮点词汇] ①more than超过 ②gave up放弃 ③stick to坚持 [高分句型] No matter how difficult the journey is, we should stick to our dreams.(no matter how引导的让步状语从句) 【范文欣赏】 【答案】例文 A Young Model in My Mind My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce a young model to you—Sun Yingsha, a remarkable table tennis player. She was born on November 4, 2000, in Shijiazhuang, Hebei Province. At the age of 5, she started playing table tennis. Since then, she has been training for more than 8 hours every day. Even when she got injured, she never gave up and kept going. At 21, she became an Olympic champion, which made her a shining star in the sports world. I’m deeply moved by her perseverance and hard work. From her, I learn that success comes from endless efforts and a strong will. No matter how difficult the journey is, we should stick to our dreams. 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 承担青少年的使命 2. 树立好榜样 3. 参与志愿活动 4. 克服学习中的困难 5. 为国家发展做贡献 6. 行动起来 7.我们肩负时代使命 【参考答案】 1. shoulder teenagers’ mission 2. set a good example 3. take part in volunteer work 4. overcome difficulties in study 5. make contributions to national development 6. take action 7. the duty of the times falls on us 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：It is our duty to do sth. 例句：It is teenagers’ duty to develop good qualities. 翻译： (1) 传承中华文化是我们的责任。 (2) 主动帮助他人是青少年的义务。 【参考答案】 1. It’s our duty to pass down Chinese culture. 2. It is teenagers’ duty to help others actively. 句型2：Not only 倒装句 例句：Not only should we study hard, but we also need to care about society. 翻译： Not only is the role model hard-working, but he or she is also willing to make contributions. （1）我们不仅要自律，还要有担当。 （2）我们不仅要遵守校规，还要主动分担家务。 【参考答案】 Not only should we be self-disciplined, but we also need to shoulder responsibilities. Not only should we follow school rules, but we also need to share housework. 【提升必做】 1. 写一篇文章 表达你作为青少年对国家未来的责任与期望，也可以谈谈你计划如何为祖国做贡献。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As a teenager, I believe the duty of the times falls on us young people. We must shoulder the responsibility to create a bright future for our motherland. If we are hard-working, China will be richer; if we are creative, China will be more powerful. Instead of only talking, we need to take action right now. I will master more useful knowledge at school and take part in volunteer work in my community. Every small effort can make a difference to our country’s development. We can make history hand in hand. I sincerely hope our country will rise steadily day by day. I will spare no effort to live up to the expectations of our great times. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论抒情短文，以一般现在时、一般将来时为主 明确要点：青少年肩负时代使命，落地个人行动，抒发对国家未来的责任与期盼 确定人称：第一人称 (I/we) 注意事项：至少5句话；必须使用指定短语the duty of the times falls on us、shoulder the responsibility、take action、make history；需使用句型“If we are..., China will be...” [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明时代使命，使用指定短语与要求句式，点明青年与国家发展的关联 主体段：落地个人行动，运用take action，说明在校学习、社区志愿两类具体做法 结尾段：升华主旨，使用make history，抒发对祖国的美好期盼与自身奋斗决心 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：时代责任 核心表达：the duty of the times falls on us/shoulder the responsibility/create a bright future for our motherland/carry the task of our age/realize the great dream of China If we are hard-working, China will be richer; if we are creative, China will be more powerful./If we keep learning, China will be smarter; if we stick to our ideals, China will go further.等 要点二：个人行动规划 核心表达：Instead of only talking, we need to take action right now./I will master more useful knowledge at school and take part in volunteer work in my community./Every small effort can make a difference to our country’s development./We should start with small daily things./I will read more science books and spread Chinese culture to foreign friends./Our daily progress pushes the whole country forward.等 要点三：展望与升华 核心表达：We can make history hand in hand./I sincerely hope our country will rise steadily day by day./I will spare no effort to live up to the expectations of our great times./We young people will shine on the big stage of the times./I look forward to seeing a warm and prosperous China./I will hold fast to my promise and fight for our bright future.等 2．青少年面临多重挑战，也在挑战中不断成长。你校英语俱乐部举行了 “成长与挑战”主题讲演活动，请你根据以下提示，以“Growing Up as a Teenager”为题完成一篇英语讲演稿，分享你在挑战中实现自我成长的经历及收获。 提示： （1）你在成长过程中遇到过哪些挑战? （2）你是如何面对挑战或克服困难的? （3）这些经历让你学到了什么或对你未来有何影响? 要求： （1）内容必须包括以上所有要点，须按照要求适当发挥，补充细节。 （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。 （3）不少于100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （4）文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。 Growing Up as a Teenager The teenage years are like a journey with both sunshine and rain. During this special time, we face challenges that help us grow. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Growing Up as a Teenager The teenage years are like a journey with both sunshine and rain. During this special time, we face challenges that help us grow.   One big challenge I met was preparing for the piano competition last year. I was very nervous because I had to perform in front of many people. I practiced for hours every day, but I still made mistakes. Sometimes I even wanted to give up. To overcome this, I made a clear plan and practiced step by step. I also asked my teacher for advice. She told me to take a deep breath and believe in myself. On the day of the competition, I stood on the stage and played with all my heart. Although I was still nervous, I calmed myself down and finished successfully. From this experience, I learned that practice makes perfect and that confidence is the key to success. It also taught me that challenges are not obstacles but stepping stones. In the future, I will face every difficulty bravely and never run away from it. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，叙议结合（讲述经历+表达感悟） 明确要点： 1. 成长中遇到的挑战 2. 如何面对或克服困难 3. 学到了什么及对未来有何影响 确定人称：第一人称（I/my），面向听众时用we/our 注意事项：不少于100词（不含开头）；开头已给，不计入总词数；不出现真实人名、地点、校名 [第二步：构思布局] 采用三段式结构（在已给开头之后）： 第一段：点明遇到的具体挑战（钢琴比赛） 第二段：如何克服困难（制定计划、请教老师、调整心态） 第三段：学到的道理及对未来影响 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：成长中遇到的挑战 参考短语：big challenge/prepare for the piano competition/be very nervous/perform in front of many people/practice for hours/make mistakes/want to give up/face difficulties/deal with stress/prepare for exams/make new friends/feel lonely等 常用句式：One big challenge I met was.../I was very nervous because.../I practiced...but I still.../ Sometimes I even wanted to.../I used to be afraid of.../What troubled me most was...等 作用展示：One big challenge I met was preparing for the piano competition last year. I was very nervous because I had to perform in front of many people.等 要点二：如何面对或克服困难 参考短语：overcome/make a clear plan/practice step by step/ask my teacher for advice/take a deep breath/believe in myself/stand on the stage/play with all my heart/calm myself down/finish successfully/face the problem bravely/find a solution等 常用句式：To overcome this, I.../I also asked...for advice./She told me to.../Although I was still..., I...and.../Instead of giving up, I decided to.../The first thing I did was...等 作用展示：To overcome this, I made a clear plan and practiced step by step. I also asked my teacher for advice. She told me to take a deep breath and believe in myself.等 要点三：学到什么及对未来影响 参考短语：This experience taught me.../I learned that/practice makes perfect/confidence is the key to success/ challenges are not obstacles but stepping stones/face every difficulty bravely/never run away from/never give up/be more confident等 常用句式：From this experience, I learned that.../It also taught me that.../In the future, I will.../This challenge changed me a lot./I realized that.../These experiences have made me a stronger person.等 作用展示：From this experience, I learned that practice makes perfect and that confidence is the key to success. It also taught me that challenges are not obstacles but stepping stones.等 3．假如你是阳光中学九（1）班的李华，学校英语社团公众平台计划做一期主题为“榜样人物（role model）”的系列推送。现向全校同学征集榜样人物故事。请你根据以下要点写一封推荐信，推荐你心中的榜样人物并阐述推荐理由。 要求： 1. 参考下表，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Personal information name, animal sign, favourite colour, ... Good qualities ... (至少两点) Some help he/she offered you ... Something you have learned from him/her ... Dear editor, I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m writing to recommend ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope that her/his story can be featured in your series and encourage more students. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear editor, I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m writing to recommend the monitor of our class. She is a lovely girl called Lucy. She is thirteen years old. Her animal sign is the Rabbit. She prefers yellow, for it is the colour of the sun and can remind people of warm sunny days. I think she has many strong qualities. She is hard-working. She always does extra work after class. She devotes much time to helping with class projects. She is also very helpful. Whenever I have difficulty with my lessons, she is willing to explain patiently, for which I am very grateful. I can learn to be a more helpful person from her.   I hope that her story can be featured in your series and encourage more students. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 文体：应用文（书信/推荐信），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：推荐对象的个人信息、榜样的优秀品质、 对“我”的帮助事例、从榜样身上学到的东西 人称：第一人称（I/my），推荐对象用第三人称（she/her） 注意事项：不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：自我介绍和写信目的 主体段：推荐对象的个人信息、榜样的优秀品质、 对“我”的帮助事例、从榜样身上学到的东西 结尾段：表达期待，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：推荐对象的个人信息 基础信息：a lovely girl/ thirteen years old/animal sign/tall and thin等 要点二：榜样的优秀品质 优秀品质：hard-working/does extra work/devotes much time to help others/helpful等 要点三：对“我”的帮助事例 事例描述: explain patiently/share study notes/help copy down the notes等 情感表达：grateful/thankful/thanks a lot/appreciate等 要点四：从榜样身上学到的东西 直接收获：learn to be a more helpful person /work hard and be kind to others等 隐含升华：encourage more students/everyone gives a helping hand等 4．青春意味着蓬勃的力量，责任则赋予其价值。青春与责任相伴相生，勇于担当，方能不负韶华。为促进青少年更好地成长，学校将举办以“Growth and Responsibility”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的成长感悟与担当。 写作要点： 1. 你的理解：什么是青少年责任； 2. 你的行动：从家庭、学习、社会活动三个方面，列举自己的具体做法； 3. 你的感悟：责任对于青少年成长的重要意义。 写作要求： 1. 短文须包含以上所有写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实班级、姓名和校名。 3. 词数不少于100词（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share my ideas about the theme “Growth and Responsibility”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share my ideas about the theme “Growth and Responsibility”. For teenagers, responsibility means taking our duties seriously, not just for ourselves but also for others. It helps us grow into reliable people who care about those around us. I try to practice it in daily life. At home, I help with chores to ease my parents’ burden. At school, I study hard and help my classmates when needed. I also join volunteer activities in the community. Taking responsibility teaches us to care for others and become reliable. Only by being responsible can we truly grow into better people ready for the bright future ahead with courage. Thanks for listening! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿（应用文，主题为“Growth and Responsibility”） 明确要点：围绕青少年对责任的理解、在家庭/学习/社会活动中的具体行动、责任对成长的重要意义展开 确定人称：第一人称（I/my），面向同学的演讲语气 注意事项：词数不少于100词，包含所有写作要点，语句通顺，不透露真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候并点明演讲主题 主体段：阐述对青少年责任的理解，分家庭、学习、社会活动三个方面列举具体做法 结尾段：表达责任对成长的重要意义，礼貌收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 对责任的理解：take duties seriously/not only for ourselves but also for others/grow into reliable, caring people / keep promises to others/face mistakes bravely and correct them等 具体行动：at home, help with chores to lighten parents’ work/at school, work hard on my studies and support my classmates/take part in volunteer work in the community/follow family rules and communicate with parents/take part in class group tasks actively等 重要意义：learn to care for others/build trust and reliability/grow into better people ready for the future with courage/build strong relationships with people around/develop a sense of self-worth and purpose等 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $