专题十七 书面表达-【备战高考】备战2027高考英语母题题源同步练

5.在corner前加the此处表示特指。 6. 7.going→go句中含有help sb.(to)do sth.结构，因此 把going改为go。 8.here-there句意为：我在那里（医院）待了一个半小 时。因此把here改为there。. 9.hour→hours表示一个半小时，应该用hour的复数 形式。 l0.were→was主语为it,谓语动词应用单数形式。 Passage 6 L.had→have因为“你对中国食物感兴趣”是一个客观 事实，所以用一殷现在时。 2.them*it Chinese food是不可数名词词组，因此要 用it指代。 3.with→for be famous for为固定搭配，意思是 “因…而著名”。 4.easy→easily应该用副词修饰谓语动词。 5.differ→differs主谓不一致。这句话的主语是单数 名词词组Shanghai food。 6.去掉定冠词the中国食物(Chinese food)是一个泛 指的概念，而且是不可数名词，因此其前不要冠词。 7.good前加is因为good是形容词，不能单独作谓语， 前面需要加be动词。 8.dish→dishes dish表示“一道莱”时是可数名词，这 里是指不同地区的特色菜，所以要用其复数形式。 9.whenever-→wherever根据句意可知，这里是指“无 论你在哪里”表示地点，因此应该用wherever。 l0.meet→meeting look forward to是固定词组，意思 是“希望，盼望”，其中的0是介词，而不是不定式的标志，因 此后面接名词、代词或动名词作宾语。 ·1( Passage 7 1.第一个the→an冠词的错误。这里的“天使”在文中 是第一次出现，应该用不定冠词。 2.V 3.by→from动词短语的错误。suffer from表示 “受…的折磨”，为固定搭配。 4.去掉had时态的错误。先发生的动作touch用了一 殷过去时，故随后的recover也应该用一殷过去时。 5.glass-→glasses名词数的错误。下文说视力不好，因 此这里用glasses表示“眼镜”。 6.her→his代词错误。前面提到the second man,是 男士，故应用his。 7.but-and行文逻辑的错误。前后表示顺接而不是 转折关系，用and。 8.threw前加who连词的错误。throw up这一动作 是the third man发出的，需要用连词引导非限制性定语从 句，用who。 9.cries-→cried时态的错误。全文都在叙述过去发生 的事情，时态应保持一致。 10.normally→normal词性的错误。这里用形容词而 不是副词作定语，修饰名词person。 第五模块书面表达 专题十七书面表达 十年高考母题原型训练 A组 题源1书面表达命题规律及写作要求 Writing 1 【范文选登】 Last Monday,my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip.He would be away for three days.Just the next morning I found my mother wasn't feeling well.She had a cold.I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.With my special care,my mother recovered quickly.When my fa- ther came back home,my mother told him what had hap- pened.He praised me for what I had done. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother. Writing 2 【范文选登】 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exer- cise,our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day.At 8:00 am,we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting,singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.When some fell behind,others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later,we all reached the top.Bathed in sunshine,we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work,it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful time! Writing 3 【范文选登】 Ms.Li,our English teacher,must have found it strange on Teachers'Day:she did not receive a single greeting card from us students.She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. As Teachers'Day was approaching,our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year.On the afternoon of September 10,some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes,drinks and fruits.The black- board was decorated with beautiful words,which read"Hap- py Teachers'Day！” Entering the classroom,Ms.Li was surprised to find we were standing in line,clapping hands and saying loudly"Happy Teachers'Day!"Wang Hua,our monitor,presented her with the prepared flowers.Some of the girls sang songs for Ms.Li, and three boys showed their Gongfu talent.Before we left,we enjoyed a new English song by Ms.Li. Ms.Li spent a wonderful time with us,but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. Writing 4 【范文选登】 Last Monday,we were having our Chinese class when 。10 the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.We were all worried about her.One of the boys carried her on the back,with the help of some others,to the clinic immediately.It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hos- pital.The following day,we went to visit her with flowers and fruit.Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages,we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would re- cover soon.This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons.We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher. Writing 5 【范文选登】 Dear Tom, Haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and it has been a month since you came to Beijing.How are you getting on with everything? I will go to Beijing to take part in the students'English speech contest in July.What worries me a lot is that I am re- ally having trouble in collecting information in using language.For me,it is easy to remember the grammar but I am poor in putting it into practice.Would you please do me a favor?I would appreciate it if you can give me some advice on how to solve these problems. By the way,I will call on you after this contest. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua Writing 6 【范文选登】 Good morning,everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is“Let's Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all,with the improvement of people's living standards,cars have become a popular means of trans- port,bringing great convenience to our life.However,they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then?As far as I'm con- cerned,riding bicycles is a good solution.For one thing,bi- cycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving.For another,bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas.What's more,riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore,let's take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.Come on and join us! Thank you! Writing 7 【范文选登】 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua from Class One,Senior Two.I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are providing. On the one hand,I think the voluntary work can build up my confidence,develop good ability of social gathering and broaden my horizons.But most importantly,I would like to do something for the children in Chenxi Hope School in need.On the other hand,I am an active boy with the ability to live independently.I am interested in and good at English. My plan can be seen as follows.First,I will teach the children to song English songs.Besides,I will often go to the English corner with them to practice their spoken English.In addition,I will tell them English stories. I am looking forward to your reply at your convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 8 【范文选登】 In the picture,between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree.Unlike most trees,this one bends in the middle,struggling all the way up to get more sunshine.The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable con- ditions.Faced with difficulties,they never give up but try their best to find a way out.Life can be hard.But if we have the courage and determination,we will finally get the sun- shine we want as the tree in the picture does. Writing 9 【范文选登】 Dear Tom, I'm sorry that I can't keep my promise that I'll pay a visit to Beijing with you next weekend.My uncle is returning home from America,who is aged 70 and in poor health.I have no alternative but to meet him at the airport next week- 。10 end. To be honest,Beijing is a most popular tourist attraction to me.Not only is it the political,economic and cultural centre of China,but it is also abundant in beautiful scenic spots.Besides,I've been planning to accompany you on the trip to the beautiful city.I wonder if it is possible for us to go there the weekend after next,and if so,I'll make more preparations for it and we'll enjoy a more pleasant trip there. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Writing 10 【范文选登】 Last weekend,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents,I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe,and some hotel information.In the afternoon,I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for them although there was a long queue.After dinner,I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need,such as clothes,glasses,an umbrella,and a map.The next morning,I went to the station to see them off.Waving goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 题源2书面表达题型分析 Writing 1 【范文选登】 The Mid-Autumn Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.As one of the traditional Chinese festivals,it has been enjoying great popu- larity in our country.Usually,no matter how far away or how busy we are,we will try to come home for the celebra- tion.The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.With the beautiful moon up in the sky,we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit,sharing our stories.In addition to these traditional activities,we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our rela- tives or friends. Writing 2 【范文选登】 On the Way to School These days,breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon,causing serious harm to life and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me,it should start on the way to school. I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bi- cycle,I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road un- til the traffic light turns green.If I walk,I'll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile,I'll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere,I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference. Writing 3 【范文选登】 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a student from Chongqing,China.I'm writing this letter to you to report you the emergent situation of the Chi- nese Yangtze finless porpoise.Because of human beings'de- structive influence,the number of this precious species has promptly dropped to less than 100. As far as I know,your foundation can help those species that are at the edge of distinction.I'm writing this letter to you to ask for your generous donation to our project to protect this endangered species.If it is not much too incon- venient,would you please come to China to have a close ob- servation of the poor porpoises and give us aid and direction to prevent them from dying out completely? Thanks for reading my letter and I'm anxiously anticipa- ting to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 4 【范文选登】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chi- nese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond,about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China,these knots stand for friendship,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you need further information. Thank you! Li Hua Writing 5 【范文选登】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?You asked me in your last letter a- bout my plan for the coming summer vacation.I am sorry that I didn't reply without delay.How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it!However,I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time,which is vital for me.As a result,I had no choice but to completely focus on my study,for which I am very sorry.I hope you can un- derstand me. During the holiday,I am going to do a part-time job.On the one hand,I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my family.On the other hand,I accumulate the social expe- rience,which does good to my future life.At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lessons.I will spend an in- structive holiday.How will you spend your holiday?I hope you have a good time. These are my plans for the summer vacation.What's yours?I am looking forward to your earliest reply. Yours, Li Hua Writing 6 【范文选登】 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.What's more,I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their coun- tries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua Writing 7 【范文选登】 Hi,Susan, We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.We'd like to invite you to the party.We want to give him a surprise,so please keep quiet about it.We'll gath- er at the Students'Club at 8 p.m.this Friday,after the eve- ning classes.And it's going to last about an hour.We each will prepare a little present.When he comes,we'll light the candles and sing "Happy Birthday"together for him.Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games.It'll be nice to see how excited he will be.I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party,too. Yours, Li Hua Writing 8 【范文选登】 I Like Reading Reading is my favorite hobby.I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life.As we know,books are the source of knowledge.I benefit a great deal from reading. There are a variety of books for us to choose from,like history books,science books,literary books and so on.But what interests me most is literary books,especially those by famous writers.For one thing,they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons.For another,they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun.Isn't it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading? Writing 9 【范文选登】 Dear Ms Li, I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.As the world is becoming a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. My English is just OK and the two main problems in my ·1 study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help. Thank you! Li Hua Writing 10 【范文选登】 Dear Editor, As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the Eng- lish textbooks published by your house.These books have many advantages.One of them is that we can find a variety of topics,such as science,culture and history.These topics, I think,are very popular with us students.What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colourful pictures,which can help us understand English better.Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.However,some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us.Therefore,I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Best regards！ Li Hua Writing 11 【范文选登】 Dear Sir/Madam, I'm Li Hua,a Chinese student taking summer courses in your school.I'm writing to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you.I have no classes on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may e-mail or phone me.Here are my e-mail address and phone number: lihua@1236.com;12345678. Look forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Writing 12 【范文选登】 June 8 Dear Sir/Madam, I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.I'm really interested in this position and hope I can work for you. I'm 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July.I'm an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.I'm good at English,especially spoken English.I often use the computer and I type very fast.In my spare time,I read a lot. Poems are my favorite.I enjoy music very much too.Being an active young person,I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides,I'm easy to get along with and I like to make friends. Sincerely yours, Li Hua Writing 13 【范文选登】 June8,2011 Dear Mr.Headmaster, I am Li Yue,a student from Class 1,Senior II.I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students:littering and scribbling.It makes our school dirty and unpleasant,and does harm to the image of our school.I always feel ashamed whenever I see this.It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble.I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour.At the same time,students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.I believe that,with the joint efforts of both teachers and students,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Yue Writing 14 【范文选登】 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mir- ror! I'm a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.First,it covers both national and international news so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. As a young student,I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua Writing 15 【范文选登】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am very sorry to trouble you for my lost suitcase in your busiest time. I took flight number BA793 to return home on June 3rd,2010.When I arrived at the airport,I found my suitcase missing,which made me rather worried.There are many im- portant papers of our company just signed with a foreign company.It is those papers that can lead to our company's prosperity.In addition,in the suitcase are my ID card, employees'card,ten Yinlian cards and some articles for daily use.The suitcase is about 70 cm X 40 cm in size,black leather with bright mark of our company-a lion.Ask for your help to look for it.Many thanks for you.My telephone number is 1358989888. Sorry to trouble you.I am waiting for your reply sincerely. Yours truly, Li Hua Writing 16 【范文选登】 Dear Mr.Smith, I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union,from Chenguang High School.Your students visiting group coming from the US will pay a visit to our school on June 26th and I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day.My plan about these activities is as fol- lows. On the morning of your arrival,we will show you around our school and introduce our most advanced science lab to you.Then a discussion will be held,which may cover such topics as school life,cultural difference,aiming to im- prove mutual understanding.At noon,we will have a get-to- gether in our school's dining hall.To let you know more about our traditional customs and culture,we will prepare dumplings and noodles as main food.In the afternoon,you together with some of our students representatives are going to visit the Haihe River and enjoy the beautiful scenery there. After that,you will end your visit to our school. What do you think of the plan?Can you give me some advice on how to make your visit to our school more interest- ing and impressive? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 17 【范文选登】 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.If you come,you can choose three of the following four courses:Speaking, Writing,Britain Today and America Today,and teach 12 hours a week.The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experi- ence.Besides teaching,you will also work as an advisor to our students'English club or our school's English news- paper. Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions.I'd be more than happy to help. Best, Li Hua Writing 18 【范文选登】 English Advisor Wanted The Student Union of our school decides to invite an in- ternational student to work as an English study advisor next term.The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English,answering their ques- 。1 tions,and helping organize activities such as singing English songs,English evenings,or lectures on interesting topics. The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred.The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week. If you are interested,please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview. Student Union, Yucai High School Writing 19 【范文选登】 I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago,when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class.The teacher spoke English throughout the class,which was totally differ- ent from the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day,the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students.After listening to me for a while,she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much.The smile shone on the whole day and the following days.A week later,I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class. Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class,I began to be confident. Writing 20 【范文选登】 Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week"for what she did for our class.On the hot after- noon of last Saturday,Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another,looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest.While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms,she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting.Finally, she found the right clothes.Deeply moved by her efforts,we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class.Besides,she often devotes her spare time to helping others.She has set a good example for us.Therefore,she de- 3 serves the honor and we should learn from her. Writing 21 【范文选登】 As is shown in the picture,more than one primary student is eagerly putting up their hands to answer the ques- tions,wearing smiles on their faces.Definitely,they are de- lighted and hot curious in class.Even one student is looking out of the classroom at ease. Actually,I as well as my classmates did so as they are doing when in the primary school.However,if some students made mistakes in answer,teachers could give us criticism or unconcern instead of more encouragement.Grad- ually,we came to lose interest in study and become silent, not willing to answer the questions actively.What's worse, we were all afraid of meeting teachers face to face. In my view,the basic reason is that there exist different teaching methods at home and abroad.It's a pity that Chinese teachers pay more attention to imparting knowledge than concerning students'ideas.Therefore,it's time for our teachers to change it. Writing 22 【范文选登】 Magic Power of Polite Words With the development of our society,more and more polite words are used every day,such as“please?”,“sorry” and“thank you”. Why do these polite words have such great influence? First of all,the speaker who says these words shows his re- spect to the listener.In return,the listener will respect oth- ers.Besides,saying the words shows whether he/she had good qualities and it will leave a good impression on others as well. In that case,how can we improve our qualities?Firstly, we should form the good habit of saying polite words.Sec- ondly,we ought to be considerate towards others. As far as I am concerned,if all of us try our best to say polite words,we can create a better place to live in. Writing 23 【范文选登】 Dear Sue, I'm Li Hua,one of your students in China.Almost a 。1 month has passed since you went back to America.In the past year,we all had a good time together.And your pro- found knowledge of various fields made my classmates and I benefit a great deal.More over,my misunderstanding of A- merica and Americans were cleared up during our communi- cation.I'm here to show thanks to you on behalf of all my classmates. In addition,you said you wanted to learn how things went in the class after you left.Well,recently we did the vol- unteering work in order to protect environment which you always mentioned and we really learned a lot from this work.Besides, we are all busy doing exercises since we are facing the college ex- amination now.You know,it's quite important to us. And I'd like to know how is everything with you.Loo- king forward to your reply. All the best, Li Hua B组 题源1书面表达命题规律及写作要求 Writing 1 【范文选登】 Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1,a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps,but in vain,while Picture 2 shows a couple hap- pily planting trees. The message conveyed here is clear:"Actions speak lou- der than words."Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it?The answer is definitely the later.Immediate ac- tions should be taken,like stopping cutting down trees,to better the environment. Actions are important in other fields,too.Instead of shouting empty slogans,it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules,stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a differ- ence in whatever we hope to accomplish. Writing 2 【范文选登】 I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree.Though I know Mum is the most important person in my world,I just cannot do what she likes me to do.It seems that I quite often stay away from my dear mum by playing my phone,sleeping,hanging out with my friends or just shutting out my mum in my room. Having read about the above common complaint from the mother,I feel ashamed and guilty.From now on,I shall try my best to stay with my dear parents as often as possible. We young generation must realize that our parents care for us as well as hope to share what we have been doing with them. Writing 3 【范文选登】 I think the white pencil,looking proud and delighted,is laughing at the black pencil by saying "You're nearing the end!"The black pencil,on the other hand,remains calm. The white pencil's words let him fall into deep thoughts.He clearly remembers he has been used to write and draw.It's true that he's approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment. In reality,we should learn from the black pencil:not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done. Writing 4 【范文选登】 Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I found the teachers patient and considerate.Be- sides,I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best of it.I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available.Soon,I became one of the top students in my class,which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. Writing 5 【范文选登】 In the picture,there stands a tree full of fruit on one 。1 side of the stream.Across the stream,a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net at- tached to a pole.Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit. The message conveyed in the picture is clear.In pursuing a dream,we might focus on only one way of making it come true,forgetting that there may be alterna- tives.As indicated in the picture,if the man is willing to look for other possibilities,he can find a better and more reward- ing way to achieve his goal.All he has to do is to turn a- round,cross the bridge and walk to the tree. Writing 6 【范文选登】 The book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother written by Amy Chua,a Chinese American,who is a professor in Yale University,was published in 2010.The book is about how the author educated her two daughters with Chinese tradi- tional mode,which brought about discussion about which is better between Chinese education mode and American educa- tion mode.In early 2011,the book came onto the market in China.Contrary to people's expectations,most of the Chinese mothers are not in favor of the author's way she edu- cated children.However,according to the latest news,her elder daughter has been admitted into Yale University as well as Harvard University. Writing 7 【范文选登】 Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning.I'm Li Hua from Fujian,China.It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global wa- ter shortage and ways of dealing with it. As we know,the global water shortage is becoming in- creasingly severe mainly due to global warming,environ- mental pollution and the ever-increasing population.There- fore,it's high time we do something about it. Firstly,an effective way,I think,is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use.Secondly,new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources,for ex- ample,turning sea water into fresh water.Thirdly,we must stop water pollution by law.Last but not least,it's everyone's responsibility to make good use of water,such as 5 recycling and saving water in our daily life. In conclusion,people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage,protect the present water resources. That's all.Thank you. Writing 8 【范文选登】 My country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st,2011.The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking.There are 350 million people smoking recently,in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent.Because of these smokers,about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second-hand smoke. 题源2书面表达题型分析 Writing 1 【范文选登】 My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments. One day,when we learned the new word "eccentric"in class,we were asked to make a sentence with it.I volunteered to do it by saying "My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him."Hearing this,the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate's face turned red. After class,I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn't been helped by others.My mindless words must have hurt him deeply. Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative.We should avoid hurting others if we can't always be encouraging when we speak. Writing 2 【范文选登】 Last week,a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two. The players from both sides are all excellent basketball players,so the match went on fiercely at first.At last the re- sult is:the winner is Class Two,and we were the loser. We didn't win the match,but we didn't lose heart.On the one hand,we think that friendship comes first,and 。1 match comes second.On the other hand,since we all tried our best,we had no regret.In our life we may meet many failures,as long as we try our best,there's no need feeling regret for these failures.What's more,we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for the next time. In a word,success is important,so is failure,because it's the mother of success. Writing 3 【范文选登】 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.As we all know,good learning habits can make your study go to succeed.As students,we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study. I'm sure"repeat"is the best habit.Do you develop the habit?If we want to improve our study,we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again,and then we can un- derstand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master.How to develop the habit?The first step,set a timetable,and stick to carry out the plan,don't stop. When I do my homework,I often make mistakes with carelessness,how to overcome the shortage?I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little.Maybe in this way I can cor- rect my mistakes. Writing 4 【范文选登】 One Thing I'm Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school,I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skillful they were,I was determined to be just as good.Later on,I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud of this experience,because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb“Practice makes perfect..” Writing 5 【范文选登】 Good afternoon,everyone. Welcome to our school!High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science.It was not an easy choice for me to make.After careful consideration,though,I decided on science as my main subject of study. First,science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China.Second,the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.Third,my par- ents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student.Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model,whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision. It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice. Thanks! Writing 6 【范文选登】 One day I received an invitation from another school to give a speech on how to learn English well,I was extremely happy and accepted it.I got ready for the speech,put the notes in my bag and went there by bus.While on the bus I dis- covered the notes and my ID card were missing.I was very wor- ried,but I knew the bus wouldn't stop for me to look for the lost things at the moment.On seeing the documents at the bus station,a cleaner picked them up and found my phone number inside.She thought I must have been worried about it.So she called me,hurried to take a taxi,and sent them to me as soon as possible.Happily and surprisedly,I regained the lost items.Thanks to the cleaner's kindness,my speech was so successful that everyone cheered for me.I was very grateful to the cleaner.From the experience,I have learned that honesty is the best policy.Only in this way will our soci- ety be more harmonious and hopefuL Writing 7 【范文选登】 As a high school student,I consider English a very im- portant subject.In order to learn it well,apart from English class,I take an active part in the English corner and other after-class English activities,which benefit me a lot. In the English corner,I meet many friends,who share the same interest with me.Besides,sometimes,some for- eigners are glad to join us.By talking with them,my oral ·1 English improves a lot.I also find it useful to keep English diaries.I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English.As a saying goes,"Practice makes perfect."Only by practice will we make more progress.Finally,some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement, for example,Enjoy Reading.Through these websites,I can read some classic English passages,poems and stories. What's more,I can learn some learning skills and methodol- ogies,which play an important part in my study process. All in all,every road leads to Rome,but I believe hard work pays off. Writing 8 【范文选登】 Allan Stewart,of Australian nationality,was born on March 7,1915.He got his first degree in 1936 and then his second degree of Doctor of Medicine.He believed that one is never too old to challenge himself.Therefore,in his eighties, he decided to study law,and in 2006 he set a world record for becoming the oldest person to get a master's degree.Because he was so good at arranging his study time,he got praise from his teacher,and in 2012 he managed to get his fourth degree by network learning. Writing 9 【范文选登】 Saturday,June 2 Fine This morning,when I was walking on the street,I saw that two travelers were reading a map,looking puzzled.It seemed they were lost.I went up to them and asked how I could help.They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven.I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20,which could take them there direct- ly.They appreciated my help greatly.Before long,the bus came.We waved good-bye to each other.Seeing them on the bus.I felt a kind of satisfaction. Writing 10 【范文选登】 Hi,Tiger Mom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades is an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude will never be ignored.There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected.The reason is of- ten that the pressure from their parents allow them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. So I suggest that you take your friends'advice.More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do. Writing 11 【范文选登】 My Approach to Difficulties in Learning As high school students,we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning.Everyone has their own way to deal with them.Here I would like to share mine. When I am faced with a difficulty,I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages.In this way,I cannot only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself. However,when it is something beyond my competence, I turn to my classmates or teachers for help.Sometimes,I also ask my parents for advice.As a result,I have made steady progress in my studies. Writing 12 【范文选登】 After-class Activities Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our school,there are various kinds of activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge,they also free me from the heavy work of study. Here I have some suggestions.To students,you'd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework. ·1 Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class ac- tivities,which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning. Writing 13 【范文选登】 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom.Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work,the girl helps to re- move the bag from her shoulder.In response,the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.But,totally en- gaged in my own study,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels,and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing,bedroom cleaning,or at least prepare breakfast myself,so as to share mother's daily burden.The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a“good”student. Writing 14 【范文选登】 Great Changes I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years. On May 12th,2008,a severe earthquake destroyed al- most everything in the school,leaving badly-damaged build- ings.It is now,however,taking on a new look.Tall buildings have been put up,including classrooms and labora- tory buildings,and a library.There is almost a newly-built standard playground.In the new environment,teachers and students are living happily and working hard.It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school,full of life. Obviously,without the help of the whole society,there would be no new school today.It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes.Many hands make light work.We can work wonders if we unite as a family,ca- ring for each other and helping those in need.Unity is strength. Writing 15 【范文选登】 As is illustrated in the picture,one drop of water doesn't make a sea;one tree does not make a forest;one person does not make a society.It tells us that in our society two heads are better than one and unity is strength. Nowadays,there are still many poor students.They can not afford to go to school.Luckily,many people and organi- zations donate a lot of money to help them receive college ed- ucation smoothly.In a word,we should offer our help and love to the persons in need.I believe that if everyone of us can give help and love to others,the relationship among peo- ple will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in. Writing 16 【范文选登】 Sam was very happy when he first got to the boarding school,but soon he became homesick.He couldn't concen- trate on his lessons and became angry and lonely.He even thought his parents hated him. The feeling of homesickness is really unhappy.I once had such feeling when I was twelve years old.That summer, I attended a summer camp which lasted fifteen days and was held in Beijing.It was the first time that I had left my par- ents.After I had been there for three days.I became home- sick.Just as Sam did,I could not attend the activity actively, felt lonely and fell ill.All I could think of was being at home with my family.Soon my friends found my problem.They held a party for me and sang songs and my teacher gave me much help,so I overcame my homesickness.From then on, I become mature.I will try my best to help those who are homesick. Writing 17 【范文选登】 Which would you give up:TV,cell or Web? We are now living in an information age,in which TV, cell and the Web are widely used.It seems that many people ·1 cannot enjoy themselves without them. However,if I had to give up one of them,I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Inter- net.I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there're too many commercial ads.Besides,most pro- grams on TV are also available elsewhere. As for cells and the Web,they are more necessary to me.I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet. Writing 18 【范文选登】 Dear students, I am very glad to introduce our club which is named "English Corner"to you.It was set up about two months ago.Its fascinating and interesting activities have attracted a lot of us to take part.This club aims to part in communication in our daily life.Besides,in this club you can listen to many English songs,hear many interesting stories told by foreigners we invited face to face.Therefore,it's a good idea to join our club to improve your spoken English. Eventually,I am looking forward to your joining us. Thank you for your attention! Writing 19 【范文选登】 Good morning,everyone! The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up” As a child,I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.Now I'm a grown-up,but I find things do not go as I expected.Although I can enjoy more freedom,at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this,but also more responsibilities.I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more mean- ingful.To reach the goal,I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university. Thank you for listening. 19第五模块 书面表达 专题十七书面表达 考纲题型解读 写作能力是高中英语教育培养学生的重要语言技能之一，根据《英语课程标准》对九级语言技能目标一一写作能力的描述， 要求通过所掌握的2000个词汇和400~500个习惯用语或固定搭配的用法能够掌握描述时间、地点和方位的表达方式；能够理 解并掌握比较人，物体及事物的表达方式；能够使用恰当的语言形式进行描述和表达观点、态度和情感等；能够掌握常见语篇形 式的基本篇章结构和逻辑关系：能够逐步接触和了解较为复杂的语言现象，对较复杂的语言现象具有一定的归纳、分析和解释 的能力。 1.高考英语试题中书面表达与语文命题作文不同，它是一种指导式作文。它不允许考生自主立意，无需漫无边际地发挥。 在写作前有文字说明、表格或图画(1~6幅不等)提示，有词数(100词左右)限制（超出范围或达不到要求的扣分）。 2.该题型主要考查考生交际能力和语言综合运用能力。这就要求考生在写作时，不仅要语法正确、词汇准确，还要使选用 的语言与具体的情景、时间、地点、身份相符，达到交际目的。高考作文所涉及内容完全可以用中学知识准确表达。 3.提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等，情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等。 十年高考母题题源揭秘 题源1 书面表达命题规律及写作要求 语言使用不当有 湖北 不限 开放 25 时很伤人 1,2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试书面表达考点 江苏 议论文 行动比话语更有力 图画 25 分布一览表 湖南 记叙文 描述自己或他人的经历 提纲 项目 体裁 题材 命题形式分值 山东 书信 假期的打算 提纲 呢 地区 四川 报刊稿件 学习习惯问颗 提纲 35 陕西 记叙文 写一篇做家务周记 提纲 30 参选英语俱乐部 新课标I 书信 告知去机场接机 提纲 25 天津 发言稿 提纲 25 副主席 辽宁 网站征稿 介绍中秋节及其活动 提纲 25 江西 校刊稿件 报道登山活动 提纲 福建 议论文 孩子的成长和教育 图画 25 浙江 记叙文 我自家的一件事 开放 25 征文“讲求文明， 安微 记叙文 提纲 25 从我做起” 2.新课标对高三学生的写作要求 (1)能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要。 记叙文 照顾生病的妈妈 图画 20 北京 (2)能根据文宇及图表提供的信息写短文或报告 议论文 理想与现实 图画 15 (3)能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观 不限 家人关系疏远 开放 15 重庆 点、态度。 书信 人类活动对江豚的影响 提纲 20 (4)能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。 大纲 书信 介绍中国结 提纲 25 3.新课标对高三学生的写作评价标准 新课标Ⅱ 对学生的作文主要从内容要点、语言使用效果、结构和连贯 校刊稿件 银民火星快讯 提纲 15 广东 性，格式和语域以及与目标读者的交流五个方面进行评价。下 议论文 对工作的认识和态度 开放 25 面是新课标提供的五档分类标准： ·296· 很好地完成了试题规定的任务； 按要求写出了内容要点； 要点全面。在提示说明中，有时把情节信息一、二、三、四 逐个列出，当然一目了然，但有时不一定交代得很具体，只 语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富： 第五档 语言错误极少； 给了大致轮廓，这就要求我们自己思考确定，逐条列出，这 有效采用不同的衔接手段，层次清楚； 样写作时不致漏掉信息点。特别是写由几幅图画组成的 格式和语域恰当： 短文时更需要动脑筋，通过现象抓本质，确定每幅画的信 完全达到了与目标读者交流的目的 息点，做到结构完整。上下文的连贯性也是考纲要求的重 较好地完成了试题规定的任务： 点内容之一，要造当地运用一些关联词语，做到逻辑性强， 包含基本内容要点，允许漏掉一到两个次要点； 衔接自然。 使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇； 3.语言无误要规范。所谓语言无误，包括两层意思： 语言较为准确，只在试图表达较复杂意义时才出现个别 一是用词准确，能充分表达原意；二是语法规范，符合英语 第四档 错误； 习惯。写出来的句子，读起来语感正常，不牵强附会，不生 采用了较适当的衔接手段，层次清楚； 搬硬套，通篇读完，有英语味道。纵使达不到native 格式与语域恰当： speakers的写作水平，但起码得让人家觉得acceptable。我 达到了与目标读者交流的目的 们写作中最大的毛病是Chinglish(汉语式英语)，既糟蹋了 基本完成了试题规定的任务： 英语，又曲解了汉语。 包含多数内容要点，可能漏掉一些内容； (二)四大步骤 应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务要求： 高考英语作文完美行文四大步骤是： 第三档 有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解； STEP1:确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开 采用简单的衔接手段，内容较连贯，层次较清楚： 方式、开头、结尾等。 格式与语域基本合理； STEP2:确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间、地点、 基本达到了与目标读者交流的目的 重要细节、合理发挥等。 未按要求完成试题规定的任务； STEP3:正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。 漏掉或未能有效写出一些内容要点，或写了一些无关内容； STEP4:检查全文，主要检查语法以及粗心犯下的 语法结构单调，未能满足表达需求； 错误。 第二档 有较多语法结构及词汇错误，影响了对内容的表达： (三)七项原则 未采用合适的衔接手段，内容缺少连贯性，层次不清楚； 高分英语作文往往需要遵循以下“七项基本原则”： 格式与语域不恰当： 1.长短句原则 未能清楚地与目标读者交流 在行文中，若能做到长短句结合，使文章抑扬顿挫，无 未能按要求完成试题规定的任务； 疑会增添作文的色彩。如果我们把短句放在段首或者段 基本未写出主要内容，且有一些不相关的内容； 末，这样可以揭示主题，使读者一目了然。在文章主体部 语法结构及词汇使用单调、重复； 分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点 语法错误很多，运用能力差，妨碍了对内容的表达； 的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，这样定会让主体部分妙 第一档 未使用基本的衔接手段，内容不连贯，缺少组织，层次不 笔生辉！ 清楚； 2.主题句原则 基本无格式与语域概念； 一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者 未能向目标读者传达有效信息 结尾，让读者一目了然。 所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价，内容与写作任务 3.行文连贯原则 0分 无关或无法辨认 巧妙地运用关联词语，使上下文衔接自然，一气呵成 无疑是文章的亮点之一。在文章中若有第一点、第二点、 解题模型 第三点等字样，这样会显得条理清楚，考官们看文章也必 然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构 写作原则及技巧 清楚，条理自然。要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会 英语作文的写作技巧有很多，我们只要做到以下三项 正确使用连接词。如：表示转折关系的有：but,however, 注意、四大步骤、七项原则就足够了。 while,though,or,otherwise,on the contrary,on the (一)三项注意 other hand,in contrast,despite,in spite of,even though, 1.切中题意显重点。切题与表达是不可分割的统一 except(for),instead,of course,after all;表示并列关系的 体，内容不切题，再好的表达也无济于事。其中，审题是做 到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的 :or,and,also,too,not only...but also,as well as, 中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。 both..and,either..or,neither..nor;表示条件关系的有： 2.信息完整上下连。这里的信息，就是书面表达所提 as(so)long as,on condition that,,if,unless;表示让步关系 供的内容要点，这是短文的核心部分。作文一般根据要点 的有：though,although,as,even if,even though,whether., 和语言两方面判分，所以既要做到不离主题，也要做到表达 or...,however,whoever,whatever,whichever, 297 At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite wherever,whenever,no matter how/who/what/which/ surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother where/when/whom;表示举例的有：for example,for in- gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I stance,such as.,take..for example等。 was,I never felt so happy. 4.短语优先原则 [真题2](2023·福建) 写作时，尤其是在考试时，使用短语有两个好处：其 假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的 一，用短语会为文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章 太筒单，看不到一个自己中意的短语，必然会把你的作文 所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。 判低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你 内容要求： 的文章定会得高分了。其二，关键时刻思雏短路，只有凑 1.描述漫画内容； 字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！ 2.发表个人感想。 5.多实少虚原则 原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不 要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。这里 所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说“很好” 啊， 多美的景色！ 的时候，不应该只说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些像 generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm- hearted之类的形象词 6.多变句式原则 并列、转折、因果、排比等句式的运用，简单句、复合句 中勿丢 的穿插，倒装句、强调句的点缀等都是句式多变的好方法。 垃圾！ 7.挑战极限原则 高级词江、独立主格、非谓语动词和三大从句的灵活 注意： 运用，也是高分作文的亮点之一。 1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数； [真题1](2023·陕西) 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述 3.词数120左右： 你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。 4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 写作要点：1.做家务的理由； 参考词汇：告示牌sgn Mind Your Behavior in Public Places 2做家务的过程； 3.你的感受。 Last Sunday,I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy 注意：1.短文词数不少于100： Lake Park. 2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数： 3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 I am an 18-year-old middle school student. [答案] Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday,I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy [答案] Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, I am an 18-year-old middle school student.I have been busy with the sun shining and birds singing.When I was enjoying the with my study and seldom helped my parents with the fantastic scenery around,something unpleasant caught my eye. housework.Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about A young couple in a boat were eating,talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.What's what to do to help. worse,they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake,totally Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I sud- ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering"nearby.What a denly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books,newspapers and other things shame! Such behavior left me deep in thought.If all visitors to the scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did,the lake will be severely floors. polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can ·298· we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. 问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： [真题3](2023·浙江) 李明：高个于，戴眼镜 你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名 航班号：CA985 言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句于：“Your 到达：8月6日上午11：30 future depends on many things,but mostly on you.”请按下列要 注意： 求用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文： 1.词数100左右： 1,针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 2.举例说明理由。 3.开头语和介绍语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, 注意：短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数） How are you doing? In the English Reading Week,one of my classmates recom- mended a quote to us,which goes like this:"Your future depends on many things,but mostly on you." Looking forward to your reply. [答案] Yours, In the English Reading Week,one of my classmates recom- Li Hua mended a quote to us,which goes like this:"Your future [答案] depends on many things,but mostly on you."I can't agree more Dear Peter, with this view.It's true that our future is determined by many How are you doing? things,such as opportunities and help from others,but our own I'm writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to attitude,determination,and hard work play a more important your city for a conference,and I've asked him to bring you the role.In other words,we are the master of our own future. Chinese painting you've asked for before. Take Abraham Lincoln,for example.He was born in a poor Also,I'd like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet family,and only received a limited education in his childhood. my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his Yet through his painstaking efforts,he changed not only his own first visit to the U.S.？Thank you in advance！ fate but also the history of America.Even to this day,Lincoln is His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am, regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world.There- August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses.And he will fore,I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands. be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. 题源2 书面表达题型分析 Yours, Li Hua 解题模型2.1 解题模型2.2 书面表达——提纲类 提纲类写作中有较多的文字说明，规定了考生表述的 书面表达—图表类 思路，对写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要 从图表作文的内容和要求来看，主要是介绍或说明某 ,点一个也不能回避。由于这类试题包括较多的文字说明， 方面的情况，文体上属于说明文。因此，考生应按照说明 考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译。 文的形式和特点来进行写作。 答题策略 答题策略 1.首先要认真阅读前面的提示，把握准情景和要求。 1,首先要根据图表前的文字说明，弄清图表的性质。 2.根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。3.充分发挥自己 2.仔细阅读图表，了解图表的内容。3.研究图表所显示出 的思雏想象力，采用不同的表达方式将试题要求的要点完 来的规律，要对图表里面的内容进行抽象概括。通过分析 整地表述出来，力求准确、简洁、礼貌、规范。最后，进行合 与对比，抓住问题，便可以开拓思路，构思文章的布局、段 理的总结。 落的划分及上下文的连贯等。段落的划分可根据内容而 定。一般第一段应对图表作简要的概述，点出所要涉及的 [真题4](2023·新课标1) 问题；中间段落应对图表的重要问题进行分析；结尾段对 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你的叔叔 全文做一小结。 李明将去他所在的城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询 ·299 [真题5](2023·江苏) [真题6](2023·福建) 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时 孩于的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、 发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用 孩于过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用 英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens'”专栏投稿。 英文写一篇短文。 简要描述事情的经过 打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等 1.遇事不够冷静 分析发生冲突的原因 2.…… (请考生根据自已的经历或感 谈谈避免冲突的做法 想，提出至少两种做法) 注意： 1,对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2.词数150左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。 3.作文不得提及考生的任何信息，如校名、人名。 内容要求：1.描述漫画内容： Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. 2.分析漫画所揭示的问题： 3.提出你的看法。 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3.词数120左右： 4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇：pave the way [答案] From the picture,we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.During the basketball game yesterday afternoon,Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other,trying to catch the ball.Then they star- ted shouting and yelling,and it turned into a horrible quarrel. To be honest,it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame-they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.They cared too much about winning and losing.As a matter of fact,bloc- king,pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. To avoid such conflicts,we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoy a harmonious life.It is also a virtue to [答案] forgive and forget,especially in such a competitive and stressful From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a society.Instead of blaming each other,we should communicate long red carpet.The son,well dressed,waves proudly in the more and put ourselves in others'place. middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate.We must and the mother in front rolls out the carpet,sweating. learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are 解题模型2.3 the focus of families,shouldering the hope of their parents.Par- ents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to 书面表达—图画类 pave the way for their success.As a consequence,children 近儿年来，看图作文在高考书面表达中占有相当大的 become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent 比例。它是一种检查观察理解能力及运用语言能力的题 thought or creative ideas. 型。它不仅考查考生对图形的观察力和想象力，而且也考 查考生的分析、概括和组织材料的能力。想象空间大，因 Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion,overpro- tection and too much care are extremely bad for children's devel- 此难度也大。 opment.Instead of doing everything for them,parents should 答题策略 encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them 针对此类题型，考生应仔细阅读图画及文字说明。 to develop by themselves.Only in this way can they grow up to 1.确定文章体裁。2.确定人称。3.确定时态。4.发 be independent and become truly successful. 挥想象要合理、适度。5，虚实结合，详略得当。 300· 解题模型2.4 书面表达一开放类 开放式作文只给出主题，也就是说只告诉你将要发生 什么事情，至于事情发生的过程、结果则完全由考生自己 去发挥，考生的思维完全可以发散。 答题策略 1.明确主题。开放式作文的答题思路与语文作文思 路有一定程度的类似。在动笔前，一定要先明确主题，先 写什么，后写什么，突出什么，层次要分明。对于短文的脉 络要一清二楚。2.有思想性。开放式作文虽然思维发散 空间很大，但有一点必须九九归一，即有思想性。3.尽可 能使用较高级词汇和复杂语法结构。开放作文虽然只有 区区50个左右的词，但更要使用较高级词汇和复杂结构， 这样更能彰显你的“英雄”本色。 [答案] I think the picture is telling us that there is usually a differ- [真题7](2023·北京) ence between one's dream and reality.People need to learn to 请根据下面提示。写一篇作文。词数不少于50。 face it.Everyone has his dream.However,it is not so easy for You are discussing the following people to realize their dreams every time.Just like the man in the picture with your English friend Jim picture,instead of the big fish he wishes for,he actually catches Now you are telling him how you un- a small one.In my opinion,people need to learn to accept the re- derstand the picture and what makes ality and keep on trying.With another try,they may gain what you think so. they dream of. 十年高考母题原型训练 A组 题源1书面表达命题规律及写作要求 Writing2(2023·江西) Writing1(2023·北京) 星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活 假设你是红星中学高三(])班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅 动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。 图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生 内容包括： 病，你照顾她的过程 1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain): 2.活动的过程； 3.你对这次活动的评论。 注意：1.词数120左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好： 2.词数不少于60。 Last Monday, Writing3(2023·陕西) 假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织 的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角” 版面写一篇短文。 ·301· Writing5(2023·山东) 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。 七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech con- tst),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下 要点给Tom写一封电于邮件： 1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 写作要点： 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 1.活动的策划： 3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 2.教室的布置： 注意：1.词数：120~150： 3.活动的内容： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4.你的感想。 注意： 1.短文词数不少于100； 2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数； 3.可根据情况增减细节，详略得当； 4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Ms.Li,our English teacher,must have found it strange on Teachers'Day:she did not receive a single greeting card from us Writing6(2023·江西) students.She would have never thought a complete surprise was 假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicy waiting for her. cles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题： 2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活(Iow-carbon life);节能(energy-saving) 注意： 1.词数：120词左右； 2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 Good morning,everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of Writing4(2023·北京) my speech is“Let's Ride Bicycles'”. 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图表述了 近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校 刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，词数不少于60。 Thank you！ Vriting7(2022·天津) 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学 生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此 活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信： ·对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等） ·个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等） ·你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等） 注意： 1.词数不少于100； ·302· 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： Writing10(2022·北京) 晨曦希望小学Chenxi Hope School 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时 Dear Sir or Madam, 间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先 I am Li Hua from Class One,Senior Two. 后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叔述你从准备到送行的全过程。 注意：1.周记的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 2.词数不少于60。 宾馆 火车票！ 天气！ 售票处 Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing8(2022·北京) 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 北戴河 In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and ex- Last weekend,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip plain how you understand it. to Beidaihe. 00 题源2书面表达题型分析 Vriting1(2023·辽宁) 一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介 绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。 写作要点： 1.它是中国的传统节日之一： 2.家人团聚； 3.赏月、吃月饼： 4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。 注意： Writing9(2022·山东) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋 1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以 下要点用英语给他写一封电于邮件： 3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：中秋节the Mid-Autumn Festival农历 lunar 1.表示歉意； calendar赏月enjoy the full moon月饼moon cake 2.解释原因： The Mid-Autumn Festival 3.另约时间。 The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth 注意：1，词数：120~150： month of our Chinese lunar calendar. 2.可适当增加细节。 303· Writing2(2023·安微) Dear Tom, 假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的 How are you doing? 征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语 短文。 内容主要包括： 1.遵守交通法规： 2.注意举止文明。 注意：1.词数120左右： Vriting5(2023·山东) 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息： 给你发电于邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未 4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数」 能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： On the Way to School 1.未及时回信的原因； 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。 注意：1.词数：120~150： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Writing3(2023·重庆) 调查显示，中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响 而濒临灭绝，目前总数不足100只。假设你是李华，现请用英文 给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注这一状 Vriting6(2023·新课标) 况并提供帮助。内容应包括： 假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中 ·说明写信目的 学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参 ●简述江豚现状 加。请写一封电于邮件申请参加。 ●希望WWF如何帮助（比如资助江豚保护项目等） 内容主要包括： ·表示感谢并期望回复 1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）： 注意：1.词数不少于80： 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）： 2.在答题卡上作答； 3.希望获准。 3.书信格式及开头语已给出（不计入总词数）。 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a student from Chongqing,China. Writing7(2023·大纲) 假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你 Yours sincerely, 写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： Li Hua 1.时间：周五晚8点至9点： Writing4(2023·大纲/新课标Ⅱ) 2.地点：学生俱乐部； 假定你是李华，自制一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店 3.内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等； 的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖。 4.要求：准备小礼物。 要点包括： 1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）： 2.象征意义： 3.价格。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： Vriting8(2023·江西) 3.开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动，你 ·304· 打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文： Vriting11(2023·新课标) 1.你为什么喜欢读书？ 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些 2,你喜欢哪一类的书（例如：历史、科学、文学等）？请给出 困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学 至少两个理由。 校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 注意：词数120左右。 1.本人简介： 2.求助内容； 3.约定时间； 4.你的联系方式(E-mail:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678)。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头、结尾已为你写好。 Writing9(2023·四川) Dear Sir/Madam, 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师 MsLⅰ希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请 按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。 1.对英语学习的认识； 2.自己目前的英语水平： 3.自已英语学习存在的主要问题； 4.对英语教学的两点建议。 Look forward to your reply. 注意： Yours, 1.词数100左右： Li Hua 2.信的开头和结尾已给出。 Writing12(2023·辽宁) Dear Ms Li, 假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从 I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher. 报纸上得知B&.B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请 给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点： 1.年龄； 2.学习情况及英语水平； 3.兴趣和特长； 4,性格特点。 Thank you! 注意：1.词数100左右： Li Hua 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Writing10(2023·辽宁) 假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写 一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括： 优点：1.话题广泛； 2.图片丰富： 3.有助于提高学习兴趣。 建议：适当降低词汇难度。 注意：1.词数100左右： Writing13(2023·浙江) 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(t© 3.开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。 scribble)和乱丢垃圾(to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封 Dear Editor, 100~120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容： As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English 1.说明写信目的； textbooks published by your house. 2.对这些行为进行批评： 3.提出建议。 注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。 June8,2011 Dear Mr.Headmaster, I am Li Yue,a student from Class 1,Senior II. 305 Writing16(2023·天津) 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日 接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排 其在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队 Smith先生写一封电于邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最 Yours faithfully, 后征求对方意见。内容要点如下： Li Yue 1.上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）： Writing14(2023·全国卷Ⅱ) 2.中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺于、面条等）： 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年 3.下午与我校学生游览海河。 之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主 注意：1.词数不少于100： 要包括： 2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯： 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者： 3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.赞赏该报优点： 参考词汇：海河the Haihe River 1)兼顾国内外新闻： Dear Mr.Smith: 2)介绍名人成功故事。 I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union,from Chen- 3.提出建议： guang High School. 刊登指导英语学习的文章。 注意： 1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror Yours sincerely, Li Hua Vriting17(2022·全国卷Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教 书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主 要包括： Sincerely yours 1.教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 Li Hua 2.授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） Writing15(2022·重庆) 3.工作量： 假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航 一一每周12学时，任选三门课 班(flight number BA793)回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱(suit -一担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor) case)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。 注意： 信件要点包括： 1.词数100左右： ·陈述写信原因 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： ·简要描述该行李 3.开头语已为你写好 。说明其重要性 Dear Peter, ●期待回复并表示感谢 I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in 注意： China. 词数100左右。 Dear Sir/Madam, Best, Li Hua Writing18(2022·辽宁) Yours truly, 你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问，请你以短 Li Hua 文形式写一则招聘启事。 ·306· 内容主要包括： Vriting21(2022·上海) 1.母语是英语，汉语流利者优先： Directions:Write an English com position in 120~150 words 2.解答英语学习问题，协助组织英语活动： according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 3.每周4小时，报酬面议； 下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，作出 4.联系人：李华(Tel:13011223344)。 比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括： 注意：1.词数100左右； ●描述图片里学生上课的场景： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： ·比较你同时期的上课情况； 3.启事标题和结尾已为你写好。 ·简单谈谈你的感受。 English Advisor Wanted Student Union, Yucai High School Writing19(2022·湖北) 请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇 短文，谈谈微笑的作用。 The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile.A smile can help us get through difficult situa- tions and find friends in a world of strangers.A smile can open Writing22(2022·江西) doors and tear down walls. 英语中“please'”“thank you'”“sorry'”等礼貌用语具有增进友 注意：1，无须写标题； 谊、改善关系、化解矛盾等神奇的力量，因而被称为“magic 2.内容只需涉及一个方面； words”。请以“Magic Power of Polite Words”为题写一篇l00词 3.词数为100左右。 左右的英语作文。体裁不限（叙述文、议论文、说明文…）。 Writing20(2022·浙江) Vriting23(2022·陕西) 最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事 假定你是李华，你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流 迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气的炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服 协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Su© 装)，用英语为班级板报写一篇100~120词的短文。 Wod。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给 你的文章应包括下列要点： Sue写封电于邮件 1.李越的事迹及其对同学的影响； 写作要点： 2.你的评论。 1.对她表达感谢之意； 注意：1.文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。 2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情； 2.参考词汇：singing contest歌咏比赛costume服装 3.希望了解她的近况。 Star Student of the Week 要求： Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the 1.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）： Week"for what she did for our class. 2.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯； 3.书写须清晰、工整； 4.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。 Dear Sue, I'm Li Hua,one of your students in China. 307 Vriting3(2023·北京) 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim.Now you are telling him how you understand the pic- ture and what makes you think so. All the best, You're nearing the end! Li Hua B组 题源1书面表达命题规律及写作要求 Writing1(2023·江苏) 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words'”为题，用英语写一篇作文。 HAPPY EARTH DAY! 1 2 参考词汇：banner(横幅)stump(树桩) Writing4(2023·湖北) 你的作文应包括以下内容： 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 1.简要描述两幅图的内容： You cannot choose what you are given,but you can choose how 2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解； you make use of it. 3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意：1.无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 注意： 2.除诗歌外，文体不限； 1.可参照图片适当发挥： 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2.作文词数150左右； 4.词数为120左右。 3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、 人名等。 Actions Speak Louder than Words Writing5(2023·北京) 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the Writing2(2023·重庆) 请结合材料，按要求用英语写作。 following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and ex- A mother said,"My son is always on the phone,sleeping,out plain how you understand it. with his friends,or in his room.He never has time to talk to me." 要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法； 2.要紧扣材料，有明确的观点； 3.词数不少于60； 4.在答题卡上作答。 ·308· 2.开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数： 3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息： 4.词数：120左右。 参考词汇：短缺shortage;资源resource Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning.I'm Li Hua from Fujian,China.It's my Writing6(2023·广东) great honor to be here to say something about the global water 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。 shortage and ways of dealing with it. 基本信息： 1.书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 2.作者：Amy Chua,美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授 3.出版时间：2010年 4.内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事 5.效应：引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道： That's all.Thank you. 1.中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售 Writing8(2022·广东) 2.意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。 3.最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取 内容：公共场所禁烟 耶鲁：Yale哈佛：Harvard 实施时间：2011年1月1日起 【写作内容】 实施范围：全国 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括： 目标：所有室内公共场所无烟 1.图书的基本信息； 措施：张贴禁烟标志 2.图书的相关报道。 相关数据： 【写作要求】 (1)吸烟人数：约3.5亿 只能用5个句于表达全部内容。 (2)分布：男性75%；女性：25% 【评分标准】 (3)受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿 句于结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。 (4)因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年 二手烟：second-hand smoke 【写作内容】 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括： 1,禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围； 2.目标和措施； Writing7(2022·福建) 3.相关数据。 假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳 【写作要求】 大利亚参加主题为“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活动。请你以 只能用5个句于表达全部内容。 参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 global water shorta reserve water What can we do? other way (s)? ③ 题源2书面表达题型分析 Writing1(2023·湖北) 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 We all know that "sticks and stones may break our bones", 注意： but we should also be aware that words can hurt people,too. 1.根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯： 注意：1.无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 2.除诗歌外，文体不限： ·309· 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称： One Thing I'm Proud of 4.词数为120左右。 Vriting5(2023·安徽) Writing2(2023·湖南) 假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中 Directions:Write an English composition according to the 生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你 instructions given below. 所做的选择，并说明选择的理由 请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。 注意： match winner loser result 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 内容： 2.词数120左右： 1,自己或他人的一次经历： 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 2.你的感受。 参考词汇：文科arts;理科：science 注意： Good afternoon,everyone. 1.必须使用所给的4个关键词： Welcome to our school! 2.词数不少于120个： 3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Thanks! Vriting6(2023·湖南) Writing3(2023·四川) Directions:Write an English com position according to the 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结 instructions given below in Chinese. 合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。 生活中，你自已或他人有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历， 1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系； 其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨…请就此写一篇英语短文。 2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议； 主要内容包括：1.丢失的物品：2.物品失而复得的经过；3 3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改 你的感想。 进措施。 注意： 1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. Writing7(2023·山东) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语 竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上， 介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇 短文： 1.参加英语角的益处： Writing4(2023·浙江) 2.坚持写英语日记的作用； 请以“One Thing I'm Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100 3.英文阅读网站(Enjoy Reading)对你的帮助。 120词的短文，记述一件你自已认为得意的事情。要求如下： 1.记述事情的经过： 2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。 注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入词数。 ·310· Writing8(2023·广东) 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。 Writing10(2023·陕西) 【写作内容】 假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长 请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。 的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要 求，给这位家长回复。 姓名：Allan Stewart I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old girl.I have a rule for 国籍：澳大利亚 my daughter:be among the top 5 students or get punished in one 出生日期：1915年3月7日 way or another.She has been doing very well in school,but 世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时 some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much 年龄最大 pressure on her.Am I wrong? 学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。 写作要点： 第一个学位：1936年获得 1.表明自已的看法： 第二个学位：医学博士 2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）： 第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕 3.提出至少两条建议。 士学位。 要求： 第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安 1.短文须写在指定区域。 排学习时间，受到老师表扬。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 米硕士学位：master's degree;￥*博士：doctor 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 【写作要求】 4.书写须清晰、工整。 只能用5个句于表达全部内容。 Hi,Tiger Mom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is Writing9(2023·北京) 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，校报英文版正在 开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将 Vriting11(2023·安微) 你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。 某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience。本期话题是如何 注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。 解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in 2.词数不少于60。 Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.短文中不能出现本人的相关信息。 20呢 Writing12(2023·四川) 最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities'”的档 311 目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学 Saturday,June 2 Fine 们积极参加课外活动。 This morning, 1.你校开展课外活动的情况； 2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处： 3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议： 4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议。 311· 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名： 3.稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 After-class Activities Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. Writing13(2023·江苏) 下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根 注意：1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数； 据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。 2.可根据图片提示适当发挥： 3.词数：120左右。 Great Changes I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years. To ease the pain in her back, I removed the heavy load from mom's shoulders. 你的短文应包含以下内容： 1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等； Writing15(2023·湖南) 2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想； Directions:write an English com position according to the 3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。 instructions given below in Chinese. 注意： 假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按照要求完成一 1.可参照图中文宇及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发 篇短文： 挥想象； 1.简要描述下图内容，并点明主题； 2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数： 2.联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。 3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 注意：1.词数不少于120个； The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children. 6++ =sea -forest 国+宽= Writing14(2023·福建) 为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的 征文活动。请根据以下图片提示，以“Great Changes”为题，用英 语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下： 1.某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所以及师生 精神面貌等； 2.发生变化的原因； 3.你的感想。 ·312· Writing16(2023·广东) Which would you give up:TV,cell or Web? 阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy.He thought he would be able to go home ev- ery weekend.When he was told he would not,he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy. He was given uniforms and all other things that he would Vriting18(2022·湖南) need for the term.He started crying when it was time for his Directions:Write an English com position according to the parents to leave.He was then taken to the dorm,where he saw instructions given below in Chinese. other children happy.He tried as much as he could to fit in but 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两 could not because his mind was at home.He started feeling 个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请 homesick()and wanted to go home as soon as possible. 写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下： He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. 1,简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动： He could not concentrate in the classroom.All he could think of 2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。 was being at home with his family.He had no mobile phone or 注意：1.词数不少于120： other means to get in touch with his parents.He was angry and 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 felt lonely.He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school. 【写作内容】 1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 2.以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内 容包括： (1)时间、地点和起因； (2)想家给学习和生活带来的影响： Writing19(2022·四川) (3)你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发 【写作要求】 言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。 1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅 1.过去对成年的向往： 读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句于。 2.现在的感受和认识； 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 3.将来的目标及措施。 【评分标准】 参考词汇：责任responsibility 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入 总词数)。 Good morning,everyone! The topic of my speech today is "Thoughts on becoming a grown-up”. Writing17(2022·安徽) 假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的 内容要求你在电视、手机(cll)和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并 陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up:TV,cell or Wb?”为题，写一篇英语短文。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Thank you for listening. ·313·