Unit 4 Our Memory. 提升记忆力（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“提升记忆力”为主题，构建“词汇-句式-篇章”三级写作方法体系，通过典例解析与阶梯训练提升语言表达与学习策略应用能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作主题与方法指导|1主题+方法总结|顺序词应用+三段式结构|从主题理解到篇章框架搭建，明确写作逻辑| |词汇短语积累|20词汇+15短语|主题词汇语义场构建|围绕“记忆力”形成关联词汇网络，夯实语言基础| |句式分类训练|3类句式（开头/中间/结尾）|功能句式模板化记忆|按写作功能分类积累，提升语言表达准确性| |真题典例解析|1真题+范文+亮点解析|要点扩展+逻辑衔接技巧|结合中考真题，示范方法迁移与要点落实| |阶梯写作训练|6道不同要求写作题|基础仿写-高阶升格-综合应用|从语言模仿到独立创作，培养学习能力与思维品质|

Unit 4 Our Memory.提升记忆力 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元以“记忆力”为话题，要求我们能够了解常用的提高记忆力的方法，并能够向别人介绍一些提高记忆力的方法。写这类作文时，可用表示顺序的first,second,what's more,last but not least来逐条介绍提高记忆力的方法，最后表达自己的希望或祝福。 [教材典句] 1、To start with,it is important to under-stand how memory works. 2、First,pay attention. 3、The more you review what you learn,the more likely you will remember it. 4、Last but not least,boost your memory by staying healthy. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① memory n. 记忆力；记忆 ② memorize v. 熟记，记住 ③ brain n. 大脑 ④ diet n. 饮食 ⑤ protein n. 蛋白质 ⑥ exercise n.&v. 锻炼；运动 ⑦ meditation n. 冥想 ⑧ relax v. 放松 ⑨ sleep n.&v. 睡眠；睡觉 ⑩ train v. 训练 ⑪ repeat v. 重复 ⑫ review v.&n. 复习 ⑬ improve v. 改善，提升 ⑭ strengthen v. 增强，强化 ⑮ information n. 信息，知识 ⑯ regular adj. 规律的，定期的 ⑰ short-term adj. 短期的 ⑱ healthy adj. 健康的 ⑲ active adj. 主动的，积极的 ⑳ effect n. 作用，影响 短语积累 ① improve memory 提升记忆力 ② make room for 为…… 腾出空间 ③ active learning 主动学习 ④ regular exercise 规律运动 ⑤ short daily meditation 每日短时冥想 ⑥ short-term memory 短期记忆 ⑦ enough sleep 充足睡眠 ⑧ brain training 脑力训练 ⑨ crossword puzzles 填字游戏 ⑩ healthy diet 健康饮食 ⑪ repeat over and over 反复重复 ⑫ connect…with… 把…… 和…… 相关联 ⑬ teach others knowledge 向他人讲授知识 ⑭ have an effect on 对…… 产生影响 ⑮ turn…into… 把…… 转化为……程 【句式积累】 开头句 ① Many students always forget new knowledge soon after learning it. 很多学生刚学完新知识，很快就会遗忘。 ② Do you often have trouble remembering what you’ve studied? 你是不是经常难以记住自己学过的内容？ ③ A good memory is very important for every student’s study. 良好的记忆力对每位学生的学习都至关重要。 ④ There are many simple and useful ways to improve our memory. 有许多简单又实用的方法可以提升我们的记忆力。 ⑤ I’m glad to share some practical memory tips with you. 我很乐意和你分享一些实用的记忆小技巧。 中间句 ① Eating fruit, vegetables and protein food helps our brain work better. 多吃蔬果和富含蛋白质的食物能让大脑运转得更好。 ② Taking regular exercise can enlarge our brain and strengthen memory. 坚持规律运动能够增大脑容量、强化记忆力。 ③ Spending 5 to 10 minutes meditating every day improves short-term memory. 每天花 5 到 10 分钟冥想，可以提升短期记忆力。 ④ Sufficient sleep helps our brain store knowledge for a longer time. 充足的睡眠能帮助大脑更长时间地储存知识。 ⑤ We should memorize information by heart instead of only saving it in phones. 我们应当用心背诵信息，而非只把它存在手机里。 ⑥ Learning new languages and crossword puzzles are great brain training ways. 学习新语言、做填字游戏都是很棒的脑力训练方式。 ⑦ Active learning connects new knowledge with daily life to deepen memory. 主动学习将新知识和日常生活结合，加深记忆印象。 ⑧ We can remember things much easier when we feel interested and relaxed. 当我们充满兴趣、身心放松时，记东西会轻松很多。 ⑨ Teaching what you’ve learned to others can make your memory more solid. 把学到的内容讲给别人听，能让你的记忆更加牢固。 ⑩ Repeating and reviewing knowledge every day stops us from forgetting quickly. 每日重复、复习知识，能避免我们快速遗忘。 结尾句 ① If you keep using these methods, your memory will become better day by day. 如果你坚持使用这些方法，记忆力会一天天变好。 ② Mixing healthy diet, exercise and review can form long-lasting memory. 结合健康饮食、运动和复习，能够形成长久记忆。 ③ Great memory doesn’t come naturally; it needs long-term proper training. 出色的记忆力并非天生，它需要长期合理的训练。 ④ Try these memory skills in your daily study and you will make big progress. 在日常学习中尝试这些记忆技巧，你会取得巨大进步。 ⑤ Mastering useful memory methods will make our whole study much easier. 掌握实用的记忆方法，会让我们整个学习过程轻松许多。 【原题呈现】 （24-25九年级上·广东广州·阶段检测）假如你是李华，学校英文广播站特邀你就“如何提高记忆力”做一个英语演讲，内容包含以下要点： 1. 均衡饮食，充足睡眠； 2. 记忆新内容时，要大声朗读； 3. 及时复习所学知识； 4. 补充一条其他方法。 要求： 1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 提示词：大声地loudly；均衡饮食a balanced diet；复习review Hello, everyone! I am so happy to share with you some methods for improving our memory.____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点： 均衡饮食，充足睡眠；记忆新内容时要大声朗读；及时复习所学知识；补充一条其他方法（如：多做运动/使用记忆技巧/保持良好心情/规律作息等） 确定人称： 第一人称（I）和第二人称（you） 注意事项： 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；可适当增加细节使条理清楚、行文连贯；标点正确，书面整洁 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给开头，引出演讲主题 主体段： 分点介绍提高记忆力的方法 结尾段：总结鼓励 【范文欣赏】 Hello, everyone! I am so happy to share with you some methods for improving our memory. First, have a balanced diet and get enough sleep. Eating healthy food like vegetables and fruits helps our brains. Sleeping seven to eight hours a night is also important. Second, when you learn something new, read it aloud. This makes your brain work harder and remember better. Third, review what you have learned in time. Don’t wait until the night before an exam. Go over your notes regularly. Finally, do exercise every day. Running, swimming or even walking can make your brain more active and improve memory. Try these simple methods, and you will see a big difference. Thank you for listening! 【亮点解析】 要点一：均衡饮食，充足睡眠 具体说明：a balanced diet/healthy food/get enough sleep/have regular sleep habits/eat more fruits and vegetables/drink enough water/7 to 8 hours of sleep等 要点二：大声朗读新内容 具体说明：read it aloud/read loudly/read new information aloud/repeat loudly after reading/use your ears and eyes together等 要点三：及时复习 具体说明：view in time/go over what you have learned/regular review/review after class/review before sleeping/repeat at different times等 要点四：补充一条其他方法 具体说明：do exercise every day/use mind maps/connect new things with old ones/teach others/stay relaxed/take notes in your own way/use memory tricks等 要点五：总结鼓励 鼓励：Try these simple methods, and you will see a big difference./I hope you can try/if you follow these tips/you will have a better memory等 【基础必做】 一、高分句式训练。 1.教材原句：Instead of what he forgets, I keep in mind what he remembers. 仿写：我念念不忘的并非痛苦，而是那份留存的爱。 ________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：I can’t remember what things you asked me to buy. 仿写：我不知道接下来该做什么了。 ________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：The more you review what you learn, the more likely you will remember it. 仿写：你读得越多，就越理解这个世界。 ________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句：Create images by using tables, graphs, and mind maps to organize information. 仿写：通过使用卡片和思维导图复习重点，来记住东西。 ________________________________________________________________ 二、高阶表达应用。 1.Don’t let your mind use up energy too quickly. （用“run out of”动词短语升格） ________________________________________________________________ 2.This makes you remember the knowledge for a long time. （用“stable in your long-term memory”表达升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，提出你的建议。短文需包括以下要点。 注意：    1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 2．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示：（1）要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； （2）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求：（1）可以适当自由发挥； （2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西，请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示： 1. 集中精神做事 (focus your attention)； 2. 要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； 3. 及时复习，防止遗忘； 4. 多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； 5. 多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求： 1. 不得在作文中出现学校的其实名称和学生的真实姓名； 2. 词数90个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 The ways to improve memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. ________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 4．题目：How to Improve Our Memory 提示： 1. 良好睡眠、坚持锻炼； 2. 课堂专注、及时复习； 3. 多用思维导图、联想记忆等方法； 4. 适当放松，减少压力。 要求： 1. 词数 80-100 词； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 包含所有提示要点，可适当补充。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．请以“How to Improve Our Memory” 为题，写一篇短文。内容包括： 1. 你对记忆的理解； 2. 提高记忆力的方法（至少三种，如关注信息、重复、关联已知知识、健康生活等）； 3. 这些方法对你的帮助。 要求：不少于60词，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．你的朋友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下内容要点，以“How to improve your memory”为题，给Tom一些建议。 要点：1. 在你记忆之前，最好先理解它； 2. 记的时候可以试着在脑海里形成画面； 3. 健康的饮食、充足的睡眠和适当的运动对提高记忆力也很有帮助。 提示词：想象imagine　活跃的active　放松的relaxed 要求：1. 80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 How to improve your memory __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 4 Our Memory.提升记忆力 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元以“记忆力”为话题，要求我们能够了解常用的提高记忆力的方法，并能够向别人介绍一些提高记忆力的方法。写这类作文时，可用表示顺序的first,second,what's more,last but not least来逐条介绍提高记忆力的方法，最后表达自己的希望或祝福。 [教材典句] 1、To start with,it is important to under-stand how memory works. 2、First,pay attention. 3、The more you review what you learn,the more likely you will remember it. 4、Last but not least,boost your memory by staying healthy. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① memory n. 记忆力；记忆 ② memorize v. 熟记，记住 ③ brain n. 大脑 ④ diet n. 饮食 ⑤ protein n. 蛋白质 ⑥ exercise n.&v. 锻炼；运动 ⑦ meditation n. 冥想 ⑧ relax v. 放松 ⑨ sleep n.&v. 睡眠；睡觉 ⑩ train v. 训练 ⑪ repeat v. 重复 ⑫ review v.&n. 复习 ⑬ improve v. 改善，提升 ⑭ strengthen v. 增强，强化 ⑮ information n. 信息，知识 ⑯ regular adj. 规律的，定期的 ⑰ short-term adj. 短期的 ⑱ healthy adj. 健康的 ⑲ active adj. 主动的，积极的 ⑳ effect n. 作用，影响 短语积累 ① improve memory 提升记忆力 ② make room for 为…… 腾出空间 ③ active learning 主动学习 ④ regular exercise 规律运动 ⑤ short daily meditation 每日短时冥想 ⑥ short-term memory 短期记忆 ⑦ enough sleep 充足睡眠 ⑧ brain training 脑力训练 ⑨ crossword puzzles 填字游戏 ⑩ healthy diet 健康饮食 ⑪ repeat over and over 反复重复 ⑫ connect…with… 把…… 和…… 相关联 ⑬ teach others knowledge 向他人讲授知识 ⑭ have an effect on 对…… 产生影响 ⑮ turn…into… 把…… 转化为……程 【句式积累】 开头句 ① Many students always forget new knowledge soon after learning it. 很多学生刚学完新知识，很快就会遗忘。 ② Do you often have trouble remembering what you’ve studied? 你是不是经常难以记住自己学过的内容？ ③ A good memory is very important for every student’s study. 良好的记忆力对每位学生的学习都至关重要。 ④ There are many simple and useful ways to improve our memory. 有许多简单又实用的方法可以提升我们的记忆力。 ⑤ I’m glad to share some practical memory tips with you. 我很乐意和你分享一些实用的记忆小技巧。 中间句 ① Eating fruit, vegetables and protein food helps our brain work better. 多吃蔬果和富含蛋白质的食物能让大脑运转得更好。 ② Taking regular exercise can enlarge our brain and strengthen memory. 坚持规律运动能够增大脑容量、强化记忆力。 ③ Spending 5 to 10 minutes meditating every day improves short-term memory. 每天花 5 到 10 分钟冥想，可以提升短期记忆力。 ④ Sufficient sleep helps our brain store knowledge for a longer time. 充足的睡眠能帮助大脑更长时间地储存知识。 ⑤ We should memorize information by heart instead of only saving it in phones. 我们应当用心背诵信息，而非只把它存在手机里。 ⑥ Learning new languages and crossword puzzles are great brain training ways. 学习新语言、做填字游戏都是很棒的脑力训练方式。 ⑦ Active learning connects new knowledge with daily life to deepen memory. 主动学习将新知识和日常生活结合，加深记忆印象。 ⑧ We can remember things much easier when we feel interested and relaxed. 当我们充满兴趣、身心放松时，记东西会轻松很多。 ⑨ Teaching what you’ve learned to others can make your memory more solid. 把学到的内容讲给别人听，能让你的记忆更加牢固。 ⑩ Repeating and reviewing knowledge every day stops us from forgetting quickly. 每日重复、复习知识，能避免我们快速遗忘。 结尾句 ① If you keep using these methods, your memory will become better day by day. 如果你坚持使用这些方法，记忆力会一天天变好。 ② Mixing healthy diet, exercise and review can form long-lasting memory. 结合健康饮食、运动和复习，能够形成长久记忆。 ③ Great memory doesn’t come naturally; it needs long-term proper training. 出色的记忆力并非天生，它需要长期合理的训练。 ④ Try these memory skills in your daily study and you will make big progress. 在日常学习中尝试这些记忆技巧，你会取得巨大进步。 ⑤ Mastering useful memory methods will make our whole study much easier. 掌握实用的记忆方法，会让我们整个学习过程轻松许多。 【原题呈现】 （24-25九年级上·广东广州·阶段检测）假如你是李华，学校英文广播站特邀你就“如何提高记忆力”做一个英语演讲，内容包含以下要点： 1. 均衡饮食，充足睡眠； 2. 记忆新内容时，要大声朗读； 3. 及时复习所学知识； 4. 补充一条其他方法。 要求： 1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 提示词：大声地loudly；均衡饮食a balanced diet；复习review Hello, everyone! I am so happy to share with you some methods for improving our memory.____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点： 均衡饮食，充足睡眠；记忆新内容时要大声朗读；及时复习所学知识；补充一条其他方法（如：多做运动/使用记忆技巧/保持良好心情/规律作息等） 确定人称： 第一人称（I）和第二人称（you） 注意事项： 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；可适当增加细节使条理清楚、行文连贯；标点正确，书面整洁 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给开头，引出演讲主题 主体段： 分点介绍提高记忆力的方法 结尾段：总结鼓励 【范文欣赏】 Hello, everyone! I am so happy to share with you some methods for improving our memory. First, have a balanced diet and get enough sleep. Eating healthy food like vegetables and fruits helps our brains. Sleeping seven to eight hours a night is also important. Second, when you learn something new, read it aloud. This makes your brain work harder and remember better. Third, review what you have learned in time. Don’t wait until the night before an exam. Go over your notes regularly. Finally, do exercise every day. Running, swimming or even walking can make your brain more active and improve memory. Try these simple methods, and you will see a big difference. Thank you for listening! 【亮点解析】 要点一：均衡饮食，充足睡眠 具体说明：a balanced diet/healthy food/get enough sleep/have regular sleep habits/eat more fruits and vegetables/drink enough water/7 to 8 hours of sleep等 要点二：大声朗读新内容 具体说明：read it aloud/read loudly/read new information aloud/repeat loudly after reading/use your ears and eyes together等 要点三：及时复习 具体说明：view in time/go over what you have learned/regular review/review after class/review before sleeping/repeat at different times等 要点四：补充一条其他方法 具体说明：do exercise every day/use mind maps/connect new things with old ones/teach others/stay relaxed/take notes in your own way/use memory tricks等 要点五：总结鼓励 鼓励：Try these simple methods, and you will see a big difference./I hope you can try/if you follow these tips/you will have a better memory等 【基础必做】 一、高分句式训练。 1.教材原句：Instead of what he forgets, I keep in mind what he remembers. 仿写：我念念不忘的并非痛苦，而是那份留存的爱。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Instead of the pain, I keep in mind the love that stays. 2.教材原句：I can’t remember what things you asked me to buy. 仿写：我不知道接下来该做什么了。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I don’t know what I’m supposed to do next. 3.教材原句：The more you review what you learn, the more likely you will remember it. 仿写：你读得越多，就越理解这个世界。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The more you read, the more you will understand the world. 4.教材原句：Create images by using tables, graphs, and mind maps to organize information. 仿写：通过使用卡片和思维导图复习重点，来记住东西。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Remember things by using cards and mind maps to go over key points. 二、高阶表达应用。 1.Don’t let your mind use up energy too quickly. （用“run out of”动词短语升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Don’t let your mind run out of energy too quickly. 2.This makes you remember the knowledge for a long time. （用“stable in your long-term memory”表达升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】This makes the knowledge stable in your long-term memory. 【提升必做】 1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，提出你的建议。短文需包括以下要点。 注意：    1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mary, I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. First, before you remember something, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second, it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Finally, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory. I hope my advice will help you. And you can write back to me if you have any problems. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出主题； 第二步，根据提示内容给出相应的建议； 第三步，希望自己的建议能有帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more 并且 ②be important for 对……重要 ③had better do sth 最好做某事 [高分句型] ①I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语） ②I hope my advice will help you.（宾语从句） 2．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示：（1）要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； （2）多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； （3）及时复习，防止遗忘； （4）多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求：（1）可以适当自由发挥； （2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The ways to improve memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things. Secondly, you should understand what you are learning. If so, you can remember things for a long time. Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. Fourthly, eat more food, such as eggs, milk and fish. They are good for your brains. Finally, you should do more exercise, get enough sleep and enough rest after hard work. It’s the key to improving your memory. If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容详细介绍如何提高记忆力，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示要点详细介绍如何提高记忆力； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①go over复习 ②in time及时 ③such as例如 ④the key to doing sth.做某事的关键 [高分句型] ①Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. (if引导的条件状语从句) 3．很多学生抱怨自己总是记不住学过的东西，请根据下面内容提示，写一篇题为“The ways to improve memory”的短文。 要点提示： 1. 集中精神做事 (focus your attention)； 2. 要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章； 3. 及时复习，防止遗忘； 4. 多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等； 5. 多做运动，保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。 要求： 1. 不得在作文中出现学校的其实名称和学生的真实姓名； 2. 词数90个左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 The ways to improve memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. ________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 【答案】 The ways to improve memory Memory is very important in our daily life and study. Here are some ways to improve it. Firstly, when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things. Secondly, you should understand what you are learning. If so, you can remember things for a long time. Thirdly, if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. Fourthly, eat more food, such as eggs, milk and fish. They can improve your memory. Finally, you should do more exercise, get enough sleep and enough rest after hard work. It’s the key to improving your memory. If you can do so, you will have a good memory. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容详细介绍如何提高记忆力，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示要点详细介绍如何提高记忆力； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①go over复习 ②in time及时 ③such as例如 ④the key to doing sth.做某事的关键 [高分句型] ①when you study, you should focus your attention and don’t think about other things. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②if you go over what you have learned in time, you will not forget the things easily. (if引导的条件状语从句) 4．题目：How to Improve Our Memory 提示： 1. 良好睡眠、坚持锻炼； 2. 课堂专注、及时复习； 3. 多用思维导图、联想记忆等方法； 4. 适当放松，减少压力。 要求： 1. 词数 80-100 词； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 包含所有提示要点，可适当补充。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Improve Our Memory It is very important for us to have a good memory. Here are some good ways to improve it. First, we should get enough sleep and take regular exercise. It can make our brain healthy and active. Second, we must listen carefully in class and review our lessons in time after school. Third, we can use mind maps and word connections to memorize knowledge better. Finally, we need to learn to relax and reduce our study pressure. If we keep these good habits, our memory will become better and better. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：本文是一篇话题作文（如何提高我们的记忆力），一般现在时为主。 明确要点：提出话题，提高良好记忆力的方法；列举提高记忆力的具体方法，如：良好睡眠、坚持锻炼、课堂专注、及时复习、多用思维导图、联想记忆等方法、适当放松，减少压力等；发出号召。 确定人称：第一人称（we/our) 。 注意事项：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：提出话题，提高良好记忆力的方法。 主体段：列举提高记忆力的具体方法，如：良好睡眠、坚持锻炼、课堂专注、及时复习、多用思维导图、联想记忆等方法、适当放松，减少压力等。 结尾段：发出号召。 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：提出话题，提高良好记忆力的方法。 话题：It is very important for us to have a good memory. Here are some good ways to improve it. 要点二：列举提高记忆力的具体方法，并发出号召。 方法一：First, we should get enough sleep and take regular exercise. /jogging/avoid staying up late/get enough sleep等 方法二：Second, we must listen carefully in class and review our lessons in time after school./take notes carefully/listen carefully等 方法三：Third, we can use mind maps and word connections to memorize knowledge better./draw mind maps/go over knowledge promptl等 方法四：Finally, we need to learn to relax and reduce our study pressure./listen to soft music/relieve stress等 号召：If we keep these good habits,/our memory will become better and better/persistent good habit等 5．请以“How to Improve Our Memory” 为题，写一篇短文。内容包括： 1. 你对记忆的理解； 2. 提高记忆力的方法（至少三种，如关注信息、重复、关联已知知识、健康生活等）； 3. 这些方法对你的帮助。 要求：不少于60词，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Improve Our Memory   Memory is like a mental notebook that helps us store and recall information. A good memory is important for learning and daily life. Here are three ways to improve memory. First, pay full attention when learning new things. Second, review information regularly to strengthen memory. Third, connect new knowledge with what you already know, as it makes remembering easier.   These methods have helped me a lot. By focusing in class, reviewing notes, and linking ideas, I remember things better and learn more efficiently. A healthy lifestyle, like enough sleep and exercise, also boosts memory. With these tips, we can all improve our memory and achieve better results! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“对记忆的理解”以及“高记忆力的方法”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达这些方法对你的帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ②pay full attention全神贯注 ③connect …with…把……和……联系起来 ④a lot许多 ⑤healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式 [高分句型] ①Memory is like a mental notebook that helps us store and recall information. (that引导的定语从句) ②First, pay full attention when learning new things. (祈使句和时间状语从句) ③Third, connect new knowledge with what you already know, as it makes remembering easier. (what引导的宾语从句) 6．你的朋友Tom向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据以下内容要点，以“How to improve your memory”为题，给Tom一些建议。 要点：1. 在你记忆之前，最好先理解它； 2. 记的时候可以试着在脑海里形成画面； 3. 健康的饮食、充足的睡眠和适当的运动对提高记忆力也很有帮助。 提示词：想象imagine　活跃的active　放松的relaxed 要求：1. 80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 How to improve your memory __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to improve your memory If you want to have a better memory, here is some advice for you to improve your memory. First, you’d better understand it before you remember something. You can imagine a picture of it in your mind. Second, it’s important to exercise every day. When you exercise your body, you also exercise your brain. Third, live a healthy life. You must have a balanced diet and have enough time to rest every day. If you have these good habits, your memory will be improved. You will do better in your studies and in your life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：记叙文 ②时态：一般现在时 ③提示：题目要求根据提示给汤姆提一些提高记忆力的建议，写作时注意分清条理，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，表明写作目的。 第二步，根据所给要点，依次提出提高记忆力的建议。 第三步，最后表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①improve one’s memory提高某人的记忆力 ②live a healthy life过健康的生活 ③have a balanced diet拥有平衡的饮食 [高分句型] ①First, you’d better understand it before you remember something.（用had better提出建议） ②Second, it’s important to exercise every day.（用it作形式主语） ③If you have these good habits, your memory will be improved.（用if引导条件状语从句） $