Unit 5 第6课时 Developing ideas Reading for writing ⑤& Presenting ideas(Writing)（配套word）-【全效学习】2024-2025学年七年级下册英语（外研版·新教材）浙江专版

本讲义聚焦自然奇观的英语书面表达核心知识点，涵盖基本信息介绍、面临问题及建议给出。学习支架包括思维导图辅助构思，审题立意明确主题（nature）、人称（第三人称）、时态（一般现在时），巧列提纲梳理结构，语料积累提供常用短语（如plenty of plants and animals）和句子（如It lies in…），范文解析（洞庭湖、长江示例）展示写作逻辑。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养，通过It is famous for…等句式及语料积累提升表达准确性，以洞庭湖、长江等自然奇观为载体增强家国情怀。采用范文引路结合自评他评表，课中辅助教师清晰授课，课后帮助学生自查语法、结构等问题，有效查漏补缺。

第6课时　Developing ideas: Reading for writing ⑤& Presenting ideas(Writing)[学生用书 B34] 本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语简单介绍一种自然奇观的基本信息及其面临的问题,并给出恰当的建议。 1.能用It is famous for…/It is like…/In my opinion, the most beautiful place is…/Words can’t express my love for…/There are…/People take too much/many…from…等句式介绍自然奇观的基本信息及其面临的问题; 2.能正确运用连词and,以及However…/But now…等表达方式; 3.能正确使用形容词、副词、比较等级及拟人手法进行表达。 　　请你根据下面思维导图,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍洞庭湖这一个自然奇观。 【审题立意】 主题 　nature　  人称 　第三人称　  时态 　一般现在时　  【巧列提纲】 【语料积累】 常用短语 1.大量的植物和动物 　plenty/lots of plants and animals　  2.把一些湖泊改成了种植农作物的土地 　change some lakes into land for crops　  3.从湖中取走太多的水和鱼 　take too much water and fish from the lake　  4.减少污染 　make less/reduce pollution　  常用句子 1.It lies in the north of Hunan Province. 它坐落在湖南省北部。 2.In my opinion, the most beautiful place is that the lake shines brightly in the sun.在我看来,最美的地方是在阳光下闪闪发光的湖面。 3.Words can’t express my love for its beauty. 言语无法表达我对它的爱。 4.In a word, it’s our duty to protect our natural treasure.总之,保护自然宝藏是我们的职责。 【高分点拨】 　　①Dongting Lake is the second largest freshwater lake in China. It lies in the north of Hunan Province. It is famous for its beautiful scenery and plenty of plants and animals. ②It is like a shining pearl in the middle of China. In my opinion, the most beautiful place is Junshan Island with its clear water. ③However, there are many problems. People change some of it into land for crops. And they also take too much water and fish from the lake. To protect it, we should make less pollution and have some rules to protect it. ④In a word, it’s our duty to protect our natural treasure like Dongting Lake. ①引出话题,简要介绍洞庭湖。 ②用It is like…等句型介绍洞庭湖景色。 ③介绍它所面临的问题,用however…转换话题。 ④总结全文,发表感受或观点。用In a word…结束全文。 　　你校英语报正在举行主题为A fantastic wonder的征文活动。请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息,写一篇征文稿。 basic information (基本信息) problems advice … 注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当增加细节; (2)词数80左右;短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 书写:　　　 Advice:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　 　　　　  Good writing makes your article better. 　　The Yangtze River is the longest river in China. It is famous for its amazing landscapes. In my opinion, the most beautiful place is the Three Gorges, known for their fantastic views. Words can’t express people’s surprise for the unforgettable beauty.  However, the river faces some problems like pollution. We can protect the river by reducing waste and planting more trees along it. We mustn’t throw waste into the river. It’s also a good idea to have some laws to protect it.  In a word, everyone should play a role in protecting the river.  【写作指导与评价】 步骤 要点 自评 他评 是(√)　否(×) 审 正确使用比较等级和时态 篇章结构完整(开头——主体——结尾) 要点齐全 润 介绍长江的基本信息、问题及建议 正确使用It is famous for…/It is like…/In my opinion, the most beautiful place is…/However…等句式 查 介绍长江的基本信息、问题 给出恰当的观点建议 在拼写、语法、标点方面正确 达到了词数要求 书写美观、卷面整洁 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $