摘要:
本讲义聚焦初中英语“介绍喜爱的食物”写作核心知识点,通过审题立意明确主题“my favourite food”、第一人称及一般现在时,巧列提纲搭建结构框架,语料积累提供“out of all the foods”“taste delicious”等短语及“I always feel happy when I eat it”等句型,结合高分范文及点评,辅以个人介绍和书信写作任务,构建完整学习支架。
该资料特色在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养,语言能力方面提供具体句式、连词及形容词运用指导,如用“because”说明喜好原因;文化意识上通过“冰糖葫芦”写作任务融入中国传统小吃知识,增强家国情怀。课中助力教师系统教学,课后自评表帮助学生自查要点、语法及书写,有效查漏补缺。
内容正文:
第6课时 Developing ideas: Reading for writing ⑤& Presenting ideas(Writing)[学生用书 B20]
本单元以“食物”为话题,要求同学们能用英语介绍自己喜爱的食物。
1.能用My favourite food is…/It smells/tastes…等句式来介绍自己最喜欢的食物;
2.能正确运用连词and, because, so和形容词delicious, famous, healthy等;
3.能正确使用代词和时态。
你最喜欢的食物是什么?你了解你最喜欢的食物吗?请你根据以下问题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,在英语课上介绍你最喜欢的食物。
(1)What is your favourite food?Why?(Is it healthy or not?)
(2)What does it look/smell/taste?
(3)How often do you usually eat it?
(4)Where do you have it?
(5)What do you think of your favourite food?
【审题立意】
主题
my favourite food
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
【巧列提纲】
【语料积累】
常用短语
1.在所有的食物中 out of/among all the foods
2.传统的菜肴 traditional dishes
3.尝起来很美味 taste delicious
4.至少 at least
5.对……有益/有害 be good/bad for
常用句子
1.Out of all the foods, pizza is definitely my favourite.
在所有食物中,毫无疑问披萨是我最喜爱的。
2.I always feel happy when I eat it.
我吃它的时候总是感到很开心。
3.Its wonderful taste keeps me coming back for more every time.
它那极棒的口味让我每次都想再多吃一些。
4.The more cheese there is on the pizza, the more delicious it tastes.
披萨上的芝士越多,它尝起来就越美味。
【高分点拨】
My favourite food
①Out of all the foods, pizza is my favourite. It is an traditional Italian dish.
②Pizza tastes delicious. And it has different tastes. Some have meat, some have vegetables and some even have fruits. I like the pizza with pineapples best. And I think the more cheese there is on the pizza, the more delicious it tastes. I always feel happy when I eat it. I eat pizza at least once a month. I usually have it at home. Sometimes, I eat it at a restaurant with my friends. When I am hungry, I can eat up to four slices.
③From my point of view, pizza is my all-time favourite food. Its wonderful taste keeps me coming back for more every time. I always love to eat pizza.
①开篇点题,介绍自己最喜欢的食物。
②用taste描述口味,介绍自己最喜欢的口味,增加细节描写。
③评价自己最喜欢的食物。
假如你是韩梅,你英国的朋友Linda来北方旅游时发现了一种特别好吃的小吃——冰糖葫芦,特写信向你询问冰糖葫芦的相关知识。请你根据以下信息用英语给Linda写一封回信。
Name
Bingtanghulu
Materials
haws (山楂) and other fruits; sugar syrup (糖浆)
Main steps to
make it
●wash the fruits carefully ●dry them
●put them on a stick ●cover them with hot syrup
Origin (起源)
the Song Dynasty
Good meanings
sweet life…
内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
书写:
Advice:
Good writing makes your article better.
注意:(1)文章必须包含以上要点,每个要点可进行适当发挥,并再补充一到两条自己的观点进行阐述;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
(3)词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
In the last letter, you asked me about the famous snack in China — Bingtanghulu. Let me introduce something about it to you.
Bingtanghulu is usually made of haws. But there are more materials for it today, such as strawberries, grapes and even little apples. To make Bingtanghulu, firstly, we should wash the fruits carefully. Secondly, dry the fruits. Thirdly, put them together on a stick. Last but not least, cover them with hot syrup. It’s said that Bingtanghulu first appeared in the Song Dynasty. It was so delicious and healthy that many Chinese people like eating it. It’s now seen as the bright symbol of sweet life and happiness.
Come to my country, and I’ll treat you to Bingtanghulu!
Yours,
Han Mei
【写作指导与评价】
步骤
要点
自评
他评
是(√) 否(×)
审
正确使用人称和时态
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
要点齐全
润
介绍冰糖葫芦的材料及制作方法,适当增加细节
正确使用连词及形容词
查
介绍了冰糖葫芦
对自己的观点进行阐述
在拼写、语法、标点方面正确
达到了词数要求
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