Unit 3 Hobbies （写作突破专项训练）英语译林版三起五年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“爱好”为主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-写作实践”三维训练体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑组织能力，融合文化意识与学习策略。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|6步写作框架|提炼“开篇点题-介绍爱好-阐述益处-互动拓展-回应说明-结尾总结”写作流程|从整体结构到局部要素，形成完整写作逻辑链| |核心词汇|4类30+词|按“爱好内容-俱乐部名称-益处描述-关联词汇”分类记忆|围绕“爱好”主题构建词汇网络，支撑表达需求| |参考句型|4类20+句|分“自我爱好-他人爱好-益处说明-家庭写作”功能句型|从个人到他人再到家庭，实现表达场景拓展| |写作任务|2个主题写作|提供基础版/提高版范文，分层示范表达升级|从基础描述到丰富细节，体现语言能力进阶|

Unit 3 Hobbies 写作方法指引- 原文指路 My family have many hobbies. They are really fun. 开篇点题：总述家人拥有多样爱好，引出写作话题。 I like paper-cutting. 介绍爱好：直接清晰地说明自己的爱好内容。 It keeps me healthy. 阐述益处：解释爱好给自己带来的积极影响。 What does he like doing? 互动提问：用于了解他人爱好，拓展写作素材。 He likes playing ping-pong. 回应说明：明确介绍他人的爱好内容。 We enjoy our hobbies. 结尾总结：抒发对爱好的喜爱之情，收束全文。 一、核心词汇 1. 兴趣爱好类 singing（唱歌） dancing（跳舞） playing ping-pong（打乒乓球） playing with robots（玩机器人） reading（阅读） paper-cutting（剪纸） 2. 学校俱乐部类 Paper-cutting Club（剪纸俱乐部） Dance Club（舞蹈俱乐部） Ping-pong Club（乒乓球俱乐部） Robot Club（机器人俱乐部） Reading Club（阅读俱乐部） 3. 爱好益处描述类 healthy（健康的） happy（开心的） learn a lot（学到很多） make new friends（交新朋友） keep healthy（保持健康） make sb. happy（让某人开心） learn about Chinese culture（了解中国文化） 3. 其他相关词汇 hobby（爱好） headset（耳机） brother（兄弟） 二、参考句型 1. 介绍自己的爱好 I like paper-cutting. I like dancing. I want to join the Dance Club. I’m not good at paper-cutting, but I like trying new things. I also want to learn about Chinese culture. 2. 介绍他人的爱好 He likes playing ping-pong. He wants to join the Ping-pong Club. She likes singing. She wants to join the Reading Club. He likes playing with robots. 3. 说明爱好的好处 It keeps me healthy. It makes her happy. He can make new friends there. She learns a lot from reading 4. 家庭爱好写作专用 My family have many hobbies. They are really fun. My father likes playing ping-pong. It makes him strong. My mother likes dancing. It keeps her healthy. I like reading. I learn a lot from reading. We enjoy our hobbies. 易错点提示 1.动词形式错误：like后面必须接动词的-ing形式，正确表达是"I like singing"，不能写成"I like sing"。 2.第三人称单数变化：当主语是he/she/it（第三人称单数）时，动词要加-s/es，比如"He likes playing ping-pong"，不能写成"He like playing ping-pong"。 3.俱乐部名称大小写：学校俱乐部是专有名词，每个实词的首字母需要大写，比如"Paper-cutting Club"，不能写成"paper-cutting club"。 4.代词误用：在"make sb. +形容词"结构中，sb.要用宾格形式，比如"It makes her happy"，不能写成"It makes she happy"。 5.介词搭配：表达“从……中学到”要用"learn from + 名词/动名词"，比如"She learns a lot from reading"，不能写成"She learns a lot read"。 写作一 写作主题要求： 请介绍你的兴趣爱好，说明你想加入学校的哪个俱乐部，并阐述原因。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： hobby, dancing, Dance Club, keep healthy, make new friends, happy 写作二 请介绍你和家人的兴趣爱好，说说这些爱好给你们带来的好处。 要求： 1. 书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： family, playing ping-pong, paper-cutting, reading, learn about Chinese culture, keep healthy, happy 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My hobby is dancing. I like dancing very much. It makes me happy and keeps me healthy. I want to join the Dance Club. I can make new friends there. I also want to learn more dancing moves. I love dancing! 范文（提高版）： My favorite hobby is dancing. I dance for half an hour every day after school. It makes me feel happy and keeps my body healthy. Now I want to join the Dance Club at school. I can make new friends who like dancing too, and learn more interesting dance moves from the teacher. I’m sure I’ll have a great time there. 写作二 范文（基础版）： My family have many hobbies. They are really fun. My father likes playing ping-pong. It makes him strong. My mother likes paper-cutting. She learns about Chinese culture from it. I like reading. I learn a lot from reading. We all enjoy our hobbies. 范文（提高版）： My family have different interesting hobbies. My father likes playing ping-pong. He plays it with his friends every weekend, and it keeps him healthy and strong. My mother loves paper-cutting. She makes beautiful paper cuts for our home, and she learns a lot about Chinese culture from this hobby. I like reading story books. I learn many new words and interesting stories from reading. We all feel happy with our hobbies. 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $