Unit 4 第6课时 Developing ideas Reading for writing ⑤& Presenting ideas(Writing)（配套word）-【全效学习】2024-2025学年七年级上册英语（外研版·新教材）浙江专版

本讲义聚焦“介绍最喜欢的节假日”写作核心知识点，围绕节日名称、时间、地点、庆祝活动及意义等要素，构建从基础句式（My/His/Her favourite festival is…等）、频度副词（always, usually等）到一般现在时的语法支架，通过审题立意、语料积累（如“family reunion”“enjoy the moon”）、高分范文示例到实践写作任务的完整学习链。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养，以中秋节、春节等传统节日为载体，提供短语和句子模板助力表达，渗透家国情怀。设计审题提纲、自评他评表，引导学生分析组织内容，提升思维品质与学习能力。课中辅助教师高效教学，课后学生可回顾语法点、补充语料，实现知识巩固与查漏补缺。

第6课时　Developing ideas: Reading for writing ⑤& Presenting ideas(Writing) 本单元以“如何庆祝节假日”为话题，要求同学们能用英语简单介绍自己或他人最喜欢的节假日，内容包括节日的名称、时间、地点、庆祝活动和意义等。 1.能用My/His/Her favourite festival is …; I/He/She usually … to celebrate …等句式来介绍节日; 2.能正确运用always，usually，often，sometimes，never等频度副词; 3.能正确使用一般现在时。 　　根据下面图表中的信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的好朋友大明最喜欢的节日。 【审题立意】 主题 人称 时态 someone’s favourite festival 　第一人称、第三人称　  一般现在时  【巧列提纲】 【语料积累】 常用短语 1.他最喜欢的节日 　his favourite festival　  2.第八个农历月 　the eighth lunar month　  3.家人团聚 　family reunion　  4.赏月 　enjoy the moon　  常用句子 1.It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month.它降临在农历八月十五。 2.The family always have a big dinner. 家人总是一起享用丰盛的晚餐。 3.They usually watch a special programme on TV.他们通常会在电视上观看特别的节目。 4.It brings a lot of pleasure and happiness to everyone.它给每个人带来了很多快乐和幸福。 【高分点拨】 　　①My good friend Daming’s favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month. ②On this day，Daming’s family always have a big dinner with all kinds of delicious food. Meanwhile，they usually watches a special programme on TV.③Daming and his cousins eat sweet mooncakes，enjoy the bright and round moon and play happily in the garden. ④In Chinese culture，this festival means the reunion of the family and brings a lot of pleasure and happiness to everyone. ①用My good friend Daming’s favourite festival is … It falls on … 介绍大明最喜欢的节日是什么以及节日的时间。 ②用on this day，always，Meanwhile，usually等介绍大明和家人的节日庆祝活动。 ③增加细节，用Daming and his cousins eat … enjoy … and play … 描述孩子们在节日期间愉快玩耍的场景。 ④用this festival means…介绍节日意义，总结全文。 　　假如你是李华，你的爸爸是一名消防员。请你根据表格信息，以“My father and his favourite festival”为题，介绍你爸爸在春节值班的经历，并投稿给校英语报。 内容要点 参考词汇 my father’s job a firefighter his favourite festival the Spring Festival why he likes it the most important festival in a year，family reunion，happiness，best wishes for the new year … what he does during it on duty，be ready to answer any alarm，save people，put out the fires … your hope … 注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当增加细节; (2)词数:80左右。 内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 书写:　　　 Advice:　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　  Good writing makes your article better. My father and his favourite festival  My father is a firefighter in Hangzhou. Like most Chinese people，his favourite festival is the Spring Festival，the most important festival in a year. It means family reunions and happiness. People send their best wishes for the new year to everyone.   However，my father can’t stay with us during the Spring Festival when he’s on duty. As we know，everything can be nothing in a big fire. To avoid this，my father is ready to answer an alarm at any time. If there’s a fire，he and other firefighters immediately go to save people and put out the fire.  I hope everyone can take fire seriously and there’re no fires any more.  【写作指导与评价】 步骤 要点 自评 他评 是(√)　否(×) 审 正确使用一般现在时和第三人称单数介绍家人最喜欢的节日和值班时做的事情 篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾) 要点齐全 润 用His favourite …/He likes … best等句式来介绍节日 恰当使用频度副词 查 适当增加和补充活动的细节 在拼写、语法、标点方面正确 达到了词数要求 书写美观、卷面整洁 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $