专题04 书面表达(3年汇编)(广西专用)2024-2026年中考英语真题分类汇编

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学段 初中
学科 英语
教材版本 -
年级 九年级
章节 -
类型 题集-试题汇编
知识点 -
使用场景 中考复习-真题
学年 2026-2027
地区(省份) 广西壮族自治区
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发布时间 2026-07-09
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作者 英语Angela老师
品牌系列 好题汇编·中考真题分类汇编
审核时间 2026-07-09
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**基本信息** 汇编2024-2026年广西中考书面表达真题(3道)及2026年各地市模考题(7道)共10道,聚焦校园生活(课本剧比赛、校园图书馆)与个人成长(最大变化、进步)情境,适配中考80词写作要求。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|10道(每道80词左右)|应用文(邮件)、说明文(My School Library)、议论文(How I Make Myself Happy)|情境真实(如家风介绍、校园社团),考查要点完整性(时间/地点说明)、时态准确性(邮件用一般将来时),与广西中考三年稳定考情(校园生活为主)高度契合|

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专题04 书面表达 3年真题1年模拟·解析版 1. (2024·广西·中考真题) 例文 Dear Sam, How is it going? I'm glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. It will be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. I'm preparing for it these days. First, I read the text again and again to understand it better. I also join in group discussions with my classmates so that we can share our ideas about the performance. I'm a little nervous but also very excited. I hope everything goes well and you can come to watch it! Yours, Li Hua 2. (2025·广西·中考真题)例文 My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. It is on the second floor and it is very bright and clean. There are all kinds of books, such as storybooks, science books and history books. The library helps me a lot because I can gain much knowledge from reading. It also gives me a quiet place to study. I want to volunteer there to help keep the books in order. I also hope we can have more new books in the future. I love my school library very much! 3. (2026·广西·中考真题)例文 My Favourite Colour Different people have different favourite colours. My favourite colour is blue. Blue is the colour of the sky and the sea. When I look up at the blue sky, I feel calm and peaceful. It also reminds me of the happy summer days I spent by the sea with my family. Blue makes me feel relaxed when I am tired or worried. It is also a symbol of hope and trust. I like to wear blue clothes and use blue things in my daily life. Blue always brings me positive feelings and encourages me to keep going. 1. (2026·广西南宁·一模)例文 How I Make Myself Happy Everyone wants to be happy. Here are my ways to make myself happy. First, I do exercise every day. Running and playing basketball not only keep me healthy but also make me feel energetic. Second, I try to get along well with my classmates and friends. When I share my feelings with them, I feel much better. Third, I always keep a positive attitude towards life. When I meet difficulties, I tell myself not to give up. These ways really help me find happiness every day. 2. (2026·广西南宁·二模)例文 An Unforgettable Lesson My junior middle school life is full of wonderful lessons. The most unforgettable lesson for me was an English class last year. Our teacher asked us to have a group discussion about our dreams. Everyone shared their ideas freely and the communication was so great. My teacher listened to me carefully and encouraged me to follow my dream. I was deeply moved by her kindness. From that lesson, I learned that a good teacher can change a student's life. I will always remember that special day. 3. (2026·广西柳州·一模)例文 The Biggest Change of Me Keep growing and changing during junior high. The biggest change of me is that… I have become much more confident. I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in public. But my English teacher asked me to join the school speech competition. At first I was very nervous, but with her help I practised again and again. From then on, I began to believe in myself. Now I am more outgoing and I enjoy sharing my ideas with others. This change has brought me many new friends and made my school life much more colourful. 4. (2026·广西柳州·二模)例文 Dear David, How is everything going? Our school held a School Reading Day activity. I had a wonderful time there. We shared our favourite books and talked about what we learned from them. I felt that reading can really broaden our horizons and make us think more deeply. I'd like to recommend the book The Little Prince to you. It is a simple but meaningful story that teaches us about love, friendship and what truly matters in life. I'm sure you will like it. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, 5. (2026·广西桂林·一模)书面表达例文 My Progress "Progress is the life-style of man," as Victor Hugo said. I have made progress in two areas over the past three years. First, my English has improved a lot. I used to find it difficult, but I kept practising reading and writing every day. Second, I have learned to do some housework, like cooking simple meals. This helps me become more independent. I feel very proud of my progress. It makes me believe that hard work really pays off and encourages me to keep moving forward. 6. (2026·广西桂林·二模)例文 Dear Sam, I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese family culture. Let me tell you about my family values. In my family, honesty is the most important value. My parents always tell me to be honest with myself and others. In daily life, we have open and honest talks. When I make a mistake, they listen to me with understanding instead of getting angry. This family value has taught me to be a responsible person. It has also made our family closer and full of love. Best wishes, Li Hua 7. (2026·广西玉林·一模)例文 My School Club School clubs make our school life colourful. My favourite school club is the Art Club. In the club, we learn to draw and paint together. I have learned many creative skills and made some good friends there. Last month, our club held an art show and my painting won a prize. It was a great experience. I suggest that the club should have more outdoor painting activities. I believe the Art Club will become even more popular in the future. 试卷第1页,共3页 / 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 专题04 书面表达 考点分类 广西考情(2024-2026) 命题规律 书面表达 三年累计 3 道题,均为自治区统考中考真题,为英语中考必考大题,词数要求稳定为 80 词左右,应用文、说明文、议论文三类体裁均有涉及 核心考查要点完整性、时态准确性与行文连贯性,以校园生活、个人成长感悟类情境设题为主,是英语综合能力考查的核心必考点,三年考查形式与难度占比稳定 1. (2024·广西·中考真题)书面表达 假定你是李华,你的外籍朋友Sam知道你将参加你校举办的课本剧比赛(textbook play competition),他对此很感兴趣。请你用英语写一封邮件,告知他相关的情况。内容包括: 1. 比赛信息(时间、地点); 2. 你的准备计划(阅读课文、参加讨论); 3. 表达期待。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:prepare (v. 准备), text (n. 课文), discuss (v. 讨论), performance (n. 表演) Dear Sam, How is it going? I'm glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. Yours, Li Hua 2. (2025·广西·中考真题)书面表达 你校英语报正在举办主题为"我爱校园"的征文活动。请你以"My School Library"为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍学校的图书馆或图书室(library)。内容包括: 1. 基本情况介绍(位置、环境、图书种类等); 2. 对你的帮助; 3. 你想为它做的事。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:floor (n. 楼层), bright (adj. 明亮的), kind (n. 种类) My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. 3. (2026·广西·中考真题)书面表达 你校英文报"Colours of Life"专栏正在开展征文活动。请你以"My Favourite Colour"为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括: 1. 你最喜欢的颜色; 2. 你喜欢它的原因(可结合自然景物、生活经历或心理感受等); 3. 它对你的影响。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:positive (adj. 积极的), symbol (n. 象征), remind (v. 使想起) My Favourite Colour Different people have different favourite colours. 1. (2026·广西南宁·一模)书面表达 你校英语报正在举办"Secrets of Happiness"征文活动。请你以"How I Make Myself Happy"为题写一篇短文投稿,谈谈自己的做法。内容包括: 1. 体育锻炼; 2. 人际交往; 3. 心态调节。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇:exercise (v. 锻炼), along with (和睦相处), positive (adj. 积极的), attitude (n. 态度) How I Make Myself Happy Everyone wants to be happy. 2. (2026·广西南宁·二模)书面表达 你校英文校报正在开展题为"An Unforgettable Lesson"的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一节令你难忘的课。内容包括: 1. 你难忘的是一节什么课; 2. 难忘的原因(如老师、活动等); 3. 你的感悟。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇:kind (adj. 友善的), discuss (v. 讨论), communication (n. 交流), encourage (v. 鼓励) An Unforgettable Lesson My junior middle school life is full of wonderful lessons. 3. (2026·广西柳州·一模)书面表达 初中三年,我们一直在成长蜕变,有人变得开朗自信,有人爱上了运动,有人学会了关心他人、理解父母。你校英语俱乐部将举办以"The Biggest Change of Me"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括: 1. 你在初中阶段的最大变化; 2. 促使你发生改变的原因; 3. 这个变化对你的影响和你今后的打算。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 演讲稿开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:outgoing (adj. 开朗的), confident (adj. 自信的), used to (过去经常), from then on (从那时候起) The Biggest Change of Me Keep growing and changing during junior high. The biggest change of me is that… 4. (2026·广西柳州·二模)书面表达 假设你是李华,你校举办了"校园读书日"(School Reading Day)主题活动。请你给英国笔友David写一封邮件,分享你的读书体会,并向他推荐一本书。内容包括: 1. 你在读书活动中的体会; 2. 你推荐的一本书; 3. 推荐这本书的理由。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇:broaden one's horizons (开阔视野), recommend (v. 推荐), meaningful (adj. 有意义的) Dear David, How is everything going? Our school held a School Reading Day activity. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 5. (2026·广西桂林·一模)书面表达 法国作家雨果曾说:"进步,才是人应该有的现象。"校英文报正在征稿,题为"My Progress"。请你回顾近三年的学习和生活,写一篇英语小短文投稿,分享自己取得的进步,如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等。内容包括: 1. 你在什么方面取得了进步(至少两个方面); 2. 你是如何取得这些进步的; 3. 你取得进步后的感受。 注意: 1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得透露个人信息; 3. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:improve (v. 改善), confident (adj. 自信的), proud (adj. 骄傲的) My Progress "Progress is the life-style of man," as Victor Hugo said. 6. (2026·广西桂林·二模)书面表达 假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Sam在来信中提到,他对中国的家庭文化很感兴趣,尤其是"家风"这个概念。请你用英语写一封回信,向他介绍你家的优良家风,以及你和父母是如何在日常相处中践行这种家风的。 要求: 1. 你家的优良家风是什么(如诚信正直、互敬互爱等); 2. 你和父母如何在日常相处中践行这种家风(如坦诚沟通、互相理解等); 3. 这种家风对你的成长有什么影响。 注意: 1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得透露个人信息; 3. 词数为80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:family value (n. 家风), honesty (n. 诚信), responsible (adj. 负责任的) Dear Sam, I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese family culture. Let me tell you about my family values. Best wishes, Li Hua 7. (2026·广西玉林·一模)书面表达 你校英语报正在举办主题为"我的校园"的征文活动。请你以"My School Club"为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你喜爱的校园社团。内容包括: 1. 你最喜欢的社团; 2. 你参加的社团活动的经历或收获; 3. 你对社团未来发展的看法或建议。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:favourite (adj. 最喜欢的), creative (adj. 有创造力的), suggest (v. 建议) My School Club School clubs make our school life colourful. 试卷第1页,共3页 / 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 专题04 书面表达 3年真题1年模拟·解析版 考点分类 广西考情(2024-2026) 命题规律 书面表达 三年累计 3 道题,均为自治区统考中考真题,为英语中考必考大题,词数要求稳定为 80 词左右,应用文、说明文、议论文三类体裁均有涉及 核心考查要点完整性、时态准确性与行文连贯性,以校园生活、个人成长感悟类情境设题为主,是英语综合能力考查的核心必考点,三年考查形式与难度占比稳定 1. (2024·广西·中考真题)书面表达 假定你是李华,你的外籍朋友Sam知道你将参加你校举办的课本剧比赛(textbook play competition),他对此很感兴趣。请你用英语写一封邮件,告知他相关的情况。内容包括: 1. 比赛信息(时间、地点); 2. 你的准备计划(阅读课文、参加讨论); 3. 表达期待。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:prepare (v. 准备), text (n. 课文), discuss (v. 讨论), performance (n. 表演) Dear Sam, How is it going? I'm glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. Yours, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear Sam, How is it going? I'm glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. It will be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. I'm preparing for it these days. First, I read the text again and again to understand it better. I also join in group discussions with my classmates so that we can share our ideas about the performance. I'm a little nervous but also very excited. I hope everything goes well and you can come to watch it! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属于应用文中的电子邮件体裁,是典型的信息告知类书信,话题围绕校园课本剧比赛展开,贴近学生日常校园生活,是广西中考英语书面表达的高频考查类型,侧重考查真实交际场景下的信息传递与语言组织能力。 2. 时态:全文时态贴合语境灵活切换:介绍尚未举办的比赛安排时,使用一般将来时的被动语态;描述现阶段的备赛状态时,结合使用现在进行时与一般现在时;结尾表达祝愿与期待使用一般现在时,时态切换自然,符合叙事逻辑。 3. 写作提示:本题为半控制性写作,明确规定了三个核心写作要点:比赛的时间与地点、个人的备赛计划、表达参赛期待;要求词数80左右,可适当补充细节使行文连贯,不得出现真实姓名与学校名称,开头与结尾已给出且不计入总词数,既限定了写作核心,又给学生留有适度的发挥空间。 [写作步骤] 第一步:承接题干给出的开头,引出比赛主题后,首先清晰交代比赛举办的时间与地点,完整覆盖第一个写作要点,信息表述准确明了。 第二步:展开主体段落,围绕“准备计划”这一核心内容,分述反复研读课文、参与小组讨论两项具体备赛动作,可适当补充个人的参赛心情,让内容更真实自然,完成第二个写作要点。 第三步:收尾段落表达对比赛顺利开展的期许,同时向对方发出观赛邀请,契合邮件的交际属性,自然收束全文,完成第三个写作要点。 [亮点词汇] be held 被举办 prepare for 为……做准备 again and again 反复地;再三地 join in 参加 group discussions 小组讨论 so that 以便;为了 nervous 紧张的 go well 进展顺利 [高分句型] 1. It will be held in the school hall next Friday afternoon. 中文意思:比赛将于下周五下午在学校礼堂举行。 句式:一般将来时的被动语态句式,客观正式地介绍活动安排。 2. I also join in group discussions with my classmates so that we can share our ideas about the performance. 中文意思:我还和同学们一起参加小组讨论,以便分享关于表演的想法。 句式:so that引导的目的状语从句,清晰体现动作的目的,增强句子逻辑连贯性。 3. I hope everything goes well and you can come to watch it! 中文意思:我希望一切顺利,你能前来观看! 句式:hope后接并列宾语从句的句式,用于表达祝愿与期待,符合书信结尾的交际表达习惯。 2. (2025·广西·中考真题)书面表达 你校英语报正在举办主题为"我爱校园"的征文活动。请你以"My School Library"为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍学校的图书馆或图书室(library)。内容包括: 1. 基本情况介绍(位置、环境、图书种类等); 2. 对你的帮助; 3. 你想为它做的事。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:floor (n. 楼层), bright (adj. 明亮的), kind (n. 种类) My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. 【例文】 My School Library My favourite place in my school is the library. It is on the second floor and it is very bright and clean. There are all kinds of books, such as storybooks, science books and history books. The library helps me a lot because I can gain much knowledge from reading. It also gives me a quiet place to study. I want to volunteer there to help keep the books in order. I also hope we can have more new books in the future. I love my school library very much! 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属说明文中的场所介绍类征文,以"My School Library"为题介绍校园图书馆,涵盖空间位置、藏书种类与个人受益三个维度,是广西中考英语书面表达中常见的校园生活类话题,重在考查学生运用说明性语言有序介绍场所与表达感受的综合能力。 2. 时态:全文以一般现在时为主导,用稳定一致的时态框架支撑说明性语篇:介绍图书馆的基本情况(位置、环境、藏书种类)使用一般现在时,陈述图书馆对个人的帮助与个人意愿同样保留一般现在时,时态统一使语篇清朗简洁。 3. 写作提示:本题为半开放性征文,试题明确给出三个写作要点且逻辑递进自然——从“是什么”(基本情况)到“怎么样”(对“我”的帮助)再到“我能做什么”(回馈意愿),词数要求80左右,开头句My favourite place in my school is the library.已给出且不计入总词数,学生需围绕这一总起句展开三段式行文,使语篇层次分明、首尾呼应。 [写作步骤] 第一步:直接承接给出的开头句,定位文章视角——“我的校园最爱是图书馆”,为后文围绕图书馆展开介绍锚定方向。 第二步:第一段展开基本情况介绍,依次交代图书馆的位置(on the second floor)、环境特征(bright and clean)、藏书种类(storybooks, science books, history books),灵活运用there be句型和such as短语丰富信息密度,完成第一个内容要点。 第三步:第二段转向图书馆对个人的帮助——从知识获取(learn knowledge from reading)和学习空间(a quiet place to study)两个层面展开,结合because引导的原因状语从句使叙述更富逻辑性,完成第二个内容要点。 第四步:第三段表达个人回馈意愿——想做志愿者整理图书(volunteer to help keep books in order)、希望增添新书(have more new books),以I love my school library very much!收束全文,情感自然收笔,完成第三个内容要点。 [亮点词汇] on the second floor 在二楼 bright and clean 明亮整洁 all kinds of 各种各样的 such as 例如 learn knowledge from reading 从阅读中学到知识 a quiet place to study 一个安静的学习空间 volunteer 自愿做 in order 整齐有序 [高分句型] 1. There are all kinds of books, such as storybooks, science books and history books. 中文意思:有各种各样的书,比如故事书、科学书和历史书。 句式:There be句型并列such as短语举例,先概括后具体,信息容量大且条理清楚,是场所介绍类说明文的经典开篇句式。 2. The library helps me a lot because I can gain much knowledge from reading. 中文意思:图书馆对我帮助很大,因为我从阅读中学到很多知识。 句式:because引导原因状语从句,先果后因,逻辑链条清晰,适合在说明个人受益时增强说理力度。 3. It also gives me a quiet place to study. 中文意思:它也给了我一个安静的学习空间。 句式:give sb. sth.双宾语结构,简洁有力地传达作用与功能,是介绍场所价值的实用句型。 3. (2026·广西·中考真题)书面表达 你校英文报"Colours of Life"专栏正在开展征文活动。请你以"My Favourite Colour"为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括: 1. 你最喜欢的颜色; 2. 你喜欢它的原因(可结合自然景物、生活经历或心理感受等); 3. 它对你的影响。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:positive (adj. 积极的), symbol (n. 象征), remind (v. 使想起) My Favourite Colour Different people have different favourite colours. 【例文】 My Favourite Colour Different people have different favourite colours. My favourite colour is blue. Blue is the colour of the sky and the sea. When I look up at the blue sky, I feel calm and peaceful. It also reminds me of the happy summer days I spent by the sea with my family. Blue makes me feel relaxed when I am tired or worried. It is also a symbol of hope and trust. I like to wear blue clothes and use blue things in my daily life. Blue always brings me positive feelings and encourages me to keep going. 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属议论文中的个人观点表达类征文,以"My Favourite Colour"为题写作,要求从“最喜欢的颜色→喜欢的原因→对你的影响”层层递进展开论述,话题兼具个人化和审美性,是广西中考英语中少见的内心感悟类命题,重在考查学生将主观偏好与客观论据有机结合的表达能力。 2. 时态:全文以一般现在时为核心时态,服务于观点表达和普遍事实陈述:陈述颜色偏好使用一般现在时,描述自然景物引发的感受使用一般现在时(feel calm and peaceful),回顾个人经历时同样融入一般现在时语境(reminds me of the happy summer days),时态始终平稳,保持论述的统一感。 3. 写作提示:本题给出了三个递进式要点——①明确最喜欢的颜色→②从自然景物、生活经历、心理感受等多个角度说清原因→③总结该颜色对自己的深层影响,词数要求80左右,开头句Different people have different favourite colours.已给出,学生需以总分总结构展开:先提出个人偏好,再从多维角度支撑观点,最后以blue always brings me positive feelings…升华收笔,体现从具体到抽象、从感性到理性的写作逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步:以给出的开头句引入,紧接着亮出个人观点——My favourite colour is blue.,开门见山、立场鲜明。 第二步:从自然景物维度展开第一层理由:蓝色是天空和大海的颜色,抬头看蓝天时内心感到calm and peaceful,用when时间状语从句营造画面感,使论述有画面支撑。 第三步:从生活经历维度展开第二层理由:蓝色让自己想起与家人在海边度过的快乐夏日(the happy summer days I spent by the sea with my family),结合定语从句使叙述更精炼。 第四步:从心理感受维度展开第三层理由:蓝色在疲惫和忧虑时让自己感到放松(feel relaxed),点出蓝色作为hope和trust象征的深层意涵,为下文的“影响”铺垫。 第五步:收尾段落总结蓝色对自己的具体影响——喜欢穿蓝色衣服、使用蓝色物品,它始终给自己带来positive feelings并encourage自己keep going,以鼓舞人心的落脚点完成第三个写作要点。 [亮点词汇] calm 平静的 peaceful 安宁的 remind sb. of 使某人想起 relaxed 放松的 symbol 象征 trust 信任 positive feelings 积极的感受 keep going 继续前进 [高分句型] 1. When I look up at the blue sky, I feel calm and peaceful. 中文意思:当我抬头看蓝天时,我感到平静和安宁。 句式:When引导的时间状语从句搭配感官动词feel引导的形容词补语,以画面带入感受,是“情景→情绪”联动表达的经典写法。 2. It also reminds me of the happy summer days I spent by the sea with my family. 中文意思:它也让我想起了我和家人在海边度过的快乐夏日时光。 句式:remind sb. of搭配省略关系代词的定语从句(days I spent),句式紧凑且信息量大,适合个人经历与情感联想的结合表达。 3. Blue always brings me positive feelings and encourages me to keep going. 中文意思:蓝色总是给我带来积极的感受,并鼓励我继续前进。 句式:brings sb. sth.与encourages sb. to do双重动词短语并列结构,收束有力,是议论文结尾段升华主题的高效句式。 1. (2026·广西南宁·一模)书面表达 你校英语报正在举办"Secrets of Happiness"征文活动。请你以"How I Make Myself Happy"为题写一篇短文投稿,谈谈自己的做法。内容包括: 1. 体育锻炼; 2. 人际交往; 3. 心态调节。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇:exercise (v. 锻炼), along with (和睦相处), positive (adj. 积极的), attitude (n. 态度) How I Make Myself Happy Everyone wants to be happy. 【例文】 How I Make Myself Happy Everyone wants to be happy. Here are my ways to make myself happy. First, I do exercise every day. Running and playing basketball not only keep me healthy but also make me feel energetic. Second, I try to get along well with my classmates and friends. When I share my feelings with them, I feel much better. Third, I always keep a positive attitude towards life. When I meet difficulties, I tell myself not to give up. These ways really help me find happiness every day. 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属说明文中的方法介绍类征文,以"How I Make Myself Happy"为题阐述让自己快乐的三种方式,涵盖体育锻炼、人际交往与心态调节三个维度,话题聚焦青少年心理健康教育,是广西中考英语模拟题中颇具育人导向的命题类型,重点考查学生运用first / second / third等顺序词进行条理化表达的写作能力。 2. 时态:全文以一般现在时统一贯穿,契合方法介绍类说明文的语体特征。陈述日常锻炼习惯使用一般现在时(I do exercise every day, Running and playing basketball…keep me healthy),描述与人相处的常态使用一般现在时(I try to get along well),表达个人信念与态度同样使用一般现在时(I always keep a positive attitude),时态一致使行文自然流畅。 3. 写作提示:本题明确给出了三个并行的写作要点——体育锻炼、人际交往、心态调节,各要点之间呈并列关系而非递进关系,因此宜采用总分总结构:先以Here are my ways to make myself happy.总起,再用First… / Second… / Third…依次分段展开三个要点,每个要点都需给出具体做法(如跑步和打篮球、与人分享感受、保持积极态度),最后以These ways really help me…总结收束,词数要求80左右,开头句已给出且不计入总词数。 [写作步骤] 第一步:以给出的开头句Everyone wants to be happy.引入话题,紧接着用Here are my ways to make myself happy.一句过渡,总起全文,引导读者预期三个并列方法。 第二步:以First引出第一段——体育锻炼层面,具体列举跑步和打篮球(running and playing basketball),并用not only…but also…结构收束该段,点明锻炼既keep me healthy又make me feel energetic,让第一要点既有具体行为又有成效说明。 第三步:以Second引出第二段——人际交往层面,写try to get along well with classmates and friends,再延伸至when I share my feelings with them, I feel much better,用关系→行为→感受的逻辑线完成第二要点。 第四步:以Third引出第三段——心态调节层面,写keep a positive attitude towards life,再用when I meet difficulties, I tell myself not to give up进一步具体化积极心态的含义,完成第三要点。 第五步:以These ways really help me find happiness every day.收束全文,照应开头,形成完整的首尾闭环。 [亮点词汇] energetic 精力充沛的 get along well with 与……和睦相处 share feelings 分享感受 positive attitude 积极的态度 meet difficulties 遇到困难 give up 放弃 not only…but also… 不仅……而且…… find happiness 找到快乐 [高分句型] 1. Running and playing basketball not only keep me healthy but also make me feel energetic. 中文意思:跑步和打篮球不仅让我保持健康,还让我感到精力充沛。 句式:动名词短语作主语搭配not only…but also…并列谓语结构,先因后果信息丰富,是说明个人习惯兼陈述成效的高效并列句式。 2. When I share my feelings with them, I feel much better. 中文意思:当我与他们分享感受时,我感觉好多了。 句式:When引导的时间状语从句置于句首,先设情境再出结果,语序灵活,适合在叙事中自然过渡到感受表达。 3. When I meet difficulties, I tell myself not to give up. 中文意思:当我遇到困难时,我告诉自己不放弃。 句式:When时间状语从句搭配tell sb. not to do sth.否定不定式结构,简洁有力地表达面对困难时的自我激励,语调坚定。 2. (2026·广西南宁·二模)书面表达 你校英文校报正在开展题为"An Unforgettable Lesson"的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一节令你难忘的课。内容包括: 1. 你难忘的是一节什么课; 2. 难忘的原因(如老师、活动等); 3. 你的感悟。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇:kind (adj. 友善的), discuss (v. 讨论), communication (n. 交流), encourage (v. 鼓励) An Unforgettable Lesson My junior middle school life is full of wonderful lessons. 【例文】 An Unforgettable Lesson My junior middle school life is full of wonderful lessons. The most unforgettable lesson for me was an English class last year. Our teacher asked us to have a group discussion about our dreams. Everyone shared their ideas freely and the communication was so great. My teacher listened to me carefully and encouraged me to follow my dream. I was deeply moved by her kindness. From that lesson, I learned that a good teacher can change a student's life. I will always remember that special day. 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属记叙文中的回忆叙事类征文,以"An Unforgettable Lesson"为题记叙初中阶段最难忘的一节课,需要交代“什么课→为什么难忘→感悟收获”三个叙事层次,是广西中考英语模拟题中经典的叙事类命题,侧重考查学生以时间线展开叙述、兼顾事件描写与情感升华的综合写作能力。 2. 时态:全文呈现过去与现在交织的时态格局:回忆课堂事件的过程使用一般过去时(was, asked, shared, listened, encouraged, was moved),将读者带入具体时空场景;陈述感悟和普遍真理时使用一般现在时(can change)和一般将来时(will always remember),从过去的经历中萃取跨越时间的认识,时态切换自然体现叙事与议论的层次感。 3. 写作提示:本题给出三个递进式要点——①说出难忘的是一节什么课→②说明难忘的原因(可从老师、课堂活动、互动氛围等角度展开)→③写出自己的感悟,词数要求80左右,开头句My junior middle school life is full of wonderful lessons.已给出,学生需在续写中先聚焦具体一节(an English class last year)再逐步展开课堂过程的描写,最后从“一节具体的课”上升到“对教师价值的认识”(a good teacher can change a student's life),完成从具体到一般的升华。 [写作步骤] 第一步:以给出的开头句引入话题后,直接点明最难忘的那节课——The most unforgettable lesson for me was an English class last year.,用最高级和过去时间状语迅速定位叙事焦点。 第二步:描绘课堂具体活动——老师组织了一次关于梦想的小组讨论(group discussion about our dreams),同学们自由分享想法,交流氛围热烈(the communication was so great),以and并列句丰富场景描写,完成第一层次叙事。 第三步:聚焦老师本人的温暖举动——她认真倾听我的想法(listened to me carefully),鼓励我追逐梦想(encouraged me to follow my dream),再以I was deeply moved by her kindness收束老师段,情感自然流露,完成“难忘原因”的主体叙述。 第四步:从具体经历中提炼感悟——I learned that a good teacher can change a student's life.,用that引导的宾语从句将个人故事推向普遍认识,完成第三个写作要点。 第五步:以I will always remember that special day.收尾,用将来时表达将持续铭记的情感,呼应开头的unforgettable,首尾圆合。 [亮点词汇] unforgettable 难忘的 wonderful 精彩的 group discussion 小组讨论 share ideas freely 自由分享想法 communication 交流 encourage sb. to do 鼓励某人做…… be deeply moved 深受感动 kindness 善良 [高分句型] 1. The most unforgettable lesson for me was an English class last year. 中文意思:对我来说最难忘的一课是去年的一节英语课。 句式:形容词最高级(the most unforgettable)结合一般过去时,精准定位叙事核心,是记叙文开头点题的经典句式。 2. Everyone shared their ideas freely and the communication was so great. 中文意思:每个人都自由地分享想法,交流非常愉快。 句式:and连接两个并列分句,前句描写行为(shared ideas freely),后句评价氛围(communication was so great),叙评结合的写法丰富场景立体感。 3. I learned that a good teacher can change a student's life. 中文意思:我认识到一个好老师可以改变一个学生的一生。 句式:that引导宾语从句表达从经历中提炼的认识,从句由一般现在时承载,从过去事件中得出具有普遍性的感悟,升华全文主旨。 3. (2026·广西柳州·一模)书面表达 初中三年,我们一直在成长蜕变,有人变得开朗自信,有人爱上了运动,有人学会了关心他人、理解父母。你校英语俱乐部将举办以"The Biggest Change of Me"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括: 1. 你在初中阶段的最大变化; 2. 促使你发生改变的原因; 3. 这个变化对你的影响和你今后的打算。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 演讲稿开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:outgoing (adj. 开朗的), confident (adj. 自信的), used to (过去经常), from then on (从那时候起) The Biggest Change of Me Keep growing and changing during junior high. The biggest change of me is that… 【例文】 The Biggest Change of Me Keep growing and changing during junior high. The biggest change of me is that… I have become much more confident. I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in public. But my English teacher asked me to join the school speech competition. At first I was very nervous, but with her help I practised again and again. From then on, I began to believe in myself. Now I am more outgoing and I enjoy sharing my ideas with others. This change has brought me many new friends and made my school life much more colourful. 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属应用文中的英语演讲稿体裁,以"The Biggest Change of Me"为演讲主题,分享初中阶段的最大个人变化,涵盖“最大变化→变化原因→影响与打算”三个层次,是广西中考英语模拟题中较为少见的演讲稿命题,重点考查学生在正式口语表达场景下组织内容、兼顾说服力与感染力的写作能力。 2. 时态:全文时态配合叙事层精准切换:描述过去的自己使用一般过去时和used to结构(I used to be very shy),体现今昔对比的转折过程;描述变化带来的结果使用现在完成时(This change has brought me…),强调对现在的持续影响;描述当下状态与感受使用一般现在时(Now I am more outgoing),时态切换层次分明,服务于“过去→转折→现在”的叙事脉络。 3. 写作提示:本题明确给出三个递进式要点——①最大变化是什么→②促使变化的原因→③变化的影响和今后打算,词数要求80左右,演讲稿的特殊性在于开篇和结尾需要有鼓动性和感染力,开头句Keep growing and changing during junior high. The biggest change of me is that…已给出,学生需直接补全核心变化,再以used to be…→But…→From then on…的转折叙事为主干展开,结尾需以现在完成时和展望语气收束,留给听众余韵。 [写作步骤] 第一步:直接补全开头句给出的The biggest change of me is that…,亮出核心变化——have become much more confident,完成第一个写作要点。 第二步:以I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in public.展开“变化前的自己”,用used to和afraid of doing两个结构刻画曾经的胆小内向,建立对比基线。 第三步:以But引出转折——my English teacher asked me to join the school speech competition,交代促使变化的关键事件(老师的邀请),完成第二个写作要点中“原因”的部分。 第四步:写变化中的努力过程——at first I was very nervous(初始紧张)→with her help I practised again and again(反复练习)→From then on, I began to believe in myself.(开始自信),形成清晰的成长轨迹。 第五步:写变化后的现在——more outgoing,enjoy sharing ideas with others,用具体的行为变化写实“自信”的表现。 第六步:以现在完成时收束——This change has brought me many new friends and made my school life much more colourful.,突出变化带来的积极成果,体现演讲稿的鼓动性结尾,完成第三个写作要点。 [亮点词汇] confident 自信的 used to 过去经常 shy 害羞的 afraid of speaking in public 害怕在公共场合讲话 speech competition 演讲比赛 from then on 从那时候起 believe in myself 相信自己 outgoing 开朗的 [高分句型] 1. I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in public. 中文意思:我过去非常害羞,害怕在公共场合讲话。 句式:used to be搭配afraid of doing结构精准描绘过去的负面状态,为后文的“变化”铺设鲜明对比。 2. From then on, I began to believe in myself. 中文意思:从那时起,我开始相信自己。 句式:From then on时间状语搭配begin to do,标示叙事中的关键转折点,是成长类叙事文转折段的高频句式。 3. This change has brought me many new friends and made my school life much more colourful. 中文意思:这个变化给我带来了许多新朋友,让我的校园生活更加丰富多彩。 句式:现在完成时搭配has brought和has made并列谓语,强调变化带来的持续可见成果,much more colourful中的比较级修饰增强感染力,是演讲稿收束段的强力句式。 4. (2026·广西柳州·二模)书面表达 假设你是李华,你校举办了"校园读书日"(School Reading Day)主题活动。请你给英国笔友David写一封邮件,分享你的读书体会,并向他推荐一本书。内容包括: 1. 你在读书活动中的体会; 2. 你推荐的一本书; 3. 推荐这本书的理由。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 参考词汇:broaden one's horizons (开阔视野), recommend (v. 推荐), meaningful (adj. 有意义的) Dear David, How is everything going? Our school held a School Reading Day activity. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear David, How is everything going? Our school held a School Reading Day activity. I had a wonderful time there. We shared our favourite books and talked about what we learned from them. I felt that reading can really broaden our horizons and make us think more deeply. I'd like to recommend the book The Little Prince to you. It is a simple but meaningful story that teaches us about love, friendship and what truly matters in life. I'm sure you will like it. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属于应用文中的电子邮件体裁,是向外国笔友分享活动体会兼推荐图书的书信,话题融合了校园读书日体验与个人阅读品味两条主线,比单纯的告知类邮件多了“推荐”这一交际功能,是广西中考英语书面表达中书信体与推荐类写作的交叉考查题型。 2. 时态:全文时态依据叙述层次灵活切换:回忆读书日当天的具体活动时使用一般过去时(I had a wonderful time, We shared our favourite books, we talked about…),将读者带入活动场景;表达对读书的普遍认识及推荐书时使用一般现在时(reading can really broaden our horizons, I'd like to recommend, It is a simple but meaningful story, I'm sure you will like it),体现从具体经历到一般认识的表达落差。 3. 写作提示:本题要求涵盖三个递进要点——①读书活动中的体会→②推荐一本书→③推荐理由,词数要求80左右,开头与结尾均已给出,学生只需续写中间部分,但要同时兼顾“活动回顾”和“书籍推荐”两条线索的衔接:需先用1—2句分享活动体会作为过渡,再由I'd like to recommend…自然引出推荐对象,最后用1—2句理由支撑推荐,使全文在邮件框架内浑然一体。 [写作步骤] 第一步:承接给出的开头句,用I had a wonderful time there.一句总起读书日感受,再用We shared our favourite books and talked about…具体描绘活动内容,完成第一个写作要点(活动体会)。 第二步:紧接着写读书带来的深层认识——I felt that reading can really broaden our horizons and make us think more deeply.,用that宾语从句完成“体会→认识”的升级,使过渡到推荐部分更自然。 第三步:以I'd like to recommend the book The Little Prince to you.自然引出推荐对象,句式中规中矩但清晰实用,完成第二个写作要点。 第四步:用It is a simple but meaningful story that…展开推荐理由——教会我们关于爱、友谊和生命中真正重要的东西(teaches us about love, friendship and what truly matters in life),句子内涵丰富。 第五步:以I'm sure you will like it.收束推荐段落,借一句主观确信表达让推荐显得真诚可信,再衔接已给出的结尾句I'm looking forward to hearing from you.,保持邮件交际完整性。 [亮点词汇] broaden one's horizons 开阔视野 recommend 推荐 meaningful 有意义的 simple but meaningful 简单但有意义 friendship 友谊 what truly matters in life 生命中真正重要的东西 be sure 确信 look forward to 期待 [高分句型] 1. I felt that reading can really broaden our horizons and make us think more deeply. 中文意思:我觉得阅读真的可以开阔我们的视野,让我们思考得更深入。 句式:that引导宾语从句搭配broaden our horizons与make us think more deeply两个并列动词短语,既有认识高度又不失中学生的语言朴实感。 2. It is a simple but meaningful story that teaches us about love, friendship and what truly matters in life. 中文意思:这是一个简单但有意义的故事,教会我们关于爱、友谊和生命中真正重要的东西。 句式:主系表结构(It is…)搭配that引导的定语从句修饰story,嵌套what引导的名词性从句作about的宾语,句式层次丰富,是推荐类写作中展示语言功力的高分句型。 3. I'm sure you will like it. 中文意思:我相信你会喜欢它。 句式:I'm sure后接省略that的宾语从句,口语化自然,适合邮件等交际性文本中以第一人称表达推荐信心。 5. (2026·广西桂林·一模)书面表达 法国作家雨果曾说:"进步,才是人应该有的现象。"校英文报正在征稿,题为"My Progress"。请你回顾近三年的学习和生活,写一篇英语小短文投稿,分享自己取得的进步,如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等。内容包括: 1. 你在什么方面取得了进步(至少两个方面); 2. 你是如何取得这些进步的; 3. 你取得进步后的感受。 注意: 1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得透露个人信息; 3. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:improve (v. 改善), confident (adj. 自信的), proud (adj. 骄傲的) My Progress "Progress is the life-style of man," as Victor Hugo said. 【例文】 My Progress "Progress is the life-style of man," as Victor Hugo said. I have made progress in two areas over the past three years. First, my English has improved a lot. I used to find it difficult, but I kept practising reading and writing every day. Second, I have learned to do some housework, like cooking simple meals. This helps me become more independent. I feel very proud of my progress. It makes me believe that hard work really pays off and encourages me to keep moving forward. 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属议论文中的个人成长反思类征文,以"My Progress"为题回顾近三年的进步与成长,要求涵盖“进步方向→取得过程→进步感受”三个层次,以雨果名言开篇提升文学基调,是广西中考英语模拟题中少有的兼具文化引述与个人叙写的命题,重点考查学生从具体事例中提炼普遍认识的思辨表达能力。 2. 时态:全文时态随叙述进程自然流转:回顾过去的不足使用一般过去时和used to结构(I used to find it difficult),强调持续努力的过程使用一般过去时(I kept practising),展现当前取得的进步使用现在完成时(I have made progress, my English has improved a lot);陈述当下的感受与信念使用一般现在时(I feel very proud, It makes me believe that hard work really pays off),时态切换服务于“回顾→努力→成果→感悟”四层叙事环。 3. 写作提示:本题给出三个递进式要点——①在什么方面取得了进步(至少两个方面)→②如何取得这些进步→③取得进步后的感受,词数要求80左右,开头引用雨果名言已给出,学生需在名言铺垫下以总分结构展开:先用I have made progress in two areas over the past three years.总起两个方面的进步,再以First…/ Second…分别展开,每个方面都需包含“原来如何→如何努力→现在怎样”的三步对比叙事,最后以feel proud + 感悟收束,体现从个例到信念的升华。 [写作步骤] 第一步:以给出的雨果名言开篇,体现文化素养,紧接着用I have made progress in two areas over the past three years.一句总起,明确告知读者以下将从两个方面展开,完成第一个写作要点的总述。 第二步:以First引出第一个进步方面——英语学习的进步:先写过去的困难(used to find it difficult),再写坚持努力的过程(kept practising reading and writing every day),以my English has improved a lot概括成果,三步形成完整的“过去→努力→现在”对比。 第三步:以Second引出第二个进步方面——生活技能的提升:写学会了做一些家务,比如做简单的饭菜(learned to do some housework, like cooking simple meals),用like给出的具体例子让“进步”可感可见,再以This helps me become more independent.点出进步的意义。 第四步:写取得进步后的感受——feel very proud of my progress,表达自豪之情。 第五步:以It makes me believe that hard work really pays off and encourages me to keep moving forward.收束全文,用makes sb. believe that…和encourages sb. to do…双重嵌套句式完成从“进步的个例”到“努力就有回报”这一信念的升华,完成第三个写作要点。 [亮点词汇] progress 进步 improve 改善 independent 独立的 proud 骄傲的 pay off 得到回报 keep moving forward 不断前进 used to 过去经常 over the past three years 在过去的三年里 [高分句型] 1. "Progress is the life-style of man," as Victor Hugo said. 中文意思:“进步,才是人应该有的现象,”正如雨果所说。 句式:引语前置搭配as sb. said的引述结构,是中考英语中提升文章文采的有效手法,适合开篇定调。 2. I used to find it difficult, but I kept practising reading and writing every day. 中文意思:我过去觉得很难,但我坚持每天练习阅读和写作。 句式:used to find it difficult先承认曾经的困难,but转折后kept practising点出坚持的行动,…find it + adj.(find it difficult)与keep doing两个重要结构嵌套在同一句中,体现语言复杂度。 3. It makes me believe that hard work really pays off and encourages me to keep moving forward. 中文意思:它让我相信努力真的会有回报,并鼓励我不断前进。 句式:make sb. do + that宾语从句 + encourage sb. to do的连环嵌套结构,在一个长句中完成“获得信念”和“获得动力”两个层次,是感悟类段落的高阶收束句。 6. (2026·广西桂林·二模)书面表达 假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Sam在来信中提到,他对中国的家庭文化很感兴趣,尤其是"家风"这个概念。请你用英语写一封回信,向他介绍你家的优良家风,以及你和父母是如何在日常相处中践行这种家风的。 要求: 1. 你家的优良家风是什么(如诚信正直、互敬互爱等); 2. 你和父母如何在日常相处中践行这种家风(如坦诚沟通、互相理解等); 3. 这种家风对你的成长有什么影响。 注意: 1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得透露个人信息; 3. 词数为80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:family value (n. 家风), honesty (n. 诚信), responsible (adj. 负责任的) Dear Sam, I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese family culture. Let me tell you about my family values. Best wishes, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear Sam, I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese family culture. Let me tell you about my family values. In my family, honesty is the most important value. My parents always tell me to be honest with myself and others. In daily life, we have open and honest talks. When I make a mistake, they listen to me with understanding instead of getting angry. This family value has taught me to be a responsible person. It has also made our family closer and full of love. Best wishes, Li Hua 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属应用文中的电子邮件体裁,是向外国朋友介绍中国家庭文化的书信,聚焦“家风”这一富有中华文化特色的核心概念,话题既具跨文化交际价值又有德育内涵,是广西中考英语模拟题中文化意识类命题的代表作,侧重考查学生用英语讲好中国故事、传递中国价值的语言输出能力。 2. 时态:全文以一般现在时为主基调,契合“介绍家风→说明做法→讲述影响”这一说明兼议论的语体需要:陈述家风是什么使用一般现在时(honesty is the most important value),说明日常践行方式使用一般现在时(we have open and honest talks),表达家风对成长的影响使用现在完成时与一般现在时结合(has taught me to be…, has also made our family…),时态选择稳中有变,体现从“持续事实”到“持续影响”的自然推演。 3. 写作提示:本题给出三个递进式写作要点——①你家的优良家风是什么→②你和父母如何在日常生活中践行→③这种家风对你的成长有什么影响,词数要求80左右,开头和结尾已给出,学生需在回信格式内围绕“是什么→怎么做→怎么样”三层递进完成核心内容。家风主题对初中生有一定抽象性,写作时需以具体事例支撑抽象价值:如以having open and honest talks体现honesty(诚实)的家风,以listen with understanding体现尊重与理解,使抽象概念落地为可感知的生活细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步:承接给出的开头句,直接亮出家风核心——In my family, honesty is the most important value.,用最高级(the most important)和honesty这一核心词定位全文主线,完成第一个写作要点。 第二步:写父母的教导——My parents always tell me to be honest with myself and others.,用tell sb. to do结构表达家风的代际传承,be honest with的短语使用精准。 第三步:转入日常生活的践行——we have open and honest talks,使家风的抽象概念落地为日常交流的具体场景。 第四步:以具体情境深化践行描写——When I make a mistake, they listen to me with understanding instead of getting angry.,用when时间状语从句与instead of替代结构,凸显父母的教育方式,使“践行”可感可触,完成第二个写作要点。 第五步:写家风对成长的影响——This family value has taught me to be a responsible person.,用现在完成时强调影响的持续性。 第六步:补充家风对家庭氛围的影响——It has also made our family closer and full of love.,用make + 宾语 + 宾语补足语结构完成第三个写作要点,以“亲近”和“充满爱”双重表达温暖收束全文,再衔接已给出的结尾Best wishes,。 [亮点词汇] family value 家风 honesty 诚信 responsible 负责任的 be honest with 对……诚实 understanding 理解 instead of 而不是 make a mistake 犯错 full of love 充满爱 [高分句型] 1. When I make a mistake, they listen to me with understanding instead of getting angry. 中文意思:当我犯错时,他们用理解而不是生气来倾听我。 句式:When时间状语从句搭配instead of doing替代结构,既状写了情境又凸显了父母教育方式的独特性,是叙事句中渗透价值判断的成熟写法。 2. This family value has taught me to be a responsible person. 中文意思:这种家风教会了我做一个负责任的人。 句式:现在完成时搭配teach sb. to be结构,强调家风对品格养成的持续塑造作用,是文化影响类表达的经典句式。 3. It has also made our family closer and full of love. 中文意思:它也让我们家更亲密、充满爱。 句式:make + 宾语 + 形容词补语(closer)与形容词短语补语(full of love)并列结构,简洁而有温度地表达家风的深层影响,是收束段的温暖句式。 7. (2026·广西玉林·一模)书面表达 你校英语报正在举办主题为"我的校园"的征文活动。请你以"My School Club"为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你喜爱的校园社团。内容包括: 1. 你最喜欢的社团; 2. 你参加的社团活动的经历或收获; 3. 你对社团未来发展的看法或建议。 注意: 1. 词数为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:favourite (adj. 最喜欢的), creative (adj. 有创造力的), suggest (v. 建议) My School Club School clubs make our school life colourful. 【例文】 My School Club School clubs make our school life colourful. My favourite school club is the Art Club. In the club, we learn to draw and paint together. I have learned many creative skills and made some good friends there. Last month, our club held an art show and my painting won a prize. It was a great experience. I suggest that the club should have more outdoor painting activities. I believe the Art Club will become even more popular in the future. 【解析】 [总体分析] 1. 题材:本文属说明文中的社团介绍类征文,以"My School Club"为题介绍自己喜爱的校园社团,涵盖“社团选择→活动经历与收获→建议与展望”三个递进层次,是广西中考英语模拟题中校园生活类话题的典型命题,重点考查学生将个人经历与主观评价、未来建议有机结合的综合写作能力。 2. 时态:全文时态随叙述维度切换:介绍社团现状和个人喜好使用一般现在时(My favourite school club is the Art Club, we learn to draw and paint together),叙述具体经历事件使用一般过去时(Last month, our club held an art show and my painting won a prize),提出建议使用虚拟语气(I suggest that the club should have more outdoor painting activities),展望未来使用一般将来时(I believe the Art Club will become even more popular),时态灵活而不凌乱,服务于“现状→经历→建议→展望”四层叙事结构。 3. 写作提示:本题明确给出三个递进要点——①最喜欢的社团→②参加活动的经历或收获→③对社团未来发展的看法或建议,词数要求80左右,开头句School clubs make our school life colourful.已给出且不计入总词数。作文宜以“社团选择→活动经历→成果收获→建议展望”为叙事主线,其中活动经历部分可使用具体事件增强说服力(如参赛获奖),建议部分需用should等情态动词体现语气,展望部分可用比较级(more popular)表示期待。 [写作步骤] 第一步:以给出的开头句School clubs make our school life colourful.引入话题,紧接着以My favourite school club is the Art Club.亮出选择,完成第一个写作要点。 第二步:简要描述社团日常活动——we learn to draw and paint together,再以I have learned many creative skills and made some good friends there.一句概括收获,为下文的“具体经历”做铺垫。 第三步:转入具体经历描写——Last month, our club held an art show and my painting won a prize.,用具体的时间和获奖事件使“经历”真实可信,再以It was a great experience.评价收束该段,完成第二个写作要点。 第四步:转入建议部分——I suggest that the club should have more outdoor painting activities.,使用suggest + that + should虚拟语气提出建设性意见,语气得体。 第五步:以展望收束全文——I believe the Art Club will become even more popular in the future.,用believe + 宾语从句表达对社团未来的信心,even more popular的比较级使用增强表达力度,完成第三个写作要点。 [亮点词汇] colourful 丰富多彩的 creative skills 创作技能 art show 艺术展 won a prize 获奖 experience 经历 suggest 建议 outdoor painting activities 户外写生活动 popular 受欢迎的 [高分句型] 1. Last month, our club held an art show and my painting won a prize. 中文意思:上个月,我们社团举办了一场艺术展,我的画获奖了。 句式:过去时间状语(Last month)前置搭配and并列两个一般过去时分句,时间清晰、事件完整,是记叙具体经历的典型句式。 2. I suggest that the club should have more outdoor painting activities. 中文意思:我建议社团应该多举办户外写生活动。 句式:suggest + that引导的宾语从句配合should虚拟语气,是英语中表达建议的标准句式,语气得体且正式,适合书面建议场合。 3. I believe the Art Club will become even more popular in the future. 中文意思:我相信艺术社团将来会变得更受欢迎。 句式:believe后接一般将来时的宾语从句,even more popular中的比较级修饰传达强烈期待,是展望类收束段表达信心的实用句型。 试卷第1页,共3页 / 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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