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专题05 书面表达(原卷版)
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1.(2025·广西·中考真题)你校英语报正在举办主题为“我爱校园”的征文活动。请你以“My School Library”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍学校的图书馆或图书室(library)。内容包括:
1.基本情况介绍(位置、环境、图书种类等);
2.对你的帮助;
3.你想为它做的事。
注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇 floor(n.楼层),bright(adj.明亮的),kind(n.种类)
My School Library
My favourite place in my school is the library. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(2024·广西·中考真题)假定你是李华,你的外籍朋友Sam知道你将参加你校举办的课本剧比赛(textbook play competition),他对此很感兴趣。请你用英语写一封邮件,告知他相关的情况。内容包括:
1.比赛信息(时间、地点……);
2.你的准备计划(阅读课文、参加讨论……);
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:prepare(v.准备),text(n.课文),discuss(v.讨论),performance(n.表演)
Dear Sam,
How is it going? I’m glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2023·广西·中考真题)艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等);
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等);
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:art course(艺术课),painting(n.绘画),calligraphy(n.书法),drama(n.戏剧)
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2022·广西·中考真题)在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中,你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧!现校刊英文专栏以 “Learning to learn”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 一个科目名称;
2. 此科目的学习方法(至少两个);
3. 此科目的学习感受或期望。
写作要求:
1. 将标题和首句补充完整;
2. 包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右。
Methods of learning ________
Here are my methods of learning ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2021·广西·中考真题)校园处处都是美,校刊的英文专栏Sharing Beauty以“校园最美之地”为主题征稿,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 你认为校园的哪一个地方最美?
2. 这个地方在校园的哪个位置?
3. 你觉得这个地方很美的两个理由。
写作要求:
1. 内容必须积极向上,并包含所有要点;
2. 结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚、连贯;
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构,书写规范;
4. 文中不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分;
5. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere.
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6.(2025·广西桂林·三模)假如你是李华,学校英语校刊正在举办以“My Dream Job”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 你的梦想职业是什么;
2. 你为什么想从事这个职业;
3. 为了实现这个梦想,你打算怎么做。
注意:1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:be interested in (对……感兴趣),allow sb. to do sth. (允许某人做某事),passion (n. 激情)
My Dream Job
Everyone has a dream job, and mine is to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2025·广西南宁·三模)同学们在初中三年参加过各种各样的学校活动,如文化艺术活动、运动会、学科竞赛、节日活动等。你校英语周报正开展以“The Most Unforgettable School Activity”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 最令你难忘的一次学校活动是什么;
2. 你参与该活动的经历(时间、地点、……);
3. 你的收获。
注意:
1. 词数为80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇;practise (v. 练习), cheer (v. 欢呼), meaningful (adj. 有意义的), teamwork (n. 团队合作)
The Most Unforgettable School Activity
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8.(2025·广西玉林·三模)“一屋不扫, 何以扫天下。”在校园生活中, 每位同学都曾担任值日生, 通过日常劳动和服务为班级贡献力量。这些看似简单的工作不仅维护了教室的整洁, 也让我们学会了责任与担当。请以“My Journey as a Duty Student”为题, 结合以下内容写一篇英语短文。
内容要点:
1. 值日生的日常职责;
2. 一次让你记忆深刻的值日经历(具体困难、应对措施、结果);
3. 这段经历带来的感悟(如责任感、团结协作……)。
参考词汇: towel(n. 毛巾), soaked(adj. 湿透的), experience(n. 经历), responsibility(n. 责任感)
注意:
1. 词数为80左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数, 内容必须包含所有要点;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My Journey as a Duty Student
“If you cannot clean your own room, how can you take on the world?” This ancient saying reminds me of my days as a duty student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2025·广西柳州·三模)生命在于运动。随着阳光体育活动的开展,学校更为重视学生的健康,体育活动情况发生了很大变化。假设你是李华,作为学生中的一员,请你以“Sports in our school”为题,给校英文报刊写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 学校体育活动的变化情况(运动时间变长、运动项目增多等);
2. 同学们喜欢的体育活动;
3. 积极的影响。
注意:1. 词数为80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇:change a lot (变化大), sports events (运动项目), colourful (丰富多彩的)
Sports in our school
Now our school is paying more and more attention to students’ health. __________________________________________________________________________________
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10.(2025·广西·三模)三年来,你心中一定有最想感谢的人。值此毕业季,英语社团即将开展以“感恩”为主题的活动。假如你是Andy,请你用英文写一张Thank-you Note,表达你的感恩之情,内容包括:
1.你最想感谢的人;
2.你曾经获得的帮助;
3.你的感言和祝福。
注意:
1.补全称呼部分,落款已给出;
2.文中不得透露个人信息;
3.词数80词左右。
参考词汇:graduate (v. 毕业), encourage (v. 鼓励), mistake (n. 错误), confident (adj. 自信的)
My dear ______,
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Andy
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专题05 书面表达(解析版)
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1.(2025·广西·中考真题)你校英语报正在举办主题为“我爱校园”的征文活动。请你以“My School Library”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍学校的图书馆或图书室(library)。内容包括:
1.基本情况介绍(位置、环境、图书种类等);
2.对你的帮助;
3.你想为它做的事。
注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇 floor(n.楼层),bright(adj.明亮的),kind(n.种类)
My School Library
My favourite place in my school is the library. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My School Library
My favourite place in my school is the library. Our school library is on the second floor of the teaching building. It is bright and quiet, with shelves full of books of different kinds, such as storybooks, science books, and magazines.
The library has helped me a lot. I often read there after class, which improves my reading skills and broadens my knowledge. It is also a perfect place to study and do homework. To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organize books and keep it clean. I also plan to donate some interesting books to share with others.
I love our school library and hope it becomes even better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍图书馆的基本情况,包括位置、环境、图书种类等;
第三步,介绍图书馆对自己的帮助以及想为它做的事。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②give back回报
③plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
①I often read there after class, which improves my reading skills and broadens my knowledge.(which引导的定语从句)
②To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organize books and keep it clean.(动词不定式作目的状语)
2.(2024·广西·中考真题)假定你是李华,你的外籍朋友Sam知道你将参加你校举办的课本剧比赛(textbook play competition),他对此很感兴趣。请你用英语写一封邮件,告知他相关的情况。内容包括:
1.比赛信息(时间、地点……);
2.你的准备计划(阅读课文、参加讨论……);
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:prepare(v.准备),text(n.课文),discuss(v.讨论),performance(n.表演)
Dear Sam,
How is it going? I’m glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
How is it going? I’m glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school.
First of all, we plan to hold it in the school hall. Then the beginning of the competition is 3 o’clock on the Friday of next week. Besides, there are many exciting activities on that day. We will read texts and have discussions. We will have role play and students will try their best to show themselves. There is no doubt that we will have a good time.
In a word, I want to invite you to take part in it. We are all looking forward to seeing you on that day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍这次课本剧比赛的安排;
第三步,表达对对方到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all 首先
②the beginning of ……的开始
③try their best to do sth 尽力做某事
④In a word 总之
[高分句型]
①We will have role play and students will try their best to show themselves.(并列句)
②We are all looking forward to seeing you on that day!(动名词作宾语)
3.(2023·广西·中考真题)艺术充满魅力,艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等);
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等);
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:art course(艺术课),painting(n.绘画),calligraphy(n.书法),drama(n.戏剧)
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My favourite art course
Art courses are important in school. We have many art classes in our school, such as music, painting, dance, calligraphy, drama and so on. However, my favorite art class is painting.
I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. Our school holds a painting competition on June 30 every year.
I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. With my crayons, I can paint a vibrant world and anything that catches my fancy. Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给的要点提示,介绍最喜欢的一门艺术课,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,并点明自己最喜欢的艺术课是绘画;
第二步,具体介绍课程、活动的安排;
第三步,介绍自己喜欢绘画的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②from...to...从……到……
③allow sb to do允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m. (which引导的限制性定语从句)
②I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me.(when引导的时间状语从句)
4.(2022·广西·中考真题)在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中,你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧!现校刊英文专栏以 “Learning to learn”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 一个科目名称;
2. 此科目的学习方法(至少两个);
3. 此科目的学习感受或期望。
写作要求:
1. 将标题和首句补充完整;
2. 包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右。
Methods of learning ________
Here are my methods of learning ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Methods of learning English
Here are my methods of learning English. First, I usually watch English movies and listen to English songs. I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions. Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words. In this way, the new words can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s more, it’s a good habit to keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and improve my writing skills as well.
English is a bridge which connects the world and us. It’s interesting to learn it. I hope I can make greater progress in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“学会学习”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段先介绍自己学习英语的方法;第二段表达学习英语的感受或期望。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误 。
5.(2021·广西·中考真题)校园处处都是美,校刊的英文专栏Sharing Beauty以“校园最美之地”为主题征稿,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 你认为校园的哪一个地方最美?
2. 这个地方在校园的哪个位置?
3. 你觉得这个地方很美的两个理由。
写作要求:
1. 内容必须积极向上,并包含所有要点;
2. 结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚、连贯;
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构,书写规范;
4. 文中不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分;
5. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere.
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【答案】例文
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere. Among all the places, I like the library best. The library lies in the eastern part of our school. It is between the teaching building and the playground. It is in front of our laboratory building. There are a variety of books and most of my classmates like to go there to relax. We can learn a lot from books and we enjoy the quietness and peace in the library. Reading usually makes me relaxed and knowledgeable.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以The Most Beautiful Place in My School为题,根据提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍校园的哪一个地方最美,它在什么位置以及喜欢这个地方的理由。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
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6.(2025·广西桂林·三模)假如你是李华,学校英语校刊正在举办以“My Dream Job”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 你的梦想职业是什么;
2. 你为什么想从事这个职业;
3. 为了实现这个梦想,你打算怎么做。
注意:1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:be interested in (对……感兴趣),allow sb. to do sth. (允许某人做某事),passion (n. 激情)
My Dream Job
Everyone has a dream job, and mine is to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Dream Job
Everyone has a dream job, and mine is to become a software engineer. I have been interested in computers since childhood, and I am fascinated by how technology can solve real-world problems.
I want to pursue this career because it allows me to be creative and innovative. I enjoy coding and designing programs, and I hope to develop useful applications that can improve people’s lives.
To achieve my dream, I plan to study computer science in university and practice coding regularly. I will also participate in tech competitions to gain experience. With hard work and passion, I believe I can succeed in this field.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“我梦想的工作”的话题,并介绍未来想从事的职业;
第二步,具体阐述选择该职业的原因;
第三步,描述为实现梦想要做的努力。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
②achieve one’s dream实现某人的梦想
③participate in参加
④succeed in sth在某方面成功
[高分句型]
①I want to pursue this career because it allows me to be creative and innovative. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I enjoy coding and designing programs, and I hope to develop useful applications that can improve people’s lives. (that引导的定语从句)
7.(2025·广西南宁·三模)同学们在初中三年参加过各种各样的学校活动,如文化艺术活动、运动会、学科竞赛、节日活动等。你校英语周报正开展以“The Most Unforgettable School Activity”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 最令你难忘的一次学校活动是什么;
2. 你参与该活动的经历(时间、地点、……);
3. 你的收获。
注意:
1. 词数为80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇;practise (v. 练习), cheer (v. 欢呼), meaningful (adj. 有意义的), teamwork (n. 团队合作)
The Most Unforgettable School Activity
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【答案】例文
The Most Unforgettable School Activity
Looking back at the past 3 years, there were many activities in my school. Among them, the most unforgettable one is the singing competition.
The competition was held in the school hall last Friday. Before that day, I chose a popular English song and practised it as much as possible. When it was my turn to perform, I felt so nervous that my heart was beating fast. However, as the music started, I gradually forgot everything and sang with all my heart. After I finished, my classmates cheered for me. Guess what? I won the first prize in the end!
This activity is really meaningful. I not only improved my singing skills, but also gained confidence. It will stay in my heart forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主,其余根据实际情况灵活运用时态;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,表明有一次最令自己难忘的学校活动;
第二步,详述活动的相关内容;
第三步,讲述在这次活动中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① look back at 回顾,回望
② as much as possible 尽可能多地
③ cheer for 为……加油
④ not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
① Looking back at the past 3 years, there were many activities in my school. (there be句式)
② When it was my turn to perform, I felt so nervous that my heart was beating fast. (when引导时间状语从句,so...that...引导结果状语从句)
8.(2025·广西玉林·三模)“一屋不扫, 何以扫天下。”在校园生活中, 每位同学都曾担任值日生, 通过日常劳动和服务为班级贡献力量。这些看似简单的工作不仅维护了教室的整洁, 也让我们学会了责任与担当。请以“My Journey as a Duty Student”为题, 结合以下内容写一篇英语短文。
内容要点:
1. 值日生的日常职责;
2. 一次让你记忆深刻的值日经历(具体困难、应对措施、结果);
3. 这段经历带来的感悟(如责任感、团结协作……)。
参考词汇: towel(n. 毛巾), soaked(adj. 湿透的), experience(n. 经历), responsibility(n. 责任感)
注意:
1. 词数为80左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数, 内容必须包含所有要点;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My Journey as a Duty Student
“If you cannot clean your own room, how can you take on the world?” This ancient saying reminds me of my days as a duty student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文:
My Journey as a Duty Student
“If you cannot clean your own room, how can you take on the world?” This ancient saying reminds me of my days as a duty student. As a duty student, I am responsible for cleaning the blackboard, sweeping the floor and organizing bookshelves. These simple jobs keep our classroom tidy and create a good learning environment.
I will remember an unforgettable rainy afternoon last month. First, When I entered the classroom, the classroom windows were open. Rainwater flooded the floor, and books on the bookshelves were wet. Then, I rushed to close the windows, but the wind was too strong. Next, I called two classmates to help me hold them shut. After that, we used towels to clean the floor and moved the wet books to a dry table. Finally, we placed warning signs to keep others safe. Though we were soaked, we saved most of the books and made the classroom safe again.
Through this experience, I have got a deeper understanding of responsibility and the importance of teamwork. Even small tasks become easier when we work together. I will continue to keep my duties as a duty student and value the power of teamwork.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先阐述作为值日学生的日常职责,再讲述上个月一个难忘的雨天经历,通过具体事件体现责任与团队合作。
第二步,最后总结感悟,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①be responsible for 对……负责
②rush to 急忙去
③make...safe again 让……再次安全
[高分句型]
①First, When I entered the classroom, the classroom windows were open. (When引导时间状语从句)
②Though we were soaked, we saved most of the books and made the classroom safe again.(though 引导让步状语从句)
9.(2025·广西柳州·三模)生命在于运动。随着阳光体育活动的开展,学校更为重视学生的健康,体育活动情况发生了很大变化。假设你是李华,作为学生中的一员,请你以“Sports in our school”为题,给校英文报刊写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 学校体育活动的变化情况(运动时间变长、运动项目增多等);
2. 同学们喜欢的体育活动;
3. 积极的影响。
注意:1. 词数为80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇:change a lot (变化大), sports events (运动项目), colourful (丰富多彩的)
Sports in our school
Now our school is paying more and more attention to students’ health. __________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】One possible version:
Sports in our school
Now our school is paying more and more attention to students’ health. So sports in our school have changed a lot.
First, we have much more time to do sports than before. We have more than three PE classes a week and we have at least one hour to exercise every day. What’s more, we have many more sports events to choose. Among them, ball games are the most popular. After class, all the students take an active part in sports, such as running and jumping on the playground. We become much healthier, including mind and body. As a result, our study has become better.
Thanks to sports in our school, our school life is becoming more colourful. Also, we are growing up healthily and strongly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,引出话题;
第二步、介绍学校体育活动的变化情况以及同学们喜欢的体育活动;
第三步、介绍积极影响并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①more than超过
②at least至少
③take an active part in积极参与
④as a result因此
[高分句型]
①Now our school is paying more and more attention to students’ health.(比较级+and+比较级)
10.(2025·广西·三模)三年来,你心中一定有最想感谢的人。值此毕业季,英语社团即将开展以“感恩”为主题的活动。假如你是Andy,请你用英文写一张Thank-you Note,表达你的感恩之情,内容包括:
1.你最想感谢的人;
2.你曾经获得的帮助;
3.你的感言和祝福。
注意:
1.补全称呼部分,落款已给出;
2.文中不得透露个人信息;
3.词数80词左右。
参考词汇:graduate (v. 毕业), encourage (v. 鼓励), mistake (n. 错误), confident (adj. 自信的)
My dear ______,
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Andy
【答案】例文
My dear English teacher,
As I’m about to graduate, I want to express my deep gratitude. When I first started learning English, I was always afraid of making mistakes and was very shy. You noticed my problem and often encouraged me to speak English in class. Every time I answered questions, no matter how many mistakes I made, you always smiled and gave me positive feedback.
Thanks to your patient guidance, I’ve become more confident. I wish you a happy and healthy life.
Andy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为感谢信。
②时态:时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。
③提示:明确给出写作内容要点,需涵盖感谢对象、曾获帮助、感言祝福,要注意格式规范,控制词数,且不能透露个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明感谢对象是英语老师,直接抒发即将毕业之际的感恩之情。
第二步,通过描述过去自己学英语时害怕犯错、害羞的状态,以及老师鼓励自己在课堂上说英语、给予积极反馈的具体事例,阐述感恩理由。
第三步,用简洁话语表达对老师生活幸福健康的美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①graduate毕业
②encourage鼓励
③positive feedback积极反馈
[高分句型]
①When I first started learning English, I was always afraid of making mistakes and was very shy.(时间状语从句 )
②Thanks to your patient guidance, I've become more confident.(“thanks to” 引导的短语,简洁有力地表明因果关系,体现老师的引导对自己产生的积极变化 )
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