摘要:
本初中英语讲义聚焦“介绍学校”书面表达核心知识点,系统梳理There be句式、连词and、方位介词(in front of, between...and..., next to, across from等)及be动词的正确运用。通过审题立意(明确主题、人称、时态)、巧列提纲、语料积累(常用短语与句子)、高分范文解析等学习支架,引导学生从语言知识到实际写作的连贯应用。
资料特色在于“输入-输出-评价”闭环设计,语料积累提供“do exercises together”“spend most of the time”等实用表达,范文通过方位介词精准描述建筑物位置并补充活动细节(如运动场做操、图书馆阅读),评价表促进自评与他评。既提升语言能力(规范表达)和思维品质(逻辑组织),又培养学习能力(方法掌握),课中辅助教师高效教学,课后助力学生复习巩固、查漏补缺。
内容正文:
第5课时 Section B(2a-2b)
本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语简单介绍自己学校的基本情况,内容包括学校里的建筑物、自己最喜爱的地点、可以从事的活动等等。
1.能用There be句式来介绍自己的学校;
2.能正确运用连词and,方位介词in front of, between … and …, next to, across from等;
3.能正确使用be动词。
假如你是何平,下图是你们学校的平面布局图。请你根据图片内容,用英语写一篇60词左右的短文,向大家介绍一下你的学校。
【审题立意】
主题
人称
时态
My school
第一人称、
第三人称
一般现在时
【巧列提纲】
【语料积累】
常用短语
1.一起做操 do exercises together
2.在……左边/右边 on the left/right of …
3.花费大多数时间 spend most of the time
4.在……对面 across from
5.各种各样的食物 many/all/different kinds of food
常用句子
1.There are many modern buildings in it.
里面有很多现代建筑物。
2.In the centre of the school is a sports field.
学校中央是一个运动场。
3.On the right of the classroom building is the dining hall.
教学楼的右边是餐厅。
4.What a great school!
多棒的校园啊!
【高分点拨】
Hello! I am He Ping. ①Here is a map of my school. My school is very beautiful. There are many modern buildings.
②The science building is on the left of the school gate. We often do experiments there. Across from it is the office building. When we need to ask our teachers for help, we can go there and find them. The sports field is in the middle of the school. All the students go there and do exercises together in the morning. How amazing! Behind it is the classroom building. We spend most of the time in our classroom. On the right of it is the dining hall. We can enjoy food from different countries there. In front of the dining hall is the school library. ③It’s my favourite place because it’s quiet and I enjoy reading there. When I read books there, time goes quickly.
My school is a place full of laughter and joy. ④What a great place! I love my school.
①介绍学校, 用a map of …,并用beautiful作总体介绍。
②用on the left/right of, across from, in the middle of, behind, in front of介绍学校建筑物位置。
③介绍自己最喜爱的地点,并适当增加原因和细节:because it’s … and I enjoy … there. When I …
④用What a great place! I love my school.结束全文。
假如你是李华,请你给Mike写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你的学校。内容包括:1.图中学校建筑物的位置;2.对学校的感受。
注意:1.条理清楚,语句连贯,语法正确;
2.词数:60左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
书写:
Advice:______________________ __________________________________________________________
Good writing makes your article better.
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to tell you about my school. My school is big and beautiful. There is a big playground in the middle of my school. We raise the flag and do exercises there. On the left of the playground is the classroom building. Behind it is the office building. Our teachers work there. On the right of the playground is the library. It is big. It’s my favourite place, because I can read all kinds of books there. The gym is in front of the library. The dining hall is behind the library. We can enjoy different delicious food there. On the left of the dining hall is the science building. We learn a lot there!
My school is very big and nice. I love my school. What about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导与评价】
步骤
要点
自评
他评
是(√) 否(×)
审
正确使用第三人称介绍自己的学校,用第一人称谈论自己的感受
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
体现信件的语言特征
润
用There be句式和方位介词来介绍学校建筑物
适当增加细节,描述各建筑物可以从事的活动等
查
介绍自己最喜爱的地点和原因等
正确使用be动词等
拼写、语法、标点无误
达到词数要求
书写美观、卷面整洁
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