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Unit 1 Happy Holiday
单元写作精练
【写作主题】
介绍假期生活
该单元旨在让学生学会用英语分享假期经历,明白假期是放松身心、拓展视野的重要方式。通过介绍自己或他人的假期生活,我们可以更好地记录旅途见闻、分享休闲感受,建立起对生活的热爱与感知。假期生活的介绍是为了让对方了解我们的出行地点、休闲活动、旅途心情与收获,这有助于构建互相理解的交流基础,从而培养用英语表达生活体验的能力。
【词汇积累】
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1. holiday 假期
2. countryside 乡村
3. grandparents 祖父母
4. welcome 欢迎
5. care 照顾
6. experience 经历,体验
7. fresh 新鲜的
8. quiet 安静的
9. amazing 令人惊叹的
10. wonderful 精彩的
11. meaningful 有意义的
12. unforgettable 难忘的
13. relaxed 放松的
14. excited 兴奋的
15. delicious 美味的
16. special 特别的
17. interesting 有趣的
18. someone 某人
19. everyone 每个人
20. something 某事物
21. anything 任何事物
22. nothing 没有什么
23. everything 一切
24. the Great Wall 长城
25. old town 古镇
26. palace 宫殿
27. square 广场
28. take photos 拍照
29. take a train / bus 乘火车/公交
30. climb the mountain 爬山
31. enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景
32. try local food 品尝当地食物
33. get together 聚在一起
34. go back 回去
35. take one's breath away 让某人叹为观止
36. feel like doing sth. 想要做某事/感觉像……
37. forget one's worries 忘记烦恼
38. make memories 留下回忆
【句式积累】
1. How was your holiday? 你的假期怎么样?
2. It was great / fantastic / wonderful. 太棒了。
3. I went to Yunnan / Beijing with my family. 我和家人去了云南/北京。
4. We stayed in the old town for a few days. 我们在古镇待了几天。
5. The scenery there was amazing. 那里的风景令人惊叹。
6. We visited some famous places. 我们参观了一些著名景点。
7. We took a lot of great photos. 我们拍了很多好看的照片。
8. I felt happy / excited / relaxed. 我感到高兴/兴奋/放松。
9. Did you go anywhere interesting? 你去了什么有趣的地方吗?
10. Did you do anything special? 你做了什么特别的事吗?
11. I didn't go anywhere special. 我没去什么特别的地方。
12. I did nothing special. 我没做什么特别的事。
13. What about you? 你呢?
14. I just stayed at home to read and relax. 我只是待在家里看书放松。
15. It just took my breath away! 它简直让我叹为观止!
16. I felt like I was walking inside a palace. 我感觉自己像走在宫殿里。
17. We were so happy that we didn't notice the time. 我们太开心了,以至于没有注意到时间。
18. The weather was fine. 天气很好。
19. The air was fresh and cool. 空气清新凉爽。
20. What a wonderful experience I had! 我拥有了一段多么美妙的经历啊!
21. I really hope I can go back again someday. 我真希望有一天能再去一次。
22. A holiday is a time to relax, enjoy life, and make memories. 假期是放松、享受生活和留下回忆的时光。
23. During the National Day holiday, I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents. 国庆假期,我去乡下看望了祖父母。
24. They gave me a warm welcome and took good care of me. 他们热情欢迎了我,并悉心照顾我。
25. The air was fresher and the environment was quieter. 空气更新鲜,环境更安静。
26. I also found many interesting plants and animals that I had never seen before. 我还发现了许多以前从未见过的有趣动植物。
27. It was such a meaningful and happy holiday! 那真是一个既有意义又快乐的假期!
28. I really enjoyed the time with my family and hope to go back again soon. 我真的很享受和家人在一起的时光,希望很快能再去。
29. First, we visited the famous old town. 首先,我们参观了著名的古镇。
30. We walked around the old streets and enjoyed the delicious local food. 我们逛了老街,品尝了美味的当地食物。
31. Although we were a little tired, we felt very excited. 虽然我们有点累,但我们感到很兴奋。
32. This trip not only relaxed me but also made me closer to my family. 这次旅行不仅让我放松了,也让我和家人更亲近了。
33. It's truly an unforgettable experience. 这真是一次难忘的经历。
34. To make my holiday meaningful, I plan to read some books. 为了让假期有意义,我计划读一些书。
【原题呈现】
1.(25-26八年级上·河南新乡·期中)假如你是李华,国庆假期你去乡下看望了祖父母。在那里,你不仅受到了热情招待,还亲身体验了乡村生活,对比了城市和乡村的差异,并发现了许多有趣的动植物。请根据以上提示,写一篇短文,分享你的假期经历和感受。
要求:
1. 80词左右,内容完整,包含提示中的关键信息;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,使用恰当的连接词;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【审题构思】
文体:记叙文,用一般过去时为主
要点:看望祖父母、受到招待、体验乡村生活、城乡差异对比、发现有趣动植物
人称:第一人称(I/my)
三段式结构:
开头句:交代时间、地点、人物及事件
主体句:详细描述经历
结尾句:总结感受
【范文欣赏】
My Happy National Day Holiday
During the National Day holiday, I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents.
They gave me a warm welcome and took good care of me. I experienced the country life there, which was quite different from the city life. The air was fresher and the environment was quieter. I also found many interesting plants and animals that I had never seen before. It was such a meaningful and happy holiday!
I really enjoyed the time with my family and hope to go back again soon.
【亮点解析】
1. 开篇简洁清晰,直接交代时间(During the National Day holiday)、人物(I)、事件(went to the countryside to visit my grandparents),完整覆盖记叙文六要素中的时间、人物、地点、事件。
2. gave me a warm welcome 和 took good care of me 两个并列短语,简洁有力地呼应提示要点“受到热情招待”。
3. which was quite different from the city life 使用定语从句自然引出城乡对比,承上启下,呼应提示要点。
4. 比较级 fresher 和 quieter 直观呈现城乡差异,运用感官描写(空气、环境),让读者身临其境。
5. that I had never seen before 定语从句强调乡村事物的新奇感,体现城市孩子对乡村的新鲜体验,呼应提示要点“发现有趣的动植物”。
6. such a meaningful and happy holiday 使用感叹句总结假期感受,简洁有力。
7. 结尾 hope to go back again soon 呼应单元核心句式 I really hope I can go back again someday,表达对家人的珍惜和重返乡村的愿望,情感自然真挚。
【基础必做】
一、汉译英(主题要点翻译)
1.山间的美景美得令人窒息。
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2.这场旅行让我了解了一个国家的历史。
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3.没有人陪我,所以我独自去小镇旅行。
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4.西湖的景色美极了。
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5.我没有去任何特别的地方,只是在家看书放松。
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6.我去黄山和家人一起游玩。
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7.你假期做了什么有趣的事吗?
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二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:It takes one's breath away.
例句:The sunrise over the sea took my breath away.
(1) 黄山的奇松让我叹为观止。
(2) 莫斯科地铁的美丽让我叹为观止。
句型2:I felt like...
例句:Sometimes I felt like I was walking inside a palace.
(1) 当我站在长城上时,我感觉自己像个英雄。
(2) 在森林里散步时,我感觉自己像在童话世界里。
句型3:...not only...but also...
例句:This holiday not only brought me joy but also helped me learn new things.
(1) 这次旅行不仅让我放松了,还让我交到了新朋友。
(2) 假期不仅是为了娱乐,也帮助我们成长。
句型4:...so...that...
例句:We were so happy that we didn't notice the time.
(1) 风景如此美丽,以至于我们没有注意到时间过得很快。
(2) 食物如此美味,以至于我们吃了很多。
句型5:What a / such...!
例句:What a wonderful experience I had!
(1) 我度过了一个多么放松的假期啊!
(2) 多么难忘的一次旅行啊!
句型6:I really hope...
例句:I really hope I can go back again someday.
(1) 我真希望有一天能再去云南。
(2) 我真希望明年夏天还能去海边。
【提升必做】
一、话题作文
(一)
以“My Happy Holiday”为题,写一篇60—80词短文
内容包含假期地点、丽江古城/玉龙雪山、活动、个人感受
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(二)
读万卷书不如行万里路。不少人利用假期去旅行,丰富自己的假期生活,轻松愉悦的假期旅行总是能给我们留下美好的回忆。现你校校刊正在开展主题征文活动,请以“My ________ Trip”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你的一次旅行经历,并谈谈你的感受,或说说旅行给你带来的积极影响。
要求:(1) 请先将题目补充完整, 全文词数不少于80;
(2) 语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范;
(3) 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
My ________ Trip
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二、材料作文
(一)
每个人的暑假都是丰富多彩的,回忆一次令你难忘的假期旅游(不少于80词)。
内容提示:1.你假期去哪里了? 什么时候去的? 和谁去的? 怎么去的? 天气如何?
2.你做了什么? 看到了什么? 这些事物或者景观怎么样?
3.你吃了什么? 味道如何? 人们怎么样?
4.你最喜欢什么? 你觉得这次的假期旅游怎么样? 有何收获或感受?
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(二)
“读万卷书,行万里路”。假如你是李明,你校英语报正在举行征文比赛,主题是“A Wonderful Trip”请你根据下面的思维导图的要点提示和你的旅行经历,写一篇英语短文参加这次征文比赛。
要求:
(1)必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥;
(2)意思清楚,表达通畅,行文连贯,书写规范,词数90左右;
(3)不得出现个人真实信息。
A Wonderful Trip
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(三)
假期,是与家人相伴的时光,温暖而有力。无论旅途见闻,还是居家日常,都会成为记忆里温暖的光,为我们前行注入能量。假如你是Li Hua,请以“My Sweet Holiday with My Family”为题,写一篇约70词的短文,分享一次你和家人共度的愉快假期。
要求:1. 在哪里度过、做了什么、感受如何;
2. 70词左右,语言流畅,逻辑合理;书写工整,卷面整洁;不出现真实姓名。
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三、应用文
(一)电子邮件
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你的上一个假期情况。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件,介绍你的假期:
1. 假期时间和地点;
2. 你做了哪些事情(至少2件);
3. 你的感受。
要求:
词数:60-80词;
语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you? I want to tell you about my last holiday.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
假设你是李辉,你的英国朋友Tom要来中国旅行。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐一个值得旅行的城市;
(2)为他做一些简单的旅行规划;
(3)提醒旅行时的注意事项。
注意:
(1)词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
I’m so excited to hear that you’re coming to China! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hui
(二)书信
(25-26八年级上·河南周口·期末)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom想了解你的一次难忘的旅行经历。请你根据以下提示,写一封80-100词的回信。
提示:你去年暑假和家人去了北京;你们参观了长城、故宫和天安门广场;你们吃了北京烤鸭,非常美味;你觉得这次旅行很有趣,永远不会忘记。
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(三)演讲稿
(25-26八年级上·湖北武汉·期末)假设你是李华,寒假即将到来,你将如何度过一个修养身心又有意义的寒假呢?学校举办了“My Winter Holiday”主题演讲比赛,请你从地点,同伴和如何使寒假有意义等方面谈谈你的寒假计划。
内容提示:
- Where will you spend the holiday?
- Who are you going with?
- What will you do to make your holiday meaningful?
- Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Winter Holiday
The exciting winter holiday is coming!
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$Unit 1 Happy Holiday
单元写作精练
【写作主题】
介绍假期生活
该单元旨在让学生学会用英语分享假期经历,明白假期是放松身心、拓展视野的重要方式。通过介绍自己或他人的假期生活,我们可以更好地记录旅途见闻、分享休闲感受,建立起对生活的热爱与感知。假期生活的介绍是为了让对方了解我们的出行地点、休闲活动、旅途心情与收获,这有助于构建互相理解的交流基础,从而培养用英语表达生活体验的能力。
【词汇积累】
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1. holiday 假期
2. countryside 乡村
3. grandparents 祖父母
4. welcome 欢迎
5. care 照顾
6. experience 经历,体验
7. fresh 新鲜的
8. quiet 安静的
9. amazing 令人惊叹的
10. wonderful 精彩的
11. meaningful 有意义的
12. unforgettable 难忘的
13. relaxed 放松的
14. excited 兴奋的
15. delicious 美味的
16. special 特别的
17. interesting 有趣的
18. someone 某人
19. everyone 每个人
20. something 某事物
21. anything 任何事物
22. nothing 没有什么
23. everything 一切
24. the Great Wall 长城
25. old town 古镇
26. palace 宫殿
27. square 广场
28. take photos 拍照
29. take a train / bus 乘火车/公交
30. climb the mountain 爬山
31. enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景
32. try local food 品尝当地食物
33. get together 聚在一起
34. go back 回去
35. take one's breath away 让某人叹为观止
36. feel like doing sth. 想要做某事/感觉像……
37. forget one's worries 忘记烦恼
38. make memories 留下回忆
【句式积累】
1. How was your holiday? 你的假期怎么样?
2. It was great / fantastic / wonderful. 太棒了。
3. I went to Yunnan / Beijing with my family. 我和家人去了云南/北京。
4. We stayed in the old town for a few days. 我们在古镇待了几天。
5. The scenery there was amazing. 那里的风景令人惊叹。
6. We visited some famous places. 我们参观了一些著名景点。
7. We took a lot of great photos. 我们拍了很多好看的照片。
8. I felt happy / excited / relaxed. 我感到高兴/兴奋/放松。
9. Did you go anywhere interesting? 你去了什么有趣的地方吗?
10. Did you do anything special? 你做了什么特别的事吗?
11. I didn't go anywhere special. 我没去什么特别的地方。
12. I did nothing special. 我没做什么特别的事。
13. What about you? 你呢?
14. I just stayed at home to read and relax. 我只是待在家里看书放松。
15. It just took my breath away! 它简直让我叹为观止!
16. I felt like I was walking inside a palace. 我感觉自己像走在宫殿里。
17. We were so happy that we didn't notice the time. 我们太开心了,以至于没有注意到时间。
18. The weather was fine. 天气很好。
19. The air was fresh and cool. 空气清新凉爽。
20. What a wonderful experience I had! 我拥有了一段多么美妙的经历啊!
21. I really hope I can go back again someday. 我真希望有一天能再去一次。
22. A holiday is a time to relax, enjoy life, and make memories. 假期是放松、享受生活和留下回忆的时光。
23. During the National Day holiday, I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents. 国庆假期,我去乡下看望了祖父母。
24. They gave me a warm welcome and took good care of me. 他们热情欢迎了我,并悉心照顾我。
25. The air was fresher and the environment was quieter. 空气更新鲜,环境更安静。
26. I also found many interesting plants and animals that I had never seen before. 我还发现了许多以前从未见过的有趣动植物。
27. It was such a meaningful and happy holiday! 那真是一个既有意义又快乐的假期!
28. I really enjoyed the time with my family and hope to go back again soon. 我真的很享受和家人在一起的时光,希望很快能再去。
29. First, we visited the famous old town. 首先,我们参观了著名的古镇。
30. We walked around the old streets and enjoyed the delicious local food. 我们逛了老街,品尝了美味的当地食物。
31. Although we were a little tired, we felt very excited. 虽然我们有点累,但我们感到很兴奋。
32. This trip not only relaxed me but also made me closer to my family. 这次旅行不仅让我放松了,也让我和家人更亲近了。
33. It's truly an unforgettable experience. 这真是一次难忘的经历。
34. To make my holiday meaningful, I plan to read some books. 为了让假期有意义,我计划读一些书。
【原题呈现】
1.(25-26八年级上·河南新乡·期中)假如你是李华,国庆假期你去乡下看望了祖父母。在那里,你不仅受到了热情招待,还亲身体验了乡村生活,对比了城市和乡村的差异,并发现了许多有趣的动植物。请根据以上提示,写一篇短文,分享你的假期经历和感受。
要求:
1. 80词左右,内容完整,包含提示中的关键信息;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,使用恰当的连接词;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【审题构思】
文体:记叙文,用一般过去时为主
要点:看望祖父母、受到招待、体验乡村生活、城乡差异对比、发现有趣动植物
人称:第一人称(I/my)
三段式结构:
开头句:交代时间、地点、人物及事件
主体句:详细描述经历
结尾句:总结感受
【范文欣赏】
My Happy National Day Holiday
During the National Day holiday, I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents.
They gave me a warm welcome and took good care of me. I experienced the country life there, which was quite different from the city life. The air was fresher and the environment was quieter. I also found many interesting plants and animals that I had never seen before. It was such a meaningful and happy holiday!
I really enjoyed the time with my family and hope to go back again soon.
【亮点解析】
1. 开篇简洁清晰,直接交代时间(During the National Day holiday)、人物(I)、事件(went to the countryside to visit my grandparents),完整覆盖记叙文六要素中的时间、人物、地点、事件。
2. gave me a warm welcome 和 took good care of me 两个并列短语,简洁有力地呼应提示要点“受到热情招待”。
3. which was quite different from the city life 使用定语从句自然引出城乡对比,承上启下,呼应提示要点。
4. 比较级 fresher 和 quieter 直观呈现城乡差异,运用感官描写(空气、环境),让读者身临其境。
5. that I had never seen before 定语从句强调乡村事物的新奇感,体现城市孩子对乡村的新鲜体验,呼应提示要点“发现有趣的动植物”。
6. such a meaningful and happy holiday 使用感叹句总结假期感受,简洁有力。
7. 结尾 hope to go back again soon 呼应单元核心句式 I really hope I can go back again someday,表达对家人的珍惜和重返乡村的愿望,情感自然真挚。
【基础必做】
一、汉译英(主题要点翻译)
1.山间的美景美得令人窒息。
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2.这场旅行让我了解了一个国家的历史。
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3.没有人陪我,所以我独自去小镇旅行。
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4.西湖的景色美极了。
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5.我没有去任何特别的地方,只是在家看书放松。
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6.我去黄山和家人一起游玩。
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7.你假期做了什么有趣的事吗?
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【参考答案】
1.The beauty of the mountains is breathtaking./The scenery in the mountains is so beautiful that it takes your breath away.
2.This trip made me learn about the history of a country.
3.Nobody went with me, so I traveled to the town alone.
4.The scenery of West Lake is very beautiful.
5.I didn’t go anywhere special, just stayed at home and read books to relax.
6.I went to Mount Huangshan with my family.
7.Did you do anything interesting on your holiday/vacation?
二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:It takes one's breath away.
例句:The sunrise over the sea took my breath away.
(1) 黄山的奇松让我叹为观止。
(2) 莫斯科地铁的美丽让我叹为观止。
【参考答案】
(1) The strange pines in Mount Huangshan took my breath away.
(2) The beauty of the Moscow Metro took my breath away.
句型2:I felt like...
例句:Sometimes I felt like I was walking inside a palace.
(1) 当我站在长城上时,我感觉自己像个英雄。
(2) 在森林里散步时,我感觉自己像在童话世界里。
【参考答案】
(1) When I stood on the Great Wall, I felt like I was a hero.
(2) While walking in the forest, I felt like I was in a fairy tale.
句型3:...not only...but also...
例句:This holiday not only brought me joy but also helped me learn new things.
(1) 这次旅行不仅让我放松了,还让我交到了新朋友。
(2) 假期不仅是为了娱乐,也帮助我们成长。
【参考答案】
(1) This trip not only relaxed me but also helped me make new friends.
(2) Holidays are not only for fun but also help us grow.
句型4:...so...that...
例句:We were so happy that we didn't notice the time.
(1) 风景如此美丽,以至于我们没有注意到时间过得很快。
(2) 食物如此美味,以至于我们吃了很多。
【参考答案】
(1) The scenery was so beautiful that we didn't notice the time passed quickly.
(2) The food was so delicious that we ate a lot.
句型5:What a / such...!
例句:What a wonderful experience I had!
(1) 我度过了一个多么放松的假期啊!
(2) 多么难忘的一次旅行啊!
【参考答案】
(1) What a relaxing holiday I had!
(2) What an unforgettable trip it was!
句型6:I really hope...
例句:I really hope I can go back again someday.
(1) 我真希望有一天能再去云南。
(2) 我真希望明年夏天还能去海边。
【参考答案】
(1) I really hope I can go to Yunnan again someday.
(2) I really hope I can go to the seaside next summer.
【提升必做】
一、话题作文
(一)
以“My Happy Holiday”为题,写一篇60—80词短文
内容包含假期地点、丽江古城/玉龙雪山、活动、个人感受
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【例文】
My Happy Holiday
Last summer holiday, I went to Lijiang with my parents.
First, we visited the famous Lijiang Ancient Town. We walked around the old streets and enjoyed the delicious local food. The buildings there were very special. Then, we went to the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain. The mountain was high and covered with white snow. We took many beautiful photos there.
Although we were a little tired, we felt very excited. I really enjoyed my holiday in Lijiang.
(二)
读万卷书不如行万里路。不少人利用假期去旅行,丰富自己的假期生活,轻松愉悦的假期旅行总是能给我们留下美好的回忆。现你校校刊正在开展主题征文活动,请以“My ________ Trip”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你的一次旅行经历,并谈谈你的感受,或说说旅行给你带来的积极影响。
要求:(1) 请先将题目补充完整, 全文词数不少于80;
(2) 语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范;
(3) 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
My ________ Trip
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【例文】
My Exciting Trip
Last summer vacation, my family and I went on a trip to the mountains. It was a wonderful experience for all of us. We climbed along the mountain paths, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful scenery. At the top, we saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. We also picked wild flowers and took lots of photos.
This trip made me realize the importance of family time and the beauty of nature. I felt relaxed and happy during the trip. It also gave me the courage to face challenges in life.
I’ll never forget this family trip!
二、材料作文
(一)
每个人的暑假都是丰富多彩的,回忆一次令你难忘的假期旅游(不少于80词)。
内容提示:1.你假期去哪里了? 什么时候去的? 和谁去的? 怎么去的? 天气如何?
2.你做了什么? 看到了什么? 这些事物或者景观怎么样?
3.你吃了什么? 味道如何? 人们怎么样?
4.你最喜欢什么? 你觉得这次的假期旅游怎么样? 有何收获或感受?
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【例文】
Last summer vacation, my parents and I drove to my grandparents’ home in the countryside. It was hot and sunny. We saw many beautiful flowers along the way.
In the morning, I fed the hens. Then I helped grandma make lunch at noon. Everything tasted delicious, especially the fish I cooked by myself. After lunch, I swam with my father. The water was clean and cool. I liked the evening party best, where we sang and danced happily. The local people were friendly and warm.
This trip let me get away from the noisy and busy city life to relax completely. It was really unforgettable.
(二)
“读万卷书,行万里路”。假如你是李明,你校英语报正在举行征文比赛,主题是“A Wonderful Trip”请你根据下面的思维导图的要点提示和你的旅行经历,写一篇英语短文参加这次征文比赛。
要求:
(1)必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥;
(2)意思清楚,表达通畅,行文连贯,书写规范,词数90左右;
(3)不得出现个人真实信息。
A Wonderful Trip
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【例文】
A Wonderful Trip
Last summer vacation, I went on a wonderful trip to Mount Tai with my classmates. We took a bus early in the morning and arrived at the foot of the mountain by noon.
When we got there, we were surprised by the beautiful views. We climbed the mountain, enjoying the fresh air, taking photos of the amazing views along the way. At the top, we watched the sunset and it was the most beautiful sight in my eyes.
This trip not only let me exercise, but also made me closer to my classmates. It’s truly an unforgettable experience.
(三)
假期,是与家人相伴的时光,温暖而有力。无论旅途见闻,还是居家日常,都会成为记忆里温暖的光,为我们前行注入能量。假如你是Li Hua,请以“My Sweet Holiday with My Family”为题,写一篇约70词的短文,分享一次你和家人共度的愉快假期。
要求:1. 在哪里度过、做了什么、感受如何;
2. 70词左右,语言流畅,逻辑合理;书写工整,卷面整洁;不出现真实姓名。
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【例文】
My Sweet Holiday with My Family
Last summer holiday, my family and I went to the countryside. We stayed at my grandparents’ house. Every morning, we helped feed chickens and pick fresh vegetables. In the afternoon, we flew kites in the green fields and laughed together. At night, we sat outside, looking at the bright stars and listening to interesting stories from Grandpa. I felt so happy and relaxed. Family time is truly the sweetest gift.
三、应用文
(一)电子邮件
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你的上一个假期情况。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件,介绍你的假期:
1. 假期时间和地点;
2. 你做了哪些事情(至少2件);
3. 你的感受。
要求:
词数:60-80词;
语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you? I want to tell you about my last holiday.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【例文】
Dear Peter,
How are you? I want to tell you about my last holiday.
I went to Chengdu with my family last summer. We stayed there for five days. The weather was warm and comfortable all the time. We visited the Chengdu Panda Base and saw many cute pandas. We bought some lovely panda toys as small gifts. We also tried many delicious Sichuan food, like hot pot. Local people there were really friendly to us.
I had a great time there. It was a wonderful holiday.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
3.假设你是李辉,你的英国朋友Tom要来中国旅行。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐一个值得旅行的城市;
(2)为他做一些简单的旅行规划;
(3)提醒旅行时的注意事项。
注意:
(1)词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
I’m so excited to hear that you’re coming to China! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hui
【例文】
Dear Tom,
I’m so excited to hear that you’re coming to China! I strongly recommend Beijing because it’s rich in history and culture. Here’s a simple plan: visit the Great Wall on the first day, explore the amazing Forbidden City on the second, and enjoy the famous Peking duck at a local restaurant on the third. For a smooth trip, remember to bring your passport, wear comfortable shoes, and check the weather in advance. Since summer can be hot, please bring sunscreen. Also, it’s important to be respectful to local customs. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here!
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hui
(二)书信
(25-26八年级上·河南周口·期末)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom想了解你的一次难忘的旅行经历。请你根据以下提示,写一封80-100词的回信。
提示:你去年暑假和家人去了北京;你们参观了长城、故宫和天安门广场;你们吃了北京烤鸭,非常美味;你觉得这次旅行很有趣,永远不会忘记。
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【例文】
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you about my unforgettable trip. Last summer vacation, I went to Beijing with my family. In addition, the train ride to Beijing was comfortable, which made the journey even more enjoyable. We visited many famous places, like the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and Tian’anmen Square. We also ate Beijing Roast Duck. It tasted very delicious. We took a lot of photos there. I had a great time during the trip. It was really interesting and I will never forget it.
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)演讲稿
(25-26八年级上·湖北武汉·期末)假设你是李华,寒假即将到来,你将如何度过一个修养身心又有意义的寒假呢?学校举办了“My Winter Holiday”主题演讲比赛,请你从地点,同伴和如何使寒假有意义等方面谈谈你的寒假计划。
内容提示:
- Where will you spend the holiday?
- Who are you going with?
- What will you do to make your holiday meaningful?
- Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Winter Holiday
The exciting winter holiday is coming!
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【例文】
My Winter Holiday
The exciting winter holiday is coming! I’m going to my grandparents’ village in the countryside with my parents. It’s a quiet place with green hills and clear rivers.
We will take a train there. To make my holiday meaningful, I plan to read two English books to improve my reading skills. Besides, I’ll help my mom cook traditional dishes to understand our family culture. I also decide to exercise every morning to stay healthy.
I believe a good balance between rest and study is the key to a wonderful holiday. I’ll return with more energy, knowledge, and happy memories!
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