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Section Ⅶ Writing—A “For” and “Against” Essay
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put sth into practice
add...to...
be attractive to...
be essential to...
provide...for...
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Some think the creative measures should be put into practice.
They say that the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace Museum and make it more attractive to visitors.
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It is extremely essential to respect the history, tradition and culture.
The history, tradition and culture provide foundation for our civilization.
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It is extremely essential to respect the history, tradition and culture, which provide foundation for our civilization.
Some think the creative measures should be put into practice, saying that the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace Museum and make it more attractive to visitors.
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谢谢观看
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观点对比类作文又称为正反观点类作文。主要是就社会上出现的某一个问题,首先进行客观的陈述,并说明当前正反两方面的看法,以及各自的理由;最后作者发表自己的观点。
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Factory farming involves keeping farm animals inside buildings to increase the production of meat or eggs.According to an institute,“74% of the world's poultry, 43% of its beef and 68% of its eggs are produced in this way.”
The main argument for factory farming is that,apart from being a lot cheaper than traditional or organic farming, it provides more food for a world population that has already reached seven billion, according to the United Nations.As factory farms do not use many workers, the costs are low and the production is high.Moreover, factory-farmed animals suffer from fewer diseases than those living outside.
On the other hand, opponents of factory farming say that it is cruel to the animals.For instance, many farm animals are kept in small spaces where they can hardly move.People who fight for animal rights claim that these animals suffer terrible stress.In addition to this, factory farming has a negative impact on the environment because it creates a lot of waste products, and uses a lot of chemicals to control insects and drugs to treat diseases (UK Farming Today,2013).
To sum up, despite producing cheap food, factory farming is bad for the planet and for the animals themselves.In my opinion, we should try to reduce this kind of farming, although we would have to pay more for our eggs and meat.
写作手法
【文章结构】
1.本文有四段,分为三部分
2.本文采用了一般现在时和比较的写作形式。
3.写作步骤是:提出问题→列举两种不同的观点→对比两种观点。
【相关词句】
1.开头语
①The topic of(本文factory farming)...is becoming more and more popular recently.
②Factory farming(本文topic)plays an important role in...
2.双方观点和理由
(1)赞成方
①...hold the opinion that it provides more food (factory farming)...
②...are in favour of (factory farming)...
③...approve if...
④...agree to...
(2)反对方
①However,...hold a different idea that (factory farming)...
②...,...differ in their opinion on (factory farming)...
③...,others are opposed to (...),thinking...
④while others think that...is a better choice in the following reasons.
3.个人观点和做法
①Personally(speaking)/In my opinion/As for me,(factory farming...)
②Each coin has two sides...
③...I argue for...
④All things considered,the advantages of (factory farming) over weigh the disadvantages.
【注意事项】
1.各要点之间写作顺序词语的使用,Firstly,...Next,Finally等。
2.过渡词句的使用,However,most important of all,in addition(to),on the other hand,more over,to sum up,Each coin has two sides...,What's more important is that,Their opinions/reasons are as follows 等。
3.句式多样化
文章中恰当地运用复合句,定语从句,名词性从句,强调句型等,避免语句单调、枯燥无味,影响得分。
本文第二段第一句使用了比较复杂的句型(表语从句+定语从句);本文第二段第二句使用了复合句(as引导的原因状语从句)。
假如你是李华,最近,在你班英语课上,同学们就是否可以使用高科技对故宫博物院进行美化进行了讨论。请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍讨论结果并发表个人观点。要点如下:
支持
高科技的融入可以增强故宫博物院的美感;吸引更多游客。
反对
破坏了故宫博物院的原貌;不尊重历史和传统。
你的观点
……
[审题谋篇]
这是一篇提纲类作文。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏。
要点包括:
1.支持的观点:高科技的融入可以增强故宫博物院的美感;吸引更多游客。
2.反对的观点:破坏了故宫博物院的原貌;不尊重历史和传统。
3.你的观点。
写作时注意准确运用时态,本文主要使用一般现在时。要注意上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式,避免出错,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以使文章更出彩。
[词汇热身]
1._____________________ 将……付诸实践
2.___________把……加到……
3.___________________ 对……来说具有吸引力
4.__________________ 对……来说至关重要
5.________________ 为……提供……
[连词成句]
1.一些人认为这种创新性的措施应该被付诸实践。
__________________________________________________________(practice)
2.他们说使用高科技能增强故宫博物院的美感,使其对游客更具有吸引力。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________(add;attractive)
3.尊重历史、传统和文化至关重要。
________________________________________________________
(essential)
4.历史、传统和文化是我们文明的基础。
________________________________________________________
(provide)
[句式升级]
5.用现在分词短语作状语的用法合并句1和句2
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.用非限制性定语从句合并句3和句4
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[组句成篇]
Recently, we have had a class discussion about whether it is advisable to apply high technology to beautifying the Palace Museum.The opinions are divided.
Some think the creative measures should be put into practice, saying that the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace Museum and make it more attractive to visitors.However, those who are against the idea say that it
will destroy the original appearance of the Palace Museum.More importantly, it is extremely essential to respect the history, tradition and culture, which provide foundation for our civilization.
In my opinion, we should use high technology properly to beautify the Palace Museum and it's our duty to provide a complete and true ancient palace for the world.
最近,你们针对“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息,以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题,写一篇短文。
观点
原因
赞成
帮助他人是美德;
帮助他人就是帮助自己
……
反对
怕陷入麻烦;怕被误解
……
你的观点?(至少两点)
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右(正文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥。
参考词汇:美德virtue
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions. _________________
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【参考范文】
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions.
Some think we should try to help strangers.Helping others is a virtue, and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day.If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them, it's hard to imagine what our world will be like.
However, some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.
In my opinion, we should try our best to help others, but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.
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