Unit 3 Section Ⅶ WRITING WORKSHOP & READING CLUB(Word学生用书)-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册(北师大版)
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摘要:
该高中英语导学案聚焦议论文写作,通过“工厂化养殖”语篇阅读导入,引导学生分析文章结构、论证方法及词汇衔接技巧,进而过渡到“文化遗址开发”写作任务,构建从语篇输入到写作输出的学习支架。
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Section Ⅶ WRITING WORKSHOP & READING CLUB
1.What is the first paragraph mainly about?( )
A.Introduce the idea of factory farming.
B.Describe the details of factory farming.
C.Conclude the author’s opinions.
D.Present some arguments against the idea.
2.What is one of the advantages of factory farming?( )
A.Its costs are high and the production is low.
B.It is more expensive than traditional farming.
C.It provides more food for a world population.
D.It can provide more working positions.
3.Why are people fighting for animal rights against factory farming?( )
A.Because factory farming may cause serious pollution.
B.Because many farm animals suffer terrible stress.
C.Because factory farming creates a lot of waste products.
D.Because factory farming can produce cheap food.
4.What is the purpose of the last paragraph?( )
A.To sum up and express the author’s opinions.
B.To provide the supporting factors.
C.To stress the importance of the idea.
D.To offer the background.
Factory farming involves keeping farm animals inside buildings to increase the production of meat or eggs.According to an institute, “74% of the world’s poultry, 43% of its beef and 68% of its eggs are produced in this way.”
The main argument for factory farming is that, apart from being a lot cheaper than traditional or organic farming, it provides more food for a world population that has already reached seven billion, according to the United Nations.As factory farms do not use many workers, the costs are low and the production is high.Moreover, factory-farmed animals suffer from fewer diseases than those living outside.
On the other hand, opponents of factory farming say that it is cruel to the animals.For instance, many farm animals are kept in small spaces where they can hardly move.People who fight for animal rights claim that these animals suffer terrible stress.In addition to this, factory farming has a negative impact on the environment because it creates a lot of waste products, and uses a lot of chemicals to control insects and drugs to treat diseases (UK Farming Today, 2013).
To sum up, despite producing cheap food, factory farming is bad for the planet and for the animals themselves.In my opinion, we should try to reduce this kind of farming, although we would have to pay more for our eggs and meat.
学语言
1.词汇
(1)第一段第二句中使用三个百分数来说明工厂化养殖的情况。议论文中使用数字可以体现科学性,增强说服力。
(2)第二段使用了a lot cheaper、 more food、 low、 high、 fewer diseases等这些表示比较级的形容词以及反义词,形象地表明了支持工厂化养殖的理由。
(3)第三段在陈述观点时使用了cruel、 small spaces、 suffer terrible stress、 has a negative impact on、 a lot of waste products、 a lot of chemicals等词,形象地表达了反对者的理由;尤其最后一句连续用了两次a lot of来强调工厂化养殖的不利影响。
2.衔接词
(1)第二段叙述了支持工厂化养殖的理由,使用了衔接词moreover等进行列举;第三段叙述反对工厂化养殖的理由,使用了衔接词on the other hand, in addition to等进行表述。条理清晰,层层深入。
(2)最后一段第一句使用了to sum up来总结观点,第二句使用了in my opinion来说明作者的观点。第一句使用的despite和第二句使用的although都凸显了作者的观点。
学结构
1.常用开头句
①Nowadays, senior high school students often have parties on their birthdays or festivals, which has aroused heated discussions.
如今,高中生经常举办生日或节日聚会,这引发了热烈的讨论。
②With the improvement of living standards, overseas study tours are gaining its popularity with some high school students.
随着生活水平的提高,海外游学在一些高中生中越来越受欢迎。
③Recently, a heated debate has been held in our class about whether it is good to work at home.Opinions vary from person to person.
最近,关于在家工作是否有好处,我们班举行了一场热烈的辩论。观点因人而异。
2.常用中间句
①Some people support parties among students, for having parties with classmates can deepen friendship.有些人支持学生聚会,因为和同学聚会可以加深友谊。
②There are many advantages in attending schools abroad.出国留学有很多优势。
③Some students think that overseas study tours can allow them to be exposed to different cultures, thus broadening their horizons.
一些学生认为海外游学能让他们接触到不同的文化,从而开阔他们的视野。
3.常用结尾句
①In my opinion, it’s cool to have parties, but we should do it right, which means obeying those unwritten rules and behaving properly.
在我看来,举办派对很酷,但我们应该用正确的方式,这意味着遵守那些不成文的规则,举止得体。
②In my opinion, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
在我看来,出国留学是明智的。
③Every coin has two sides.Only when we use it properly can we benefit from it.
任何事情都有两面性。只有正确使用它,我们才能从中受益。
最近你市发现了一处文化遗址。针对是否应当开发此文化遗址,人们展开了激烈的讨论。请你根据下表内容,以Should Protection Give Way To Tourism?为题写一篇英语短文。
赞成开发
能让人们更多地了解我国伟大的历史
反对开发
应保持原样,以免遭人为破坏
你的观点
……
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Should Protection Give Way To Tourism?
一、合理布局,精心谋篇
第一段:开门见山,点明主题;
第二段:陈述赞成和反对的理由;
第三段:个人看法。
二、遣词造句,规范得体
1.我市文化遗址是否开发是一个热门话题。(“疑问词+动词不定式短语”作主语; hit)
2.文化遗址值得开发。(be worth doing)
3.开发将会使人们更多地了解我国伟大的历史。(动词-ing短语作主语;一般将来时)
4.我们应该保持它的原样。(keep ...as it is)
5.文化遗址不能遭到破坏。(被动语态)
6.最佳选择是在不破坏环境的情况下开发文化遗产。
三、句式升级,吸睛亮点
7.用非限制性定语从句改写句2和句3
8.用only in this way开头的倒装句改写句5
四、认真誊写,赏心悦目
情感
描写
anxious adj.焦虑的,不安的 stressed out焦虑的 anger n.愤怒;怒气 annoyed adj.烦恼的,生气的
动作
描写
blame v.责怪,指责 set out开始做某事,着手进行 wrap v.包,裹 swallow vi. & vt.吞下,咽下 carve v.雕,刻
环境
描写
plastic adj.塑料制的 varied adj.各种各样的,形形色色的 shell n.壳;贝壳 dirt n.灰尘,尘土 traffic jam 交通堵塞 typhoon n.台风 valley n.谷,山谷 scenic adj.景色优美的 historic adj.古老的;历史上重要的
第一步:完成句子雏形现
1.Cinderella住在一个历史悠久、风景优美的小镇上。(a small historic scenic town)
2.她最近对一些现象感到恼火。(annoyed)
3.无论她走到哪里,她都会看到各种各样的塑料包装、坚果壳和雕刻在墙壁和树木上的字。(varied plastic packaging; carve)
4.小镇上还经常有交通堵塞。(traffic jams)
5.她对小镇感到焦虑。(anxious)
6.Cinderella去年开始和其他环保人士一起清理垃圾。(set out)
7.她没有把污染归咎于游客,而是决定用自己的行为来影响他人。(blame; affect)
第二步:过渡衔接连成篇
写作词汇集释
1.involve vt.包含,需要;牵涉,涉及;影响;(使)参加
教材原句 Factory farming involves keeping farm animals inside buildings to increase the production of meat or eggs.
工厂化养殖需要将农场动物饲养在建筑物内,以增加肉类或蛋类的产量。
【用法】
(1)involve ...in ...使……卷入/专注……
involve doing sth 包括做某事
be/get involved in 卷入;专注于
(2)involved adj. 复杂的;涉及的
an involved plot 复杂的情节
【佳句】 (2025•全国一卷)Moreover, this exciting column could encourage students to get involved in a variety of activities and discover many ways to have fun at school.
此外,这个精彩的栏目能鼓励学生参与各种各样的活动,并发现许多在校期间享受乐趣的方式。
【练透】 单句语法填空
①(2025•北京卷)Another key theme involves (find) some kind of positive meaning after stressful events.
②The project was (involve) than I expected, requiring long hours and detailed planning to complete.
【写美】 完成句子
③We cannot deny the fact that can broaden our horizons.
我们不可否认,参加社会活动可以开阔我们的视野。
2.cruel adj.残忍的
教材原句 On the other hand, opponents of factory farming say that it is cruel to the animals.
另一方面,反对工厂化养殖的人说这对动物很残忍。
【用法】
(1)be cruel to对……残酷/残忍
(2)cruelty n. 残酷;虐待;残酷的行为
cruelly adv. 残酷地,残暴地
【佳句】 It was cruel to see how the animals in the zoo were treated.Some were locked in tiny cages, unable to move freely.(环境描写)
看到动物园里的动物被如此残忍对待,真是令人感到痛心。有些动物被锁在狭小的笼子里,无法自由活动。【练透】 单句语法填空
①The deliberate (cruel) of his words cut her like a knife.
②The dog had been (cruel) treated before she adopted it.
【写美】 完成句子
③At first, he felt that , leaving him bitter and alone.
最初,他觉得世界对他太残酷了,让他变得痛苦和孤独。
3.claim vt.声称;断言;主张 n.声称;(根据权利而提出的)要求
教材原句 People who fight for animal rights claim that these animals suffer terrible stress.
为动物权利而战的人声称这些动物承受着可怕的压力。
【用法】
claim to do/that ...声称……
claim sth back 索回某物,要回某物
It is claimed that ... 有人主张……;据说……
【佳句】 The zookeeper claimed that the lion was gentle, but visitors were still cautious around it.动物园管理员声称那只狮子很温顺,但游客们在它周围仍然很谨慎。
【练透】 单句语法填空
①He claimed (see) a rare bird in the forest, sparking excitement among birdwatchers.
【写美】 完成句子
② eating a balanced diet is key to maintaining good health.
据说摄取均衡的饮食是保持良好健康的关键。
4.sum vt.概括,总结 n.金额,款项;总数
教材原句 To sum up, despite producing cheap food, factory farming is bad for the planet and for the animals themselves.
总之,尽管生产廉价的食物,工厂化养殖对地球和动物本身都是有害的。
【用法】
(1)sum up计算……的总数;总结
to sum up 总之
in sum 总而言之
(2)a large sum of 一大笔;大量的
【佳句】 (2026•1月浙江卷)We’re not just “borrowing” from different disciplines — we’re really putting them on equal footing in order to create something greater than the sum of its parts.我们不只是在借鉴不同学科的知识 —— 我们真正将它们置于平等的地位,以创造出超越各部分总和的成果。
【练透】 语块表达
① (总之), we have achieved a lot, but we still need to work harder.
②After the long discussion, the leader asked me to (总结) the opinions of the group.
【写美】 完成句子
③It is important to remember that success results from made each day.
重要的是要记住,成功源于每天付出的许多小努力。
重点句型解构
◇ 句型公式:on the other hand
教材原句 On the other hand, opponents of factory farming say that it is cruel to the animals.
另一方面,反对工厂化养殖的人说这对动物很残忍。
【用法】
(1)on the one hand ...; on the other hand ...(引出不同的观点、思想等)一方面……;另一方面……
(2)for one thing ...; for another ...
(用于引出并列的理由)一则……;二则……(3)first(ly) ...; second(ly) ...
第一……;第二……
【佳句】 (2026•1月浙江卷)A lengthy,positive review,on the other hand,was regarded as suspicious,and participants tended to trust writers that kept their glowing reviews short.
另一方面,一篇冗长的正面评价被认为是可疑的,参与者往往更信任那些把好评写得简短的评价者。
【写美】 微写作
①一方面,我坚信我会在考试中做得很好;另一方面,虽然不难,我仍然感觉有点紧张。
On the one hand, I have strong belief that I will do well in the exam; , I feel a bit nervous, though it’s not difficult.
②为了提高你的英语,第一,多听;第二,多读。
To improve your English, , listen more; , read more.
③我不会买它,首先我不喜欢这种颜色,再者它太贵了。
I’m not going to buy it; I don’t like the colour, and it’s far too expensive.
完成课后作业 UNIT 3 Section Ⅶ
答案
Section Ⅶ WRITING WORKSHOP & READING CLUB
【速读语篇•知文意】
1-4 ACBA
【演练佳作•写美文】
写作步骤
二、1.Whether or not to develop the cultural heritage site in our city is a hit.
2.The cultural heritage site is worth developing.
3.Developing will enable people to learn more about the great history of our country.
4.We should keep it as it is.
5.The cultural heritage site cannot be destroyed.
6.The best choice is to develop the cultural heritage site without damaging the environment.
三、7.The cultural heritage site is worth developing,which will enable people to learn more about the great history of our country.
8.Only in this way can the cultural heritage site not be destroyed.
四、
Should Protection Give Way To Tourism?
People are divided on whether or not to develop the cultural heritage site in our city.
Some people are in favour of the idea.They think the cultural heritage site is worth developing,which will enable people to learn more about the great history of our country.However,others hold an opposite opinion,thinking that we should keep it as it is.Only in this way can the cultural heritage site not be destroyed.
As far as I am concerned, the best choice is to develop the cultural heritage site without damaging the environment.
【教材词汇•练续写】
第一步
1.Cinderella lives in a small historic scenic town.
2.She has been annoyed about some phenomena recently.
3.Everywhere she goes,she will see varied plastic packaging, shells of nuts and characters carved on walls and trees.
4.There are often traffic jams in the small town.
5.She is anxious about the small town.
6.Cinderella set out to clean up the rubbish with other environmentalists last year.
7.Instead of blaming the tourists for pollution,she decides to affect others with her behaviour.
第二步
Cinderella lives in a small historic scenic town.However,she has been annoyed about some phenomena recently.Everywhere she goes, she will see varied plastic packaging,shells of nuts and characters carved on walls and trees.Besides, there are often traffic jams in the small town.Anxious about the small town, Cinderella set out to clean up the rubbish with other environmentalists last year.Instead of blaming the tourists for pollution,she decides to affect others with her behaviour.
【知识要点•须拾遗】
写作词汇集释
1.①finding ②more involved
③getting/being involved in social activities
2.①cruelty ②cruelly ③the world had been cruel to him
3.①to have seen ②It is claimed that
4.①To sum up/In sum ②sum up
③a large sum of small efforts
重点句型解构
①on the other hand ②first(ly); second(ly)
③for one thing; for another
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