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英 语
九年级全一册 JJ
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九年级上册
Unit 4 Great people
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.有天赋的;有才华的 ________
2.智慧 ______________
3.先驱;先锋 _________
4.教育家 __________
gifted
intelligence
pioneer
educator
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5.不遗余力做…… _______________________
6.继续 _______
7.在……领域 _________________
8.落后 _____________
spare no effort to do
go on
in the field of
fall behind
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】As Helen grew older, she made a lot of progress and learned to
read.(make progress)
→仿写:这个男孩每天练习英语,他在口语方面取得了很大进步。
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The boy practices English every day, and he makes a lot of progress
in speaking.
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10.【教材原句】She did her best to help others who were deaf or blind.
(do one’s best)
→仿写:我们应该尽最大努力保护我们周围的环境。
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11.【教材原句】In 1973, together with other scientists, he succeeded in
developing hybrid rice.(succeed in doing)
→仿写:经过多年的努力,这个团队成功完成了这项艰巨的任务。
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We should do our best to protect the environment around us.
After years of hard work, the team succeeded in finishing the
difficult task.
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12.【教材原句】In his spare time, Dr Yuan loved playing the violin and listening
to music.(in one’s spare time)
→仿写:在我的空闲时间里,我喜欢看书和在公园散步。
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In my spare time, I enjoy reading books and taking walks in the
park.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
“禾下乘凉梦,丹心映青田”,袁隆平为
了这个梦想奋斗了一生,成功研究出“杂交
水稻”,让十几亿中国人的粮食安全有了保
障。假如你是李华,你所在的班级下周计
划举行以“My Hero”为主题的演讲。请你
根据下列图示,准备一篇演讲稿,介绍你心
目中的英雄——袁隆平。
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要求:1.可在以上提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数不少于70(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear classmates,
It’s my great honour to give you a speech on my hero. __________________
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That’s all. Thank you!
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第1步 审题目
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般过去时、一般现在时
人 称:第三人称
内容要点:根据提示梳理袁隆平的生平经历,介绍他的贡献与精神。
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“三段式”。
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第3步 写作进阶#6
Dear classmates,
It’s my great honour to give
you a speech on my hero.
My hero is Yuan Longping.
① He was born in Beijing in
1930.In the 1950s, he studied in
Southwest Agricultural University.
In 1973, he developed a new
kind of rice called hybrid rice. Dear classmates,
It’s my great honour to give you a
speech on my hero.
Yuan Longping is the. .greatest
(使用最高级,突出表达情感)hero in my
heart.① He was born in Beijing in 1930.In
the 1950s, he studied in Southwest
Agricultural University. In 1973, he
developed a new kind of rice called hybrid
rice.
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In 1980, he travelled around
the world and shared his ideas
on growing rice.He won the
World Food Prize in 2004.②
He helped feed more people
and is called the “Father of
Hybrid Rice”.③ In 1980, he travelled around the world and
shared his ideas on growing rice.Because of
(增加“Because of...”,说明获奖的原因)his
great work, he won the World Food Prize
in. .2004.② He. .solved the problem. .of food for
millions of people,. .and(强调主要贡献,用and连
接分句,升级句式)he is called the “Father of
Hybrid Rice”.③
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Yuan Longping is a great
scientist in China.④ He
worked hard all his life and
passed away in Changsha in
2021 at the age of 91.Yuan’s
down-to-earth spirit touches my
heart a lot. He is a true hero.
That’s all. Thank you! Yuan Longping is a great scientist. .not
only. .in China but also(添加“not only… but
also…”,突出影响力)in many other areas
around the world.④ He worked hard all his life
and passed away in Changsha in 2021 at the
age of 91.Yuan’s down-to-earth spirit touches
my heart a lot. He is a true hero.
That’s all. Thank you!
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026河北张家口调研】假如你是李华,你的梦想是成为一名航天员,并且你非
常崇拜航天员王浩泽。请你根据表格内容,用英语写一篇短文介绍你的职业偶像。
Name Wang Haoze
Age 36
Hometown Luanping, Hebei
Hobbies reading, running and calligraphy
Character outgoing, patient and hard-working
Achievement China’s first female spaceflight engineer
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写作要求:(1)文中须包含表格提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数100左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! I want to become a taikonaut when I grow up.There
are many amazing taikonauts in China, and I like Wang Haoze best.
Wang Haoze is 36 years old and comes from Luanping, Hebei.She is
outgoing, patient and hard-working.In her free time, she enjoys reading,
running and practicing calligraphy.She is China’s first female
spaceflight engineer.She has deep knowledge of space and makes huge
achievements in space exploration.
Wang Haoze is a great example of success.In the future, I want to
be a space scientist like her, too.I hope my dream of working on a
spacecraft will come true.
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【解析】知识拓展
set an example意为“树立榜样”;“take… for example”意为“以……为例”。
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