Unit 1 书面表达专题训练 2026-2027学年译林版英语八年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦“友谊”主题，构建“素材积累-模板应用-实战演练”三阶写作体系，系统培养人物描述的语言组织与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |素材积累|开头/中间/结尾句、谚语共10句|提供功能句型库，强化基础表达|从词汇短语到句式搭建，形成描述性语言基础| |写作指导与模板|2类模板、3项遣词技巧|明确人称/时态规范，提炼“总-分-总”结构|按“引入-特征描述-情感升华”逻辑组织内容| |实战演练|4篇不同情境写作（邮件/短文/表格/议论文）|融合比较级/最高级运用，训练信息转化能力|从单一人物介绍到观点论述，实现能力梯度提升|

8A U1书面表达刷题笔记 本单元的话题是“友谊”，让学生了解做一个好朋友应当具有的品质，运用所学习的内容来描述自己最好的朋友。在写作时可对朋友的外貌、爱好、性格等进行介绍，可用形容词的比较级和最高级来描述人物，最后要写出自己的愿望。 素材积累 ◆开头句 1.I met her five years ago at a Dance Club. 2.Betty is my best friend and she is a slim girl with bright eyes, ◆中间句 1.He is taller/shorter than me. 2.He is caring and thoughtful. 3.He always tries to help and keeps it a secret for me. ◆结尾句 1.I hope we will be best friends forever. 2.He is the most wonderful friend in my life. 谚语积累 1.Between friends all is common. 朋友之间不分彼此。 2.The older friendship grows,the stronger it is. 友谊地久天长。 【实战演练-01】 假如你是李梅，目前是英国一所中学的一名八年级学生。请你写一封电子邮件给你的中国好友王丽，向她介绍一下你的新朋友Helen以及你目前丰富多彩的学校生活。 Helen pretty,round face... a sense of humour,for example... helpful,for example... my school life colourful life... 【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3.词数90左右。 Dear Wang Li, Best wishes!! Yours, Li Mei 写作指导 1.用第三人称来写。 2.时态为一般现在时。 3.要写出朋友的性格特征和自己的学校生活，并加以适当发挥。 写作模板-1 遣词造句 1.她有着圆脸和爱笑的眼睛。(with smiling eyes) 2.在班级，她是最大方的学生之一。(one of the+最高级+名词复数) 3.我们每天做两个小时的家庭作业。(for two hours) 高分范文 Dear Wang Li, Long time no see.I would like to tell you something about my new friend Helen and my school life. Helen is a very pretty girl.She has a round face with smiling eyes.She has a good sense of humour and often tells funny jokes to make her classmates laugh.She is helpful and always gives her seat to people in need on the bus.She is one of the most generous students in the class and we all like her. My school life is colourful.School begins at 7:00 in the morning and it is over at 5:00.We do homework for two hours every day.Of all the subjects,I like Physics best,because it is interesting.I also do well in Chinese.I join the Reading Club.After school,I play basketball with my classmates every Wednesday and Friday. Best wishes! Yours, Li Mei 写作模板-2 黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句) 开头段：①I have many friends,but... ②My best friend is... ③Betty,my best friend,is a slim girl with big bright eyes. 中间段：①...is kind and helpful/caring and thoughtful. ②...is taller than me and has ..hair/eyes. ③...is very outgoing/shy and ..at school. ④But his/her eyes are bigger and brighter. ⑤We are different in many ways,but we are still best friends. ⑥...is also a cheerful person. ⑦...has a great sense of humour. 结尾段：①I’m glad to have ...as my friend! ②I hope we'll be best friends forever! ③I think it's more important to have a few really good friends. 【实战演练-02】 请以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇介绍你的朋友的短文。把你的朋友和你的长相(包括身高、头发、眼睛等)、体格(包括强壮强度等)、性格(开朗、文静等)等方面进行比较，介绍其学习态度和优秀品质，并说出你对好朋友的感觉。 提示：popular,hard-working,outgoing,short/long straight hair,while 要求：1.条理清楚，书写规范，语句通顺； 2.词数80左右。 My Best Friend 高分范文 My Best Friend My best friend is Lily.She is my classmate. She is taller than me and has long straight hair,while I have short hair.She is also stronger than me and really good at sports.Lily is very outgoing and popular at school.I'm a bit quieter. She is really hard-working and always gets good grades.She is helpful and patient.When I meet difficulties in my study,she always tries to help me. I think Lily is great,and I hope we'll be best friends forever! 【实战演练-03】 假设你有一个朋友叫丹尼尔，请你根据表格内容写一篇文章，介绍一下他的情况。 外貌 班上最高的男生；方脸； 戴着小圆眼镜；总是面带笑容，看上去很友好 性格 乐于助人，他经常……; 幽默，经常…… 学校生活 就读于男女混合的学校； 学校每天8点开始，4点结束； 每天做大约一小时的家庭作业； 最喜欢的学科……,因为……; 有各种各样的课外活动和俱乐部，学生可以打篮球、唱歌…… 未来计划 …… 要求：1.短文应包括表格中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.词数90左右。 My friend Daniel 高分范文 My friend Daniel My friend Daniel is the tallest boy in our class.He has a square face(有一张方脸)and wears small round glasses. Daniel always has a smile on his face(脸上带着微笑), which makes him look very friendly. He is very helpful, and often helps others whenever they are in need.(他非常乐于助人，每当别人有需要时，他常常会伸出援手。)He has a sense of humour(有幽默感)because he often makes us laugh(使我们大笑). He studies at a mixed school where classes start at 8 a.m. and finish at 4 p.m.Daniel does about an hour of homework(做大约一小时的家庭作业)every day. His favourite subject is Science because he enjoys doing experiments(做 实 验). There are different activities and clubs at school,and Daniel likes to play basketball and sing. In the future(在将来), he plans to become a scientist(成为一名科学家). 【实战演练-04】 Teens英文报刊开辟了“青少年交友”新专栏，现面向全体中学生征稿，通知如下： Nowadays,some teenagers have trouble in making friends.They make friends by following suit|(随大流).They do the same as their friends,such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others,although they're not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic. 1.Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends? 2.What's your ideal friend like? 3.How can you make true friends? (Don't forget to support your ideas with some examples.) 注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数90左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计人总词数。 I want to share my ideas about the topic. 高分范文 I want to share my ideas about the topic. I think it is not wise to make friends by following suit. It's important to make true friends. I want to make friends with the person who has many strong qualities. First, he is helpful. Second, when I feel sad, he can care about me. What's more, he is honest, I hope he can keep secrets for me. To make true friends, I need to be friendly to them. When they are in trouble, I will be a good listener and try my best to help them. They can trust me because I am honest. In a word, a friend in need is a friend indeed. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $