Unit 1 Great people（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“人与社会”范畴的杰出榜样人物介绍写作，系统梳理人物介绍类写作的三层核心维度，即清晰介绍基础信息（出生、身份、关键经历）、梳理重要事迹与贡献（客观事实支撑）、结合自身谈感悟（提炼品质并升华主题）。同时明确时态区分（一般过去时描述过往经历，一般现在时进行评价与感悟），强调定语从句、让步状语从句等高分句型运用，并通过思维导图、词汇句式积累（如“role model”“devote…to…”等）搭建学习支架，帮助学生构建完整写作框架。 该资料以中考真题为载体设计特色内容，如苏轼、袁隆平人物介绍范例，通过审题指导、谋篇布局分析及佳作赏析（含亮点词汇与高分句型），直观展示写作逻辑。实战演练题覆盖不同情境（当代杰出人物、身边榜样等），注重文化意识培育（引导树立正向偶像，传承榜样精神），提升语言能力（词汇句式灵活运用）和思维品质（谋篇布局与逻辑梳理）。课中辅助教师高效教学，课后助力学生通过仿写、练习巩固知识，查漏补缺，提升人物介绍写作能力。

Unit 1 Great people单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与社会” 范畴，聚焦杰出榜样、时代伟人，讲述人物生平、贡献与精神品质，引导学生树立正向偶像，学习榜样精神。 2. 写作维度 本单元围绕伟人、榜样类书面表达展开，训练学生人物介绍类英语写作能力。写作核心分为三层：一是清晰介绍榜样人物基础信息，包含出生、身份、人生关键经历；二是梳理人物为国为民的重要事迹与突出贡献，使用客观事实支撑人物形象；三是结合自身谈感悟与收获，提炼人物身上值得学习的品质，联系自身学习生活升华主题。写作兼顾叙事、说明与情感表达，要求时态区分一般过去时（人物过往经历）、一般现在时（客观评价、个人感悟），熟练运用定语从句、让步状语从句、非谓语等高分句型。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 14 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. role model 榜样 2. make contributions to 对…… 做出贡献 3. devote…to… 把…… 奉献给…… 4. overcome difficulties 克服困难 5. give up 放弃 6. be regarded as 被认为是 7. admire v. 仰慕，敬佩 8. unremitting efforts 不懈努力 9. carry on the spirit 传承精神 10. solve the problem 解决问题 11. set a good example for sb. 给某人树立好榜样 12. in need 在困境中 13. be proud of 为…… 感到自豪 14. develop new technology 研发新技术 15. inspire v. 激励，鼓舞 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Everyone has a role model, so do I. 翻译：每个人都有自己的榜样，我也不例外。 2. Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is… 翻译：榜样让我们成为更好的人，我心中的时代榜样是…… 中间句（4 句） 1. He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has greatly increased rice production. 翻译：他毕生致力于杂交水稻研究，这大幅提高了水稻产量。 2. No matter how many difficulties he faced in research, he never gave up. 翻译：无论在研究中遇到多少困难，他从未放弃。 3. After years of unremitting efforts, she successfully developed artemisinin, saving millions of lives. 翻译：经过多年不懈努力，她成功研制青蒿素，挽救了数百万人的生命。 4. What touches me most is that he put the country’s needs above everything else. 翻译：最打动我的是，他把国家需求放在首位。 结尾句（2 句） 1. We should learn from him and keep working hard in our daily study. 翻译：我们应当向他学习，在日常学习中坚持不懈。 2. Let’s make every effort to carry on the great spirit of these heroes. 翻译：让我们尽全力传承这些伟人的崇高精神。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P4)：She discovered qinghaosu, one of the world's most effective treatments for malaria. 仿写：袁隆平研发杂交水稻，是解决全球饥荒最重要的方法之一。 2. 教材原句 (P4)：Wang grew up in a family that valued education. 仿写：钱学森成长在一个崇尚知识、心怀家国的家庭。 3. 教材原句 (P14)：It is said that he was so concentrated on translating The Communist Manifesto that he didn't realize he was eating ink! 仿写：据说他全身心投入科研，常常忘记按时吃饭休息。 典例1 （2024·江苏徐州·中考真题）假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动，你选择的人物是苏轼（1077—1079年间任徐州知州）。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。 注意： 1. 征文需包括以上三个要点； 2. 词数90左右； 3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。 提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：本文是人物介绍类材料征文作文； ② 人称、时态：介绍历史人物苏轼，主体使用第三人称；人物过往事迹统一用一般过去时，评价、感悟使用一般现在时； ③ 提示：作文必须包含治水建建筑、创作诗词、百姓不舍、个人启示全部要点；词数控制 90 词左右，文中不能出现考生真实个人信息，语句衔接流畅。 谋篇布局 开头：简单介绍苏轼的身份，点明他对徐州意义深远。 中间：详细叙述苏轼在徐州的功绩，修建苏堤黄楼、寻找煤炭，创作大量诗词，百姓不舍他离开。 结尾：总结苏轼留下的精神财富，写出这件事带给自己的启示。 佳作展示 A famous person in the history of Xuzhou Su Shi, also known as Su Dongpo, was a famous poet, writer, and politician in ancient China. He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have been admired for centuries. Su Shi’s contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city. He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi’s time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad. Su Shi’s legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou, and his contributions to the city will never be forgotten. 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] ①be regarded as被认为 ②admire...for...因……羡慕 ③contribute to对……做贡献 [高分句型] ①When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.（时间状语从句） ②He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.（定语从句） 典例2 （2021·广西桂林·中考真题）2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。 Facts about his life 生平事迹 1930    be born, in Beijing; 1964    start a special study about rice; 1974    develop a new kind of rice; 1980    begin to, help people grow more rice,             not only...but also...,             China, many other areas around the world;2021    die, in Changsha; … Contributions 成就贡献 solve, the problem of food, for millions of people, call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父) … One of the best ways to remember him 纪念他最好的方式之一 should, save food, never waste any food … 【写作要求】1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。 2、文章词数在90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。 The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. __________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：本文是人物传记类材料作文； ② 人称、时态：介绍袁隆平使用第三人称；生平经历用一般过去时，人物评价、自身感悟使用一般现在时； ③ 提示：文章包含生平、成就、纪念方式三部分内容；词数 90 词左右，开头已给出不计入词数，禁止出现真实地名、校名与人名，适当补充细节使行文连贯。 谋篇布局 开头：给定开篇句，直接点明袁隆平是我心中最伟大的英雄。 中间第一段：按照时间线依次介绍袁隆平出生、研究水稻、推广杂交水稻、逝世等人生关键节点。 中间第二段：介绍杂交水稻的巨大贡献，解释 “杂交水稻之父” 称号的由来。 结尾：阐述纪念袁隆平的做法，表达节约粮食的个人想法。 佳作展示 The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha. Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”. I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① make a great contribution to 对…… 做出巨大贡献 ② solve the problem of food 解决粮食难题 ③ not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且…… 高分句型： ① In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world.（not only...but also... 并列结构） ② He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.（简单因果句式，逻辑清晰） （一） （2025·广东广州·二模）假如你是李华，你校英文报开展征文，请以“My role model”为题，根据思维导图的提示写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的当代杰出人物并分享你的体会。 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分 My role model Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （2026·黑龙江大庆·一模）榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： 1. Who is your role model?    2. Why is he/she your model? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is__________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2024·广东江门·一模）根据要求完成英语短文写作，请将英语短文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 榜样的力量是巨大的。作为中学生，相信我们都有自己的榜样。下周学校英语俱乐部将举行“主题征文”活动，请你根据表格信息提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。 我的好榜样 谁是我的好榜样？ 为什么是我的好榜样？ 这个好榜样给我带来什么影响？ (或你的感受体会) 举1个自己受好榜样影响的事例。 我的呼吁。 注意： 1) 不能使用本试卷所有短文的人物和事迹作为自己文章的例子。要写正能量人物例子，不能写负面或反面人物例子，否则得0分。不能照抄本试卷所有短文原文的完整句子；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 2) 语句连贯，词数不少于80个。 参考表达： to set a good example for sb. 给某人树立好榜样 to carry on the spirit of…/to inherit the spirit of… 传承……的精神 My Good Example __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 （四） （24-25九年级·广东·一轮复习）你校英文校报开设名人传记专栏，请根据以下提示，为专栏撰稿，介绍医学科学家屠呦呦，可适当展开，80字左右。 生平经历 1930年12月出生于宁波 1955年毕业于北京医科大学（Beijing Medical University） 1969年1月开始医药研究实验 2015年获诺贝尔医学奖 成就 成功研发青蒿素（artemisinin），挽救了发展中国家数百万人的生命 你对她的评价？ Tu Youyou——A Great Medical Scientist __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 （五） （2022·广东广州·一模）At the 2021 Tokyo Olympic Games, Su Bingtian made history becoming the first sprinter(短跑运动员) from China to appear in the Olympics men’s 100m final. At that moment, but also Asia’s “flying man”… In the semi-final, Su had set a personal best of 9.83 seconds which was also an Asian record. 假设你听到以上内容的英语广播，请根据以下提示写一篇题为“A Flying Man around Us”的英语征文向学校的英语广播站投稿。 (1)苏炳添简介： 1989年出生于广东省中山市，中国男子著名短跑运动员。暨南大学体育学院副教授，授课广受学生喜爱。 (2)成功的秘诀： 从小喜爱运动，刻苦训练，意志坚定 (3)你的感受？（至少2点） 要求： (1) 不得出现真实的姓名、校名； (2) 参考词汇：暨南大学Jinan University 体育学院Institute of Physical Education 副教授associate professor 短跑运动员sprinter (3)要求词数100左右，已给出的部分不算入总词数，照搬题目的英文不给分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： （六） （2021·广东广州·一模）英语课上即将进行“中国伟人”为主题的小组分享活动。请你根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文介绍三位中国伟人，并谈谈你们小组的感受。 要求： 1. 参考词汇：疟疾 malaria 2. 词数 80 左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Today, our group is honoured to introduce 3 great Chinese to you. They are _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（七） （2021·广东深圳·二模）“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士(academician)，是央视王牌节目《开讲啦》开播以来最年长的演讲者。假设你是校英文报的编辑，请你根据以下提示，写一篇人物介绍以宣扬黄院士的先进事迹。 人生经历 1926年出生于广东一家庭富裕，早年学医，后由于祖国需要改学建造核潜艇 主要贡献 曾隐姓埋名30年，坚持研究和建造核潜艇，被称为“中国核潜艇之父” 个人品质 勤学上进,坚韧不屈，热爱祖国和人民 你的感想和收获 (自由发挥) 提示词：nuke核潜艇 cover one’s identity 隐姓埋名 要求： 1. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总字数。 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Have you ever heard of Huang Xuhua, an academician in our motherland? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （22-23九年级上·广东广州·期末）请根据以下表格，以 Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist 为题写一篇短文，介绍屠呦呦。 个人信息 1930年12月30日出生于浙江；她从小就对医学很感兴趣。 经历 1.1955年，她毕业于北京大学。 2.毕业后，她把大部分时间都投入到古代医学研究中；尽管遇到困难，但她并没有放弃。 3.2015年，她获得诺贝尔奖。 突出贡献 1．她发现了治疗疟疾的方法，拯救了很多生命。 2．她一直努力推行中医。 评价 你的感想或评价? 请至少发挥两点。 注意： （1）参考词汇：治疗 cure  推行 push  for 诺贝尔奖 the  Nobel  Prize 疟疾 malaria （2）词数 80 个左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 （3）内容应包括所有要点。 （4）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist Tu Youyou is a great scientist.____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 1 Great people单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与社会” 范畴，聚焦杰出榜样、时代伟人，讲述人物生平、贡献与精神品质，引导学生树立正向偶像，学习榜样精神。 2. 写作维度 本单元围绕伟人、榜样类书面表达展开，训练学生人物介绍类英语写作能力。写作核心分为三层：一是清晰介绍榜样人物基础信息，包含出生、身份、人生关键经历；二是梳理人物为国为民的重要事迹与突出贡献，使用客观事实支撑人物形象；三是结合自身谈感悟与收获，提炼人物身上值得学习的品质，联系自身学习生活升华主题。写作兼顾叙事、说明与情感表达，要求时态区分一般过去时（人物过往经历）、一般现在时（客观评价、个人感悟），熟练运用定语从句、让步状语从句、非谓语等高分句型。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 8 / 20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. role model 榜样 2. make contributions to 对…… 做出贡献 3. devote…to… 把…… 奉献给…… 4. overcome difficulties 克服困难 5. give up 放弃 6. be regarded as 被认为是 7. admire v. 仰慕，敬佩 8. unremitting efforts 不懈努力 9. carry on the spirit 传承精神 10. solve the problem 解决问题 11. set a good example for sb. 给某人树立好榜样 12. in need 在困境中 13. be proud of 为…… 感到自豪 14. develop new technology 研发新技术 15. inspire v. 激励，鼓舞 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Everyone has a role model, so do I. 翻译：每个人都有自己的榜样，我也不例外。 2. Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is… 翻译：榜样让我们成为更好的人，我心中的时代榜样是…… 中间句（4 句） 1. He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has greatly increased rice production. 翻译：他毕生致力于杂交水稻研究，这大幅提高了水稻产量。 2. No matter how many difficulties he faced in research, he never gave up. 翻译：无论在研究中遇到多少困难，他从未放弃。 3. After years of unremitting efforts, she successfully developed artemisinin, saving millions of lives. 翻译：经过多年不懈努力，她成功研制青蒿素，挽救了数百万人的生命。 4. What touches me most is that he put the country’s needs above everything else. 翻译：最打动我的是，他把国家需求放在首位。 结尾句（2 句） 1. We should learn from him and keep working hard in our daily study. 翻译：我们应当向他学习，在日常学习中坚持不懈。 2. Let’s make every effort to carry on the great spirit of these heroes. 翻译：让我们尽全力传承这些伟人的崇高精神。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P4)：She discovered qinghaosu, one of the world's most effective treatments for malaria. 仿写：袁隆平研发杂交水稻，是解决全球饥荒最重要的方法之一。 2. 教材原句 (P4)：Wang grew up in a family that valued education. 仿写：钱学森成长在一个崇尚知识、心怀家国的家庭。 3. 教材原句 (P14)：It is said that he was so concentrated on translating The Communist Manifesto that he didn't realize he was eating ink! 仿写：据说他全身心投入科研，常常忘记按时吃饭休息。 【答案】 1. Yuan Longping developed hybrid rice, one of the most important ways to solve global hunger. 2. Qian Xuesen grew up in a family that respected knowledge and loved our country. 3. It is said that he was so focused on scientific research that he often forgot to eat and rest on time. 典例1 （2024·江苏徐州·中考真题）假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动，你选择的人物是苏轼（1077—1079年间任徐州知州）。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。 注意： 1. 征文需包括以上三个要点； 2. 词数90左右； 3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。 提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：本文是人物介绍类材料征文作文； ② 人称、时态：介绍历史人物苏轼，主体使用第三人称；人物过往事迹统一用一般过去时，评价、感悟使用一般现在时； ③ 提示：作文必须包含治水建建筑、创作诗词、百姓不舍、个人启示全部要点；词数控制 90 词左右，文中不能出现考生真实个人信息，语句衔接流畅。 谋篇布局 开头：简单介绍苏轼的身份，点明他对徐州意义深远。 中间：详细叙述苏轼在徐州的功绩，修建苏堤黄楼、寻找煤炭，创作大量诗词，百姓不舍他离开。 结尾：总结苏轼留下的精神财富，写出这件事带给自己的启示。 佳作展示 A famous person in the history of Xuzhou Su Shi, also known as Su Dongpo, was a famous poet, writer, and politician in ancient China. He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have been admired for centuries. Su Shi’s contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city. He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi’s time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad. Su Shi’s legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou, and his contributions to the city will never be forgotten. 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] ①be regarded as被认为 ②admire...for...因……羡慕 ③contribute to对……做贡献 [高分句型] ①When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.（时间状语从句） ②He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.（定语从句） 典例2 （2021·广西桂林·中考真题）2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。 Facts about his life 生平事迹 1930    be born, in Beijing; 1964    start a special study about rice; 1974    develop a new kind of rice; 1980    begin to, help people grow more rice,             not only...but also...,             China, many other areas around the world;2021    die, in Changsha; … Contributions 成就贡献 solve, the problem of food, for millions of people, call, the “father of hybrid rice”; (杂交水稻之父) … One of the best ways to remember him 纪念他最好的方式之一 should, save food, never waste any food … 【写作要求】1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。 2、文章词数在90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。 The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. __________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：本文是人物传记类材料作文； ② 人称、时态：介绍袁隆平使用第三人称；生平经历用一般过去时，人物评价、自身感悟使用一般现在时； ③ 提示：文章包含生平、成就、纪念方式三部分内容；词数 90 词左右，开头已给出不计入词数，禁止出现真实地名、校名与人名，适当补充细节使行文连贯。 谋篇布局 开头：给定开篇句，直接点明袁隆平是我心中最伟大的英雄。 中间第一段：按照时间线依次介绍袁隆平出生、研究水稻、推广杂交水稻、逝世等人生关键节点。 中间第二段：介绍杂交水稻的巨大贡献，解释 “杂交水稻之父” 称号的由来。 结尾：阐述纪念袁隆平的做法，表达节约粮食的个人想法。 佳作展示 The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha. Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”. I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① make a great contribution to 对…… 做出巨大贡献 ② solve the problem of food 解决粮食难题 ③ not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且…… 高分句型： ① In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world.（not only...but also... 并列结构） ② He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.（简单因果句式，逻辑清晰） （一） （2025·广东广州·二模）假如你是李华，你校英文报开展征文，请以“My role model”为题，根据思维导图的提示写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的当代杰出人物并分享你的体会。 要求： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分 My role model Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     My role model Role models make us become a better person. And my role model of our time is Yuan Longping.   Yuan Longping is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has significantly increased rice production. His work has helped feed countless people not only in China but also around the world, making a great contribution to solving the global food problem.   From him, I learn the spirit of dedication and perseverance. No matter how many difficulties he faced in research, he never gave up. His selfless devotion to helping others and making the world a better place inspires me to work hard and contribute to society in my own way. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：依据思维导图提示，从“谁是榜样”“为国家做了什么”“能从中学到什么”展开，需涵盖要点，可合理拓展细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明榜样人物，开篇直接表明 “my role model of our time is Yuan Longping” ，清晰给出核心人物。 第二步，介绍人物事迹与贡献。 第三步，分享学习体会，从袁隆平身上学到奉献和坚毅的精神。   [亮点词汇] ①devote...to...把……奉献给…… ②make a great contribution to...对……做出巨大贡献 ③inspire激励；鼓舞 [高分句型] ①He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has significantly increased rice production. （which引导非限制性定语从句） ② No matter how many difficulties he faced in research, he never gave up.（No matter how引导让步状语从句） （二） （2026·黑龙江大庆·一模）榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： 1. Who is your role model?    2. Why is he/she your model? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation. From him, I’ve learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country’s needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当拓展，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“我的榜样是黄旭华”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。表明我把他当作榜样的原因。 第三步，书写结语。表明我可以从他身上学到什么，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①admire仰慕 ②give up放弃 ③brave勇敢的 [高分句型] What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” (that引导宾语从句) （三） （2024·广东江门·一模）根据要求完成英语短文写作，请将英语短文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 榜样的力量是巨大的。作为中学生，相信我们都有自己的榜样。下周学校英语俱乐部将举行“主题征文”活动，请你根据表格信息提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。 我的好榜样 谁是我的好榜样？ 为什么是我的好榜样？ 这个好榜样给我带来什么影响？ (或你的感受体会) 举1个自己受好榜样影响的事例。 我的呼吁。 注意： 1) 不能使用本试卷所有短文的人物和事迹作为自己文章的例子。要写正能量人物例子，不能写负面或反面人物例子，否则得0分。不能照抄本试卷所有短文原文的完整句子；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 2) 语句连贯，词数不少于80个。 参考表达： to set a good example for sb. 给某人树立好榜样 to carry on the spirit of…/to inherit the spirit of… 传承……的精神 My Good Example ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 My Good Example Lei Feng is my good example, because he would help others who were in need. His spirit of great love and being ready to help others has been encouraging me all the time. What he did set a good example for me. When I was in the primary school, my teachers would tell us pupils the stories of Lei Feng, which moved me a lot. From then on, I have looked Lei Feng as my good example. I always give others a hand whenever they are in need. Especially in my holidays, I like working as a volunteer to do others a favor like doing some cleaning in the streets, giving others directions when asked, doing housework for the olds and so on. I feel quite happy when helping others. In my opinion, helping others not only brings us and others happiness, but also helps us grow healthily, which makes our society more harmonious, peaceful and full of love and respect for each other. Let’s make every effort to carry on/inherit the spirit of Lei Feng. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍榜样是谁及其原因； 第二步，叙述受榜样影响的事例； 第三步，表达感受和体会； 第四步，表达呼吁。 ［亮点词汇］ ①in need 在困难中 ②not only…but also… 不但……而且…… ［高分句型］ ①What he did set a good example for me. (what引导主语从句) ②When I was in the primary school, my teachers would tell us pupils the stories of Lei Feng, which moved me a lot. (when引导时间状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句) （四） （24-25九年级·广东·一轮复习）你校英文校报开设名人传记专栏，请根据以下提示，为专栏撰稿，介绍医学科学家屠呦呦，可适当展开，80字左右。 生平经历 1930年12月出生于宁波 1955年毕业于北京医科大学（Beijing Medical University） 1969年1月开始医药研究实验 2015年获诺贝尔医学奖 成就 成功研发青蒿素（artemisinin），挽救了发展中国家数百万人的生命 你对她的评价？ Tu Youyou——A Great Medical Scientist __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Tu Youyou——A Great Medical Scientist Tu Youyou is a famous female physician. She was born in December, 1930 in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province. She has been very interested in medicine since childhood. She graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1955. She has been engaged in medical research since January, 1969. She works hard and she is creative. She is not afraid of failures, and even often works with illness. She often works day and night. She is full of talent. She devoted herself to the research of a drug which is useful for cancer patients. After years of unremitting efforts, she successfully developed artemisinin, saving millions of lives in developing countries. And in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize in Medicine. She has made great contributions to Chinese medicine. I am really proud of her. I will study hard and try to get into my dream university. I also want to be a useful person to society in the future, just like her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍医学科学家屠呦呦，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据题干中的提示信息介绍屠呦呦的生平经历以及她取得的成就； 第三步，介绍自己对她的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be engaged in从事 ③be afraid of害怕 ④devote...to致力于 [高分句型] After years of unremitting efforts, she successfully developed artemisinin, saving millions of lives in developing countries.(现在分词作状语) （五） （2022·广东广州·一模）At the 2021 Tokyo Olympic Games, Su Bingtian made history becoming the first sprinter(短跑运动员) from China to appear in the Olympics men’s 100m final. At that moment, but also Asia’s “flying man”… In the semi-final, Su had set a personal best of 9.83 seconds which was also an Asian record. 假设你听到以上内容的英语广播，请根据以下提示写一篇题为“A Flying Man around Us”的英语征文向学校的英语广播站投稿。 (1)苏炳添简介： 1989年出生于广东省中山市，中国男子著名短跑运动员。暨南大学体育学院副教授，授课广受学生喜爱。 (2)成功的秘诀： 从小喜爱运动，刻苦训练，意志坚定 (3)你的感受？（至少2点） 要求： (1) 不得出现真实的姓名、校名； (2) 参考词汇：暨南大学Jinan University 体育学院Institute of Physical Education 副教授associate professor 短跑运动员sprinter (3)要求词数100左右，已给出的部分不算入总词数，照搬题目的英文不给分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：                                                                 A Flying Man around Us      At the 2021 Tokyo Olympics men’s 100m semi-final, Su Bingtian became not only China’s “flying man”, but also Asia’s “flying man”. I was so excited when I heard the news.      He was born in Zhongshan City, Guangdong Province in 1989. He is a famous Chinese male sprinter. He is an associate professor of the Institute Physical of Jinan University. His classes are widely loved by students. He loved sports and trained hard when he was in the childhood. He had a firm will, self-discipline and self-confidence. Su Bingtian achieved outstanding results in the 2021 Tokyo Olympic Games. Su Bingtian is famous for sprinting. Now Su Bingtian is a sport star. He is an example for us to follow. We should learn from him the spirit of hard work and never give up. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据英语广播内容和提示内容介绍下苏炳添以及你自己的感受。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；人称以第三人称为主。写作时围绕主题，能够准确使用一定的语法、短语和句型，力求语句通顺，逻辑清晰。 （六） （2021·广东广州·一模）英语课上即将进行“中国伟人”为主题的小组分享活动。请你根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文介绍三位中国伟人，并谈谈你们小组的感受。 要求： 1. 参考词汇：疟疾 malaria 2. 词数 80 左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Today, our group is honoured to introduce 3 great Chinese to you. They are ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Today, our group is honoured to introduce three great Chinese to you. They are Zhan Tianyou, Tu Youyou and Zhong Nanshan. Zhan Tianyou is the father of Chinese Railway. He built China’s first railway——the Beijing Zhangjiakou Railway. Tu Youyou is a great scientist and she found new drugs to fight malaria, her spirit of never giving up is worth people’s learning. Zhong Nanshan is a respiratory specialist in China. Seventeen years ago, he did his best to “fight against SARS”. In early 2020, a disease called Novel coronavirus pneumonia hit Wuhan. As soon as Zhong Nanshan heard the news, he rushed to Wuhan in person in January 2020. He led the medical staff to contain the epidemic and encouraged the people of the country to build confidence to overcome the difficulties. As students, we should learn from them. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时根据思维导图提示的内容，介绍三位中国伟人：詹天佑、屠呦呦和钟南山，并谈谈感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 （七） （2021·广东深圳·二模）“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士(academician)，是央视王牌节目《开讲啦》开播以来最年长的演讲者。假设你是校英文报的编辑，请你根据以下提示，写一篇人物介绍以宣扬黄院士的先进事迹。 人生经历 1926年出生于广东一家庭富裕，早年学医，后由于祖国需要改学建造核潜艇 主要贡献 曾隐姓埋名30年，坚持研究和建造核潜艇，被称为“中国核潜艇之父” 个人品质 勤学上进,坚韧不屈，热爱祖国和人民 你的感想和收获 (自由发挥) 提示词：nuke核潜艇 cover one’s identity 隐姓埋名 要求： 1. 词数80左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总字数。 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Have you ever heard of Huang Xuhua, an academician in our motherland? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Have you ever heard of Huang Xuhua, an academician in our motherland? He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to bulid the nukes. To protect the national security, he used to cover his identity for about 30 years. Now he keeps working hard and is called The Farther of China’s Nukes. He is so diligent and tough. And he loves the motherland and people. His story tells us what  is the great love for the people and country . We are all inspired by his deeds. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求根据所给内容写一篇关于黄旭华院士的短文，主要介绍他的主要经历、贡献等。 2.写作指导：本文可以按照所给材料分为两部分：第一部分介绍黄旭华院士的主要经历、贡献以及个人品质；第二部分主要描述个人的感想及收获。人称主要采用第三人称，时态主要采用一般过去时。准确运用时态，内容要充实，句子要通顺。 （八） （22-23九年级上·广东广州·期末）请根据以下表格，以 Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist 为题写一篇短文，介绍屠呦呦。 个人信息 1930年12月30日出生于浙江；她从小就对医学很感兴趣。 经历 1.1955年，她毕业于北京大学。 2.毕业后，她把大部分时间都投入到古代医学研究中；尽管遇到困难，但她并没有放弃。 3.2015年，她获得诺贝尔奖。 突出贡献 1．她发现了治疗疟疾的方法，拯救了很多生命。 2．她一直努力推行中医。 评价 你的感想或评价? 请至少发挥两点。 注意： （1）参考词汇：治疗 cure  推行 push  for 诺贝尔奖 the  Nobel  Prize 疟疾 malaria （2）词数 80 个左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 （3）内容应包括所有要点。 （4）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist Tu Youyou is a great scientist.____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist Tu Youyou is a great scientist. She was born on December 30, 1930 in Zhejiang. When she was very young, she showed interest in medicine. She is the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize. She graduated from Beijing University in 1955. She worked hard and was popular among the students and teachers. She always worked closely with her workmates. She devoted most of her time to studying ancient medicine. Though she met many difficulties, she never gave up. She has pushed for the use of Chinese medicine. She discovered the way to cure malaria. Her discovery has saved lots of lives. She is the pride of our country. We should learn from her and work hard at school. 【详解】题干解读：阅读题干，这是一篇人物介绍类作文。该题要求介绍伟大的科学家——屠呦呦，写作内容应该包括个人信息、经历、突出贡献和评价等等。该作文涉及人物过去的事，那么要注意时态的运用，主语包括一般过去时和一般现在时，人称应以第三人称为主。 例文点评：例文采取三段式的写作手法，第一段主要介绍屠呦呦的基本情况；第二段主要介绍她的经历和成就；第三段写自己的感受及对屠呦呦的评价。例文使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 高分亮点： 短语：on+具体的某一天；graduate from毕业于；give up放弃；lots of许多；be pride of为……感到自豪；learn from向……学习. 句型：(1)She is the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize. 她是第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。to win a Nobel Prize动词不定式作为后置定语，修饰前面的woman。（2）Though she met many difficulties, she never gave up. 虽然她遇到了很多困难，但她从未放弃。though引导的让步状语从句，不能与but连用，give up放弃。 $