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高考英语读后续写
情绪描写词汇句式
一、生气
(一)分级核心词汇(形容词/名词/动词)
1)基础替换(保底,替代angry/mad)
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adj.annoyed 恼怒的
cross 生气的
upset 烦闷恼火的
n.anger 怒气
annoyance 烦躁
v.annoy 使恼怒
2)高分进阶(阅卷加分)
adj.furious 暴怒的
irritated 烦躁不已的
enraged 怒不可遏的
indignant 愤愤不平的
outraged 震怒的
fuming 怒气冲冲的
n.rage 盛怒
fury 狂怒
indignation 义愤
irritation 恼火
v.glare 怒视
glower 阴沉地瞪
storm 气冲冲疾走
slam 猛摔(门/东西)
grit 咬紧(牙)
clench 攥紧(拳头)
(二)必背短语(词块优先,写细节)
【内心感受】
be burning with anger / fuming with rage 怒火中烧
make one’s blood boil 令人火冒三丈
be beside oneself with rage 气得失去理智
a wave/burst of rage swept over sb.一股怒火席卷某人
cannot contain/restrain one’s anger 抑制不住怒火
anger boiled inside sb.怒火在心中翻腾
to one’s annoyance 令人生气的是
【面部神态】(五官描写,读后续写灵魂)
one’s face clouds/darkens with anger 脸色沉下来/阴沉
flush with anger 气得满脸通红
brows knit tightly / frown deeply 眉头紧锁
eyes blaze/flash with rage 眼中燃起怒火
glare/glower at sb.怒目瞪着某人
press one’s lips tightly 双唇紧抿
nostrils flare 鼻孔张大
【肢体动作】(具象化愤怒)
clench one’s fists tightly 紧握拳头
grit one’s teeth 咬牙切齿
stamp one’s feet heavily 重重跺脚
cross one’s arms over chest 双臂抱胸
storm out of the room 气冲冲冲出房间
slam the door shut 猛地摔上门
【万能过渡】
To my annoyance, … 令我恼火的是……
(三)高分句式模板
【模板1】形容词短语置于句首(状语开篇,高级)
结构:情绪adj., 主语+动作(神态/肢体)
1.Furious and enraged, he clenched his fists and glared at me sharply.
怒火冲天,他攥紧拳头狠狠地瞪着我。
2.Indignant at the unfair treatment, her brows knitted tightly.
面对不公待遇,她眉头紧紧锁起。
【模板2】无灵主语(情绪作主语,拉开作文档次)
结构:A wave/burst of rage + 动词(swept/boiled/filled) + sb.
1.A burst of wild rage swept over me the moment I heard the lie.
一听见这个谎言,一股狂怒席卷了我。
2.Anger boiled inside her, clouding her judgment.
怒火在她心中翻腾,扰乱了她的理智。
【模板3】独立主格(逗号后加分细节,高频)
结构:主句,名词+现在分词(神态/五官)
1.He glared at me, his eyes blazing with uncontrollable rage.
他怒视着我,眼中燃烧着难以抑制的怒火。
2.She stood silent, her brows knitted tightly and lips pressed together.
她静静站着,眉头紧锁,双唇紧抿。
【模板4】So…that…结果状语(情绪+动作递进)
1.I was so furious that I could barely control myself.
我暴怒不已,几乎控制不住自己。
2.So enraged was Dad that he stormed out without a word.(倒装升级)
爸爸怒不可遏,一言不发气冲冲冲了出去。
(四)完整考场示范句
1.To my great annoyance, his careless words made my blood boil instantly, my face flushing hot with anger.
令我极为恼火的是,他轻率的话语瞬间让我火冒三丈,脸颊气得发烫。
2.Fuming with rage, I clenched my fists tightly and turned away without a single word.
我怒火中烧,紧紧攥起拳头,一言不发转身离开。
3.A wave of indignant anger washed over her as she stared at the broken gift.
看着被弄坏的礼物,一阵愤愤不平的怒火涌上她心头。
二、开心快乐
(一)分级核心词汇(形容词/名词/动词)
1)基础替换(保底,替代happy/excited)
adj.delighted 欣喜的
cheerful 欢快的
pleased 开心的
n.joy 喜悦
delight 愉悦
pleasure 快乐
v.delight sb.使某人开心
2)高分进阶(阅卷加分)
adj.thrilled 激动狂喜的
overjoyed 喜出望外的
radiant 容光焕发的
beaming 笑容满面的
ecstatic 狂喜的
light-hearted 轻松愉悦的
breathless(因激动)透不过气的
n.exhilaration 狂喜
euphoria 极度愉悦
thrill 一阵激动
v.beam 面露喜色
glow(脸上)洋溢喜悦
well up(情绪)涌上
(二)必背短语(词块优先,写细节)
【内心感受】
be wild with joy 欣喜若狂
be over the moon 乐上天(高级俚语)
be on top of the world 幸福到极点
be filled/overwhelmed with delight/joy 满心喜悦
a wave/surge of joy swept over sb.一阵喜悦席卷某人
joy welled up inside sb.喜悦涌上心头
cannot contain one’s excitement/delight 抑制不住激动
beyond words 难以言表
【面部神态】(五官描写,读后续写灵魂)
one’s face lights up/glows with delight 脸上喜笑颜开
grin from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
wear a broad/brilliant smile 绽放灿烂笑容
eyes sparkle/twinkle/shine with joy 眼中闪烁喜悦光芒
beam with pleasure 喜笑颜开
【肢体动作】(具象化情绪)
jump with joy / jump up and down 高兴得蹦跳
clap one’s hands 拍手欢呼
give sb.a tight/warm hug 紧紧拥抱某人
burst into hearty laughter 放声大笑
squeal with excitement 兴奋地小声尖叫
dance for joy 欢喜得手舞足蹈
【万能过渡】
To my delight/joy/thrill, … 令我开心的是……
(三)高分句式模板
【模板1】形容词短语置于句首(状语开篇,高级)
结构:情绪adj., 主语+动作(神态/肢体)
1.Delighted and thrilled, I jumped with joy and hugged my mother tightly.
又喜又激动,我高兴得跳起来紧紧抱住妈妈。
2.Overjoyed at the news, her eyes sparkled with delight.
听到消息喜出望外,她眼中闪烁着喜悦。
【模板2】无灵主语(情绪作主语,拉开作文档次)
结构:A wave/surge of joy + 动词(swept/coursed/filled) + sb.
1.A surge of wild joy swept over me the moment I spotted my lost dog.
一看见走失的小狗,狂喜瞬间席卷了我。
2.Joy welled up inside me, washing away all my worry.
喜悦涌上心头,冲走了我所有担忧。
【模板3】独立主格(逗号后加分细节,高频)
结构:主句,名词+现在分词(神态/眼睛)
1.I grinned from ear to ear, my eyes shining with excitement.
我笑得合不拢嘴,眼里闪着兴奋的光。
2.She threw her arms around me, her face glowing with happiness.
她一把抱住我,脸上洋溢着幸福。
【模板4】So…that…结果状语(情绪+动作递进)
1.I was so overjoyed that I could hardly contain myself.
我欣喜若狂,几乎无法克制自己。
2.So thrilled was she that she jumped up and clapped her hands.(倒装升级)
她激动万分,跳起来不停拍手。
(四)完整考场示范句
1.To my great delight, a broad smile spread across his face, and he ran towards me immediately.
令我大喜过望的是,灿烂的笑容绽放在他脸上,他立刻朝我跑来。
2.Thrilled beyond words, I felt a warm surge of happiness coursing through my body.
激动得难以言表,一股温暖的幸福感流淌全身。
3.Tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks as she beamed at me.
幸福的泪水顺着脸颊滑落,她微笑着看向我。
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