摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“鼓舞人心的人物”话题写作,从话题词汇积累(如inspiring, admire)和佳句仿写(如It’s nice of sb to do sth句型)入手,通过初级到高级作文对比、列提纲等步骤,搭建从基础语言储备到写作应用的学习支架。
其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过词汇升级(如用have an influence on代替affect)和句型仿写(如袁隆平相关句子)提升表达准确性,结合“总—分—总”结构提纲设计培养思维品质,提供实战训练及参考范文助力学习能力发展。学生能系统掌握写作方法,教师可高效开展分层教学。
内容正文:
英 语
九年级上册 RJ
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Unit 2 Inspiring People
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.鼓舞人心的;激励的 ___________
2.钦佩;赞赏 ________
3.令人钦佩的 ___________
4.勇气;勇敢 _________
5.钦佩;仰慕 _______________
inspiring
admire
admirable
courage
look up to sb
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6.因为;由于 ____________
7.为了 _____________
8.成功地做某事 ______________________
because of
in order to
succeed in doing sth
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】It’s really very nice of him to support and encourage my
exchange study here.(It’s nice of sb to do sth)
→仿写:他很好,告诉人们如何减少浪费。
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10.【教材原句】He also played a big part in reviewing the Chinese calendar at
that time.(play a part in…)
→仿写:袁隆平在减少饥饿方面发挥了重要作用。
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It’s nice of him to tell people how to reduce the waste.
Yuan Longping played an important part in reducing hunger.
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11.【教材原句】The well-respected biologist had spent his whole life researching
plants and seeds.(spend… doing sth)
→仿写:这个女孩每天放学后花大约三十分钟弹钢琴。
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12.【教材原句】To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is
Mozi (about 468—376 BCE).(one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数)
→仿写:故宫博物院是全世界最伟大的人造奇迹之一。
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The girl spends about thirty minutes playing the piano every day
after school.
The Palace Museum is one of the greatest man-made wonders in the
whole world.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026山西晋城调研]假如你校英语报栏目中有如下征稿通知,请你写一篇英
语文章投稿。
Many great people have devoted themselves to the whole world in many
different ways. We are touched by their spirit and contributions. At the same
time, their good deeds (行动) encourage us to study hard. Share your ideas
about the following topics.
(1)Who is the person you admire most?
(2)Why do you admire him/her so much?
(3)How do their deeds encourage you to study hard?
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注意:(1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右。
The Person I Admire Most
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第1步 审题目
体裁:说明文
时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
人称:第一人称和第三人称
内容要点:钦佩的人是谁、钦佩原因、事迹如何激励自己努力学习
第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总—分—总”。
第3步 写作进阶#5
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______________________________
The Person I Admire
Most
In our daily life, many
people affect us①, such as
doctors, nurses, teachers,
firefighters and more.
Among all of them, I
admire Yuan Longping
most. _____________________________
The Person I Admire Most
In our daily life, many people. .have an
influence on us(用have an influence on代替affect,
升级词汇)①, such as doctors, nurses, teachers,
firefighters and more. Among all of them, I admire
Yuan Longping most.
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Yuan Longping is
called② the “Father of
Hybrid Rice”.He spent his
whole life studying hybrid
rice. His work helped solve
the food problem for
millions of people around
the world.③ Yuan Longping is. .known as(用known as代替
called,升级词汇)② the “Father of Hybrid
Rice”.He devoted. .his whole life to researching
hybrid rice,. .helping to(用devoted代替spent,升级词
汇;用helping to作状语,升级句型). .solve the food
problem for millions of people around the world.③
He played an important part in reducing hunger.
(扩展语境,补充说明袁老的卓越贡献)④
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His deeds encourage
me to study hard. I want
to get more knowledge like
him. I hope to use what
I’ve learnt to help society
⑤.I also want to face
difficulties bravely, just as
he overcame various
challenges in scientific
research. His deeds encourage me to study hard. I want
to get more knowledge like him. I hope to use
what I’ve learnt to make. .contributions to
(用make contributions to代替help,升级短语)our
nation.⑤ I also want to face difficulties bravely,
just as he overcame various challenges in scientific
research. Though Yuan passed away, his spirit. .lives
on(用本单元新学的词汇补充说明袁老的精神永存,
强化决心). .forever.⑥
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026北京顺义区期中】某英文网站正在开展以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题的
征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的发明家,
他/她为什么是你最喜欢的发明家以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。词数100左右。
提示词:scientist;invent;great;teach
提示问题:(1)Who is your favourite inventor?
(2)Why is he/she your favourite inventor?
(3)What did you learn from him/her?
There are many famous inventors.________
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【参考范文】
There are many famous inventors.My favourite one is Thomas
Edison.He was a great American scientist who invented over 1,000 things.
He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant
inventions, but also because of his positive attitude.His famous saying
“Genius is one per cent inspiration and ninety-nine per cent
perspiration” has taught me a lot.It shows that hard work is the key
to success, not just talent.
From him, I learnt that we should never give up easily when facing
difficulties.His spirit encourages me to keep trying in my own study
and life.He is truly a great person to learn from.
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Value statement: Inspiring people show us the way forward.
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