摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦九年级上册“变化的世界”主题写作,从话题词汇积累(如government、railway)、教材原句仿写(如used to do、have done语法点)到作文结构搭建,通过“词句储备—范文进阶—实战训练”三阶支架,帮助学生衔接基础语言知识与写作应用。
其特色在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过佳句仿写强化语法应用(如be happy with sth句型),范文对比(初级与高阶作文)引导学生优化句子结构(如动名词作主语),提升思维品质。实战训练结合家乡变化话题,渗透文化意识,助力学生掌握写作策略,提升学习能力。教师可直接使用分层训练内容,学生能在实践中巩固语言知识,提升写作水平。
内容正文:
英 语
九年级上册 RJ
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Unit 1 The Changing World
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.政府 ____________
2.支持 _________
3.大大地 _________
4.铁路 _________
5.连接 ______
6.方便的 ____________
government
support
greatly
railway
link
convenient
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I’m very happy with the new railway built by our Chinese friends.
(be happy with sth)
→仿写:居民们对他们在社会主义现代化城市中更好的生活感到满意。
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8.【教材原句】Many changes have taken place in the town over the last few
years, and the people who live here have become rich.(have done)
→仿写:这些年,我们的学校已经变成一个更美丽的地方。
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Residents are happy with their better life in the socialist modern
city.
Our school has turned into a more beautiful place over the years.
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9.【教材原句】My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved
to a much larger one.(used to do sth)
→仿写:人们过去住在小公寓里,但现在更高、更明亮的、有高科技特色的建筑
已成为新的向往的地方。
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【解析】链接狂K
used to的详细讲解见狂K重点P2。
10.【教材原句】They used to be covered with sand.(be covered with sth)
→仿写:过去,一些崎岖的地区被泥土覆盖。
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People used to live in small flats, but now taller, brighter
buildings with high-tech features have become a new attraction.
In the past, some rough areas were covered with dirt.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026浙江舟山期中]某英文报正开展以“Our life has changed for the better”
为主题的征文竞赛。请你投稿,从下表所列的几个方面描述过去和现在美好生活
的变化,并谈谈你的感受。
In the past Now
Living conditions small houses big houses
Leisure (休闲)
activities swim in the river or sea, few books… swim in the
swimming pool, more
books…
注意:(1)短文中必须描述表格中所列的内容,可适当发挥;
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(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数80—100,短文首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Our life has developed rapidly.____
第1步审题目
体裁:说明文
时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
人称:第三人称
内容要点:过去的生活、现在的变化、感受。
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第2步列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总—分—总”。
第3步写作进阶#5
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Our life has developed
rapidly. People’s living
conditions have improved a lot.
In the past, most people
lived in small houses with no
air conditioners. They often felt
uncomfortable in hot summers
or cold winters. ______________________________
Our life has developed rapidly. People’s
living conditions have improved a lot.
In the past, most people lived in small
houses. .without. .air conditioners,. .so(用without
代替with no,升级词汇;添加so表示因果关系)
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① But now they live in
big houses. And people now
have more leisure activities than
before.Before, they swam only
in the river or sea.② they often felt uncomfortable in hot
summers or cold winters.① But now they live
in big houses. And people now have more
leisure activities than before.Before,. .swimming
(改为动名词作主语,升级句子结构)
续表
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Now they can swim in the
pool with warm water.③ For
children, they had few books to
read in the past, but now they
can easily get plenty of books.
④ Communications are
becoming easier and quicker, as
people use mobile phones and
computers instead of writing
letters.
With the development of
society, I believe our life is
becoming better. . .was only possible in the. .river or sea.②
Now they can enjoy swimming in warm
indoor pools. .whenever(用whenever引导时间
状语从句,升级句子). .they like.③ For
children, they. .used to have(用used to have代
替had,升级短语). .very few books to read, but
now they can easily get plenty of books.④
Communications are becoming easier and
quicker, as people use mobile phones and
computers instead of writing letters.
With the development of society, I believe
our life is becoming better.
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026陕西西安期末】国家发展给家乡带来了翻天覆地的改变,关注家乡发
展、推进家乡建设是我们肩负的责任。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的提示内容,
用英语写一篇短文向校英语社投稿,谈谈你家乡的变化以及你的看法。
提示:(1)How has your hometown changed?
(2)How do you like these changes?
(3)What will you do to make your hometown better?
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写作要求:(1)参考以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(校名、姓名和地名等);
(4)词数不少于100。
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Some Changes in My Hometown
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Value statement: Change is the opportunity to create a better future.
【参考范文】
Some Changes in My Hometown
With the support of our government, great changes have taken place
in my hometown.
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In the past, the narrow tracks were often covered with dirt when it
rained, and there was a serious shortage of fun places.However, the
government has brought about wonderful changes.Now we have tall
buildings with high-tech digital systems, and wide highways that link
our town to the capital.What’s more, new attractions like shopping
centres and cinemas have been built where people can relax with ease.
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I believe that these changes have greatly benefited all the
residents.We are all happy with our new modern life.As a junior student,
I will lead a green life by planting trees and bushes.I also promise to
be friendly and helpful to everyone.
I’m sure that if we all work together, we can create an even
better hometown!
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