2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---海边惊涛救人 导学案

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a relatively calm day in the fishing village of Kalk Bay near Cape Town. Tongai Matandirotya was working his shift as a bartender at the Brass Bell Restaurant. The atmosphere was relaxing, with customers chatting and the gentle sound of waves from the nearby Atlantic Ocean providing a pleasant atmosphere. Several people were walking by the window of Brass Bell looking out to the water. Tongai was in the middle of pouring a drink for a customer when suddenly, chaos erupted. The scene changed dramatically. A massive wild wave charged towards the shore, washing away everything in its path. People near the water’s edge were caught completely off-guard and swept into the sea by the wave. Among them were 37-year-old Clair Gardiner and her 8-year-old daughter Arya van Hilten. Clair knew they were being pulled into the water as soon as the wave rushed over them, and she managed to wrap her arms around little Arya. Tongai’s eyes widened in horror at the sight. Without hesitation, he dropped the drink he was pouring, his mind focused only on saving the lives in danger. He rushed outside, tearing off his belt as he ran. The waves were strong, but Tongai’s resolve was stronger. He dived into the water, the coldness of the ocean shocking his body. As he swam towards the struggling pair, the waves threw him about, but he kept going. When he reached them, the violence of the waves, even just a few meters from shore, had pulled Clair and Arya apart. Tongai quickly used his belt to secure Arya and swam back towards the shore with all his strength. Once Arya was safely on the shore, Tongai’s muscles burned with tiredness. Every breath was a struggle, but he knew he couldn’t leave Clair behind. Without a second thought, he turned and swam back into the waves. The sea seemed to fight him even harder but he was determined. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With one final burst of strength, he managed to pull Clair to safety. Soon an article titled Heroism by the Sea was posted on the website. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 开普敦渔村天气平静，调酒师Tongai正常工作，海边氛围闲适--- _________________ ---巨浪突然席卷海岸，Clair母女被意外卷入海中--- _________________ ---Tongai目睹险情，毫不犹豫弃工作施救，用腰带救下小女孩Arya--- _________________ ---不顾身体极度疲惫，毅然折返汹涌海浪，营救母亲Clair--- _________________ ---蓄力全力营救Clair，后续事迹被报道、彰显平凡伟大 4. 细节问答 What was Tongai doing when the accident happened? ：___________________________________ Who were trapped in the violent sea waves?：_________________________________ What did Tongai do immediately after seeing the accident?：________________________________________________ How did Tongai rescue the little girl Arya?：__________________________________________ Why did Tongai decide to swim back to the sea despite exhaustion?：_____________________________________________ What made the rescue extremely difficult?：_________________________________________________ What quality did Tongai show in the rescue process?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 海边小镇氛围安逸，Tongai正常上班工作→突发巨浪席卷海岸，母女二人不幸落水遇险→Tongai临危不惧，果断奔赴海中施救→奋力救下小女孩，身体透支却绝不放弃→再度勇闯巨浪，全力营救母亲→（续写）___________→（续写）___________ 6．情感线 Environment：peaceful and relaxing→___________→turbulent and dangerous→___________→warm and praiseworthy Tongai：calm and dedicated→___________→firm and fearless→___________→modest and admirable 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 人性善意类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: With one final burst of strength, he managed to pull Clair to safety. 衔接句1——What happened after Clair was saved? How did Tongai and the mother feel? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Soon an article titled Heroism by the Sea was posted on the website. 衔接句2——How did people respond to the article? What was Tongai’s attitude and the lesson? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：他用尽最后一丝力气，成功将Clair救至岸边。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：不久，一篇题为《海边的英雄主义》的文章发布在网上。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 With one final burst of strength, he managed to pull Clair to safety. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Soon an article titled Heroism by the Sea was posted on the website. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Tongai Matandirotya（海边餐厅调酒师、勇敢无私、临危不惧、舍己救人的平凡英雄）；Clair Gardiner（遭遇海浪遇险的母亲）；Arya van Hilten（落水的八岁小女孩） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 开普敦渔村天气平静，调酒师Tongai正常工作，海边氛围闲适--- 突发极端巨浪，海岸秩序大乱，Clair母女意外被卷入大海 ---Tongai目睹险情，毫不犹豫弃工作施救，用腰带救下小女孩Arya--- 身体极度疲惫、海浪愈发汹涌，仍毅然折返海中营救母亲Clair ---蓄力全力营救Clair，后续事迹被报道、彰显平凡伟大 4. 细节问答 What was Tongai doing when the accident happened?：He was working as a bartender and pouring a drink for a customer in a restaurant. Who were trapped in the violent sea waves?：37-year-old Clair Gardiner and her 8-year-old daughter Arya van Hilten. What did Tongai do immediately after seeing the accident?：He dropped his work without hesitation, rushed out and dived into the cold sea to save the drowning pair. How did Tongai rescue the little girl Arya?：He used his belt to secure Arya and swam back to the shore with all his strength. Why did Tongai decide to swim back to the sea despite exhaustion?：He refused to leave Clair behind and was determined to save every trapped life. What made the rescue extremely difficult?：The sea waves were violent and turbulent, and Tongai was exhausted physically after saving the little girl. What quality did Tongai show in the rescue process?：He showed great bravery, selflessness, strong sense of responsibility and perseverance. What does the story tell us?：Ordinary people can achieve extraordinary greatness with kindness and courage, and heroism lies in taking responsibility in danger. 5．情节线 海边小镇氛围安逸，Tongai正常上班工作→突发巨浪席卷海岸，母女二人不幸落水遇险→Tongai临危不惧，果断奔赴海中施救→奋力救下小女孩，身体透支却绝不放弃→再度勇闯巨浪，全力营救母亲→拼尽全力成功救下母亲，母女二人安然无恙、万分感激→英勇事迹全网传播，Tongai获称赞，坚守本心诠释平凡英雄 6．情感线 Environment：peaceful and relaxing→chaotic and terrifying→turbulent and dangerous→relieved and calm→warm and praiseworthy Tongai：calm and dedicated→shocked and urgent→firm and fearless→exhausted but determined→modest and admirable 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：南非开普敦海边突发巨浪卷走一对母女，普通调酒师Tongai不顾海水凶险、身体疲惫，两次勇闯海中，奋力救下母女二人，其平凡而伟大的英勇事迹被广泛报道，诠释了普通人的英雄担当。 英文：When a sudden huge wave swept a mother and her daughter into the sea, Tongai, an ordinary bartender, braved the violent waves twice regardless of exhaustion and danger, rescuing the two successfully. His heroic deeds spread widely, showing that ordinary people can also be heroes with courage and kindness. 8. 句式 with复合结构：The atmosphere was relaxing, with customers chatting and the gentle sound of waves from the nearby Atlantic Ocean providing a pleasant atmosphere. 让步状语从句：The waves were strong, but Tongai’s resolve was stronger. 分词作伴随状语：Without hesitation, he dropped the drink he was pouring, his mind focused only on saving the lives in danger. 9. 本文主题 人性善意类：平凡孕育伟大，勇气与无私铸就英雄本色，危难时刻的挺身而出是最珍贵的人性光辉 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: With one final burst of strength, he managed to pull Clair to safety. 衔接句1——What happened after Clair was saved? How did Tongai and the mother feel? After being rescued, Clair regained her breath and thanked Tongai repeatedly. Tongai was totally worn out but felt relieved to see the mother and daughter safe. Paragraph 2: Soon an article titled Heroism by the Sea was posted on the website. 衔接句2——How did people respond to the article? What was Tongai’s attitude and the lesson? The article spread quickly online, winning widespread praise from netizens. Tongai remained modest, saying that he just did what anyone would do in that situation. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：他用尽最后一丝力气，成功将Clair救至岸边。 →①成功将虚弱的Clair拖上岸，自己精疲力竭瘫倒在地→②母女二人平安团聚，对Tongai满心感激、连连致谢→③围观路人纷纷赞叹这场惊险的救援； 第二段：不久，一篇题为《海边的英雄主义》的文章发布在网上。 →①文章详细记录Tongai的英勇事迹，迅速全网走红→②网友纷纷点赞致敬，称赞其为平凡英雄→③Tongai淡然谦逊，坦言只是举手之劳，诠释英雄真谛。 四.段落续写满分范文 With one final burst of strength, he managed to pull Clair to safety. Completely exhausted, Tongai collapsed on the shore, gasping for breath with his whole body trembling. Cold and worn out as he was, a huge sense of relief flooded his heart. After recovering slightly, Clair hugged her daughter tightly, tears of fear and gratitude streaming down her face. She thanked Tongai over and over again for risking his life to save her and her child. Passers-by all cheered for the brave bartender, amazed by his courage and perseverance in the face of fierce waves. Soon an article titled Heroism by the Sea was posted on the website. The article vividly recorded Tongai’s selfless and brave rescue process, touching countless netizens. It soon went viral online, with thousands of people praising his noble deeds. Faced with numerous praises, Tongai remained modest. He said he just did what he should do, and anyone who witnessed the accident would make the same choice. His ordinary but heroic behavior perfectly interprets the true meaning of heroism. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $