内容正文:
Writing
—Based on language matrials from 选择性必修1 Unit 2 Success
To use words and expressions from this class in practical writing.
To know qualities for achieving success and what we should do to achieve success.
To cultivate critical thinking ability by text analysis and know the true meaning of success.
Learning objectives
Part 1
The Structure of This Unit
Text Main content
Topic Talk A few for success
Lesson 1 Ex-millionaire Jason Harley’s attitude towards .
Lesson 2 Five of success
Lesson 3 An Olympic athlete’s for getting to the top
Writing Workshop A story of Lang Ping
Reading Club 1 Huang Danian’s .
Reading Club 2 is the mother of success.
tips
secrets
money and success
sacrifice
life
contribution and sacrifice
Failure
Success
Lesson 1:
Ex-millionaire Jason Harley’s attitude towards money and success
Writing Workshop:
A life story of Lang Ping
Topic Talk & Lesson 2:
Tips and secrets of success
Reading Club 2:
Failure is the mother of success
Reading Club 1:
Huang Danian’s contribution
and sacrifice
Lesson 3:
An Olympic athlete’s sacrifice for getting to the top
What
is success?
What qualities are needed for achieving success?
What should we do to achieve success?
Part 2
Text Analysis
Activity 1: try to find what success is from Lesson 1.
Success is not measured by how much money you have but by how you understand the true meaning of life.
What sentence pattern is used in this sentence?
not...but...
Imitative writing
成功不是你拥有什么,而是你成为了什么样的人。
Success is not about what you have, but about who you have become.
L47
Lesson 1 (P30-31):
Activity 2: try to find the qualities needed for achieving success from Topic Talk and Lesson 2.
1.First, if you want to be successful, you really need to be passionate and determined about what you do.
Topic Talk (P107-108):
2.You also need to work hard.
3.Other secrets of success are to believe in yourself and to be grateful.
4.The final tip is to learn from failure.
Topic sentences:
Supporting details:
Argument 1:
For example, one successful person I admire is Liu Yang, who is an astronaut. She was passionate about space and determined in her effort and so was able to become China’s first female astronaut at a very young age.
Argument 2:
Being grateful means you’re always appreciative of what you have and what other people have done for you. In this way, you are likely to stay positive about life and be inspiring to others.
Argument 3:
That reminds me of Liu Xiang, the track athlete. Despite many injuries in his career, he always remained determined and focused. His commitment was amazing.
First, be passionate about what you do.
Lesson 2 (P108-109):
Second, have vision and determination.
My third tip is: work hard.
My tip number four is: set your goals high.
Finally, my last tip is: keep trying.
Activity 3: try to find what we should do to achieve success from Lesson 3 and Reading Club 2.
I would stay in at lunch time just to get ahead on class work rather than go out and play.
Lesson 3 (P36-37):
L21
What sentence pattern is used in this sentence?
Imitative writing
would do A rather than do B
我会每天采取小而持续的行动,而非等待一个完美的机会。
I would take small and continuous/consistent/constant action every day rather than wait for a single perfect opportunity.
If you want to be an Olympic champion, it’s all about that little extra thing you have done in your preparation that will set you apart from your competitors.
L31
What sentence patterns are used in this sentence?
Imitative writing
Conditional clause(条件句)
如果我能被理想的大学录取,那一定是在准备期间付出的那点额外的努力将我和我的竞争者们区分开来。
If I could be admitted to/into/by my ideal university, it’s all about that little extra thing I have done in my preparation that will set me apart from my competitors.
It is/was+被强调部分+that/who (emphatic sentence)
If we can learn how to manage failure, we’ll learn how to succeed.
Reading Club 2 (P44-45):
In the last paragraph
What sentence pattern is used in this sentence?
Imitative writing
特殊疑问词+to do 作主语/宾语/表语
真正的挑战在于如何有效地将热情与毅力结合起来。
The real/true challenge lies in how to combine passion with/and perseverance effectively.
Part 3
Writing
Try to use the words and expressions we have just learned to finish the following practical writing.
假设你校英文报正在举办以“My View on Success”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 你对成功的理解;
2. 你认为取得成功的关键品质(至少两点);
3. 结合自身实际,谈谈你未来追求成功的打算。
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
Your understanding of success
Your opinion about the key qualities contributing to success (passion, perseverance, confidence...)
Your plan about pursuing success
Success is not about gaining/achieving fame or wealth, but about
fulfilling/realizing personal goals.
Para 1: Your understanding of success
1. 成功不是关于取得名誉或财富,而是关于实现个人目标。(not...but...)
2. 真正的成功在于追求我们真正渴望的东西以及一路上所经历的成长与快乐。
True success lies in pursuing what we truly desire, together with the
growth and joy/fun experienced along the way.
The most important factors for achieving success are passion
and perseverance.
It is passion that gives us the motivation to start and makes us keep
going/trying when we meet difficulties/troubles.
Para 2: Your opinion about the key qualities contributing to success
1. 取得成功最重要的因素是热爱和毅力。
2. 正是热情给了我们开始的动机,让我们在遇到困难时能够坚持下去。(强调句型)
4. 真正的挑战在于如何有效地将热情与毅力结合起来。(特殊疑问词+
to do作宾语)
The real challenge lies in how to combine passion with/and
A passionate person would persist through difficulties and learn
Para 2: Your opinion about the key qualities contributing to success
3. 一个充满热情的人会在面对困难时坚持不懈,从失败中学习,而不是在遇到障碍时选择放弃。(would do A rather than do B)
from failures rather than give up when facing obstacles.
perseverance effectively.
than just study for exams.
With both passion and perseverance, I’m confident that I can achieve my
I would spend time exploring subjects I’m passionate about rather
3. 带有热情和毅力,我相信我可以一步步地实现我的目标。
Para 3: Your plan about pursuing success
1. 作为一名高中生,我计划将这一理解应用到我的学习中。
2. 我会花时间探索那些我热爱的科目,而不仅仅是为了考试而学习。
goals step by step.
As a high school student, I plan to apply this understanding to my study.
My View on Success
Success is not about gaining/achieving fame or wealth, but about fulfilling/realizing personal goals./True success lies in pursuing what we truly desire, together with the growth and joy/fun experienced along the way.
I consider passion and perseverance to be the most crucial factors for success. It is passion that gives us the motivation to start and makes us keep going when we meet difficulties/troubles. A passionate person would persist through difficulties and learn from failures rather than give up when facing obstacles. The real challenge lies in how to combine passion with perseverance effectively.
As a high school student, I plan to apply this understanding to my study. I would spend time exploring subjects I’m passionate about rather than just study for exams. With both passion and perseverance, I’m confident that I can achieve my goals step by step.
My View on Success
__________________ , success is not about gaining/achieving fame or wealth, but about fulfilling/realizing personal goals./True success lies in pursuing what we truly desire, together with the growth and joy/fun experienced along the way.
I consider passion and perseverance to be the most crucial factors for success. It is passion that gives us the motivation to start and makes us keep going when we meet difficulties/troubles._________________, a passionate person would persist through difficulties and learn from failures rather than give up when facing obstacles. ________
______________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________ The real challenge lies in how to combine passion with perseverance effectively.
As a high school student, I plan to apply this understanding to my study. I would spend time exploring subjects I’m passionate about rather than just study for exams. With both passion and perseverance, I’m confident that I can achieve my goals step by step.
From my perspective
For
example, Liu Yang, an astronaut, is passionate about space and determined in her effort and so she was able to become China’s first female astronaut .
Moreover/Besides
Assignment
Finish your practical writing
and hand in it tonight.
Some famous sayings about success
Success is simple. Do what’s right, the right way, at the right time.
成功很简单:在正确的时间,用正确方法,做正确的事。
——Arnold H. Glasow
Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.
成功不是终点,失败不是命运,只有继续下去的勇气才会奏效。
——Winston Churchill
Don’t aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.
如果你想要成功,不要只盯着它。做你喜欢、相信的事吧,成功自然就会来临。
——David Frost
Thank You
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