Unit 6 Touring the World（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材鲁教版六年级上册

本初中英语Unit 6“旅游景点”单元同步写作讲义，围绕“人与社会”主题构建“词汇-句式-仿写-范例-实战”学习支架。先通过词汇积累（如tourist spot、be famous for）和句式分类（开头/中间/结尾句）夯实基础，再以佳句仿写（教材原句引导）强化运用，结合范例分析（含谋篇布局表格）明确结构，最后通过多情境实战任务（如介绍北京、设计旅行计划）巩固提升。 该资料亮点在于以核心素养为导向，鲜活素材与思维导图助力语言能力培养，范例赏析中审题与结构分析提升思维品质，多样化实战任务（如跨文化城市推荐、假期安排）渗透文化意识。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后帮助学生通过仿写与练习查漏补缺，实现语言表达与跨文化沟通能力的协同发展。

Unit 6 Touring the World 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，单元话题为“旅游景点”。 该单元旨在培养学生旅行交流、跨文化沟通与社会交往的综合能力，旅游出行是拓展社会视野、开展人际交流的重要活动，能够帮助学生拓宽社交边界、搭建跨地域、跨文化的沟通桥梁。能理解不同地域的风土差异，形成包容多元文化的认知基础，从而培养开阔的国际视野、友好包容的社交素养，实现平等顺畅的跨文化交流。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. tourist spot 旅游景点 2. be famous for...因...而出名 3. sound interesting 听起来有趣 4. a popular city一个受欢迎的城市 5. in the city of. ..在...城市里 6. wonderful views美丽的景色 7. can’t wait to do 迫不及待做 8. be different from. . .和...不同 句式积累 开头句： 1. I'm so happy that...我很开心... 2. There are many. . . 有很多... 3. Let me introduce... 让我来介绍..... 中间句： 1. Let me introduce...让我来介绍 2. If you are...如果你... 3. It is a popular place... 这是一个受欢迎的地方 4. You can learn a lot... 你能学到很多... 结尾句： 1. I'm sure...我确信... 2. Why not...?为什么不呢? 3. I think you will like the place.我认为你会喜欢这个地方。 4. What's more,don't miss...此外,不要错过... 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：There are many great trees and lotus flowers here in summer. 仿写：北京有许多古老的建筑。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：I can’t wait to go there.(can’t wait to do...） 仿写：我迫不及待见到你们每一个人。 _____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The Yellow River is one of the longest rivers in the world.. 仿写：泰山是最受欢迎的旅游景点之一。 _____________________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views. 仿写：博物馆是学习历史的好地方。 ____________________________________________________________________________ 典例 1．你和你的英国朋友Peter一起登长城，你应该给他介绍些什么呢？你们登长城会有什么感受呢？请写一篇题目为“A Visit to the Great Wall ”的短文。词数：60左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题 ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文（游记）。 ②时态：一般过去时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 谋篇布局 开头 介绍游览长城的背景（时间、人物、事件）。 中间 介绍长城基本信息（建造时间、目的、外观）。 结尾 结尾总结，描述“我”和Peter游览长城的感受和活动。 佳作展示 A Visit to the Great Wall     Last Sunday, I visited the Great Wall with my British friend Peter. I told him it was built over 2,000 years ago to protect China. We walked on the ancient stones and enjoyed the wonderful view. We felt very excited and proud. Peter said it was amazing. We took many photos to remember this special trip. It was a great day! 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①feel excited感到兴奋 ②it was amazing 这太棒了！ 高分句型： ① I told him it was built over 2,000 years ago to protect China. （that引导宾语从句） （一） 假如你的法国笔友Mike想了解一下北京，请向他简单介绍一下。70 词左右。要点：名胜古迹，饮食等。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 五一劳动节即将到来，你是否已经做好了假期出游计划？请根据写作要求写一篇不少于70词的英文短文，简单介绍你的假期出游安排。 写作要求： 1.内容表达完整，条理清晰； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 May Day holiday is coming. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel to Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it. Write at least 60 words. (假设你的朋友Ben下周要来上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于60个词。) Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Dong （四） 假如你是陈洁，请根据邮件的内容和所给提示，给好友艾米回一封邮件。 Dear Chen Jie, How are you doing? I know you had a good time in Sanya during the Labor Day holiday. Tell me something about your trip. Why do you like travelling? Yours, Amy 提示： 1. 三亚阳光明媚，天气很热。我和家人吃了美味的食物，拍了很多照片…… 2. 我喜欢旅行的原因 (reasons)，我可以放松…… 写作要求： (1) 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； (2) 词数：50词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Amy, How are you? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Chen Jie （五） Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情境, 写一篇不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom和他的家人将在寒假要来中国旅游。以下有三个城市供他们参考，请你根据表格信息及提示内容写一封邮件进行旅游城市的推荐，开头已给出。 City Location Attractive point Shanghai East of China The Bund / Yu Garden / Disneyland... Harbin North of China Snow World / Skiing... Sanya South of China warm weather / beautiful beaches... 内容: 1. Which city do you recommend (推荐)? 2. Why do you recommend the city? Dear Tom, I’m glad to know that you will come to China for your winter holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （六） 假如你是李华，现在正在某个城市游玩，请根据下面的提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍一下你所在的城市或旅游景点。词数60左右。 要点提示： (1)Where is it? (2)Why do you think it’s a good place? (3)What can people enjoy/visit/eat/buy there? (4)How do you feel? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 假如有一国外笔友Lisa打算来你的城市旅游，请你给她写一封邮件，列一下你城市的一些著名景点，并用英文为她讲述一下这些旅游景点的特色。60个词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 假如你的笔友Tom想了解关于长城的情况，请你以“The Great Wall”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一下长城。 1.Where is the Great Wall? 2. How old is it? 3. How long is it? 4. Can we walk along all of it? 词语：beautiful, visit, thousand, people, great, kilometer 要求：1.语句通顺，所给词语和信息使用恰当。 2.书写规范，不少于40词，开头已给出，不计入总数。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共14页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Unit 6 Touring the World 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，单元话题为“旅游景点”。 该单元旨在培养学生旅行交流、跨文化沟通与社会交往的综合能力，旅游出行是拓展社会视野、开展人际交流的重要活动，能够帮助学生拓宽社交边界、搭建跨地域、跨文化的沟通桥梁。能理解不同地域的风土差异，形成包容多元文化的认知基础，从而培养开阔的国际视野、友好包容的社交素养，实现平等顺畅的跨文化交流。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. tourist spot 旅游景点 2. be famous for...因...而出名 3. sound interesting 听起来有趣 4. a popular city一个受欢迎的城市 5. in the city of. ..在...城市里 6. wonderful views美丽的景色 7. can’t wait to do 迫不及待做 8. be different from. . .和...不同 句式积累 开头句： 1. I'm so happy that...我很开心... 2. There are many. . . 有很多... 3. Let me introduce... 让我来介绍..... 中间句： 1. Let me introduce...让我来介绍 2. If you are...如果你... 3. It is a popular place... 这是一个受欢迎的地方 4. You can learn a lot... 你能学到很多... 结尾句： 1. I'm sure...我确信... 2. Why not...?为什么不呢? 3. I think you will like the place.我认为你会喜欢这个地方。 4. What's more,don't miss...此外,不要错过... 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：There are many great trees and lotus flowers here in summer. 仿写：北京有许多古老的建筑。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：I can’t wait to go there.(can’t wait to do...） 仿写：我迫不及待见到你们每一个人。 _____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The Yellow River is one of the longest rivers in the world.. 仿写：泰山是最受欢迎的旅游景点之一。 4. 教材原句：The top of the mountain is a wonderful place to enjoy the views. 仿写：博物馆是学习历史的好地方。 ____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. There are many old buildings in Beijing. 2. I can't wait to meet everyone of you. 3. Mount Tai is one of the most popular tourist spots. 4. The museum is a good place to study history. 典例 1．你和你的英国朋友Peter一起登长城，你应该给他介绍些什么呢？你们登长城会有什么感受呢？请写一篇题目为“A Visit to the Great Wall ”的短文。词数：60左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共14页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文（游记）。 ②时态：一般过去时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 谋篇布局 开头 介绍游览长城的背景（时间、人物、事件）。 中间 介绍长城基本信息（建造时间、目的、外观）。 结尾 结尾总结，描述“我”和Peter游览长城的感受和活动。 佳作展示 A Visit to the Great Wall     Last Sunday, I visited the Great Wall with my British friend Peter. I told him it was built over 2,000 years ago to protect China. We walked on the ancient stones and enjoyed the wonderful view. We felt very excited and proud. Peter said it was amazing. We took many photos to remember this special trip. It was a great day! 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①feel excited感到兴奋 ②it was amazing 这太棒了！ 高分句型： ① I told him it was built over 2,000 years ago to protect China. （that引导宾语从句） （一） 假如你的法国笔友Mike想了解一下北京，请向他简单介绍一下。70 词左右。要点：名胜古迹，饮食等。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Beijing Beijing is the capital of China. It is famous for its long history and culture. There are many places of interest in Beijing such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace. If you go to Beijing, the first place to go is Tian’anmen Square. Beijing Duck is one of the most famous foods in Beijing. You can taste it. It is very delicious. People there are very friendly. I think Beijing is a great place to visit. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为说明文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍北京； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，具体阐述写作内容。首先，介绍北京的名胜古迹，并简要描述它们的特色或历史意义。其次，介绍北京的饮食文化，此外，还可以提及北京人的友好态度； 第三步，书写结语，表达对北京的喜爱或推荐之情。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②the Summer Palace颐和园 ③one of……之一 [高分句型] ①There are numerous places of interest in Beijing, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace. (使用such as列举名胜古迹) ②If you go to Beijing, the first place to go is Tian’anmen Square. (if引导条件状语从句) （二） 五一劳动节即将到来，你是否已经做好了假期出游计划？请根据写作要求写一篇不少于70词的英文短文，简单介绍你的假期出游安排。 写作要求： 1.内容表达完整，条理清晰； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 May Day holiday is coming. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 May Day holiday is coming. My parents and I are going to fly to Qingdao and spend the three-day holiday there. We will pay a visit to some famous scenic spots, such as Laoshan Mountain and the May Fourth Square. Besides, taking photos, eating local food and shopping are also on our to-do list. At last, we will get together with my aunt who moved to Qingdao 5 years ago. I hope it will be a happy vacation! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，谈谈五一劳动节假期打算去哪里旅游； 第二步，谈谈出游的活动计划； 第三步，谈谈自己的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①pay a visit to去参观 ②get together with sb与某人聚在一起 ③move to搬到 [高分句型] ① I hope it will be a happy vacation!（宾语从句） （三） Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel to Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it. Write at least 60 words. (假设你的朋友Ben下周要来上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于60个词。) Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Dong 【答案】例文 Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai. I will meet you at the airport. Then I will show you around the Bund of Shanghai. You will see many famous buildings here. Of course, I will also take you to taste our local food. I will also show you around the museum. You can visit many historical relics here. I will also show you around the Central Street. You can shop here. You will have a great time. I look forward to your coming. Yours, Lin Dong 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。对朋友要来上海旅游表示欢迎； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。给朋友讲述来上海旅游的行程安排； 第三步，书写结语。对朋友即将到上海表示期待。 [亮点词汇] ①show sb. around 带某人四处参观 ②take sb. to do sth. 带某人做某事 ③have a good time 玩得开心 ④look forward to 期待 [高分句型] I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai. (that引导的宾语从句) （四） 假如你是陈洁，请根据邮件的内容和所给提示，给好友艾米回一封邮件。 Dear Chen Jie, How are you doing? I know you had a good time in Sanya during the Labor Day holiday. Tell me something about your trip. Why do you like travelling? Yours, Amy 提示： 1. 三亚阳光明媚，天气很热。我和家人吃了美味的食物，拍了很多照片…… 2. 我喜欢旅行的原因 (reasons)，我可以放松…… 写作要求： (1) 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； (2) 词数：50词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Amy, How are you? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Chen Jie 【答案】例文： Dear Amy, How are you? I had a great time in Sanya during the Labor Day holiday. The weather was sunny and hot. My family and I ate delicious food and took many photos where the sea met the sky. I love traveling because it’s a way that can help me relax and broaden my horizons. Best wishes. Yours, Chen Jie 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作背景与感受。用“劳动节假期期间我在三亚度过了一段美好的时光。”引出下文，表达旅行的愉快心情。 第二步，具体阐述旅行经历。从“天气、活动”等方面描述在三亚的旅行体验。 第三步，表达个人对旅行的看法。用“这是一种能帮助我放松并开阔视野的方式。”进行情感与看法的升华。 [亮点词汇] ①delicious food美食 ②took many photos拍了很多照片 ③relax and broaden my horizons放松身心，开阔眼界 [高分句型] ①My family and I ate delicious food and took many photos where the sea met the sky. (where引导的定语从句) ②I love traveling because it’s a way that can help me relax and broaden my horizons. (because引导的原因状语从句) （五） Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情境, 写一篇不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom和他的家人将在寒假要来中国旅游。以下有三个城市供他们参考，请你根据表格信息及提示内容写一封邮件进行旅游城市的推荐，开头已给出。 City Location Attractive point Shanghai East of China The Bund / Yu Garden / Disneyland... Harbin North of China Snow World / Skiing... Sanya South of China warm weather / beautiful beaches... 内容: 1. Which city do you recommend (推荐)? 2. Why do you recommend the city? Dear Tom, I’m glad to know that you will come to China for your winter holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to know that you will come to China for your winter holiday. I understand you’re exploring different cities, and I’d like to suggest Shanghai. Shanghai, located in the east of China, offers a unique blend of modern skyscrapers and traditional Chinese culture. You can stroll along the Bund, enjoying the stunning views of the city skyline. Exploring the beautiful Yu Garden will give you a taste of traditional Chinese architecture. Plus, if you’re interested in theme parks, Disneyland Shanghai is an exciting option. I believe Shanghai provides a perfect mix of experiences that your whole family would enjoy. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要推荐上海； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍上海的位置、景点及推荐的原因； 第三步，书写结语。祝对方旅行愉快。 [亮点词汇] ①explore探索 ②unique独特的 ③option选择 [高分句型] ①I understand you’re exploring different cities, and I’d like to suggest Shanghai. (宾语从句；并列句) ②Plus, if you’re interested in theme parks, Disneyland Shanghai is an exciting option. (条件状语从句) ③I believe Shanghai provides a perfect mix of experiences that your whole family would enjoy. (宾语从句；定语从句) （六） 假如你是李华，现在正在某个城市游玩，请根据下面的提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍一下你所在的城市或旅游景点。词数60左右。 要点提示： (1)Where is it? (2)Why do you think it’s a good place? (3)What can people enjoy/visit/eat/buy there? (4)How do you feel? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m in Qingdao with my family now. It’s a very beautiful city in China. Qingdao is famous for its beaches, and we visit many of them. The sand is soft and the sea is calm, perfect for swimming and relaxing. We visit the Qingdao Museum today. We learn about the city’s history and culture. The food in Qingdao is very delicious. My parents try the famous Qingdao beer, which has a good taste. Local seafood is also a must-try. I can’t wait to share these with you. In a word, my trip to Qingdao is wonderful. I look forward to visiting it again. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍所在的城市，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己现在所在的地方； 第二步，介绍自己认为这是个好地方的原因以及人们喜欢在这里做的事情； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事 ③share sth with sb和某人分享某物 [高分句型] ①Qingdao is famous for its beaches, and we visit many of them. (and连接的并列句) （七） 假如有一国外笔友Lisa打算来你的城市旅游，请你给她写一封邮件，列一下你城市的一些著名景点，并用英文为她讲述一下这些旅游景点的特色。60个词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Lisa, I’m so glad to hear that you’ll come to my city. Now, let me introduce the places of interest in my city. Tai’an is a small but very beautiful city. It lies in Shan Dong Province. It is famous for Mountain Tai. Mount Tai is known as “the first mountain in the five mountains” and “the first mountain in the world”. Besides, Dai temple is also a good place to visit. It was the Emperor’s Palaces in ancient. But now the temple is a museum about history. In a word, Tai’an is a good place to travel. I hope you’ll enjoy yourself here. Yours, XXX 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求介绍自己所在城市的一些景点及其特色，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达向对方介绍一些景点； 第二步，具体介绍自己城市的一些景点及特色； 第三步，书写结语，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①lie in位于 ②be famous for因……而著名 ③be known as被称为 [高分句型] ①Besides, Dai temple is also a good place to visit. (不定式作定语) ②I hope you’ll enjoy yourself here. (宾语从句) （八） 假如你的笔友Tom想了解关于长城的情况，请你以“The Great Wall”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一下长城。 1.Where is the Great Wall? 2. How old is it? 3. How long is it? 4. Can we walk along all of it? 词语：beautiful, visit, thousand, people, great, kilometer 要求：1.语句通顺，所给词语和信息使用恰当。 2.书写规范，不少于40词，开头已给出，不计入总数。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： The Great Wall    The Great Wall is in northern China. It is over 2,000 years old and stretches about 21,000 kilometers. Though it is very long, we cannot walk along all of it because some parts are broken. Every year, thousands of people visit this beautiful place. The Great Wall is a symbol of China’s great history. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：需要描述长城的地理位置、历史、长度、现状、游客情况和象征意义，所有提示点需完整呈现，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步：回答长城的位置和历史； 第二步：说明长度和是否全程可走； 第三步：补充游客情况和象征意义。 [亮点词汇] ①stretches延伸 ②thousands of成千上万的 ③symbol象征 [高分句型] ①Though it is very long, we cannot walk along all of it because some parts are broken. (Though引导让步状语从句和because引导原因状语从句) ②The Great Wall is a symbol of China’s great history. (运用了主系表结构，简洁点题) $