Unit 1 Happy Holiday 单元话题书面表达10篇-2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元练习（人教版）

**基本信息** 初中英语“假期旅行”单元书面表达专项训练，分基础巩固（8题）和重难提升（2题）两梯度，10篇练习覆盖日记、书信等体裁，适配单元复习需求。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|10题|旅行经历描述（地点、活动、感受）、应用文格式（日记、书信）、语法规范（时态、语句连贯）|基础题聚焦具体要点（如张家界天门山、哈利路亚山），提升题涉及邮件回复（题9）和观点陈述（题10），梯度分明；情境融入真实地名与文化元素（三下锅、《阿凡达》拍摄地），培养文化意识；任务从要点整合到开放表达，提升语言能力与思维品质，贴合中考书面表达命题趋势。|

Unit 1 Happy Holiday 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：假期旅行 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．假如你是李华，今年暑假7月21号你和家人一起去了张家界旅游，不管是张家界的青山绿水，还是民族特色的美食或纪念品，都给你留下了深刻印象，请写一篇日记记录美好瞬间。 要点如下： 1. 张家界最有名的山是天门山(Tianmen Mountain)，我们登顶看到四周美景； 2. 这里的哈利路亚山(Hallelujah Mountains)曾是电影《阿凡达Avatar》的拍摄地； 3. 这里的特色美食有三下锅(Zhangjiajie Mixed Pot)。 要点： (1) 包含所有要点，可适当补充信息以使文章完整； (2) 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，格式规范； (3) 词数不少于80词。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你叫李明，今年五一假期你跟父母去了青岛旅行，你打算告诉你加拿大笔友Paul关于你的旅行经历。用英语给Paul 写一封80词左右的信。 1.我和我的父母去青岛度假。 2.我们乘飞机去。 3.我们也去购物并且吃美味的海鲜。 4.我们在那拍了很多照片。 5.我对这次旅行真的很兴奋。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．在这个充满探索与发现的年纪，每一次旅行都是成长的契机。旅行不仅让人身心得到放松，还能让人与 亲友共享欢聚的美好，更是游览祖国大好河山的机会。许多同学曾在假期外出游玩、拓宽视野，留下了 许多美好的回忆。学校公众号正在征集以“我的旅行记忆”为主题的文章，请描述你的一次旅行经历。 参考词：visit、swim、eat、go shopping、enjoy、relaxed、wonderful 提示问题： 1. Where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do? 4. What do you think of the trip? 要求：1.短文须包含所给提示，可适当发挥； 2.不少于80词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．读万卷书，不如行万里路。旅行是我们生活中的一部分，它能够净化我们的心灵，开阔我们的视野。请以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据思维导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你某次难忘的旅行经历。 注意： （1）短文须包括以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数70左右。 An Unforgettable Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你的国庆假期（National Day holiday）情况。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍你的假期经历。 提示： 1. 假期去了哪里； 2. 和谁一起去的； 3. 做了什么事； 4. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数 80-100； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．丰富多彩的暑假已经结束，假如你是李明，你的加拿大笔友Andrew想了解你的假期生活，请发一个电子邮件给他，描述一下你的假期是怎样度过的。内容包括： 1. 你假期去了哪里？ 2. 你做了什么？ 3. 你感觉怎样？ 注意： 1. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已经给出，不入总词数； 2. 注意使用正确的时态； 3. 文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。 Dear Andrew, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 7．请你根据下面的思维导图，以“A Summer Vacation Trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行。 要求： 1. 短文应包含以上要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语句通顺、连贯； 3. 词数80左右。 A Summer Vacation Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．旅行中值得我们关注的是途中的人和事，还有那些美好的经历和景色。要么读书，要么旅行，灵魂和身体必须有一个在路上。请你以“My trip to _________”为题，根据以下要点与要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的一次旅行经历。 要点：1. When and where did you go?     2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel? 要求：（1）涵盖以上提示内容，语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确。 （2）可适当发挥，但内容要合情合理。 （3）不得出现任何真实人名及其他相关信息。 （4）词数80-100。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．假如你是李云，你收到了英国笔友Alice的一封邮件，她十分好奇你的假期是怎样的。请你根据邮件内容，写一封电子邮件回复Alice，简单介绍你的假期。 Dear Li Yun, How is it going? I had a trip to Hangzhou last weekend. Now let me tell you something about it. The weather there was sunny and warm, so I went boating with my family and we took quite a few photos there. Of course, we ate traditional Chinese food. What about your vacation? Did you go anywhere special? What was the weather like there? And what did you do there? Can you tell me? I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Alice 要求： 1. 结合所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词。邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Alice, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Yun 10．在假期里，有些人喜欢外出旅游，有些人喜欢呆在家里。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想知道你更喜欢哪种度假方式。请你根据下面表格内容以及写作要求，并结合自身实际，从以下两种度假方式中任选其一，给他写一封邮件，表达你的看法并陈述理由。 Opinion Traveling Staying at home Reasons ●see new places ●try new food ●… ●relax and rest ●do some chores to make home clean ●… 写作要求： 1.邮件须包含所选度假方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右（格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Peter, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Happy Holiday 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：假期旅行 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．假如你是李华，今年暑假7月21号你和家人一起去了张家界旅游，不管是张家界的青山绿水，还是民族特色的美食或纪念品，都给你留下了深刻印象，请写一篇日记记录美好瞬间。 要点如下： 1. 张家界最有名的山是天门山(Tianmen Mountain)，我们登顶看到四周美景； 2. 这里的哈利路亚山(Hallelujah Mountains)曾是电影《阿凡达Avatar》的拍摄地； 3. 这里的特色美食有三下锅(Zhangjiajie Mixed Pot)。 要点： (1) 包含所有要点，可适当补充信息以使文章完整； (2) 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，格式规范； (3) 词数不少于80词。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 July 21st, Sunny Today I traveled to Zhangjiajie with my family. It was an unforgettable experience. First, we climbed Tianmen Mountain. The view from the top was breathtaking. Second, we visited Hallelujah Mountains, which were the filming site for Avatar. Third, we tasted the special food, Zhangjiajie Mixed Pot. It was really delicious. I felt completely relaxed and happy during the trip. We took many wonderful photos there. The green mountains and clear water left a deep impression on me. I hope to come here again soon. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：日记应用文，以一般过去时为主 明确要点：记录张家界旅行经历（天门山美景、《阿凡达》取景地、特色美食）、表达旅行感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数不少于80词，日记格式规范，包含所有要点，可适当补充细节 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：日记格式（日期 + 天气）+ 开篇点明旅行事件与整体感受 主体段：按顺序介绍天门山、哈利路亚山（《阿凡达》取景地）、特色美食三下锅 结尾段：总结旅行的整体感受与收获，表达对张家界的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅行事件与开篇 格式开头： July 21st, Sunny/日期+天气 开篇表达： Today I traveled to Zhangjiajie with my family/It was an unforgettable experience等 要点二：天门山（Tianmen Mountain） 活动描述： we climbed Tianmen Mountain/reached the top of Tianmen Mountain等 景色感受： The view from the top was breathtaking/we enjoyed the beautiful scenery around等 要点三：哈利路亚山（Hallelujah Mountains） 背景介绍： were the filming site for Avatar/famous as the real-life inspiration for Avatar等 补充感受： It was amazing to see the place from the movie in person/The mountains looked just like in the film等 要点四：特色美食三下锅（Zhangjiajie Mixed Pot） 活动描述： we tasted the special food, Zhangjiajie Mixed Pot/tried the local dish Zhangjiajie Mixed Pot等 味道感受： It was really delicious/the taste was special and unforgettable等 要点五：旅行整体感受 细节补充： took many wonderful photos there/felt completely relaxed and happy等 总结表达： The green mountains and clear water left a deep impression on me/I hope to come here again soon等 2．假如你叫李明，今年五一假期你跟父母去了青岛旅行，你打算告诉你加拿大笔友Paul关于你的旅行经历。用英语给Paul 写一封80词左右的信。 1.我和我的父母去青岛度假。 2.我们乘飞机去。 3.我们也去购物并且吃美味的海鲜。 4.我们在那拍了很多照片。 5.我对这次旅行真的很兴奋。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear Paul, I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share my exciting trip to Qingdao during the May Day holiday. I went there with my parents by plane. Qingdao, which is famous for its beaches, was really beautiful. We not only went shopping but also enjoyed delicious seafood. Moreover, we took many photos to capture the happy moments. I was so excited about this trip that I can’t wait to tell you more. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Li Ming 【详解】写作步骤    【第一步：审题立意】    确定文体：应用文（书信），属于记叙旅行经历类短文，时态以一般过去时为主 明确要点：点明写信意图、交代旅行地点与出行方式、描述旅行活动、抒发旅行感受、期待回信 确定人称：第一人称（I/We） 注意事项：严格遵循书信格式，要点齐全，语句通顺，语法准确    【第二步：构思布局 】   三段式结构： 开头段：开篇问候并点明写信意图 主体段：详细介绍旅行相关信息 结尾段：抒发心情并使用书信结束语 【第三步：要点展开】   要点一：开篇问候与写信意图 开篇问候：I hope you’re doing well./How is everything going?/How are you recently? 写信意图：share my exciting trip to Qingdao/tell you about my wonderful trip to Qingdao/share with you my unforgettable trip to Qingdao 要点二：出行相关信息 出行信息：went to Qingdao with parents by plane/took a plane to Qingdao/flew to Qingdao/took a flight 城市特色：is famous for its beaches/is well‑known for its coastal scenery    要点三：旅行具体活动 活动1：went shopping/did some sightseeing/walked around local streets/looked around local shops 活动2：enjoyed delicious seafood /tasted fresh seafood/tried local special dishes 活动3：took many photos to capture happy moments/took photos to record wonderful memories/recorded sweet memories 要点四：旅行感受与书信结尾    旅行感受：was so excited about this trip/had a great time/felt thrilled about the journey 结尾句式：Looking forward to your reply./I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. 3．在这个充满探索与发现的年纪，每一次旅行都是成长的契机。旅行不仅让人身心得到放松，还能让人与 亲友共享欢聚的美好，更是游览祖国大好河山的机会。许多同学曾在假期外出游玩、拓宽视野，留下了 许多美好的回忆。学校公众号正在征集以“我的旅行记忆”为主题的文章，请描述你的一次旅行经历。 参考词：visit、swim、eat、go shopping、enjoy、relaxed、wonderful 提示问题： 1. Where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do? 4. What do you think of the trip? 要求：1.短文须包含所给提示，可适当发挥； 2.不少于80词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： My Travel Memory Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. We arrived there on a sunny morning. The beach was so beautiful with the blue sea and the white sand. First, I swam in the sea. The water was warm and comfortable. Then, we ate lots of delicious seafood, like shrimps and crabs. In the afternoon, we went shopping in the local markets. I bought some pretty shells as souvenirs. We all felt relaxed during the trip. It was a wonderful experience. I enjoyed the beautiful scenery and tasty food and also spent a happy time with my parents. I hope to go there again someday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了一次旅行经历； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括旅行的地点、同行者、所做的事情以及对旅行的评价，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明“Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents.”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“到达时间、景色、活动、购物”几个方面重点介绍在三亚的旅行具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望再次去那里”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of 许多 ②as souvenirs 作为纪念品 ③spend a happy time 度过一段快乐的时光 [高分句型] ①The beach was so beautiful with the blue sea and the white sand.（“so...with...”句型，描述景色之美） ②I enjoyed the beautiful scenery and tasty food and also spent a happy time with my parents.（并列句，表达了对旅行的喜爱和与父母共度的快乐时光） 4．读万卷书，不如行万里路。旅行是我们生活中的一部分，它能够净化我们的心灵，开阔我们的视野。请以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据思维导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你某次难忘的旅行经历。 注意： （1）短文须包括以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数70左右。 An Unforgettable Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Trip    Last summer, I went to a beautiful mountain with my family. We got there by bus, and it took us about two hours.     During the trip, we climbed the mountain, picked fresh flowers, and took many nice photos. We also had a picnic at the top, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful views.     I think this trip was really wonderful. It made me feel relaxed and close to nature. I will never forget this happy experience. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般过去时为主   要点：旅行经历（时间、地点、同行者、交通方式），旅行中的活动，旅行的感受   确定人称：第一人称(I/my/family)  注意事项：语言简洁明了，贴合记叙文叙事逻辑，突出“难忘”的核心   [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：总起句，交代旅行的时间、地点、同行者及交通方式   主体段：详细描述旅行过程中的具体活动，体现旅行的乐趣   结尾段：总结旅行的感受，点题“难忘”，升华对旅行意义的理解   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅行基本信息   时间选择：last summer/last weekend/last holiday等   地点选择：a beautiful mountain/a beach/a small village/a scenic spot等   同行者：with my family/with my friends/with my parents等   交通方式：by bus/by car/by train/on foot等   时间描述：it took us about two hours/it took me half an hour等   要点二：旅行中的活动   活动选择：climbed the mountain/picked fresh flowers/took many nice photos/had a picnic等   活动细节：at the top of the mountain/enjoying the fresh air/admiring the beautiful views等   拓展活动：went hiking/played games/took a walk/tasted local food等   要点三：旅行的感受   感受描述：wonderful/relaxed/happy/enjoyable等   具体感受：feel relaxed/close to nature/have a good time/cherish the experience等   点题表达：I will never forget this happy experience/I will remember this trip forever等 5．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你的国庆假期（National Day holiday）情况。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍你的假期经历。 提示： 1. 假期去了哪里； 2. 和谁一起去的； 3. 做了什么事； 4. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数 80-100； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文： Dear Peter,   I’m glad to share my National Day holiday with you. I went to the mountains with my family. We drove there early in the morning. During the trip, we climbed the mountain, enjoyed the beautiful views and took many photos. We also had a picnic on the grass. The air was fresh and the weather was sunny.   I felt very happy and relaxed. It was wonderful to spend time with my family in nature. How about your holiday? I’d love to hear about it.   Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要使用一般过去时； ③提示：需围绕假期地点、同伴、活动、感受四个要点展开，语言自然连贯，体现假期生活的愉快。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候并表达乐意分享假期经历； 第二步，说明假期去处及同行人员； 第三步，详细描述在山区进行的活动（爬山、赏景、拍照、野餐）； 第四步，补充环境及天气细节； 第五步，表达个人感受并询问对方假期情况； 第六步，书信结尾祝福并署名。 [亮点词汇] ①National Day holiday国庆假期 ②beautiful views美丽的景色 ③had a picnic野餐 ④spend time with family与家人共度时光 [高分句型] ①During the trip, we climbed the mountain, enjoyed the beautiful views and took many photos. (并列谓语描述活动) ②It was wonderful to spend time with my family in nature. (it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语) 6．丰富多彩的暑假已经结束，假如你是李明，你的加拿大笔友Andrew想了解你的假期生活，请发一个电子邮件给他，描述一下你的假期是怎样度过的。内容包括： 1. 你假期去了哪里？ 2. 你做了什么？ 3. 你感觉怎样？ 注意： 1. 不少于80词，开头和结尾已经给出，不入总词数； 2. 注意使用正确的时态； 3. 文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。 Dear Andrew, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文： Dear Andrew, I am glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell you something about my summer vacation. This summer, I had an unforgettable trip to Beijing. We visited the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, and the Summer Palace. The scenery was breathtaking, and I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. I think this summer was fantastic because I not only had fun but also gained knowledge. I am looking forward to hearing about your holiday experiences. Please write back soon! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：以一般过去时为主（描述已发生的假期活动），辅以一般现在时（表达当前感受或期望）； ③提示：需包含“去了哪里”“做了什么”“感觉如何”三点。 【写作步骤】 第一步：点明写作目的，引出要介绍自己的暑假情况； 第二步：具体描述暑假做了什么以及自己的感受； 第三步：结尾表达自己的期待。 【亮点词汇】 ①unforgettable难忘的 ②summer vacation暑假 ③had fun玩得很开心 【高分句型】 ①The scenery was breathtaking, and I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture.（and并列句） ②I think this summer was fantastic because I not only had fun but also gained knowledge.（原因状语从句） 7．请你根据下面的思维导图，以“A Summer Vacation Trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行。 要求： 1. 短文应包含以上要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语句通顺、连贯； 3. 词数80左右。 A Summer Vacation Trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Summer Vacation Trip My family and I went to Beihai, Guangxi on vacation this summer. We went there by bus. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went to the beach. It was clean although there were many people there. We played in the water. It was really fun. On the second day, we went to an old street there. There were many restaurants and interesting stores. We ate some seafood. It was really delicious! In short, the trip was so wonderful that I’ll never forget it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，介绍暑假旅行是和谁去、去哪里、什么时候去，以及交通方式； 第二步，讲述旅行中的活动； 第三步，分享感受。 [亮点词汇] ① on vacation 度假 ② go to the beach 去海滩 ③ in short 总之 [高分句型] ① It was clean although there were many people there. (although引导让步状语从句) ② In short, the trip was so wonderful that I’ll never forget it. (“so...that...”引导结果状语从句) 8．旅行中值得我们关注的是途中的人和事，还有那些美好的经历和景色。要么读书，要么旅行，灵魂和身体必须有一个在路上。请你以“My trip to _________”为题，根据以下要点与要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的一次旅行经历。 要点：1. When and where did you go?     2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel? 要求：（1）涵盖以上提示内容，语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确。 （2）可适当发挥，但内容要合情合理。 （3）不得出现任何真实人名及其他相关信息。 （4）词数80-100。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My trip to Chengdu Last summer, I went to Chengdu with my family. We visited the Chengdu Research Base of Giant Panda Breeding. There, we saw many cute pandas eating bamboo and playing around. We also went to Jinli Ancient Street, where we tried delicious local food like spicy hotpot and mapo tofu. Besides, we watched a wonderful Sichuan opera show with face-changing performances. I felt really happy and excited during the trip. The pandas were so adorable, and the food was amazing. I learned a lot about Sichuan culture and made some great memories. It was a trip full of fun and surprises. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：介绍一次成都旅行经历，涵盖时间地点、活动及感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明旅行时间和地点。 第二步，详细描述旅行中的活动，包括参观熊猫基地、逛古街、品尝美食、观看川剧等。 第三步，表达旅行中的感受及收获。 [亮点词汇] ①adorable可爱的 ②delicious美味的 ③amazing令人惊叹的 ④memories回忆 [高分句型] ①We also went to Jinli Ancient Street, where we tried delicious local food like spicy hotpot and mapo tofu.（运用“where”引导的定语从句，丰富句子结构，清晰说明在古街的活动） ②I learned a lot about Sichuan culture and made some great memories.（用“and”连接并列动作，简洁呈现旅行收获） ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．假如你是李云，你收到了英国笔友Alice的一封邮件，她十分好奇你的假期是怎样的。请你根据邮件内容，写一封电子邮件回复Alice，简单介绍你的假期。 Dear Li Yun, How is it going? I had a trip to Hangzhou last weekend. Now let me tell you something about it. The weather there was sunny and warm, so I went boating with my family and we took quite a few photos there. Of course, we ate traditional Chinese food. What about your vacation? Did you go anywhere special? What was the weather like there? And what did you do there? Can you tell me? I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Alice 要求： 1. 结合所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词。邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Alice, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Yun 【答案】 例文 Dear Alice,     I’m glad to hear about your wonderful trip to Hangzhou. Let me tell you about my vacation. I went to Sanya with my parents. The weather was sunny and hot, so we went to the beach every day. We swam in the blue sea and built sand castles. I also tried some traditional local food like seafood noodles. It was delicious and special! I took many photos and will share them with you next time.     What about your next plan? Please write back soon! Yours, Li Yun 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：需回应笔友关于假期的询问，包含地点、天气、活动、饮食等要点，适当添加细节增强画面感。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表达对笔友邮件的回应，明确写作意图是介绍自己的假期； 第二步，详细介绍假期的地点、天气、日常活动、饮食及其他细节； 第三步，以询问笔友下一步计划结束，期待回复。 [亮点词汇] ①traditional local food传统当地美食 ②share…with…和……分享…… [高分句型] The weather was sunny and hot, so we went to the beach every day. (so引导结果状语从句) 10．在假期里，有些人喜欢外出旅游，有些人喜欢呆在家里。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想知道你更喜欢哪种度假方式。请你根据下面表格内容以及写作要求，并结合自身实际，从以下两种度假方式中任选其一，给他写一封邮件，表达你的看法并陈述理由。 Opinion Traveling Staying at home Reasons ●see new places ●try new food ●… ●relax and rest ●do some chores to make home clean ●… 写作要求： 1.邮件须包含所选度假方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右（格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Peter, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Peter, I prefer traveling during holidays. Exploring new places is always exciting. Last summer, I went to Xi’an with my family. We explored the Terracotta Warriors, which were an astonishing sight. We also tasted local food like Yangrou Paomo, and it was really mouth-watering. Another highlight was the Xi’an City Wall, where we marveled at its grandeur and felt the historical significance. Traveling helps me relax and learn about different cultures. What about you? Do you like traveling too? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引出“我”喜欢的度假方式； 第二步，具体介绍最近一次的旅行内容； 第三步，书写结语。表达对旅行的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①mouth-watering令人馋涎欲滴的 ②marvel at对……惊奇 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] Another highlight was the Xi’an City Wall, where we marveled at its grandeur and felt the historical significance. (where引导的定语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $