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读后续写“磨”语言---“怎么‘说’”
I. 修饰 “说”
①“What’s the plan?”Rex asked, a touch of doubt in his voice.
②“What’s the plan?”Rex asked, with/in a tone of doubt.
③“Saying your goodbyes?” Rex teased, a grin spreading across his lips.
④“You can do it!” he whispered again, voice steady and reassuring.
⑤ “Come on, girl! Go get your freedom!” Jacob urged, ignoring Rex’s irony, eyes sparkling with hope.
⑥“Who’d be writing to you?” asked Uncle Vernon, shaking the letter open with one hand and glancing at it.
⑦"No post on Sundays,” he reminded them cheerfully.
⑧ “Alright, alright, let’s do this,” Rex urged impatiently. “It’s freezing.”
⑨“Vernon,” Peter was saying in a quivering voice, “look at the address."
⑩ “Who on earth wants to talk to you this badly?” Dudley asked Harry in amazement.
归纳:said + 怎么说(语气、音调、情感、伴随动作)
说+怎么说(语气、音调、情感、伴随的动作)
①②③④直接引语+sb +said,+ 独立主格/with复合结构
⑤⑥直接引语+sb +said,+ 非谓语动词作伴随状语
⑦⑧直接引语+sb +said+副词
⑨⑩直接引语+sb +said +介词短语
补充:said 可以换成“具体说”
II. 省略 “说”
强调说话内容:
All the way, Rex made one comment after another. Always the same thing. “That silly bird can’t fly. She’s lucky to be alive.” But Jacob remained firm in his belief……
“Let's do this again together!” To their relief, with the guidance of father, they successfully made the breakfast.
内心活动:“You did it.” an inner voice told me.
III. 替换“说”(用具体动作词)
“I’ll help her,” Jacob replied. “I have been training her for two weeks.”
“Come on, girl! Out you go,” Jacob encouraged her.
“Blanche isn’t a pigeon,” Jacob shouted.
Rex laughed, “Oh yeah, that’s right….”
词汇积累-具体“说”:
说:said; uttered(did not utter a word/without uttering a word)
高兴地说:smiled, screamed, cheered, laughed
悲伤地说:cried; sobbed
叹息说:sighed
大声说:yell; scream;cried;exclaim;shout
威胁说:threatened
提到说:mentioned
回答说:replied;responded
恳请/祈求到:pleaded; begged
承诺说:promise
承认/赞同说:admit;agree
嘟囔说:mumbled
小声说:whispered; murmured:
争辩/说理:argued;quarrel
解释说:explained
开玩笑地说:teased;joked
继续说:continued;added
强调说:emphasized
回忆说:remembered;recalled
最后说/总结说:concluded
羡慕地说:admired;envied
安慰地说:comforted
坚定地说:declared
坚持说:insisted
命令说:commanded
催促说:urged
警告说:warned
责备说:scolded
要求说:demanded
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