Unit 1 课时4 Writing（分层作业）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

**基本信息** 初中英语Unit 1 Writing分层练习，通过A/B/C组及拓展四级递进，构建"词汇-句型-语篇-中考"巩固路径，兼顾语言能力夯实与思维品质提升。 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |A组巩固过关|核心词汇、基础句型、短语积累|以填空形式强化语言要素，夯实写作基础| |B组能力进阶|功能句式（开头/中间/结尾）|分类呈现写作框架，搭建从语言点到语篇的过渡桥梁| |C组思维拔高|话题分析、结构指导、实战写作|结合毕加索等真实人物情境，训练语篇组织与逻辑表达能力| |拓展链接中考|中考题型适配写作任务|以黄旭华等伟人素材设计真题式写作，对接升学需求|

Unit 1 Great people Section 3 Writing分层练习 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.grow up in a family that… 2.have a talent for 3.from an early age /from a young age 4.show a strong interest in… 5.be fond of doing sth 6.in addition to 7.spend a lot of time doing… 8.in poor conditions 9.face numerous difficulties 10.never lose heart 11.a significant milestone 12.name…after 13.benefit the whole world 14.win great honor and worldwide recognition 15.build one’s knowledge 16.selfless devotion 17.strong will 18.It is fitting that… 19.become a role model 20.make great contributions to… 【句式积累】 一、开头通用句式： 1.She is a respected and great Chinese scientist. 2.He grew up in a family that valued knowledge and medical research. 3.From an early age, she had a talent for scientific study. 4.Inspired by great scientists, she was fond of exploring medical and scientific secrets. 二、中间通用句式: 聚焦人物最突出的社会贡献, 描写人物的付出与坚持 1.The impact of her contributions can still be seen in global medical treatment. 2.His work has helped countless people and benefited the whole world. 3.Thanks to his hard work, he won great honor and worldwide recognition. 4.A significant milestone in her life was when she made great scientific discoveries. 5.In addition to basic study and daily work, she spent a lot of time doing research with helping others in mind. 6.She worked in tough conditions and faced numerous failures, but never lost heart. 三、结尾通用句式:总结人物的品质，社会价值与奉献精神。 1.People deeply admire her for her great contributions to society and human health. 2.Her selfless devotion makes her a role model for all teenagers. It is fitting that she gains great success and wide respect from the world. 3.Her perseverance, carefulness and dedication lead to her great achievements. 4.We should learn from her strong will and dedication.e worked in tough conditions and faced numerous failures, but never lost heart. 【实战演练一】 【范文】 I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him. Pablo Picasso was one of the world-famous painters and sculptors. He was born in Spain on October 25th, 1881. From a young age, he showed a strong interest in painting. His father was good at drawing, and with his patient help, Picasso quickly showed amazing painting talent. A significant milestone in his life was when he turned into a professional painter at the age of thirteen. From then on, he kept exploring different art styles day after day. Through his lifelong hard work, he managed to produce lots of fantastic artworks during his whole life. The impact of his contributions can still be seen in global modern art. As for me, I admire his love for art and lasting perseverance. His experience tells us interest and efforts can help us achieve our dreams. 【实战演练二】 【范文一】 Great people I Admire The great mind I admire most is Albert Einstein, one of the greatest scientists in history. His contributions to physics and his unique personality have left a deep impression on me. Einstein was born in 1879 in Germany. He had a strong passion for science from an early age. Though he faced difficulties in his early studies, he never gave up his pursuit of knowledge. His most famous achievement is the theory of relativity, which changed the way we understand the universe. He also had a great sense of humour. What impresses me most is his attitude towards learning—he once said, “Imagination is more important than knowledge.” Einstein’s life teaches me that curiosity and perseverance are the keys to success. His ability to think differently and challenge traditional ideas inspires me to keep exploring in my studies. He is truly a great mind worth admiring forever. 【范文二】 I admire Albert Einstein, one of the world’s greatest scientists. He grew up in a family that valued knowledge. From a young age, he showed a strong interest in physics. Inspired by natural wonders, he was fond of thinking over mysteries of space and time. A significant milestone in his life was when he created the world-famous Theory of Relativity. In addition to busy daily research, he spent a lot of time doing experiments with uncovering the secrets of the universe in mind. He met lots of difficulties and repeated failures, but he never lost heart. Through his hard work, he managed to make breakthroughs that shook the whole science field. His findings helped people understand nature in brand-new ways. The impact of his contributions can still be seen in modern physics and space research. It is fitting that he earns worldwide respect. His perseverance teaches me to stick to my dreams and keep exploring bravely. 【实战演练三】 【答案】 Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes. He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes. To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old. His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country. We were all inspired by his heroic deeds $Unit 1 Great people Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 词汇 background n.背景 significant adj.有重大 意义的；显著的 milestone n.重要事件; 里程碑 manage v.完成（困难的事）impact n.巨大影响； 强大作用 truth n.真理 be fond of 喜爱 句型 1.What personal qualities helped him become a great person. 哪些个人品质促成他成为伟人。 2. From a young age, she showed a strong interest in… 年少时，她就对……产生了浓厚的兴趣。 3. A significant milestone in his life was when ... 他人生中一个重要的里程碑是在…… 的时候。 4. Through his hard work, she managed to ... 凭借不懈努力，他成功做到了……。 5. The impact of her contributions can still be seen in… 她所做贡献带来的影响至今仍体现在…… 领域。 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.________________________在…… 家庭长大 2. ________________________在某方面有天赋 3. ________________________从小 4. ______________________对……产生浓厚兴趣 5. ________________________热衷于做某事 6. ________________________除…… 以外 7. ________________________花大量时间做 8. ________________________在艰苦条件下 9. ________________________面对许多挫折 10. ________________________从不灰心 11. ________________________重大的里程碑 12. ________________________以…… 命名 13. ________________________造福全世界 14. _____________________获得殊荣与世界认可 15. ________________________积累知识 16. ________________________无私奉献 17. ________________________顽强的意志 18. ________________________… 实至名归 19. ________________________成为榜样 20. ____________________为…… 做出巨大贡献 【句式积累】 一、开头通用句式： 1.她是一位受人尊敬、伟大的中国科学家。 2. 他成长在一个重视知识与医学研究的家庭。 3. 年少时，她在科学研究方面很有天赋。 4. 受伟大科学家的启发，她热衷于探索医学与科学的奥秘。 二、中间通用句式: 聚焦人物最突出的社会贡献, 描写人物的付出与坚持 1.她的贡献带来的影响如今仍体现在全球医疗领域。 2.他的研究帮助了无数人，造福了全世界。 3.由于他的辛勤付出，他/她收获了崇高的荣誉和世界的认可。 4. 她人生中一个重要的里程碑就是取得了重大的科学发现。 5. 除了基础学习和日常工作外，她心系助人，花费大量时间做研究。 6. 她在艰苦的环境中工作，遭遇过无数失败，但从未灰心放弃。 三、结尾通用句式:总结人物的品质，社会价值与奉献精神。 1.人们由衷敬佩她，因为她为社会与人类健康做出了巨大贡献。 2.她无私的奉献让她成为所有青少年的榜样。 3.她收获巨大成就、赢得全世界广泛尊敬实至名归。 4.坚持不懈、严谨细致与专注奉献造就了她不凡的成就。 5.我们应当学习她顽强的意志与奉献精神。 话题分析 写一篇关于伟大人物的文章 本单元以“Great People”为核心话题，围绕“伟大人物的生平、成就、精神品质及影响”展开，核心聚焦“用英语介绍伟大人物、描述其关键经历、阐述其精神价值” 。写作要求结合真实事实依据，遵循清晰严谨的写作逻辑，熟练运用描写人物、写出结构完整、内容真实、主旨积极的记叙文，适用于屠呦呦、王祯仪等各类杰出伟人的写作场景。 1.结构完整：严格遵循“人物介绍—主要成就—奋斗过程—受人敬佩原因—人物品质”的写作顺序。 2.事实准确，贴合人物。 3.内容贴合主题，突出人物精神：重点突出伟人的奋斗精神、贡献，侧重写努力、坚持、坚守、奉献等核心内容，紧扣单元人物写作主题。 介绍伟大人物的基本结构： 开头：简单介绍人物身份、出生、职业、研究领域，快速引出人物。 中间：中间第一段：列举人物最核心、最具影响力的成果、贡献或荣誉。 中间第二段：讲述人物的奋斗过程、付出的努力，成功来之不易 结尾：总结人物的社会价值、奉献意义，说明受人尊敬的核心原因。 提炼人物优秀品质，总结成功根源，完成全文升华。 【实战演练一】 英语课上，老师让同学们通过查询百科全书写一篇英语短文介绍一位名人。假如你对巴勃罗·毕加索(Pablo Picasso)很感兴趣，下面表格中是你在百科全书上找到的有关他的信息。请你根据表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍巴勃罗·毕加索。 提示内容： 姓名 巴勃罗·毕加索 职业 画家、雕塑家 生平 1.1881年10月25日出生在西班牙； 2.很小的时候就对绘画感兴趣； 3.在父亲的帮助下，他表现出很好的绘画天赋； 4.13岁时成为一名画家； 5.一生创作了很多绝妙的艺术作品。 你的看法 …… 要求： 1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可以适当发挥： 2.条理清晰，语意连贯，语法正确； 3.词数：80左右(短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数) 。 提示词语： 雕塑家 sculptor，天赋 talent I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练二】 介绍一位你敬佩的伟人。包括其生平、主要成就、性格特点及你从他身上获得的启发，词数100-120左右，题目为“A Great person I Admire”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练三】 “中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。 为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “Huang  Xuhua — the  Father  of China’s Nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点： 1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇； 2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造； 3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止； 4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。 写作要求： 1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥； 3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇： 核潜艇 nuke;  国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal one’s identity Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 1 Great people Section 3 Writing分层练习 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 拓展 链接中考 词汇 background n.背景 significant adj.有重大 意义的；显著的 milestone n.重要事件; 里程碑 manage v.完成（困难的事）impact n.巨大影响； 强大作用 truth n.真理 be fond of 喜爱 句型 1.What personal qualities helped him become a great person. 哪些个人品质促成他成为伟人。 2. From a young age, she showed a strong interest in… 年少时，她就对……产生了浓厚的兴趣。 3. A significant milestone in his life was when ... 他人生中一个重要的里程碑是在…… 的时候。 4. Through his hard work, she managed to ... 凭借不懈努力，他成功做到了……。 5. The impact of her contributions can still be seen in… 她所做贡献带来的影响至今仍体现在…… 领域。 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.________________________在…… 家庭长大 2. ________________________在某方面有天赋 3. ________________________从小 4. ______________________对……产生浓厚兴趣 5. ________________________热衷于做某事 6. ________________________除…… 以外 7. ________________________花大量时间做 8. ________________________在艰苦条件下 9. ________________________面对许多挫折 10. ________________________从不灰心 11. ________________________重大的里程碑 12. ________________________以…… 命名 13. ________________________造福全世界 14. _____________________获得殊荣与世界认可 15. ________________________积累知识 16. ________________________无私奉献 17. ________________________顽强的意志 18. ________________________… 实至名归 19. ________________________成为榜样 20. ____________________为…… 做出巨大贡献 【答案】1.grow up in a family that… 2.have a talent for 3.from an early age /from a young age 4.show a strong interest in… 5.be fond of doing sth 6.in addition to 7.spend a lot of time doing… 8.in poor conditions 9.face numerous difficulties 10.never lose heart 11.a significant milestone 12.name…after 13.benefit the whole world 14.win great honor and worldwide recognition 15.build one’s knowledge 16.selfless devotion 17.strong will 18.It is fitting that… 19.become a role model 20.make great contributions to… 【句式积累】 一、开头通用句式： 1.她是一位受人尊敬、伟大的中国科学家。 She is a respected and great Chinese scientist. 2. 他成长在一个重视知识与医学研究的家庭。 He grew up in a family that valued knowledge and medical research. 3. 年少时，她在科学研究方面很有天赋。 From an early age, she had a talent for scientific study. 4. 受伟大科学家的启发，她热衷于探索医学与科学的奥秘。 Inspired by great scientists, she was fond of exploring medical and scientific secrets. 二、中间通用句式: 聚焦人物最突出的社会贡献, 描写人物的付出与坚持 1.她的贡献带来的影响如今仍体现在全球医疗领域。 The impact of her contributions can still be seen in global medical treatment. 2.他的研究帮助了无数人，造福了全世界。 His work has helped countless people and benefited the whole world. 3.由于他的辛勤付出，他/她收获了崇高的荣誉和世界的认可。 Thanks to his hard work, he won great honor and worldwide recognition. 4. 她人生中一个重要的里程碑就是取得了重大的科学发现。 A significant milestone in her life was when she made great scientific discoveries. 5. 除了基础学习和日常工作外，她心系助人，花费大量时间做研究。 In addition to basic study and daily work, she spent a lot of time doing research with helping others in mind. 6. 她在艰苦的环境中工作，遭遇过无数失败，但从未灰心放弃。 She worked in tough conditions and faced numerous failures, but never lost heart. 三、结尾通用句式:总结人物的品质，社会价值与奉献精神。 1.人们由衷敬佩她，因为她为社会与人类健康做出了巨大贡献。 People deeply admire her for her great contributions to society and human health. 2.她无私的奉献让她成为所有青少年的榜样。 Her selfless devotion makes her a role model for all teenagers. 3.她收获巨大成就、赢得全世界广泛尊敬实至名归。 It is fitting that she gains great success and wide respect from the world. 4.坚持不懈、严谨细致与专注奉献造就了她不凡的成就。 Her perseverance, carefulness and dedication lead to her great achievements. 5.我们应当学习她顽强的意志与奉献精神。 We should learn from her strong will and dedication.e worked in tough conditions and faced numerous failures, but never lost heart. 话题分析 写一篇关于伟大人物的文章 本单元以“Great People”为核心话题，围绕“伟大人物的生平、成就、精神品质及影响”展开，核心聚焦“用英语介绍伟大人物、描述其关键经历、阐述其精神价值” 。写作要求结合真实事实依据，遵循清晰严谨的写作逻辑，熟练运用描写人物、写出结构完整、内容真实、主旨积极的记叙文，适用于屠呦呦、王祯仪等各类杰出伟人的写作场景。 1.结构完整：严格遵循“人物介绍—主要成就—奋斗过程—受人敬佩原因—人物品质”的写作顺序。 2.事实准确，贴合人物。 3.内容贴合主题，突出人物精神：重点突出伟人的奋斗精神、贡献，侧重写努力、坚持、坚守、奉献等核心内容，紧扣单元人物写作主题。 介绍伟大人物的基本结构： 开头：简单介绍人物身份、出生、职业、研究领域，快速引出人物。 中间：中间第一段：列举人物最核心、最具影响力的成果、贡献或荣誉。 中间第二段：讲述人物的奋斗过程、付出的努力，成功来之不易 结尾：总结人物的社会价值、奉献意义，说明受人尊敬的核心原因。 提炼人物优秀品质，总结成功根源，完成全文升华。 【实战演练一】 英语课上，老师让同学们通过查询百科全书写一篇英语短文介绍一位名人。假如你对巴勃罗·毕加索(Pablo Picasso)很感兴趣，下面表格中是你在百科全书上找到的有关他的信息。请你根据表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍巴勃罗·毕加索。 提示内容： 姓名 巴勃罗·毕加索 职业 画家、雕塑家 生平 1.1881年10月25日出生在西班牙； 2.很小的时候就对绘画感兴趣； 3.在父亲的帮助下，他表现出很好的绘画天赋； 4.13岁时成为一名画家； 5.一生创作了很多绝妙的艺术作品。 你的看法 …… 要求： 1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可以适当发挥： 2.条理清晰，语意连贯，语法正确； 3.词数：80左右(短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数) 。 提示词语： 雕塑家 sculptor，天赋 talent I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him. Pablo Picasso was one of the world-famous painters and sculptors. He was born in Spain on October 25th, 1881. From a young age, he showed a strong interest in painting. His father was good at drawing, and with his patient help, Picasso quickly showed amazing painting talent. A significant milestone in his life was when he turned into a professional painter at the age of thirteen. From then on, he kept exploring different art styles day after day. Through his lifelong hard work, he managed to produce lots of fantastic artworks during his whole life. The impact of his contributions can still be seen in global modern art. As for me, I admire his love for art and lasting perseverance. His experience tells us interest and efforts can help us achieve our dreams. 【实战演练二】 介绍一位你敬佩的伟人。包括其生平、主要成就、性格特点及你从他身上获得的启发，词数100-120左右，题目为“A Great person I Admire”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文一】 Great people I Admire The great mind I admire most is Albert Einstein, one of the greatest scientists in history. His contributions to physics and his unique personality have left a deep impression on me. Einstein was born in 1879 in Germany. He had a strong passion for science from an early age. Though he faced difficulties in his early studies, he never gave up his pursuit of knowledge. His most famous achievement is the theory of relativity, which changed the way we understand the universe. He also had a great sense of humour. What impresses me most is his attitude towards learning—he once said, “Imagination is more important than knowledge.” Einstein’s life teaches me that curiosity and perseverance are the keys to success. His ability to think differently and challenge traditional ideas inspires me to keep exploring in my studies. He is truly a great mind worth admiring forever. 【范文二】 I admire Albert Einstein, one of the world’s greatest scientists. He grew up in a family that valued knowledge. From a young age, he showed a strong interest in physics. Inspired by natural wonders, he was fond of thinking over mysteries of space and time. A significant milestone in his life was when he created the world-famous Theory of Relativity. In addition to busy daily research, he spent a lot of time doing experiments with uncovering the secrets of the universe in mind. He met lots of difficulties and repeated failures, but he never lost heart. Through his hard work, he managed to make breakthroughs that shook the whole science field. His findings helped people understand nature in brand-new ways. The impact of his contributions can still be seen in modern physics and space research. It is fitting that he earns worldwide respect. His perseverance teaches me to stick to my dreams and keep exploring bravely. 【实战演练三】 “中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。 为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “Huang  Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes” 为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点： 1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇； 2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造； 3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止； 4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。 写作要求： 1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥； 3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇： 核潜艇 nuke;  国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal one’s identity Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes. He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes. To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old. His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country. We were all inspired by his heroic deeds $