内容正文:
单元作文指导
【写作练笔】
1. 英语课上,老师就“做家务”的话题将全班同学分组进行讨论。请根据表格提示用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你们组成员做家务的情况及对做家务的看法,然后向全班同学汇报。70词左右。
做家务的情况
看法
王丽——帮妈妈做饭
……
刘莹——打扫房间
马洁——洗衣服
我——……
Hello, everyone. Now let me tell you something about our group. We four all do housework. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
单元作文指导
【写作练笔】
【1题答案】
【答案】
Hello, everyone. Now let me tell you something about our group. We four all do housework. Wang Li helps her mother cook meals. Liu Ying cleans her room. Ma Jie washes clothes. I often water flowers. We think doing housework is useful. It can teach us life skills and make us more independent. Also, it helps us understand our parents’ hard work. We feel happy to share housework at home.
【解析】
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:依次介绍组内4位成员(王丽、刘莹、马洁、自己)各自承担的家务、阐述全组对于做家务的共同看法与意义
确定人称:第一人称(we/I)、第三人称(Wang Li/Liu Ying/Ma Jie)
注意事项:词数70词左右,严格贴合表格要点,语句简洁通顺,衔接自然
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:题干给定开头句,总体引入,点明小组全员都会做家务
主体段:依次介绍每位组员日常做的具体家务
结尾段:阐述全组对于做家务的观点、好处与内心感受,搭配题干固定结尾句收尾
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:组员家务情况
王丽:Wang Li helps her mother cook meals.
刘莹:Liu Ying cleans her room.
马洁:Ma Jie washes clothes.
自己:I often water flowers.
要点二:对做家务的看法
整体评价:We think doing housework is useful.
好处1:It can teach us life skills and make us more independent.
好处2:Also, it helps us understand our parents’ hard work.
情感总结:We feel happy to share housework at home.
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