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单元作文指导
【写作练笔】
1. 假如你是王涛,暑假中和父母一起去了北京,在那里游览了很多地方。请以“The trip to Beijing”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,记叙你的这次旅行。
The trip to Beijing
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单元作文指导
【写作练笔】
【1题答案】
【答案】 I’m Wang Tao. During the summer vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. It’s a great city with a long history.We watched the flag-raising ceremony early in the morning. It was really exciting. Then we visited many famous places like the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. We took a lot of beautiful photos there.We enjoyed the trip very much. I hope I can go to Beijing again someday.
【解析】
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙性记叙文,以一般过去时为主
明确要点:身份(王涛)与出行背景(暑假和父母去北京)、具体行程(升旗、逛长城/颐和园、拍照)、旅行感受与期待
确定人称:第一人称(I/we)
注意事项:词数80词左右,贴合游记叙事逻辑
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明身份、出行时间、人物及目的地,简要概括北京特点
主体段:详述核心行程(升旗、游览知名景点、拍照),体现旅行亮点
结尾段:表达旅行感受,提出再次前往的期待
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:出行核心信息
身份:I’m Wang Tao.
出行背景:During the summer vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents.
北京特点:It’s a great city with a long history.
要点二:具体行程
行程1:观看升旗仪式:We watched the flag-raising ceremony early in the morning. It was really exciting.
行程2:游览知名景点:Then we visited many famous places like the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.
行程3:旅行活动:We took a lot of beautiful photos there.
要点三:旅行感受与期待
当下感受:We enjoyed the trip very much.
未来期待:I hope I can go to Beijing again someday.
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