2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---奶奶与星空许愿 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题的核心考点，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、情节线等）、情节构造及语言表达，通过问题链（如细节问答）和任务驱动（如续写框架设计）引导学生自主构建“文本理解-情节发展-情感表达”的知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断工具和思维品质培养，开篇设置“细节问答”自测文本理解漏洞，通过“情节线、情感线分析”任务引导学生推断逻辑关系，提升语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配有续写框架模板和范文对比分析，帮助学生自主总结写作规律，教师可依据学生答题情况精准指导，支持个性化复习与因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 From the balcony (阳台)of our tenth-floor apartment, I combed the sky with eager eyes, hoping to catch sight of a shooting star drifting across the night. “Stars are afraid of city lights, but a little song is always good for something.” My grandma, whom I affectionately called Nana, wrapped her arms around me and hummed (哼唱) a slow, gentle tune beside my ear. Her voice was soft and steady, like a quiet stream in the summer night. “Star light, star bright,” I whispered, as a few pinpricks of light twinkled through the orange glows of the city night sky. These ordinary stars were for little wishes — everyday wishes — like getting extra frosting on your cupcake or finding a quarter on the sidewalk. But shooting stars were different. They were rare and magical. “Shooting stars are lucky,” Nana whispered softly with a tender smile. “They carry your wish across the sky.” So I kept a special wish ready — something I had been hoping for a long time — ready for a shooting star to catch my wish in its tail and dance across the darkness. “There are too many lights tonight, sugarplum,” she said, glancing down at the glowing city below. “The stars are hiding.” I nestled deeper in her arms, hoping for a few more minutes of her warmth as much as I hoped to see a shooting star. Time slipped away amid our soft chats and quiet waiting. Just then, my stomach growled softly — a tiny betrayal of my peaceful moment. Nana chuckled and stood up, stretching her arms. “A little song is good for something,” she laughed, “but so is a little snack. Let’s go down to the convenience store on the first floor. I remember you love those chocolate chip cookies.” The next minute, we reached the store, grabbed a pack of cookies and headed home cheerfully. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 夜晚，我在十楼阳台热切期盼流星划过、许下珍藏已久的心愿--- _________________ ---奶奶温柔陪伴在侧，轻声哼唱歌谣、讲述流星承载心愿的美好寓意--- _________________ ---城市灯火璀璨掩盖星光，流星迟迟未现，我依偎在奶奶怀中静静等候--- _________________ ---我肚子轻微作响，奶奶察觉后带我下楼买爱吃的巧克力曲奇饼干，二人开心返程 4. 细节问答 What did the author expect to see on the night balcony? ：___________________________________ How did Nana accompany and comfort the author?：_________________________________ What’s the difference between ordinary stars and shooting stars in the story?：________________________________________________ Why did the author fail to see shooting stars at first?：__________________________________________ What special wish did the author prepare for?：_____________________________________________ Why did Nana decide to take the author to the convenience store?：_________________________________________________ What kind of person is Nana?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 我夜晚倚着阳台，渴望邂逅流星、许下心愿→奶奶温柔相伴，用温柔歌声与暖心话语治愈我，诉说流星的美好寓意→城市强光遮蔽星空，流星隐匿不见，我失落却贪恋奶奶的温暖→肚子咕咕作响，奶奶贴心带我下楼买零食、治愈小遗憾→返程时突发停电，城市灯光尽数熄灭→（续写）黑暗褪去光污染，夜空澄澈透亮，我意外邂逅绝美流星→（续写）重回阳台与奶奶共赏星空，顺利许下心愿，领悟陪伴与温柔的真谛 6．情感线 I：eager and expectant→___________→slightly disappointed→___________→grateful and warm（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；独立主格 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. 衔接句1——What changes did the power cut bring? What did they witness? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. 衔接句2——What did they see and do? What insight did the author gain? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我们正要乘电梯时，突然停电了。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：回到阳台，我们再次凝望夜空。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（心怀美好期许、细腻温柔的孩子，渴望流星许愿）；Nana（慈祥温柔、体贴暖心、善于治愈陪伴的奶奶） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 静谧夜晚，我立于十楼阳台，满心期盼流星划过夜空，想要许下珍藏已久的心愿--- 奶奶温柔相拥，轻声哼唱舒缓歌谣，温柔诉说流星承载心愿的浪漫寓意--- 城市灯火通明，强光遮蔽夜空，繁星隐匿，流星迟迟未现--- 我依偎奶奶怀中静心等候，惬意享受温情陪伴--- 我肚子轻响，奶奶察觉后贴心带我下楼便利店购买爱吃的巧克力曲奇，二人愉悦返程 4. 细节问答 What did the author expect to see on the night balcony? ：She hoped to catch sight of a shooting star to make her long-awaited special wish. How did Nana accompany and comfort the author?：She hugged the author tightly, hummed gentle tunes and told her the beautiful meaning of shooting stars. What’s the difference between ordinary stars and shooting stars in the story?：Ordinary stars are for small daily wishes, while rare and magical shooting stars can carry special long-awaited wishes across the sky. Why did the author fail to see shooting stars at first?：Because the bright city lights lit up the night sky and hid the stars and shooting stars. What special wish did the author prepare for?：The author prepared a precious wish that she had been looking forward to for a long time. Why did Nana decide to take the author to the convenience store?：Because the author’s stomach growled, and she wanted to treat the author to her favorite chocolate chip cookies. What kind of person is Nana?：She is gentle, considerate, loving and good at accompanying and comforting others. What does the story tell us?：Warm companionship is the most precious luck in life, and unexpected changes often bring beautiful surprises. 5．情节线 我夜晚倚着阳台，渴望邂逅流星、许下专属心愿→奶奶温柔相伴，用歌声与暖心话语治愈我，解读流星的浪漫寓意→城市强光污染夜空，流星隐匿，我满心遗憾却贪恋奶奶的温情陪伴→我肚子轻响，奶奶贴心带我下楼买零食，温柔化解小失落→返程突发全城停电，城市灯火熄灭、光污染消失→澄澈夜空显露漫天繁星，我惊喜偶遇流星划过→重返阳台，在奶奶陪伴下虔诚许愿，领悟陪伴即是最美的幸运与惊喜 6．情感线 I：eager and expectant→peaceful and cozy→slightly disappointed→surprised and delighted→grateful and warm（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：我在奶奶的温柔陪伴下等候流星许愿，因城市灯光屡屡落空，一场突如其来的停电驱散光污染，让我如愿邂逅流星、许下心愿，深切体会到陪伴的温暖与生活的意外美好。 English：Accompanied by her gentle grandma, the author waited for a shooting star to make a wish but failed due to city lights. A sudden power cut brought a clear night sky, allowing her to see a shooting star and realize that warm companionship is the best luck. 8. 句式 状语从句：I combed the sky with eager eyes, hoping to catch sight of a shooting star. 非谓语动词：My grandma wrapped her arms around me and hummed a slow, gentle tune beside my ear. 宾语从句：I remembered you love those chocolate chip cookies. 定语从句：These ordinary stars were for little wishes — everyday wishes — like getting extra frosting on your cupcake. 独立主格：Time slipped away amid our soft chats and quiet waiting. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：温柔的陪伴是人间最美的幸运，生活总有不期而遇的美好，意外的转折往往藏着专属惊喜。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. 衔接句1——What changes did the power cut bring? What did they witness? The sudden power cut put out all city lights, leaving the night sky clear and dark. Free from light pollution, countless stars sparkled brightly, and a shining shooting star appeared unexpectedly. Paragraph 2: Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. 衔接句2——What did they see and do? What insight did the author gain? The author made her long-awaited wish under the shooting star with Nana’s company. She realized that warm companionship and unexpected beauty in life are the most precious luck. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我们正要乘电梯时，突然停电了。 →①全城灯火骤然熄灭，笼罩城市的强光彻底消失→②夜空褪去光污染，变得澄澈漆黑、纯净通透→③漫天繁星闪烁，一道流星猝不及防划过天际，惊艳动人； 第二段：回到阳台，我们再次凝望夜空。 →①我静静依偎在奶奶身旁，虔诚对着流星许下珍藏的心愿→②流星拖着璀璨尾迹消逝，夜空温柔又治愈→③我幡然领悟，奶奶的陪伴远比流星许愿更加珍贵动人。 四.段落续写范文 We were about to take the elevator when the power went off. All the neon lights and street lamps in the city faded away in an instant, sweeping off the annoying light pollution. The night sky, once covered by orange glows, turned deep, dark and crystal clear. Countless stars twinkled brightly above us. Suddenly, a gorgeous shooting star drifted across the silent sky, shining brilliantly in the dark. I froze for a second, overwhelmed by this unexpected beauty. Back on the balcony, we gazed into the sky again. With Nana’s warm arms around me, I closed my eyes gently and made my long-cherished wish sincerely. The shooting star danced across the darkness slowly, carrying my wish silently. I no longer felt regretful for the previous wait. It suddenly dawned on me that shooting stars bring luck, but Nana’s constant and tender companionship is the most precious luck in my life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $