读后续写编号7 学案-2025-2026学年高一英语人教版（2019）必修第三册

该高中英语单元学案以“叙事性文本的续写与主题探究”为核心，围绕友谊、成长与教育选择的主题，设计了“文本解读-续写策略-实践创作-评价反思”的递进式学习路径，通过课时任务的紧密关联，引导学生从理解原文情节、人物关系到掌握续写技巧，构建完整的叙事写作能力体系。 亮点在于“基于人物心理的续写创作”项目设计，学生需通过绘制Carl与Benny的情感变化思维导图，分析原文未言明的心理活动，运用语言能力完成符合逻辑的情节续写，同时在小组讨论中提升思维品质。学案还包含“续写常见问题错题集锦”，帮助学生针对性改进，既促进深度学习，又为教师实施单元教学提供清晰的指导框架。

2025级高一英语读后续写学案 编号7 编制人：李江雪 班级_____ 姓名_________ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Carl and I were close friends when we were sixteen years old. We were in the same class. He was a top student in my class, but I was on the opposite side. He loved reading books, but I was not good at reading any interesting books. His family had a big house with a beautiful garden, but my family had a small one for 5 people. Despite all these differences, we both liked playing baseball. One Sunday afternoon, we had just finished playing baseball in Carl’s back yard, I was about to get on my bike to go home. “Wait a minute, ” Carl said. He ran into his house and came back with a book for me to take home to read. I said nothing. I hated school because I hated reading. I kept the book for a couple of weeks. Then I returned it unread. I was worried that Carl would ask me some questions about the book. Luckily, Carl never asked me whether I liked it or not. During the following two years, Carl lent me more books. Each time I returned them unread. I pretended to have read them all and thanked him for sharing these wonderful stories with me. I remembered the last one was Martin Eden by Jack London. Actually, I started to read the book carelessly. There were many words on every page that I didn’t understand. It was only a boring story about a poor boy who fought for chances to study at school. The main character, Martin Eden, had my own poor educational background, but managed to educate himself and became a published author. I returned it to him unfinished. A few days after graduating from high school, Carl asked, “Benny, what college are you going to?” “I am not going to college because my father can’t afford the seventy-five dollars for tuition, ” I lied. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I wanted to tell him the true reason but I kept in silence. _______________________________________________________________________________ The following day, Carl handed me an envelope with $75 inside and the book, Martin Eden. _______________________________________________________________________________ I wanted to tell him the true reason but I kept in silence. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ The following day, Carl handed me an envelope with $75 inside and the book, Martin Eden. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 读后续写 7 高一英语组 更多模版：亮亮图文旗舰店https://liangliangtuwen.tmall.com 1 Carl and I were close friends when we were sixteen years old. We were in the same class. He was a top student in my class, but I was on the opposite side. He loved reading books, but I was not good at reading any interesting books. His family had a big house with a beautiful garden, but my family had a small one for 5 people. Despite all these differences, we both liked playing baseball. One Sunday afternoon, we had just finished playing baseball in Carl’s back yard, I was about to get on my bike to go home. “Wait a minute, ” Carl said. He ran into his house and came back with a book for me to take home to read. I said nothing. I hated school because I hated reading. I kept the book for a couple of weeks. Then I returned it unread. I was worried that Carl would ask me some questions about the book. Luckily, Carl never asked me whether I liked it or not. During the following two years, Carl lent me more books. Each time I returned them unread. I pretended to have read them all and thanked him for sharing these wonderful stories with me. I remembered the last one was Martin Eden by Jack London. Actually, I started to read the book carelessly. There were many words on every page that I didn’t understand. It was only a boring story about a poor boy who fought for chances to study at school. The main character, Martin Eden, had my own poor educational background, but managed to educate himself and became a published author. I returned it to him unfinished. A few days after graduating from high school, Carl asked, “Benny, what college are you going to?” “I am not going to college because my father can’t afford the seventy-five dollars for tuition, ” I lied. I wanted to tell him the true reason but I kept in silence.________________________________________ The following day, Carl handed me an envelope with $75 inside and the book, Martin Eden. _____________ 【故事大意】 文章大意： “我” 和卡尔是十六岁的好友，虽家庭背景和学习成绩不同，但都爱打棒球。卡尔爱读书，常借书给 “我”，但 “我” 从不读就归还，怕他询问。最后一次借的《马丁・伊登》，“我” 读了一点，觉得枯燥且因自身教育背景差难以理解。高中毕业后，卡尔问 “我” 上哪所大学，“我” 因父亲付不起学费而撒谎说不上大学，实则早已放弃大学梦，后卡尔给 “我” 75 美元和那本书，改变了 “我” 的命运，展现了友情的珍贵和力量。 续写思路发展： 续写要点： 第一段： 情节：详细描述 “我” 保持沉默时的内心活动，如内心的挣扎、对自己撒谎的愧疚以及对卡尔可能反应的担忧，“我” 可能会想 “我这样欺骗他是不是错了，但我又实在不好意思说出真相”。同时，描写卡尔的表情和神态，他眼中的疑惑和关心，以及周围环境的安静压抑，衬托出 “我” 的不安和尴尬，为卡尔后续的行动做铺垫，突出两人之间微妙的情感变化和紧张的氛围。 第二段： 情节：描述卡尔给 “我” 信封和书时的动作和语言，他可能会微笑着说 “我知道你一直想上大学，这是给你的，相信你可以做到”，眼神中充满信任和鼓励。接着写 “我” 的反应，“我” 惊讶得说不出话，手微微颤抖地接过信封和书，内心被卡尔的举动深深感动，泪水在眼眶里打转。最后，“我” 下定决心要努力学习，不辜负卡尔的信任，也感受到了友情的伟大力量，为故事画上一个温暖而充满希望的句号，体现友情对人生的积极影响和改变，升华故事的主题，让读者深刻体会到真挚友情的珍贵和价值。 I wanted to tell him the true reason but I kept in silence. My heart was pounding (v.怦怦地跳) as I stood there, my mind racing with excuses and regrets. I knew I was letting Carl down, but my pride wouldn't let me admit the truth. I watched as his face fell slightly, his eyes searching mine for an answer I couldn't give. The silence between us grew heavy, filled with unspoken words and broken trust. I felt a lump in my throat (喉咙哽住) as I turned away, pretending to be in a hurry to leave. The following day, Carl handed me an envelope with $75 inside and the book, Martin Eden. He smiled and said, "Benny, I know you love baseball, but I also know you have a hunger for knowledge. Don't let this chance slip away(溜走). Use this money to start your journey. And remember, Martin Eden didn't give up, and neither should you." I stared at him in disbelief（不敢相信；怀疑）, my hands shaking as I took the envelope. The book felt like a symbol of hope and a reminder of our friendship. In that moment, I realized how foolish I had been to lie to him. I was determined to make things right. I would go to college and work hard, not just for myself but for Carl, who had shown me what true friendship really meant. His act of kindness was a light in the darkness of my self-doubt, and I would cherish it forever. 【范文二】 I wanted to tell him the true reason but I kept in silence. I lowered my head, too ashamed to meet his eyes. Deep inside, I regretted lying to my best friend. Carl stared at me for a while without a word, as if he had already guessed my trouble. He patted me on the shoulder gently and said nothing more, leaving me alone with heavy guilt. That whole night, I tossed and turned(翻来覆去) in bed, thinking about our years of friendship and the unread books he’d lent me. The following day, Carl handed me an envelope with $75 inside and the book, Martin Eden. I opened it in shock, tears rolling down my cheeks immediately. He smiled and told me the story of Martin Eden, encouraging me to chase my college dream. He also admitted he knew I disliked reading but hoped I’d find strength in the book. Holding the money and novel tightly, I promised to finish the book and repay his kindness. From then on, I fell in love with reading, carrying our friendship wherever I went. $2024级高一英语读后续写学案 编号7 编制人：王珊 审核:李波 翟丽娟 班级_____ 姓名_________ 文章大意： “我” 和卡尔是十六岁的好友，虽家庭背景和学习成绩不同，但都爱打棒球。卡尔爱读书，常借书给 “我”，但 “我” 从不读就归还，怕他询问。最后一次借的《马丁・伊登》，“我” 读了一点，觉得枯燥且因自身教育背景差难以理解。高中毕业后，卡尔问 “我” 上哪所大学，“我” 因父亲付不起学费而撒谎说不上大学，实则早已放弃大学梦，后卡尔给 “我” 75 美元和那本书，改变了 “我” 的命运，展现了友情的珍贵和力量。 续写要点： 第一段： 情节：详细描述 “我” 保持沉默时的内心活动，如内心的挣扎、对自己撒谎的愧疚以及对卡尔可能反应的担忧，“我” 可能会想 “我这样欺骗他是不是错了，但我又实在不好意思说出真相”。同时，描写卡尔的表情和神态，他眼中的疑惑和关心，以及周围环境的安静压抑，衬托出 “我” 的不安和尴尬，为卡尔后续的行动做铺垫，突出两人之间微妙的情感变化和紧张的氛围。 第二段： 情节：描述卡尔给 “我” 信封和书时的动作和语言，他可能会微笑着说 “我知道你一直想上大学，这是给你的，相信你可以做到”，眼神中充满信任和鼓励。接着写 “我” 的反应，“我” 惊讶得说不出话，手微微颤抖地接过信封和书，内心被卡尔的举动深深感动，泪水在眼眶里打转。最后，“我” 下定决心要努力学习，不辜负卡尔的信任，也感受到了友情的伟大力量，为故事画上一个温暖而充满希望的句号，体现友情对人生的积极影响和改变，升华故事的主题，让读者深刻体会到真挚友情的珍贵和价值。 【原文好句欣赏】 1. poor educational background 薄弱的教育背景 2. published author 出版过作品的作家 3. unread / unfinished 未读的/未看完的 return it unread 原封不动归还，一页未读 4. fight for chances 争取机会 5. educate himself 自学、自我提升 6. manage to do 设法成功做到 7. afford the tuition 负担得起学费 8. lend sb. sth. 借给某人某物 原文高分好句（可直接背诵仿写） 1. Despite all these differences, we both liked playing baseball. 尽管我们有这么多截然不同之处，我们都热爱打棒球。 （despite + 名词，表让步，读后续写万能句式） 2. He ran into his house and came back with a book for me to take home to read. 他冲进屋里，拿了一本书出来，让我带回家看。（连续动作描写，人物动作刻画，记叙文必备） 3. I pretended to have read them all and thanked him for sharing these wonderful stories with me. 我假装全都读完了，还感谢他愿意和我分享这些精彩的故事。（pretend to have done 假装已经做过） 4. The main character, Martin Eden, had my own poor educational background, but managed to educate himself and became a published author. 主人公马丁·伊登和我一样没受过多少教育，但他坚持自学，最终成为一名出版作家。 （亮点：同位语 + but连接转折，升华人物精神） 续写好句 1. I lowered my head, too ashamed to meet his eyes. 我低下头，羞愧得不敢与他对视。 2. That whole night, I tossed and turned in bed, thinking about our years of friendship. 那一整晚，我在床上辗转反侧，回想我们多年的友谊。 3. I opened it in shock, tears rolling down my cheeks immediately. 我震惊地拆开信封，泪水瞬间滑落脸颊。 4. Holding the money and novel tightly, I promised to finish the book and repay his kindness. 我紧紧攥着钱和那本书，承诺一定会读完这本书，并报答他的善意。 写作示范 范文1： I wanted to tell him the true reason but I kept in silence. My heart was pounding(v.怦怦地跳) as I stood there, my mind racing with excuses and regrets. I knew I was letting Carl down, but my pride wouldn't let me admit the truth. I watched as his face fell slightly, his eyes searching mine for an answer I couldn't give. The silence between us grew heavy, filled with unspoken words and broken trust. I felt a lump in my throat (喉咙哽住)as I turned away, pretending to be in a hurry to leave. The following day, Carl handed me an envelope with $75 inside and the book, Martin Eden. He smiled and said, "Benny, I know you love baseball, but I also know you have a hunger for knowledge. Don't let this chance slip away(溜走). Use this money to start your journey. And remember, Martin Eden didn't give up, and neither should you." I stared at him in disbelief（不敢相信；怀疑）, my hands shaking as I took the envelope. The book felt like a symbol of hope and a reminder of our friendship. In that moment, I realized how foolish I had been to lie to him. I was determined to make things right. I would go to college and work hard, not just for myself but for Carl, who had shown me what true friendship really meant. His act of kindness was a light in the darkness of my self-doubt, and I would cherish it forever. 范文2： I wanted to tell him the true reason but I kept in silence. I lowered my head, too ashamed to meet his eyes. Deep inside, I regretted lying to my best friend. Carl stared at me for a while without a word, as if he had already guessed my trouble. He patted me on the shoulder gently and said nothing more, leaving me alone with heavy guilt. That whole night, I tossed and turned(翻来覆去) in bed, thinking about our years of friendship and the unread books he’d lent me. The following day, Carl handed me an envelope with $75 inside and the book, Martin Eden. I opened it in shock, tears rolling down my cheeks immediately. He smiled and told me the story of Martin Eden, encouraging me to chase my college dream. He also admitted he knew I disliked reading but hoped I’d find strength in the book. Holding the money and novel tightly, I promised to finish the book and repay his kindness. From then on, I fell in love with reading, carrying our friendship wherever I went. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $