读后续写编号8 学案-2025-2026学年高一英语人教版（2019）必修第三册

该高中英语单元学案以"记叙文续写的逻辑构建与情感表达"为主题，通过单元知识框架图展示文本分析、线索梳理、情节构思、语言润色四个课时的内在联系，设计了"理解-分析-预测-表达"的递进式学习任务，引导学生从原文解读逐步过渡到续写创作的综合运用。 亮点在于"情境化续写探究"的单元活动设计，学生需基于暴风雪救援的原文情境，通过"线索提取思维导图""救援场景细节描写训练"等任务，分析人物心理与情节发展，培养思维品质（分析、推断）和语言能力（连贯表达）。每课时设有"范文赏析"和"错误案例集锦"，既夯实基础技能，又促进深度学习，为教师实施单元写作教学提供了完整的指导体系。

2025级高一英语读后续写学案 编号8 编制人：韩丽 班级_________姓名___________ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The snowstorm was supposed to hit the evening of Monday, Jan.31, 2024. It was just past 4:30p.m. I was in the office when my colleague at home called me, asking me to take his laptop to his home. I assured him. “The snow shouldn’t start until later.” I thought. On the way to his place, I picked up a new cellphone charger, filled up my SUV with gas and picked up two pizzas for two kids. It took me about 15 minutes to get to my colleague’s house, where I dropped off the laptop case and got right back on the road. Then the snow started, and it was coming down fast. Within minutes I was in a whiteout. The wind screamed. The road soon switched from paved to gravel（砾石）. The windows were fogging up（起雾） and getting covered with snow. I slowed down and rolled down my driver’s side window. But I didn’t have a clue where I was or even which side of the road I was on. I kept the car running to stay warm and called 911. The operator told me to sit tight and wait things out for the night. NOBODY was coming to get me until morning at the earliest! It was now about 6 p.m. and dark. I told myself I should calm down. I called my kids and told them what was happening. Then I stopped the car and texted that colleague. I joked about my good deed ending in disaster. “Pin your location on Google Maps and send it to me,” he had an idea. I did, and a few minutes later he texted me back a screenshot (截屏) of the satellite view of where I was. We figured out that I was on a road called Bouvier Lane, in between two farms. It was now 6:30 p.m. I posted this new information to my Facebook community group, pleading(恳求) for anyone who knew who lived on the farms to help me get rescued. At 8 p.m., my cellphone rang. It was the son of the farmer who owned the land beside the road where I was. He told me that his dad was coming to get me. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then, about 55 minutes later, I saw a tall figure in the dark, carrying a flashlight. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we reached the house, I saw an old lady standing at the doorstep.________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $2025级高一英语读后续写学案 编号8 编制人：韩丽 班级_________姓名___________ 一、文章大意 2024年1月31日傍晚，“我”在去同事家送笔记本电脑后返程，突遇暴风雪，很快陷入困境。车窗被雪覆盖、道路状况变差，“我”不知身处何处，打电话向911求助被告知要等到早上。“我”联系同事后通过谷歌地图确定了位置，并在脸书社区群发布求救信息。晚上8点，一位农场主儿子打来电话说他父亲会来救“我”。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应： 1.伏笔：暴风雪来袭，“我”被困。回应：农场主前来救援，带“我”脱离困境。 2.伏笔：向同事、911、脸书社区求助。回应：最终同事帮助确定位置，脸书信息起作用，农场主儿子联系“我”，父亲来救“我”。 二、续写要点 1.第一段 （情感线）：看到农场主身影时的激动、安心，在艰难跟随过程中对他的依赖。 （故事线）：农场主用手电筒照明，在恶劣天气下引导 “我” 离开被困车辆，前往农场。 2.第二段 （情感线）：看到老妇人的温暖笑容时内心充满感激，进屋后被热情招待的感动。 （故事线）老妇人递来毯子，屋内有温暖的炉火、热食和茶。 （主旨升华）困境中陌生人的善意无比珍贵，人与人之间的互助能战胜困难；善良是黑暗中的光；帮助他人是人性最美的体现；危难时刻的援手是希望的传递；爱心能融化冰雪般的困境。 好词好句积累： _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文1 Then, about 55 minutes later, I saw a tall figure in the dark, carrying a flashlight. My heart beat wildly with hope. As he approached, I could see the snowflakes on his hat and coat. He signalled me to follow. I stumbled跌跌撞撞地走after him, the cold wind howling. Every step was an effort, but his steady figure was my guiding light. I felt a deep sense of gratitude towards this stranger braving the storm for me. When we reached the house, I saw an old lady standing at the doorstep. Her kind eyes and warm smile instantly melted my fear. She wrapped the blanket around me tightly. Inside, the warm air and the smell of food made my eyes water. Their selfless act in this harsh恶劣的 situation taught me that humanity shines brightest during hardships. Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly.  范文2 Then, about 55 minutes later, I saw a tall figure in the dark, carrying a flashlight.The owner of the farm was fighting the wind and snow for about one hour to fetch me through the snowstorm. Relief washed over me immediately我顿时松了一口气. He shielded遮挡 his eyes from the stinging snow with a mittened戴着连指手套的 hand, shouting at me, “Follow me, young man. You’ll be OK.” He turned around and started to trudge跋涉 through the snow, sure of the direction. The journey was slow and cautious谨慎的, but his presence was comforting. We finally arrived at a cosy温暖舒适的, well-lit光线好的home, where the warmth from inside battled against对抗 the biting cold刺骨的寒冷outside. When we reached the house, I saw an old lady standing at the doorstep. It was the wife of the owner. I got out of the car and burst into tears. She hurried over, wrapping me in a thick blanket, giving me a cup of hot drink and leading me inside. Getting warmer and calmer, I showed gratitude for the couple, all my fears turning into relief. The farmhouse was a haven避风港, filled with the comforting atmosphere. They listened attentively to my story, nodding sympathetically同情地. As I sat there, gratitude filled my heart for their kindness and the safe haven they provided. Their kindness made me realize that in times of trouble, the kindness of strangers can be a life-saving grace, a reminder that there is always good in the world在困难的时候，陌生人的善意是一种拯救生命的恩典，提醒我们世界上总是有美好. 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 读后续写8 高一英语组 更多模版：亮亮图文旗舰店https://liangliangtuwen.tmall.com 1 Learning goals： To enable students to construct the most reasonable storyline. To improve students' writing by using advanced expressions. To develop students' emotional value and positive energy. 1.Notebook 2. Mark pens 3. High spirits Preparations : 1 2 3 2 文章大意 2024 年 1 月 31 日傍晚，“我” 在去同事家送笔记本电脑后返程，突遇暴风雪，很快陷入困境。车窗被雪覆盖、道路状况变差，“我” 不知身处何处，打电话向 911 求助被告知要等到早上。“我” 联系同事后通过谷歌地图确定了位置，并在脸书社区群发布求救信息。晚上 8 点，一位农场主儿子打来电话说他父亲会来救 “我”。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 1.伏笔：暴风雪来袭，“我” 被困。回应：农场主前来救援，带 “我” 脱离困境。 2.伏笔：向同事、911、脸书社区求助。回应：最终同事帮助确定位置，脸书信息起作用，农场主儿子联系 “我”，父亲来救 “我”。 续写要点 1.第一段 （情感线）：看到农场主身影时的激动、安心，在艰难跟随过程中对他的依赖。 （故事线）：农场主用手电筒照明，在恶劣天气下引导 “我” 离开被困车辆，前往农场。 2.第二段 （情感线）：看到老妇人的温暖笑容时内心充满感激，进屋后被热情招待的感动。 （故事线）老妇人递来毯子，屋内有温暖的炉火、热食和茶。 （主旨升华）困境中陌生人的善意无比珍贵，人与人之间的互助能战胜困难；善良是黑暗中的光；帮助他人是人性最美的体现；危难时刻的援手是希望的传递；爱心能融化冰雪般的困境。 Then, about 55 minutes later, I saw a tall figure in the dark, carrying a flashlight. My heart beat wildly with hope. As he approached, I could see the snowflakes on his hat and coat. He signalled me to follow. I stumbled跌跌撞撞地走after him, the cold wind howling. Every step was an effort, but his steady figure was my guiding light. I felt a deep sense of gratitude towards this stranger braving the storm for me. When we reached the house, I saw an old lady standing at the doorstep. Her kind eyes and warm smile instantly melted my fear. She wrapped the blanket around me tightly. Inside, the warm air and the smell of food made my eyes water. Their selfless act in this harsh恶劣的 situation taught me that humanity shines brightest during hardships. Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly.  Then, about 55 minutes later, I saw a tall figure in the dark, carrying a flashlight.The owner of the farm was fighting the wind and snow for about one hour to fetch me through the snowstorm. Relief washed over me immediately我顿时松了一口气. He shielded遮挡 his eyes from the stinging刺人的 snow with a mittened戴着连指手套的 hand, shouting at me, “Follow me, young man. You’ll be OK.” He turned around and started to trudge跋涉 through the snow, sure of the direction. The journey was slow and cautious谨慎的, but his presence was comforting. We finally arrived at a cosy温暖舒适的, well-lit光线好的home, where the warmth from inside battled against对抗 the biting cold刺骨的寒冷outside. When we reached the house, I saw an old lady standing at the doorstep. It was the wife of the owner. I got out of the car and burst into tears. She hurried over, wrapping me in a thick blanket, giving me a cup of hot drink and leading me inside. Getting warmer and calmer, I showed gratitude for the couple, all my fears turning into relief. The farmhouse was a haven避风港, filled with the comforting atmosphere. They listened attentively to my story, nodding sympathetically同情地. As I sat there, gratitude filled my heart for their kindness and the safe haven they provided. Their kindness made me realize that in times of trouble, the kindness of strangers can be a life-saving grace, a reminder that there is always good in the world在困难的时候，陌生人的善意是一种拯救生命的恩典，提醒我们世界上总是有美好. $