读后续写编号10 学案-2025-2026学年高一英语人教版（2019）必修第三册

该高中英语单元学案以"记叙文续写与情节发展"为主题，通过单元知识框架图展示"原文分析-要素提炼-续写实践"三个课时的内在联系，设计了"理解-推断-表达"的递进式学习任务，引导学生从文本细节解读逐步过渡到情节逻辑构建与情感表达。 亮点在于"情境化续写探究"的单元活动设计，以Emily被困获救的故事为载体，学生需完成"故事伏笔梳理-人物情感分析-续写片段创作与互评"任务，培养语言能力（连贯表达）、思维品质（逻辑推断）和文化意识（跨文化互助精神）。每课时设有"范文引路"和"错题集锦"，既巩固基础方法，又促进能力提升，为教师实施单元写作教学提供了系统的指导方案。

2025级高一英语读后续写学案 编号 编制人：王昫 班级_________姓名__________ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas. Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed sections of the highway. But that didn’t happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily’s car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded (被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答. Paragraph 1:Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. _______________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 好词好句积累：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas. Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed sections of the highway. But that didn’t happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily’s car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded (被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. 一、话题分类 感人救助类 二、记叙文要素 1. 人物：Emily Sanders（25岁，来自密歇根州底特律）、男朋友、警察、Daniel、Rachel（说话带有真诚的温暖） 2. 时间：12月23日、夜幕降临、三天后 3. 地点：底特律到多伦多的高速公路、陌生的加拿大城镇道路、路边的沟里、附近的咖啡馆 4. 事件：Emily Sanders在暴风雪中开车去见男朋友，不慎驶入陌生的道路，车子滑进沟里被困且手机没有信号，面临在这个寒冷天气中独自过夜甚至整个假期计划被毁的绝望困境。幸好Daniel和Rachel发现她并带她到附近咖啡馆，并听她说了自己的困难。 三、原文重点词汇 set out出发，启程 approaching snowstorm即将来临的暴风雪 detour traffic疏导交通，使车辆绕道 blinding whiteout 能见度极低的暴雪天气 got stuck 被困住，陷入困境 inching along缓慢前行 panic set in心生恐慌，陷入慌乱 slid into 滑入，坠 no signal无信号 stranded vehicle被困车辆 genuine warmth真挚的暖意 desperate situation 窘迫绝境，危急处境 四、原文情节梳理 12月23日，Emily Sanders驱车前往多伦多与男友过圣诞节。遭遇暴风雪后，她被迫驶离高速，迷失在陌生道路上。由于视线极差，车子滑进沟里且手机毫无信号。绝望中她只能在车里熬过寒冷的一夜。第二天早上，Daniel和妻子Rachel发现了她，不仅热心询问，还将其带到咖啡馆，给她买热巧克力，并耐心倾听她车子被困、离目的地尚远且计划受阻的糟糕处境。 五、翻译提示句 1. Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Daniel和Rachel建议Emily乘坐火车继续她的旅程。 2. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. 三天后，Emily回来取她的车。 六、续写情节推理 关键思考过程：由提示句2可知，Emily三天后回来取车，这说明车辆在她离开期间被安全地留在了某处。所以第一段要体现：1. Emily接受了乘火车离开的建议； 2. Daniel和Rachel帮助她前往火车站并妥善安排了被困的车辆；3. Emily顺利搭乘火车离开并心怀感激。 第一段：（接受建议+搭乘火车）：Daniel和Rachel建议Emily乘坐火车继续她的旅程，Emily接受了这个主意，Daniel提议把车暂时留在这里由他们照看，随后这对夫妇驱车将她送到了最近的火车站，Emily买好车票顺利登上了火车，看着窗外热心的夫妇挥手告别，她原本恐慌的心里充满了温暖与希望。 第二段：（重返取车+传递善意）：三天后，Emily回来取她的车，此时她已经在多伦多和男朋友度过了一个完美的圣诞节，暴雪已经停止且天气放晴，Daniel不仅帮她把车从沟里拖了出来，还清理了车身的积雪，Emily紧紧拥抱这对夫妇表达深深的谢意，并在驾车返程时决心将这份无私的善意传递给更多的人。结尾点明陌生人的善意能够化解暴风雪的寒冷，温暖人生的旅途。 小结：整体需围绕“Emily在好心人的帮助下顺利换乘火车完成旅程，随后返回取车并感悟善意”展开。 七、场景核心词汇积累 范文 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Emily hesitated briefly — her car was still sitting in the ditch. Seeing her concern, Daniel offered to take care of it and call a local towing company later. Relieved, Emily gratefully accepted his thoughtful advice. Then the couple drove her to the nearest railway station and helped her buy a ticket to Toronto. Her worries slowly melted away. As the train pulled out, she watched them waving through the window. Deep gratitude filled her heart, and she regained hope for the coming Christmas. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. She had enjoyed a wonderful Christmas with her boyfriend in Toronto, and the heavy snow had stopped completely. She soon spotted her car parked neatly by the road, with all the snow cleared off. It turned out that Daniel had had the car towed out of the ditch. Emily drove to the couple’s home and expressed her sincere thanks. This special experience made her realize how powerful the kindness of strangers could be. She decided that, from then on, she would help people in trouble whenever she could. 范文二 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Emily began to voice her concern about her car, which was still stuck in the ditch. Daniel promised to have a towing service pull it out and keep an eye on it until she was back. Reassured, Emily nodded in agreement. The couple then drove her to the station, comforting her gently along the way. At the station, they bought her a ticket and helped carry her luggage onto the platform. Watching through the train window as the couple waved in the cold wind, Emily felt warmth spread through her. Gone were the panic and hopelessness of the earlier part of the night. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. Having spent a joyful Christmas with her boyfriend, she found the whole town bathed in bright sunshine after the terrible snowstorm. Much to her delight, her car had already been towed out and thoroughly cleaned. Touched by their kindness, Emily drove to the couple’s home and conveyed her deepest thanks. This tough trip became a precious memory for her. She came to understand that there is still real warmth in the world, and she would keep this kindness alive by passing it on. $2025级高一英语读后续写学案 编号 编制人：王昫 班级_________姓名__________ 【写作指导】 一、话题分类 感人救助类 二、记叙文要素 1. 人物：Emily Sanders（25岁，来自密歇根州底特律）、男朋友、警察、Daniel、Rachel（说话带有真诚的温暖） 2. 时间：12月23日、夜幕降临、三天后 3. 地点：底特律到多伦多的高速公路、陌生的加拿大城镇道路、路边的沟里、附近的咖啡馆 4. 事件：Emily Sanders在暴风雪中开车去见男朋友，不慎驶入陌生的道路，车子滑进沟里被困且手机没有信号，面临在这个寒冷天气中独自过夜甚至整个假期计划被毁的绝望困境。幸好Daniel和Rachel发现她并带她到附近咖啡馆，并听她说了自己的困难。 三、原文重点词汇 set out出发，启程 approaching snowstorm即将来临的暴风雪 detour traffic疏导交通，使车辆绕道 blinding whiteout 能见度极低的暴雪天气 got stuck 被困住，陷入困境 inching along缓慢前行 panic set in心生恐慌，陷入慌乱 slid into 滑入，坠 no signal无信号 stranded vehicle被困车辆 genuine warmth真挚的暖意 desperate situation 窘迫绝境，危急处境 四、原文情节梳理 12月23日，Emily Sanders驱车前往多伦多与男友过圣诞节。遭遇暴风雪后，她被迫驶离高速，迷失在陌生道路上。由于视线极差，车子滑进沟里且手机毫无信号。绝望中她只能在车里熬过寒冷的一夜。第二天早上，Daniel和妻子Rachel发现了她，不仅热心询问，还将其带到咖啡馆，给她买热巧克力，并耐心倾听她车子被困、离目的地尚远且计划受阻的糟糕处境。 五、翻译提示句 1. Daniel和Rachel建议Emily乘坐火车继续她的旅程。 2. 三天后，Emily回来取她的车。 六、续写情节推理 关键思考过程：由提示句2可知，Emily三天后回来取车，这说明车辆在她离开期间被安全地留在了某处。所以第一段要体现：1. Emily接受了乘火车离开的建议；2. Daniel和Rachel帮助她前往火车站并妥善安排了被困的车辆；3. Emily顺利搭乘火车离开并心怀感激。 第一段：（接受建议+搭乘火车）：Daniel和Rachel建议Emily乘坐火车继续她的旅程，Emily接受了这个主意，Daniel提议把车暂时留在这里由他们照看，随后这对夫妇驱车将她送到了最近的火车站，Emily买好车票顺利登上了火车，看着窗外热心的夫妇挥手告别，她原本恐慌的心里充满了温暖与希望。 第二段：（重返取车+传递善意）：三天后，Emily回来取她的车，此时她已经在多伦多和男朋友度过了一个完美的圣诞节，暴雪已经停止且天气放晴，Daniel不仅帮她把车从沟里拖了出来，还清理了车身的积雪，Emily紧紧拥抱这对夫妇表达深深的谢意，并在驾车返程时决心将这份无私的善意传递给更多的人。结尾点明陌生人的善意能够化解暴风雪的寒冷，温暖人生的旅途。 小结：整体需围绕“Emily在好心人的帮助下顺利换乘火车完成旅程，随后返回取车并感悟善意”展开。 7、 场景核心词汇积累 范文 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. Emily hesitated briefly — her car was still sitting in the ditch. Seeing her concern, Daniel offered to take care of it and call a local towing company later. Relieved, Emily gratefully accepted his thoughtful advice. Then the couple drove her to the nearest railway station and helped her buy a ticket to Toronto. Her worries slowly melted away. As the train pulled out, she watched them waving through the window. Deep gratitude filled her heart, and she regained hope for the coming Christmas. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. She had enjoyed a wonderful Christmas with her boyfriend in Toronto, and the heavy snow had stopped completely. She soon spotted her car parked neatly by the road, with all the snow cleared off. It turned out that Daniel had had the car towed out of the ditch. Emily drove to the couple’s home and expressed her sincere thanks. This special experience made her realize how powerful the kindness of strangers could be. She decided that, from then on, she would help people in trouble whenever she could. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $