专题06书面表达15篇（提分策略+题型专练）-【期末备考】2025-2026学年七年级英语下学期期末复习满分冲刺（沪教版深圳专用）

**基本信息** 聚焦深圳沪教版七年级英语期末书面表达，以“评分标准-解题步骤-话题技巧-模板应用”构建系统性提分体系，兼顾语言规范与应试策略。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |提分策略|7大策略模块|深圳评分标准解析、五步解题法（审题-提纲-成句-检查-誊写）、7类高频话题技巧、万能过渡词与模板|从评分核心（内容/语言/卷面）到解题流程，再到话题分类（按时态/文体），形成“标准-方法-应用”逻辑链| |题型专练|15篇真题改编|覆盖邮件/演讲稿/倡议书等文体，含环保/深圳介绍/人物等期末高频话题|对应策略模块，每篇训练特定时态（一般现在/过去/进行时）与格式规范，强化语言能力与思维逻辑性|

【期末备考】2025-2026学年七年级英语下学期期末复习满分冲刺（沪教版深圳专用） 专题06书面表达15篇（提分策略+题型专练） 提分策略 一、深圳本地阅卷评分标准（满分15分，期末统考通用） 档位划分 1. 一档13–15分（高分）：全部要点覆盖、时态无错、句型多样、过渡自然、词数60–90、卷面干净 2. 二档10–12分（稳分）：要点齐全，少量拼写/三单小错，句式单一，轻微涂改 3. 三档6–9分（失分档）：缺1–2个要点，时态混用，错误较多，词数不足50 4. 0–5分：跑题、要点大量缺失、几乎无法读懂 三大扣分核心（深圳阅卷重点抓） 1. 内容分（6分）：漏一个要点直接扣2分，必须逐条覆盖提示信息 2. 语言分（6分）：三单漏s、时态混用、单词拼写、中式英语、主谓一致高频扣分 3. 流畅卷面分（3分）：不分段、无连接词、大面积涂黑、字数超标/过少直接降档 硬性规则：禁止出现真实校名、人名、深圳具体校区；词数控制60–90词最佳 二、考场标准五步解题法（2分钟审题+8分钟写作+2分钟检查） Step1 审题圈画（杜绝跑题、漏点） 必圈4类关键词： 1. 文体：邮件/演讲稿/倡议书/记叙文（深圳期末高频：邮件、校园发言稿） 2. 时态（沪教七下三大必考时态） 一般现在时：日常、爱好、校规、介绍深圳、人物（Unit1-4） 现在进行时：当下场景、天气活动（Unit5-6） 一般过去时：难忘一天、出游、往事（Unit7，期末必考） 3. 人称：一/二/三人称，第三人称单数动词必须加s 4. 要点：数字标注1、2、3，写作全部写到，可小幅拓展，不额外加无关内容 Step2 列极简提纲（三段式万能框架，深圳阅卷最爱） 1. 开头（1–2句）：点题、书信问候/演讲开篇 2. 主体（4–6句）：按提示要点依次写，用过渡词串联 3. 结尾（1–2句）：感悟、邀请、呼吁、总结升华 Step3 连词成句（避坑核心） 1. 只用课本七下原词原句，不生造中式英语（例：不说I very like，用I like…very much） 2. 不会写的复杂表达立刻替换简单句，宁简勿错，错一句扣1分 3. 名词注意单复数，可数名词不能裸奔（a/an/the/复数） Step4 全文检查（按顺序自查，深圳学生必做） 1. 时态统一：过去事全用过去式，日常全现现在，不混用 2. 三单：he/she/it/单数主语动词+s/es 3. 拼写、大小写、标点（句首大写、句末句号） 4. 要点是否全覆盖，数字数（60–90） 5. 涂改：错词只划一条横线，严禁涂黑团 Step5 规范誊写 分段清晰，单词间距均匀，手写斜体，卷面直接拿流畅分 三、沪教版七下期末高频话题+对应解题技巧（深圳历年真题） 话题1：人物介绍 时态：一般现在时 必写要点：身份、外貌性格、日常行为、你的感受 技巧：用形容词kind/hard-working；句型He/She always…；结尾升华向他学习 过渡词：Besides, What’s more 话题2：校园生活/日常深圳（期末最常考） 时态：一般现在时 要点：作息、科目、社团、喜好、感受 技巧：按时间顺序First…Then…Finally；多用because说明喜好原因 话题3：天气与当下活动 时态：现在进行时（核心考点） 技巧：统一be doing；先写天气It’s sunny…，再写人们正在做的事，避免漏be动词 话题4：难忘的一天/户外徒步/深圳湾活动 时态：一般过去时（重中之重） 扣分重灾区：动词过去式变形（go-went, take-took, clean-cleaned） 解题技巧：提纲提前标注所有动词过去式；按时间顺序叙事，结尾写两点活动感悟 话题5：介绍深圳/城市推荐 时态：一般现在时，there be句型 要点：位置、景点、美食、活动、邀请来访 加分句：Shenzhen is a modern garden city. You can enjoy delicious seafood here. 话题6：环保/绿色校园倡议书 文体：倡议书，祈使句为主 技巧：多用We should…/We shouldn’t…；结尾呼吁It’s our duty to protect… 话题7：兴趣爱好+未来梦想 句型：I like…because…；I hope my dream will come true 四、七下万能过渡词+高分句型（直接背诵，提流畅分） 1. 逻辑连接词（每篇至少用2个） 顺序：First of all, Then, Finally 递进：What’s more, Besides, Also 因果：because, so, As a result 总结：In a word, All in all 2. 课本高分句型（沪教七下原版，阅卷加分） 1. It is + adj. for sb. to do sth. （做某事对某人很…） 2. There are two reasons why I like… （我喜欢…有两个原因） 3. When I was …, I began to … （回忆句型，过去式专用） 4. Whenever I feel tired, … cheers me up. 5. It’s our duty to do sth. 环保专用 6. I believe my dream will come true if I keep practicing. 3. 词汇升级（替换简单词，拉开分差） many → a lot of / plenty of good → wonderful / great like…very much → love…a lot help → give sb. a hand 五、深圳必考应用文格式规范（格式错直接扣1–2分） 1. 电子邮件（考最多） 开头：Dear XX, 空一行写正文（三段分开） 结尾：Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua（统一用Li Hua，不用真名） 2. 英文演讲稿/发言稿 开头：Dear teachers and friends, 结尾：That’s all. Thank you! 3. 倡议书 开头：Dear classmates, 结尾：Let’s take action together! 六、考场避坑10条（深圳学生高频丢分点） 1. 过去式动词不变形：do→did，see→saw，write→wrote（Unit7作文头号扣分点） 2. 第三人称单数漏s：He like→He likes 3. 现在进行时丢be动词：I playing→I am playing 4. 中式直译：I very happy → I am very happy 5. 名词单复数不分：many book → many books 6. 词数低于50或超100，直接降一档 7. 不分段，一整段写完，流畅分全扣 8. 大面积涂改、黑疙瘩，卷面扣分 9. 出现深圳学校、真实姓名 10. 漏写题目给出的任意一个内容要点 七、三段式通用万能模板（所有话题直接套用） 通用模板（邮件/短文） 开头 Now I’d like to talk about ______. It is an interesting part of my life. 主体（套过渡词写要点） First, ________. What’s more, ________. Besides, I often ________. 结尾 In a word, I love ______ very much. I hope I can ________ in the future. 过去式叙事专用（难忘的一天/徒步活动） 开头 I still remember a wonderful day last ______. 主体 In the morning, we went to ______. Then we ______. After that, we ______. 结尾 I learned a lot from this trip. It was truly an unforgettable experience. 环保倡议书专用 开头 Protecting our school is important for everyone. 主体 First, we should save water. What’s more, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. 结尾 It’s our duty to keep our school green. Let’s start with small things! 题型专练 1．假定你是李华，你校将于下周五在图书馆举办以“与自然和谐共处”（Living in Harmony with Nature）为主题的海报展。请给你的外国朋友Tom写一封邮件，介绍活动及你的作品，内容包括： 1. 活动时间、地点； 2. 你的海报内容及创作意图； 3. 你对这次活动的期待。 注意： 1. 80词左右（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清楚，意义连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Dear Tom, How’s everything going? I have something exciting to share with you.__________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 2．动物是人类的朋友，人与自然应该和谐共处。为守护候鸟与野生鸟类，深圳出台了《鸟类友好城市规划指引》，通过调暗灯光、改造建筑等暖心举措，为鸟儿们打造了更安全、舒适的家园。受到这份温暖的启发，我校特此举办“Protect Animals, Live with Nature”主题英语演讲活动，请你结合以上背景，写一篇演讲稿。 要点如下： 1. 简单介绍深圳保护鸟类的相关举措； 2. 列举2-3条中学生力所能及的保护动物做法； 3. 简述保护动物、善待自然的意义。 写作要求： 1. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等真实信息，否则不予评分。 参考词汇：migrant birds 候鸟; Guidelines for Bird-Friendly Urban Planning《鸟类友好城市规划指引》 Hello everyone, Shenzhen has taken great steps to protect birds____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．每年冬天，深圳湾迎来大量候鸟（如黑脸琵鹭等）。但一些游客大声喧哗、乱扔垃圾、追逐鸟类拍照，干扰了候鸟的正常栖息。假设你是李华，请你给校刊投稿一封包含以下要点的倡议信，呼吁大家保护候鸟。 1. 候鸟选择深圳湾的原因（1. 环境适宜、食物丰富；2. ……），以及保护候鸟对维持生态平衡的重要意义； 2. 人类活动对候鸟造成的具体危害（两点）； 3. 保护建议（至少两条）； 4. 号召大家行动起来，做候鸟的守护者。 注意： 1. 标点正确，书面整洁； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚，行文连贯； 4. 词数：80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 生词参考： black-faced spoonbill 黑脸琵鹭；migratory bird 候鸟；Shenzhen Bay 深圳湾；ecological balance 生态平衡；habitat 栖息地；guardian 守护者 Dear fellow students, Every winter, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4．为迎接即将在深圳召开的亚太经济合作组织会议，我校将举办英语演讲比赛，并邀请外国友人莅临现场，请你围绕“My Wonderful City—Shenzhen”的主题，写一篇演讲稿，向现场的外国友人介绍深圳。 内容要点： 1. 城市概况 2. 景点与美食 3. 科技与生活 4. 欢迎与祝愿 提示词：the APEC meeting亚太经合组织会议；rice noodle rolls肠粉 写作要求： 词数80左右，语句通顺，逻辑清晰，要点齐全，可适当发挥。 Dear friends and guests, welcome to Shenzhen! __________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 5．为增强同学们的环保意识，引导大家爱护绿色，守护家园，学校特举办以“绿色校园，低碳生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Let’s Protect the Trees”为题写一篇演讲稿。   要点：1.树木的重要性；2.如何去保护树木；3.发出号召。 要求：1.包含以上所有要点，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3.不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。    Let’s Protect the Trees Good morning, everyone,       I am so happy to stand here to express my ideas on protecting trees. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening. 6．为响应中小学春假政策，助力青少年全面健康成长，深圳各校已陆续推出丰富多彩的春假活动。你的国际交换生同学Jack对此充满期待，却不知该如何规划自己的春假行程。请你用英文为Jack提供一些建议，涵盖春假出行的目的地选择、活动安排及注意事项等内容。 要求： 1.词数为80词左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名以及学校名称； 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：spring break春假 Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you really expect your first spring break trip in Shenzhen, and I’d like to share my suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物, 关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请根据思维导图的提示信息, 以“My Favorite Animal”为题, 用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的小动物。 写作要求： （1）须包含思维导图的所有信息, 可适当拓展； （2）不少于80词； （3）不得出现真实个人信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李华。请以 “The person I admire most” 为题，写一篇演讲稿，参加学校英语俱乐部举办的英文演讲活动。 内容如下： （1）介绍你最敬佩的人是谁； （2）说明你敬佩他 / 她的原因（成就与品质）； （3）表达你从他 / 她身上学到的东西。 注意：（1）词数为 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Hello, everyone! I’m very happy to be here to give a speech. My topic is “The person I admire most”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 9．爱好是我们生活中的重要部分，每个人都有自己的爱好，你的爱好是什么呢？假如你是李华，请根据下面的思维导图，以“My Favourite Hobby”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的爱好吧！ 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） My Favourite Hobby Hobbies are important in our life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom 对中国的地貌十分感兴趣，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇题为“My favourite landscape”的短文，向他介绍一种你最喜欢的地貌(如河流，沙漠，湖泊，森林等) 提示：What is your favourite kind of landscape in China? Why do you think it is special? How should we protect this kind of landscape? 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥; 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整; 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4. 词数80词左右 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．生活中，我们身边总有热爱运动的人，他们的坚持与成长总能给我们带来启发。请你根据以下表格提示内容，以“A Sports Lover Around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍你身边一个热爱运动的同学。 Who is he/she … What sports does he/she play play badminton (羽毛球) What challenge did he/she meet took part in the school badminton match last year but lost the match How did he/she get through it asked our PE teacher for help; practiced hard; learned new skills What can you learn from him/her never give up when we face difficulties in our life 要求：1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：80词左右。（题目已给出，但不计入总词数。） A Sports Lover Around Me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假设你是李华，学校英语俱乐部将以“My Hobby with Family”为主题，举办“家庭爱好时光”英语征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，包含以下内容： 要点： 1.家庭共同爱好简介； 2.家庭共同爱好如何形成的(如一次特别经历)； 3.这个爱好对家庭关系的意义或带给你的变化。 要求： 1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名； 3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 My family’s favorite hobby is _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These moments tell us one thing: being together is the greatest joy. 13．水是我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分，地球上的一切生物都离不开水，但是世界上很多地区已经处于严重缺水的状态。请根据下面表格的提示，以“How to save water”为题，写一篇不少于80 词的英语文章，可适当发挥。 水的重要性 生物生存离不开水；水对于生产(production) 很重要。 节约用水的具体方法 关掉水龙头；使用用过的水灌溉植物。 How to save water ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．每个人都有精彩的旅游经历，哪次旅行给你留下难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你这一次难忘的旅行。 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Trip Everyone has wonderful travel experiences. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．深圳过去是个小渔村，现在，发展成为了一个闻名世界的大都市。假如你是深圳阳光中学一名七年级学生，你的学校组织了“我为深圳代言”的活动，请你以“Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit”为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇介绍深圳的文章，向来自全国各地的同学们展示深圳的魅力，要点如下： 1.深圳的地理位置和城市特点 2.气候 3.出行方式 4.深圳的美食和美景 (至少介绍两个你最喜欢的地方) 5.呼吁大家来深圳游玩 写作要求： 1）必须包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥，条理清楚，语意连贯； 2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：大梅沙Dameisha；世界之窗Window of the World；东门步行街Dongmen Walking Street；梧桐山Wutong Mountain；欢乐港湾OH Bay Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit Shenzhen used to be a small fishing village, but now ____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文： Dear Tom, How’s everything going? I have something exciting to share with you. Our school will hold a poster show with the theme “Living in Harmony with Nature” in the library next Friday. I have made a poster for it. It shows a forest with birds, rivers and happy children, to call on people to protect nature and stop pollution. I hope the show will help more students understand the importance of living peacefully with nature. Would you like to share your ideas about the theme with me? Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，介绍学校活动与个人作品，用一般将来时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：活动时间地点、海报内容及创作意图、对活动的期待 确定人称：第一人称和第二人称 注意事项：词数80左右，不得透露真实信息，格式规范 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候并引出要分享的活动 主体段：介绍海报展的时间地点、自己的海报内容及创作意图 结尾段：表达对活动的期待，并发出互动邀请 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：活动时间地点 活动：hold a poster show with the theme “Living in Harmony with Nature”/organize an exhibition about “Living in Harmony with Nature”/arrange a poster display on living peacefully with nature等 时间地点：in the library next Friday/at the school library on the coming Friday/next Friday in our school library等 要点二：海报内容及创作意图 内容：It shows a forest with birds, rivers and happy children/The poster pictures a green forest full of birds, clean rivers, and smiling children等 意图：call on people to protect nature and stop pollution/encourage people to care for the environment and reduce waste/remind everyone to live in a balanced way with the natural world等 要点三：对活动的期待 期待：help more students understand the importance of living peacefully with nature/make more students realize the value of protecting our earth/inspire everyone to take action for a greener future等 互动：Would you like to share your ideas about the theme with me?/I’d love to hear your thoughts on this topic/What do you think about living in harmony with nature?等 2．例文： Protect Animals, Live with Nature Hello everyone, Shenzhen has taken great steps to protect birds, like dimming lights and changing buildings to make homes safer for migrant birds. As students, we can also do our part. First, we can learn more about animals and tell others to love them. Second, we should never hurt wild animals or take their homes. Third, we can keep our city clean to give them a better living place. Animals are our friends. Protecting them means protecting our own home. Let’s live with nature in harmony! Let’s protect animals right now! Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：深圳保护鸟类措施，中学生力所能及的保护动物做法，阐述保护动物、善待自然的意义。 确定人称：第一人称（we） 注意事项：不得透露学校、姓名等真实信息，词数80左右，书写规范，卷面整洁。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：简要介绍深圳保护鸟类的措施 主体段：列举我们能为保护动物所做的事情 结尾段：号召大家保护动物，善待自然 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一： 深圳保护鸟类措施：has taken/great steps/protect/dim lights/change buildings/safer/for migrant birds等 我们能够做的事情：as students/can/first/second/third/learn more about/tell/love/should/never/hurt wild animals/keep our city clean/better/living place等 要点二： 号召大家保护动物：animals/friends/protect/our own home/Let’s/live with nature/harmony等 3．例文： Dear fellow students, Every winter, Shenzhen Bay attracts many migratory birds like black-faced spoonbills because of its suitable environment and plenty of food. Protecting them helps keep ecological balance. However, some visitors make loud noises, throw rubbish, and chase the birds. As a result, the birds get frightened and cannot rest. Worse still, they may eat plastic waste and die. Therefore, we should always keep quiet and keep a safe distance. Also, take away our rubbish and never feed the birds. In short, let’s be the guardians of these lovely birds together. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（倡议信/投稿），用一般现在时为主 明确要点：候鸟选择深圳湾的原因（环境适宜/食物丰富等）、保护候鸟对维持生态平衡的重要意义、人类活动对候鸟造成的具体危害（大声喧哗/乱扔垃圾/追逐拍照/吃塑料垃圾死亡等）、保护建议（保持安静/保持安全距离/带走垃圾/不喂食等）、号召大家行动起来（做候鸟的守护者等） 确定人称：第一人称（we/our）和第二人称（you） 注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题（每年冬天深圳湾迎来大量候鸟及其原因/保护候鸟对生态平衡的重要意义等） 主体段：分两个层次展开（人类活动对候鸟造成的具体危害/保护候鸟的具体建议等） 结尾段：号召大家行动起来，做候鸟的守护者 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：候鸟选择深圳湾的原因及保护意义 环境原因：suitable environment/plenty of food/warm weather in winter/rich wetland resources等 保护意义：helps keep ecological balance/maintains biodiversity/protects the natural chain等 要点二：人类活动对候鸟造成的危害 行为描述：make loud noises/throw rubbish/chase the birds/feed them unhealthy food/use flash when taking photos等 危害结果：birds get frightened and cannot rest/may eat plastic waste and die/lose their natural habitat/change their migration patterns等 要点三：保护建议 行为规范：keep quiet/keep a safe distance/take away our rubbish/never feed the birds/avoid using camera flash等 要点四：号召与呼吁 核心观点：let’s be the guardians of these lovely birds/together we can make a difference/protect birds is to protect ourselves等 4．例文： Dear friends and guests, welcome to Shenzhen! It’s my great honor to stand here and introduce my city, Shenzhen, to all of you, as the APEC meeting will be held here. Located in southern China, it’s a modern open coastal city with a lively and warm atmosphere. You can visit Window of the World to experience colorful cultures from around the world and taste delicious local food such as traditional rice noodle rolls. Besides, its fast-developing science and technology greatly improve the quality of life and makes daily life convenient. Welcome to Shenzhen, where you’ll enjoy a wonderful stay. Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：城市概况、景点与美食、科技与生活、欢迎与祝福 确定人称：第一人称(I/we) 注意事项：语言礼貌得体，符合正式演讲稿的表达规范，传递积极友好的城市形象 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：礼貌问候，点明演讲背景与目的 主体段：分点介绍深圳的城市定位、景点与美食、科技与生活 结尾段：再次表达诚挚欢迎，送上美好祝愿并致谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：城市概况介绍 定位描述：a modern open coastal city/a young and vibrant metropolis/an innovative tech hub/a lively international city等 位置说明：Located in southern China/ Situated in the Pearl River Delta/ Lying in the coastal area of Guangdong/ In the south of China等 氛围特点：with a lively and warm atmosphere/with an inclusive and friendly vibe/with a mix of traditional and modern charm/with a fast-paced yet welcoming energy等 要点二：景点与美食 景点选择：visit Window of the World/explore coastal parks/visit cultural museums/enjoy theme parks等 美食体验：taste delicious local food such as traditional rice noodle rolls/try Cantonese dim sum/enjoy fresh seafood/taste local street snacks等 要点三：科技与生活 发展优势：fast-developing science and technology/advanced digital services/innovative tech industries/booming cultural tourism等 积极影响：greatly improves the quality of life and makes daily life convenient/boosts local development/brings convenience to residents/makes the city more livable等 要点四：欢迎与祝愿 欢迎表达：Welcome to Shenzhen/We are glad to have you here/You are warmly invited to explore the city等 美好祝愿：you’ll enjoy a wonderful stay/many pleasant surprises are waiting for you/hope you have a great time/wish you a pleasant visit等 5．例文： Let’s Protect the Trees Good morning, everyone, I am so happy to stand here to express my ideas on protecting trees. As we know, trees are very important to humans. First of all, trees take in CO2 and give off oxygen for us to breathe, so we can’t live without them. In addition, trees can beautify our environment. What’s more, trees are useful for making paper, furniture, houses and so on. So, for the future of the Earth and humans, we must try our best to protect trees. Don’t cut down too many trees. Also, we must plant as many trees as possible. Only in these ways can we live happily in the beautiful world. That’s all. Thank you for your listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：树木的重要性、如何保护树木、发出号召 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数，词数不少于80 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候语+表达开心心情，引出主题“保护树木” 主体段：第一层阐述树木的重要性；第二层说明保护树木的具体做法 结尾段：发出号召，呼吁大家行动起来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：树木的重要性 作用列举：take in CO2 and give off oxygen/provide us with oxygen/make our environment beautiful/provide habitats for animals/prevent soil erosion/provide wood for paper, furniture, houses等 连接词：First of all/In addition/What’s more/Besides等 要点二：如何去保护树木 做法选择：Don’t cut down too many trees/plant as many trees as possible/stop people from cutting trees carelessly/water young trees regularly/say no to using too much paper/join tree-planting activities等 要点三：发出号召 号召用语：For the future of the Earth and humans/Let’s take action together/Only in these ways can we live happily in a beautiful world/Everyone can make a difference等 6．例文： Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you really expect your first spring break trip in Shenzhen, and I’d like to share my suggestions. When it comes to destinations, you can go to Shenzhen Bay, where you can enjoy the beautiful spring scenery and watch different kinds of birds flying freely. Besides, Shenzhen Science and Technology Museum is also a good choice. What’s more, joining community activities is a perfect way for you to experience local culture deeply. It’s necessary for you to remember to take enough water and wear comfortable shoes when going out. In addition, you should follow the public rules and keep yourself safe at all times. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：建议信（Letter of Advice），属于应用文范畴。 明确要点： 目的地选择：推荐具体的地点（如深圳湾、博物馆等）。 活动安排：在该地点可以进行的具体活动（如观鸟、参观展览、体验民俗等）。 注意事项：出行时的安全与生活贴士（如带水、穿鞋、遵守规则等）。 确定人称：第二人称（You）为主，第一人称（I）为辅。 确定时态：一般现在时为主，将来时为辅。 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名及学校名称；词数80左右；开头已给出。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出（表达得知对方期待春假旅行的喜悦，并引出建议）。 主体段： 层次一（目的地与活动）：推荐自然景观（深圳湾）和人文场所（科技馆/社区活动），并描述具体体验。 层次二（注意事项）：提出具体的出行准备和安全建议。 结尾段：表达美好祝愿（Hope you have an unforgettable vacation）。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：目的地与活动 自然景观：Shenzhen Bay/enjoy spring scenery/watch birds flying等 人文科技：Science and Technology Museum/learn new things等 文化体验：Community activities/making green rice cakes/experience local culture等 要点二：注意事项 物品准备：take enough water/wear comfortable shoes等 行为规范：follow public rules/keep safe等 7．例文： My Favorite Animal Animals play an important role in our lives. My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are black and white. They have fat bodies, round faces and big black eyes. They look very cute and funny. I like them best because they are not only lovely but also friendly to people. They are a symbol of peace. However, pandas are in danger now. We must do something to help them. First, we should protect their living environment and plant more bamboo. Second, we shouldn’t cut down trees. Finally, we can make rules to stop people from killing them. Let’s work together to protect animals. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]    1. 确定文体：介绍性说明文，全文以一般现在时为主。 2. 明确要点：核心介绍对象：最喜欢的动物（熊猫）、外貌特征、喜欢它的理由、动物现状、我们能为动物做的保护行动 3. 确定人称：第一人称 I/my 4. 注意事项:不得透露任何真实个人、学校信息。        [第二步：构思布局] 1. 开头段：总起句开篇，点明动物的重要性+直接亮出自己最喜欢的动物。 2. 主体段：分层展开描写熊猫的外貌外形 ，阐述喜爱熊猫的具体原因，说明濒危现状+分点给出具体保护做法 3. 结尾段：总结升华，发出保护动物的倡议，升华文章主题        [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：动物外貌与特点。 外形描述： black and white/fat bodies/round faces and big black eyes 整体观感：look very cute and funny 要点二：喜爱的原因：lovely/friendly to people/symbol of peace 要点三：行动与升华。 现存问题：are in danger now 分点行动：protect living environment, plant more bamboo/shouldn’t cut down trees/make rules to stop killing 结尾升华：Let’s work together to protect animals. 8．例文： Hello, everyone! I’m very happy to be here to give a speech. My topic is “The person I admire most”. The person I admire most is Yuan Longping, a world-famous great scientist. He spent his entire whole life developing high-yield hybrid rice to feed more people in the world. He was hard-working and never gave up even in difficulties. Thanks to his great work, many people in developing countries no longer go hungry. I learn from him that we should keep working hard to help others in need. I hope I can be a useful person like him in the near future. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文演讲稿，用一般现在 /一般过去时为主 明确要点：介绍最敬佩的人、说明敬佩原因（成就与品质）、表达从他/她身上学到的东西 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数80—100词，开头结尾已给出不计入总词数；可适当增加细节；不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，点明演讲主题 主体段：分别介绍敬佩的人、阐述敬佩原因、表达学到的内容 结尾段：已给出，致谢听众 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍最敬佩的人 人物选择：Yuan Longping/my mother/my teacher/my father等 身份描述：a great scientist/a kind mother/a patient teacher等 要点二：敬佩的原因（成就与品质） 成就说明：develop hybrid rice/help poor students/work hard on lessons等 品质体现：hard-working/kind/patient/never give up等 影响效果：feed more people/help others make progress/change many lives等 要点三：学到的东西 精神感悟：keep working hard/never give up/help others等 未来期望：be a person like him/her/make contributions to the world等 9．例文： My Favourite Hobby Hobbies are important in our life. I have many hobbies, such as reading, writing and painting. And my favourite hobby is writing. When I was 8 years old, I started to write some short stories. My teacher said it was really good. She encouraged me to try harder. I joined a summer camp that year and I learned some writing skills there. From then on, I loved writing so much. I wrote about my daily life and my dreams. Also, I won many prizes for my writing. Now, I practise writing every day and hope to become a famous writer one day. I feel really happy because writing has brought me pleasure and success. I love writing so much. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：描述你最喜爱的爱好是什么、何时形成、怎样形成以及原因 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：须包括所有内容要点，不得提及真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：介绍最喜爱的爱好 主体段：介绍形成爱好的过程 结尾段：解释原因，表达感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍爱好 不同的爱好：reading/writing/painting/dancing/singing等 要点二：介绍形成爱好的经历 开始：When I was 8 years old, I started to write some short stories./I started to draw pictures when I was six.等 如何形成爱好：encourage/join a camp/learn/take part in a competition/practise/wanted to draw by myself等 要点三：解释喜欢的原因 爱好的优点或特点：feel happy/bring me pleasure and success/learn much knowledge等 10． 例文 My Favourite Landscape My favourite landscape in China is the river. Rivers are mighty and provide us with fresh water. They also create beautiful natural scenery along their banks. I think rivers are special because they are essential to all life. They help plants grow and give warm homes to many wild animals. To protect rivers, we should not throw rubbish into them. We must save water in daily life. Joining local clean-up activities is also a good way. Let’s work together to keep our rivers clean! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：点明喜爱的地貌类型，介绍地貌特点价值，讲述地貌保护方法 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、学校及地名信息，作文词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：直接点明自己最喜欢的地貌 主体段：介绍地貌外形特点与存在价值 结尾段：讲述保护方式，发出爱护自然号召 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：点明最喜爱的地貌类型 地貌选择：river/forest/lake/desert/mountain/landscape/landform/scenery等 要点二：阐述地貌的特殊性 特点描述：mighty/beautiful/natural/winding/essential/wild/habitat/nourish等 价值说明：provide us with fresh water/create beautiful natural scenery/essential to all life/help plants grow/give homes to animals等 要点三：说明地貌的保护方式 保护措施：not throw rubbish into them/save water in daily life/join local clean-up activities/work together/protect/save/clean-up/activity/pollution等 11．例文： A Sports Lover Around Me Li Hua is a sports lover in my class. He enjoys playing badminton. Last year, he took part in the school badminton match but lost it. He didn’t give up. He asked our PE teacher for help, practiced hard and learned new skills. Now he plays much better. From him, I learn that we should never give up when we face difficulties. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：介绍你身边一个热爱运动的同学，包括他/她是谁、做什么运动、遇到的挑战及如何克服、你从他/她身上学到什么等 确定人称： 第一人称和第三人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出身边热爱运动的同学是谁 主体段： 介绍他/她是谁、做什么运动、遇到的挑战及如何克服、你从中得到的启示等 结尾段：你从他/她身上学到什么 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：身边的运动爱好者 是谁：Li Hua/my classmate等 做什么运动：play badminton 遇到的挑战：took part in the school badminton match last year but lost the match 如何克服：asked our PE teacher for help/practiced hard/learned new skills 要点二：给你的启示 启示：never give up when we face difficulties/overcome bravely 12．例文： My family’s favorite hobby is gardening. Every Sunday, we plant vegetables in our balcony garden. Last spring, Mom brought home tomato seeds. Excited, we all helped to plant them in pots and water the seeds. Soon, small green plants grew! Now, we work together: Dad sets up sticks for the plants, I draw pictures of their growth, and Mom picks the tomatoes. We laugh and get dirty together. Most importantly, we learned patience—waiting months to taste tomatoes feels like winning a prize! These moments tell us one thing: being together is the greatest joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍家庭共同爱好； 第二步，介绍关于家庭爱好的一次特别经历； 第三步，描述家庭爱好的教育意义。 [亮点词汇] ①balcony garden阳台花园 ②win a prize获奖 [高分句型] ①We laugh and get dirty together.（and连接的并列结构） 13．例文： How to save water We all know living things on the Earth cannot live without water. Water is very important to production. So it is very valuable. But how should we save water in our daily life? First, turn off the tap when you don’t use water. For example, when you're brushing your teeth, you can turn off the tap. Next, use the used water to water plants. It can not only help save water but also be good for plants. Finally, have a shower instead of a bath because having a bath usually wastes a lot of water. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 ［写作步骤］​ 第一步，开头通过说明水对生物和生产的重要性，强调其珍贵性，引出日常生活中如何节约用水这一核心话题，为下文介绍具体方法做铺垫。​ 第二步，依次介绍日常生活中节约用水的三种方法，每种方法都结合具体场景或原因进行说明。​ ［亮点词汇］​ ①living things 生物​ ②on the earth 地球上​ ③have a bath 泡澡​ ④instead of 代替​​​ ［高分句型］ ①We all know living things on the Earth cannot live without water.（宾语从句） ②For example, when you’re brushing your teeth, you can turn off the tap.（when引导的时间状语从句） 14．例文： An Unforgettable Trip Everyone has wonderful travel experiences. I will never forget my trip to Harbin last winter. The city was full of white snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun playing snowballs and making snowmen in the beautiful ice world. We also enjoyed delicious local food. What’s more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works. This trip was not only exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my family. I really loved Harbin! 【详解】写作步骤           [第一步：审题立意]           确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主           明确要点：旅行的时间、地点、活动、感受与收获 确定人称：第一人称(I/My/We) 注意事项：不得透露真实个人信息，词数不少于50，开头已给出，不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局]           三段式结构：           开头段：承接题目给出的开头句，点明这次难忘的旅行是去年冬天去哈尔滨 主体段：描述具体的旅行活动 结尾段：描述旅行的感受和收获 [第三步：要点展开]           要点一：旅行的时间与地点 时间与地点：my trip to Harbin last winter/during the Spring Festival holiday/a city famous for its ice and snow等      要点二：旅行活动 活动：playing snowballs and making snowmen/enjoyed delicious local food/took lots of photos/visit the Ice and Snow World等      要点三：旅行感受与收获 感受与收获：exciting/the importance of spending time with my family/strengthen the bond with my family/look forward to coming back again等 15．例文： Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit  Shenzhen used to be a small fishing village, but now it’s a world-famous city.      It’s in the south of China and very modern. The climate is nice. It’s warm in spring, hot in summer, cool in autumn and not too cold in winter, so you can visit anytime. Traveling is easy. You can take the subway, which is fast. Buses are good too.      There are great foods and sights. Window of the World is a place where you can see small-sized world wonders. Dameisha is a beach where you can play in the sea. Wutong Mountain is a place where you can enjoy beautiful city views from the top. When it comes to food, you can’t miss the delicious seafood in local restaurants.     Come to Shenzhen! You’ll love it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：介绍深圳，向来自全国各地的同学们展示深圳的魅力，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明深圳现在和过去的改变，引出下文； 第二步，介绍深圳的地理位置和城市特点以及气候，出行方式，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第三步，介绍深圳的美食和美景，注意细节充分，三观正确； 第四步，呼吁大家来深圳游玩。 [亮点词汇] ①in the south of… 在……南方 ②city views 城市景色 ③when it comes to… 当谈到……时 [高分句型] ①Window of the World is a place where you can see small-sized world wonders.（定语从句） ②You can take the subway, which is fast.（定语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 【期末备考】2025-2026学年七年级英语下学期期末复习满分冲刺（沪教版深圳专用） 专题06书面表达15篇（提分策略+题型专练） 提分策略 一、深圳本地阅卷评分标准（满分15分，期末统考通用） 档位划分 1. 一档13–15分（高分）：全部要点覆盖、时态无错、句型多样、过渡自然、词数60–90、卷面干净 2. 二档10–12分（稳分）：要点齐全，少量拼写/三单小错，句式单一，轻微涂改 3. 三档6–9分（失分档）：缺1–2个要点，时态混用，错误较多，词数不足50 4. 0–5分：跑题、要点大量缺失、几乎无法读懂 三大扣分核心（深圳阅卷重点抓） 1. 内容分（6分）：漏一个要点直接扣2分，必须逐条覆盖提示信息 2. 语言分（6分）：三单漏s、时态混用、单词拼写、中式英语、主谓一致高频扣分 3. 流畅卷面分（3分）：不分段、无连接词、大面积涂黑、字数超标/过少直接降档 硬性规则：禁止出现真实校名、人名、深圳具体校区；词数控制60–90词最佳 二、考场标准五步解题法（2分钟审题+8分钟写作+2分钟检查） Step1 审题圈画（杜绝跑题、漏点） 必圈4类关键词： 1. 文体：邮件/演讲稿/倡议书/记叙文（深圳期末高频：邮件、校园发言稿） 2. 时态（沪教七下三大必考时态） 一般现在时：日常、爱好、校规、介绍深圳、人物（Unit1-4） 现在进行时：当下场景、天气活动（Unit5-6） 一般过去时：难忘一天、出游、往事（Unit7，期末必考） 3. 人称：一/二/三人称，第三人称单数动词必须加s 4. 要点：数字标注1、2、3，写作全部写到，可小幅拓展，不额外加无关内容 Step2 列极简提纲（三段式万能框架，深圳阅卷最爱） 1. 开头（1–2句）：点题、书信问候/演讲开篇 2. 主体（4–6句）：按提示要点依次写，用过渡词串联 3. 结尾（1–2句）：感悟、邀请、呼吁、总结升华 Step3 连词成句（避坑核心） 1. 只用课本七下原词原句，不生造中式英语（例：不说I very like，用I like…very much） 2. 不会写的复杂表达立刻替换简单句，宁简勿错，错一句扣1分 3. 名词注意单复数，可数名词不能裸奔（a/an/the/复数） Step4 全文检查（按顺序自查，深圳学生必做） 1. 时态统一：过去事全用过去式，日常全现现在，不混用 2. 三单：he/she/it/单数主语动词+s/es 3. 拼写、大小写、标点（句首大写、句末句号） 4. 要点是否全覆盖，数字数（60–90） 5. 涂改：错词只划一条横线，严禁涂黑团 Step5 规范誊写 分段清晰，单词间距均匀，手写斜体，卷面直接拿流畅分 三、沪教版七下期末高频话题+对应解题技巧（深圳历年真题） 话题1：人物介绍 时态：一般现在时 必写要点：身份、外貌性格、日常行为、你的感受 技巧：用形容词kind/hard-working；句型He/She always…；结尾升华向他学习 过渡词：Besides, What’s more 话题2：校园生活/日常深圳（期末最常考） 时态：一般现在时 要点：作息、科目、社团、喜好、感受 技巧：按时间顺序First…Then…Finally；多用because说明喜好原因 话题3：天气与当下活动 时态：现在进行时（核心考点） 技巧：统一be doing；先写天气It’s sunny…，再写人们正在做的事，避免漏be动词 话题4：难忘的一天/户外徒步/深圳湾活动 时态：一般过去时（重中之重） 扣分重灾区：动词过去式变形（go-went, take-took, clean-cleaned） 解题技巧：提纲提前标注所有动词过去式；按时间顺序叙事，结尾写两点活动感悟 话题5：介绍深圳/城市推荐 时态：一般现在时，there be句型 要点：位置、景点、美食、活动、邀请来访 加分句：Shenzhen is a modern garden city. You can enjoy delicious seafood here. 话题6：环保/绿色校园倡议书 文体：倡议书，祈使句为主 技巧：多用We should…/We shouldn’t…；结尾呼吁It’s our duty to protect… 话题7：兴趣爱好+未来梦想 句型：I like…because…；I hope my dream will come true 四、七下万能过渡词+高分句型（直接背诵，提流畅分） 1. 逻辑连接词（每篇至少用2个） 顺序：First of all, Then, Finally 递进：What’s more, Besides, Also 因果：because, so, As a result 总结：In a word, All in all 2. 课本高分句型（沪教七下原版，阅卷加分） 1. It is + adj. for sb. to do sth. （做某事对某人很…） 2. There are two reasons why I like… （我喜欢…有两个原因） 3. When I was …, I began to … （回忆句型，过去式专用） 4. Whenever I feel tired, … cheers me up. 5. It’s our duty to do sth. 环保专用 6. I believe my dream will come true if I keep practicing. 3. 词汇升级（替换简单词，拉开分差） many → a lot of / plenty of good → wonderful / great like…very much → love…a lot help → give sb. a hand 五、深圳必考应用文格式规范（格式错直接扣1–2分） 1. 电子邮件（考最多） 开头：Dear XX, 空一行写正文（三段分开） 结尾：Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua（统一用Li Hua，不用真名） 2. 英文演讲稿/发言稿 开头：Dear teachers and friends, 结尾：That’s all. Thank you! 3. 倡议书 开头：Dear classmates, 结尾：Let’s take action together! 六、考场避坑10条（深圳学生高频丢分点） 1. 过去式动词不变形：do→did，see→saw，write→wrote（Unit7作文头号扣分点） 2. 第三人称单数漏s：He like→He likes 3. 现在进行时丢be动词：I playing→I am playing 4. 中式直译：I very happy → I am very happy 5. 名词单复数不分：many book → many books 6. 词数低于50或超100，直接降一档 7. 不分段，一整段写完，流畅分全扣 8. 大面积涂改、黑疙瘩，卷面扣分 9. 出现深圳学校、真实姓名 10. 漏写题目给出的任意一个内容要点 七、三段式通用万能模板（所有话题直接套用） 通用模板（邮件/短文） 开头 Now I’d like to talk about ______. It is an interesting part of my life. 主体（套过渡词写要点） First, ________. What’s more, ________. Besides, I often ________. 结尾 In a word, I love ______ very much. I hope I can ________ in the future. 过去式叙事专用（难忘的一天/徒步活动） 开头 I still remember a wonderful day last ______. 主体 In the morning, we went to ______. Then we ______. After that, we ______. 结尾 I learned a lot from this trip. It was truly an unforgettable experience. 环保倡议书专用 开头 Protecting our school is important for everyone. 主体 First, we should save water. What’s more, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. 结尾 It’s our duty to keep our school green. Let’s start with small things! 题型专练 1．假定你是李华，你校将于下周五在图书馆举办以“与自然和谐共处”（Living in Harmony with Nature）为主题的海报展。请给你的外国朋友Tom写一封邮件，介绍活动及你的作品，内容包括： 1. 活动时间、地点； 2. 你的海报内容及创作意图； 3. 你对这次活动的期待。 注意： 1. 80词左右（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清楚，意义连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Dear Tom, How’s everything going? I have something exciting to share with you.__________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 2．动物是人类的朋友，人与自然应该和谐共处。为守护候鸟与野生鸟类，深圳出台了《鸟类友好城市规划指引》，通过调暗灯光、改造建筑等暖心举措，为鸟儿们打造了更安全、舒适的家园。受到这份温暖的启发，我校特此举办“Protect Animals, Live with Nature”主题英语演讲活动，请你结合以上背景，写一篇演讲稿。 要点如下： 1. 简单介绍深圳保护鸟类的相关举措； 2. 列举2-3条中学生力所能及的保护动物做法； 3. 简述保护动物、善待自然的意义。 写作要求： 1. 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等真实信息，否则不予评分。 参考词汇：migrant birds 候鸟; Guidelines for Bird-Friendly Urban Planning《鸟类友好城市规划指引》 Hello everyone, Shenzhen has taken great steps to protect birds____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．每年冬天，深圳湾迎来大量候鸟（如黑脸琵鹭等）。但一些游客大声喧哗、乱扔垃圾、追逐鸟类拍照，干扰了候鸟的正常栖息。假设你是李华，请你给校刊投稿一封包含以下要点的倡议信，呼吁大家保护候鸟。 1. 候鸟选择深圳湾的原因（1. 环境适宜、食物丰富；2. ……），以及保护候鸟对维持生态平衡的重要意义； 2. 人类活动对候鸟造成的具体危害（两点）； 3. 保护建议（至少两条）； 4. 号召大家行动起来，做候鸟的守护者。 注意： 1. 标点正确，书面整洁； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚，行文连贯； 4. 词数：80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 生词参考： black-faced spoonbill 黑脸琵鹭；migratory bird 候鸟；Shenzhen Bay 深圳湾；ecological balance 生态平衡；habitat 栖息地；guardian 守护者 Dear fellow students, Every winter, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4．为迎接即将在深圳召开的亚太经济合作组织会议，我校将举办英语演讲比赛，并邀请外国友人莅临现场，请你围绕“My Wonderful City—Shenzhen”的主题，写一篇演讲稿，向现场的外国友人介绍深圳。 内容要点： 1. 城市概况 2. 景点与美食 3. 科技与生活 4. 欢迎与祝愿 提示词：the APEC meeting亚太经合组织会议；rice noodle rolls肠粉 写作要求： 词数80左右，语句通顺，逻辑清晰，要点齐全，可适当发挥。 Dear friends and guests, welcome to Shenzhen! __________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 5．为增强同学们的环保意识，引导大家爱护绿色，守护家园，学校特举办以“绿色校园，低碳生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Let’s Protect the Trees”为题写一篇演讲稿。   要点：1.树木的重要性；2.如何去保护树木；3.发出号召。 要求：1.包含以上所有要点，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3.不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。    Let’s Protect the Trees Good morning, everyone,       I am so happy to stand here to express my ideas on protecting trees. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening. 6．为响应中小学春假政策，助力青少年全面健康成长，深圳各校已陆续推出丰富多彩的春假活动。你的国际交换生同学Jack对此充满期待，却不知该如何规划自己的春假行程。请你用英文为Jack提供一些建议，涵盖春假出行的目的地选择、活动安排及注意事项等内容。 要求： 1.词数为80词左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名以及学校名称； 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：spring break春假 Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you really expect your first spring break trip in Shenzhen, and I’d like to share my suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物, 关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请根据思维导图的提示信息, 以“My Favorite Animal”为题, 用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的小动物。 写作要求： （1）须包含思维导图的所有信息, 可适当拓展； （2）不少于80词； （3）不得出现真实个人信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李华。请以 “The person I admire most” 为题，写一篇演讲稿，参加学校英语俱乐部举办的英文演讲活动。 内容如下： （1）介绍你最敬佩的人是谁； （2）说明你敬佩他 / 她的原因（成就与品质）； （3）表达你从他 / 她身上学到的东西。 注意：（1）词数为 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Hello, everyone! I’m very happy to be here to give a speech. My topic is “The person I admire most”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 9．爱好是我们生活中的重要部分，每个人都有自己的爱好，你的爱好是什么呢？假如你是李华，请根据下面的思维导图，以“My Favourite Hobby”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的爱好吧！ 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） My Favourite Hobby Hobbies are important in our life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom 对中国的地貌十分感兴趣，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇题为“My favourite landscape”的短文，向他介绍一种你最喜欢的地貌(如河流，沙漠，湖泊，森林等) 提示：What is your favourite kind of landscape in China? Why do you think it is special? How should we protect this kind of landscape? 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥; 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整; 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4. 词数80词左右 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．生活中，我们身边总有热爱运动的人，他们的坚持与成长总能给我们带来启发。请你根据以下表格提示内容，以“A Sports Lover Around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍你身边一个热爱运动的同学。 Who is he/she … What sports does he/she play play badminton (羽毛球) What challenge did he/she meet took part in the school badminton match last year but lost the match How did he/she get through it asked our PE teacher for help; practiced hard; learned new skills What can you learn from him/her never give up when we face difficulties in our life 要求：1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：80词左右。（题目已给出，但不计入总词数。） A Sports Lover Around Me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假设你是李华，学校英语俱乐部将以“My Hobby with Family”为主题，举办“家庭爱好时光”英语征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，包含以下内容： 要点： 1.家庭共同爱好简介； 2.家庭共同爱好如何形成的(如一次特别经历)； 3.这个爱好对家庭关系的意义或带给你的变化。 要求： 1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名； 3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 My family’s favorite hobby is _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These moments tell us one thing: being together is the greatest joy. 13．水是我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分，地球上的一切生物都离不开水，但是世界上很多地区已经处于严重缺水的状态。请根据下面表格的提示，以“How to save water”为题，写一篇不少于80 词的英语文章，可适当发挥。 水的重要性 生物生存离不开水；水对于生产(production) 很重要。 节约用水的具体方法 关掉水龙头；使用用过的水灌溉植物。 How to save water ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．每个人都有精彩的旅游经历，哪次旅行给你留下难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你这一次难忘的旅行。 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息； 4. 词数：不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 An Unforgettable Trip Everyone has wonderful travel experiences. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．深圳过去是个小渔村，现在，发展成为了一个闻名世界的大都市。假如你是深圳阳光中学一名七年级学生，你的学校组织了“我为深圳代言”的活动，请你以“Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit”为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇介绍深圳的文章，向来自全国各地的同学们展示深圳的魅力，要点如下： 1.深圳的地理位置和城市特点 2.气候 3.出行方式 4.深圳的美食和美景 (至少介绍两个你最喜欢的地方) 5.呼吁大家来深圳游玩 写作要求： 1）必须包含以上所有提示内容，可适当发挥，条理清楚，语意连贯； 2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：大梅沙Dameisha；世界之窗Window of the World；东门步行街Dongmen Walking Street；梧桐山Wutong Mountain；欢乐港湾OH Bay Shenzhen, a wonderful place to visit Shenzhen used to be a small fishing village, but now ____________________________________ 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