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该高中英语导学案聚焦读后续写中的独立主格结构，涵盖逻辑主语+现在分词、过去分词、介词短语/形容词/副词三种类型。通过定义解析、例句示范、基础练习搭建学习支架，衔接单句训练与微段落写作，为综合运用奠定基础。 资料以分层训练为特色，从句型练习到范文赏析再到情景实战写作，逐步提升学生语言表达能力。真实情景任务（如与父亲和解等）激发思维，参考答案助力自主学习，有效培养语言能力和学习能力，适合读后续写专项提升。

高二校本资料 英语大课间小练 读后续写句式与微段落训练（六）独立主格结构 句型一：独立主格结构（逻辑主语 + 现在分词） 结构： 名词/代词 + doing（表主动、进行或伴随） Her voice trembling with emotion, she finally uttered the words “I forgive you.” （她的声音因激动而颤抖，终于说出了那句“我原谅你了”。） His hands shaking uncontrollably, he opened the letter from his long-lost friend. （他的双手止不住地颤抖着，打开了那位久别朋友的信。） The sun setting in the west, they walked side by side along the lake, talking about everything. （夕阳西下，他们并肩沿着湖边走着，无所不谈。） 练习： 他站在那里，双腿因紧张而发抖。 He stood there, ____________________________________with nervousness. 她的双眼噙满泪水，她轻声说道：“对不起。” ____________________________________， she whispered, “I'm sorry.” 夜越来越深，他们依然坐在客厅里，谁也不愿先离开。 ____________________________________， they still sat in the living room, neither willing to leave first. 整句翻译：夕阳的余晖洒在两人身上，他们终于相视而笑。 ———————————————————————————————————————— 句型二：独立主格结构（逻辑主语 + 过去分词） 结构： 名词/代词 + done（表被动或已完成的状态） His pride completely shattered, he knelt down and begged for her forgiveness. （自尊心彻底粉碎，他跪下来乞求她的原谅。） All misunderstandings cleared up, they hugged each other tightly and laughed. （所有误解都消除之后，他们紧紧拥抱，开怀大笑。） Her heart broken into pieces, she walked away without looking back. （心碎成一片一片，她头也不回地走开了。） 练习： 所有问题都解决了，他们终于松了一口气。 ____________________________________， they finally breathed a sigh of relief. 他站在那里，尊严被彻底击垮了。 He stood there, ___________________________________. 所有的怨恨都烟消云散，他们再次成为了最好的朋友。 ____________________________________， they became best friends again. 整句翻译：误会消除之后，两人之间只剩下了深深的理解和感恩。 ———————————————————————————————————————— 句型三：独立主格结构（逻辑主语 + 介词短语/形容词/副词） 结构： 名词/代词 + 介词短语 / adj. / adv.（表伴随状态或补充说明） His head down and ears burning red, he admitted his mistake in a low voice. （低着头，耳朵红得发烫，他低声承认了自己的错误。） Her heart full of regret, she stared at the old photo for a long time. （心中充满悔恨，她盯着那张旧照片看了很久。） The two brothers side by side, they watched the sunrise and promised never to fight again. （两兄弟并肩而立，看着日出，承诺再也不争吵了。） 练习： 他站在那里，内心充满了愧疚。 He stood there, ___________________________________. 两人面对面坐着，谁也没说话，但都红了眼眶。 ____________________________________， neither of them spoke, but both had red-rimmed eyes. 她靠在窗边，眼睛因彻夜未眠而红肿。 She leaned by the window, ___________________________________. 整句翻译：他手中紧握着那封信，心中百感交集，说不出话来。 ———————————————————————————————————————— 微段落写作（抄写并欣赏优秀范文） 范文一（湖边的重逢）： The moon rising quietly above the lake, I spotted my old friend sitting alone on the bench. His shoulders drooping with exhaustion, he looked like he hadn't slept for days. I walked over and sat beside him, my heart pounding with mixed emotions. He turned to me, his eyes red and swollen, and whispered, “I missed you so much.” The cold wind blowing through our hair, we sat there in silence, but everything was understood between us. 月亮静静地升上湖面，我看见我的老朋友独自坐在长椅上。他的肩膀因疲惫而耷拉着，看上去像几天没睡过觉。我走过去坐在他旁边，心因复杂的情绪而狂跳。他转向我，双眼红肿，轻声说道：“我好想你。”冷风吹过我们的发梢，我们静静地坐在那里，但彼此之间一切都已心照不宣。 ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— 范文二（地铁站里的告别）： The train slowly pulling into the station, we knew the moment of parting had come. Her suitcase packed and ready, she hugged me one last time. Tears streaming down her face, she said, “I'll always remember you.” My voice choked with emotion, I could only nod and wave goodbye. The doors closing between us, she smiled through her tears, and I knew our friendship would never truly end. 火车缓缓驶入站台，我们知道离别的时刻到了。她的行李箱已经打包好，她最后一次拥抱了我。泪水顺着她的脸颊流下，她说：“我会永远记得你。”我的声音因激动而哽咽，只能点头挥手告别。车门在我们之间关上，她含泪微笑，我知道我们的友谊永远不会真正结束。 ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— 实战写作（微情景，综合运用三种句型） 请根据以下三个微情景，各写一段 50-70 词的读后续写片段，每段必须同时运用本课所学的三种独立主格结构（逻辑主语+现在分词、+过去分词、+介词短语/形容词/副词）。 微情景一：与父亲在书房的和解 你和父亲因为志愿填报大吵一架，冷战了整整一周。周末晚上你走进书房，发现他正戴着老花镜，仔细看着你带回家的招生简章，旁边放着为你削好的苹果。你走过去…… ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— 微情景二：与闺蜜在海边的倾诉 你和最好的闺蜜因为一个男生吵架，几个月没有说话。假期在海边偶遇，她独自坐在沙滩上，望着远处的海平线。你犹豫了一下，还是走了过去，在她身边坐下…… ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— 微情景三：与班长在教室的冰释前嫌 你和班长因为班级活动策划意见不合，在班会上争执不下，之后一直很尴尬。傍晚放学后，你回教室拿东西，发现他正在黑板前重新写着策划方案，字迹工工整整。你站在门口…… ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————————————————— 【参考答案】 句型一答案： his legs trembling Her eyes filled with tears（此题也可用with复合结构，但本课重点为独立主格，故采用逻辑主语+过去分词；此处用Her eyes brimming with tears同样正确） The night getting deeper and deeper The last rays of the setting sun shining upon them, they finally smiled at each other. （注：本句型强调逻辑主语+现在分词，第2题也可写为 Her eyes brimming with tears） 句型二答案： All problems solved his dignity completely destroyed / his pride completely crushed All resentment gone / All resentment vanished Misunderstandings cleared up, only deep understanding and gratitude remained between them. 句型三答案： his heart full of guilt The two sitting face to face her eyes red and swollen from staying up all night The letter tightly held in his hand, he was overcome with mixed feelings and couldn't utter a word. 实战写作（三篇微情景范文） 微情景一范文： His glasses resting on the bridge of his nose, my father studied the brochures carefully. An apple peeled and placed beside him, it was clear he still cared. My throat tight with emotion, I walked over and said, “Dad, let's talk.” His eyes lighting up with surprise, he nodded and pulled out a chair for me. That night, we finally understood each other. 微情景二范文： I found her sitting on the beach, her eyes fixed on the distant horizon. The waves crashing gently against the shore, I approached and sat down beside her. Her voice trembling with emotion, she whispered, “I've missed our talks.” My heart heavy with regret, I took her hand and said, “So have I.” 微情景三范文： The classroom silent and empty, I walked in and saw him rewriting the plan. His back turned towards me, he didn't notice my arrival. His handwriting neat and careful, every detail showed his dedication. My face burning with embarrassment, I walked over and said, “You're right. Let's work on it together.” He turned around, his eyes shining with relief, and handed me a piece of chalk. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $