读后续写技能提升专项演练（四）-2027年高三英语二轮复习专题练习

**基本信息** 聚焦动作描写（手部/眼部），通过词汇-词块-语法-修辞四维训练体系，系统提升读后续写的情境表达与逻辑连贯能力，培养语言运用与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |手部动作描写|1情境（Emily丢狗）|核心词汇（considerate等）、手指动作词块（wrap fingers等）、现在分词作伴随状语、连续联动动作、修辞比喻句（felt like lost an arm）|从具体手部动作词块到语法结构运用，再到情感表达的修辞升华，形成"动作-语言-情感"递进逻辑| |眼部动作描写|1情境（疾病后重拾信心）|参考词汇（grin等）、高级句式（独立主格/联动动作）、主旨升华句（Laughter is best medicine）|从眼部动作描写（glance等）到句式结构优化，再到主题意义提炼，构建"动作描写-语言组织-思维提升"链条|

读后续写技能提升专项演练（三） 一、动作描写：手部动作 【Emily弄丢小狗，撒谎后内心纠结】 Emily’s family raised a lovely puppy named Lucky. One weekend morning, Emily decided to take Lucky out for a walk in the community park alone. She was so easily distracted by colorful butterflies that she let go of the leash carelessly. Before she realized it, Lucky had vanished without a trace. Panic flooded her mind the second she couldn’t spot the puppy anywhere. The thought of her parents’ blame made her want to throw in the towel on telling the truth at once. After searching everywhere in vain, she dragged her feet back home, trapped in tangled guilt. When her parents asked where Lucky was, she lied nervously that the puppy had run out of the door by itself. Deep inside, she was torn over whether she should clarify the whole truth to her considerate parents. 续写两段要求：结合(专题十四)内容 1.核心词汇：considerate, distract, throw in the towel, motivate, occupy, clarify 2.手指动作词块：wrap one’s fingers around sth, drum one’s fingers, wave/wag one’s finger, lift a finger to one’s lips, point an accusing finger at sb. 3.语法：现在分词作伴随状语、连续联动动作描写 4.特色固定佳句：I bet… / I’m embarrassed to say that… 5.修辞比喻句：I felt like I had lost an arm! Paragraph 1: Just as Emily sat on the sofa with a heavy heart, her mother walked over and noticed her odd behavior. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Motivated by her mother’s gentle comfort, Emily made up her mind to confess everything honestly. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、动作描写：眼部动作（一） 【被诊断出严重疾病后，朋友鼓励让我重拾信心】 I was diagnosed with a serious lung disease last month. After hearing the doctor’s words, I locked myself in my bedroom all day, unwilling to talk to anyone. Every time my parents tried to comfort me, I would lower my eyes and turn away, wearing a long face without a word. Nothing could cheer me up. I spent most of my time feeling frightened and extremely bored, lost in endless sadness. My best friend Mia noticed my abnormal mood. One afternoon, she knocked at my door repeatedly until I opened it. She did not say many comforting words at first. Instead, she stared into my eyes and told me lots of witty and mischievous little stories from our childhood. She even winked at me and made funny faces to amuse me. At first, I just glanced at her coldly, tears brimming in my eyes. Yet she didn’t give up, keeping telling jokes. 写作要求：参考（专题十三） 1.参考词汇：long face、witty、mischievous、gentle、enthusiasm/enthusiastic、amuse、cheer up、grin、crack a smile、glance、wink、stare into one’s eyes、lift one’s eyes、focus one’s eyes on、sparkle with hope、amusement 2.高级句式：独立主格：tears brimming in my eyes; my eyes sparkling with hope and amusement；联动动作描写：wiped away my tears and lifted my eyes to focus on…；v-ing 作伴随状语 3.主旨升华原句照搬 1.Laughter is the best medicine. 2.Humour isn't just about laughter, but it is a way of life and a tool that can be used to illuminate the world. 3.Humor is mankind's greatest blessing. 两段续写开头 Paragraph 1: After a long while, something changed inside me. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: At that moment, I fully understood the true power of humor. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文: 1.【Emily弄丢小狗，撒谎后内心纠结】 Paragraph 1: Just as Emily sat on the sofa with a heavy heart, her mother walked over and noticed her odd behavior. Watching Emily wrap her trembling fingers tightly around the sofa cushion, Mum sensed something was wrong. Emily’s mind was fully occupied by endless guilty thoughts, totally distracted from Mum’s soft questions. “Don’t hide anything from me,” Mum said, wagging her finger lightly instead of pointing an accusing finger at her daughter. Seeing Emily bite her lip and stay silent, Mum drummed her fingers slowly on the table, then lifted a finger to her lips to signal her to take a deep breath first. “I bet you’ve done something careless related to Lucky,” she guessed objectively. Emily’s eyes turned watery, too afraid to clarify the truth immediately. Paragraph 2: Motivated by her mother’s gentle comfort, Emily made up her mind to confess everything honestly. “I’m embarrassed to say that I lost Lucky because I was distracted by butterflies and lied to you just now,” she burst out. At that moment, she felt like she had lost an arm from huge guilt. She admitted she had nearly thrown in the towel and buried the secret forever. Her considerate Mum patted her head and told her honesty was far more important than avoiding blame. Equipped with Mum’s tolerance, Emily spent the whole afternoon searching the park again. Ever since this incident, she has been devoting extra attention to keeping an eye on Lucky whenever they go out. 原文翻译：艾米丽一家养了一只名叫拉基的可爱小狗。某个周末早晨，她决定独自带着拉基去社区公园散步。却被五彩斑斓的蝴蝶轻易吸引注意力，不小心松开了牵引绳。还没等她反应过来，拉基就消失得无影无踪。当她发现小狗不见踪影时，恐慌瞬间席卷全身；想到父母会因此责备自己，她甚至想立刻放弃说实话。尽管四处寻找却一无所获，她拖着疲惫的步伐回到家，深陷内疚之中。当父母询问拉基下落时，她紧张地谎称小狗是自己跑出来的。内心深处，她始终纠结于是否该向体贴入微的父母坦白真相。 2.【被诊断出严重疾病后，朋友鼓励让我重拾信心】 Paragraph 1 After a long while, something changed inside me. I wiped away my tears and lifted my eyes to focus on Mia’s smiling face. Listening to her funny stories, I gradually cracked a smile, and soon I grinned from ear to ear, my eyes sparkling with hope and amusement. All my fear and sadness faded away completely. I realized that nothing was too terrible to bear as long as there was laughter around me. Mia’s gentle and enthusiastic company drove away all my pain and cheered me up thoroughly. Paragraph 2 At that moment, I fully understood the true power of humor. Just as the old saying goes, Laughter is the best medicine. Humor isn’t just about temporary laughter, but it is a warm way of life and a bright tool that can illuminate the dark world full of sorrow. Those witty words from my best friend pulled me out of my low mood and gave me the courage to face my illness bravely. I held Mia’s hands tightly, gazing at her with grateful eyes, knowing this great blessing — humor — would accompany me through all hard days ahead. 原文翻译：我上个月被诊断出患有严重的肺部疾病。听到医生的话后，我整天把自己关在卧室里，不愿与任何人交谈。每次父母试图安慰我时，我都会低下头转过身去，一脸愁容地沉默不语。没有什么能让我开心起来。我大部分时间都感到害怕和极度无聊，在无尽的悲伤中迷失。我的好朋友米娅注意到了我异常的情绪。一天下午，她不停地敲我的门，直到我打开。起初，她没有说太多安慰的话。相反，她直视着我的眼睛，给我讲了许多我们童年时有趣又调皮的小故事。她甚至还对我眨了眨眼，做鬼脸逗我开心。一开始，我只是冷冷地瞥了她一眼，眼眶里充满了泪水。但她没有放弃，继续讲笑话。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $