读后续写技能提升专项演练（二）-2027年高三英语二轮复习专题练习

**基本信息** 聚焦读后续写情感与动作专项，通过高考查分、克服自卑主题，系统提炼课本句型复用与高阶语法结构（倒装、分词等）的融合方法，构建“主题-语言-升华”逻辑链条，提升语言表达与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |情感：紧张专项|高考查分主题（1典例）|核心短语复用、倒装/分词/独立主格结构、主旨升华句|课本句型迁移→高阶语法应用→主题情感升华| |动作：眼睛专项|克服自卑主题（1典例）|动词-ing分词状语、with复合结构、only倒装、祈使句+and|课本句型迁移→高阶语法应用→主题情感升华|

读后续写技能提升专项演练（二） 一、情感：“紧张”专项 【高考查分主题】 The day of the national college entrance examination score release finally arrived. After three years of hard work and countless late nights buried in piles of test papers, I had been waiting anxiously for this moment for weeks. Sitting at my desk at home, I clenched my smartphone tightly, my palms soaked with cold sweat. My parents stood silently behind me, not daring to make a single sound. I could feel their tense gazes resting on my back, which made my heart pound even more violently. The moment the clock struck the official opening hour, I refreshed the inquiry page over and over again. Memories flooded my mind — the days I felt extremely discouraged and almost gave up, my teacher’s encouraging words before the exam, and the countless nights I spent going over my mistakes. Taking a deep shaky breath, I slowly moved my finger toward the “check score” button. 注意： 续写词数应为 150 左右； 请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1: My finger tapped the button lightly, and a small loading icon began to spin slowly on the screen. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When the total score finally came into view, I froze in my seat for a full minute. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、动作：眼睛专项 【克服自卑、自我成长主题】 David had fallen in love with cross-country running ever since the PE class last month. Every time he saw classmates sprint past the playground freely, a strong desire welled up inside him. Yet a flood of dread haunted him. He feared being laughed at for his slow pace and harsh criticism from others, so he hid his passion deep inside. One afternoon, I spotted him sitting alone on the grass after school. He squeezed his eyes shut and bit his lip tightly, tears rolling down his cheeks. Noticing his lonely figure, I walked straight toward him, wondering what had troubled him so much. He caught sight of me at once, turned his eyes away and avoided staring straight into my gaze, overwhelmed by embarrassment. I sat down beside him gently, ready to comfort this boy trapped in self-doubt. 写作要求 词数 150 词左右； 合理运用专题（十六）眼睛动作描写、分词作状语、倒装句、祈使句等句式；情节完整，结尾升华主题。 续写段落开头 Paragraph 1: I kept an eye on him softly and asked what was weighing heavily on his mind. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Hearing my sincere encouragement, David slowly lifted his head and shifted his eyes toward me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文: 一、【高考查分主题】 Paragraph 1 My finger tapped the button lightly, and a small loading icon began to spin slowly on the screen. With butterflies in my stomach, I sat on the edge of my seat, staring at the screen without blinking. So violently did my heart beat that I felt on pins and needles. My throat tightened and my mouth went dry, my whole body trembling slightly. Overcome by overwhelming uneasiness, I even wanted to lock the phone and run away from the heavy pressure. My heart in my mouth, I counted each passing second, which felt as long as a whole day. Paragraph 2 When the total score finally came into view, I froze in my seat for a full minute. It was far higher than I had expected, and all the long-pent-up anxiety melted away in an instant. I turned around to look at my parents, who were also on the edge of their seats, waiting for my reaction. Seeing the bright number on the screen, they breathed a long sigh of relief and patted my shoulder gently. At that moment, I deeply realized that all my efforts had paid off. Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the belief that persistence will eventually pay off. 教考衔接:参考【专题（十八）】 核心短语复用：on the edge of one’s seat、with butterflies in my stomach、feel one’s throat tightened and mouth dry，全部来自课本 “紧张” 话题情感描写素材 倒装句式：So violently did my heart beat that I felt on pins and needles，完全匹配课本倒装句仿写模板 分词作状语：Overcome by overwhelming uneasiness，对应课本Feeling extremely discouraged的同类句法结构 独立主格结构：My heart in my mouth、my whole body trembling slightly，匹配课本独立主格加分句型 主旨升华句：结尾呼应课本Courage is not the absence of fear...的立意写法，贴合教材升华逻辑 原文翻译：全国高考成绩公布的日子终于到来了。经过三年的辛勤付出，无数个深夜埋头于堆积如山的试卷中，我已迫不及待地等待这一刻长达数周之久。 我坐在家里的书桌前，紧紧握着智能手机，手掌浸满冷汗。父母静立在我身后，不敢发出一丝声响。我能感受到他们紧张的目光正落在我的背上，这让我的心跳愈发剧烈。 当时钟正式敲响开考时刻，我反复刷新查询页面。无数记忆涌上心头：那些让我极度沮丧、几乎想要放弃的日子；考试前老师给予的鼓励话语；以及无数个反复修改错误答案的夜晚。我深吸一口气，缓缓将手指移向“查看成绩”按钮。 二、【克服自卑、自我成长主题】 Paragraph 1 I kept an eye on him softly and asked what was weighing heavily on his mind. Noticing me come in, David eyed me up and down, confused. Overcome by dread of mockery and criticism, he murmured that he loved running but dared not join the team. Though his eyes were filled with tears, he still avoided my direct gaze, turning his eyes to the distant woods. I squeezed his shoulder gently and said with gentleness, “Persevere and you will win warm applause from everyone.” Paragraph 2 Hearing my sincere encouragement, David slowly lifted his head and shifted his eyes toward me. At last, his eyes fell on mine, bright with restored hope. Only with perseverance and determination can I achieve my goals, he whispered in an appreciative tone. Days later, he took part in the cross-country run bravely. When he crossed the finishing line, all students clapped explosively, every audience on the edge of their seats. At that moment, I realized courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that passion is more important than embarrassment. 解析： 1.动词 - ing 分词作状语 Noticing me come in, David eyed me up and down, confused. （对应原文：Noticing me come in, my father eyed me up and down, confused.） 2.with 复合结构 tears rolling down his cheeks（原文同款伴随描写） 3.祈使句 + and 陈述句 Persevere and you will win warm applause from everyone. （匹配积累佳句：Perseverance is the key.） 4.only + 状语置于句首倒装 Only with perseverance and determination can I achieve my goals. 5.过去分词情感状语 Overcome by dread of mockery and criticism（同素材 Overcome by extreme uneasiness 结构） 原文翻译：自从上个月体育课后，大卫就彻底爱上了越野跑。每当看到同学们自由地在操场上飞奔而过，他内心总会涌起强烈的渴望。然而，恐惧如潮水般困扰着他：他害怕因跑得慢而被嘲笑，也害怕受到他人的严厉批评，因此始终将这份热情深藏心底。 某个下午，我看见他放学后独自坐在草地上。他紧闭双眼，咬着嘴唇，泪水顺着脸颊滑落。看到他如此孤独的样子，我径直走向他，心中好奇究竟发生了什么让他如此困扰。他立刻察觉到了我的存在，转过头去，避免与我对视——显然被尴尬难为情。我轻柔地坐到他身旁，准备安慰这个深陷自我怀疑中的男孩。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $