内容正文:
Sports and Healthy Life
中考英语写作课 | 五育并举·健康第一·AI赋能
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CONTENTS
01 Lead-in: AI情境导入
02 Pre-writing: 写作支架搭建
03 While-writing: AI辅助创作
04 Post-writing: 互评展示与点评
05 Summary & Homework: 总结与作业
01 Lead-in
AI情境导入:我的运动小烦恼
Scenario Introduction
在开始正式学习之前,让我们利用AI技术,共同构建一个关于运动困扰的真实场景。
Education & Technology Integration
AI图片展示与互动
Fear of Running
A student is afraid of running in PE class.
Nervous Before Test
A student looks nervous before a sports test.
Mutual Encouragement
Classmates encourage each other to keep running.
Discussion:Do you have a sport you are not good at? What’s your trouble?
02 Pre-writing
写作支架搭建:我的运动成长故事
结构搭建
确定故事的开头、发展与结尾,构建清晰的叙事脉络。
素材收集
回忆关键运动瞬间,记录具体的动作、心理活动与环境细节。
语言润色
运用恰当的形容词与连接词,让故事表达更生动、流畅。
Tip:试着从一个你印象最深刻的失败或成功的时刻开始构思。
自由发言
Key Sentences
I’m not good at______.
I’m afraid of______.
💡 Tip: You can use the sentences above to share your feelings.
确定写作主线
不会
害怕
尝试
帮助
进步
感悟
主题 (包含两条主线)
主线一:克服弱项
我克服了自己不擅长的运动项目(如跑步、篮球等),突破自我极限。
主线二:互助成长
在体育老师或同学的鼓励与帮助下,我坚持运动并取得了进步。
AI素材库一键生成
Beginning
I used to be weak in P.E. I was afraid of running.
Difficulty
I felt tired easily. I wanted to give up.
Help
My P.E. teacher helped me. My classmate ran with me and encouraged me.
Action
I kept practicing every day. I never gave up.
Result
I made great progress. I became healthier and confident.
Ending
Sports make me strong. Nothing is impossible if I try my best.
三段式结构思维导图 (小组展示)
Para 1 (背景)
I used to…
I was not good at…
Para 2 (经过)
Teacher/classmate helped me…
I practiced…
Para 3 (结果+感悟)
I improved…
Sports are important for us.
03 While-writing
实战写作:AI一对一辅助创作
Engage in hands-on writing practice with real-time AI support.
明确写作任务
WRITING TASK
My Unforgettable Sports Experience
WORD COUNT
100 – 120 words
TOPICS (CHOOSE 1)
Overcoming a sport I was not good at.
My PE teacher's patient guidance and encouragement.
Classmates accompanied me to exercise and helped me persist.
AI三步写作法
AI 句子补全
遇到卡顿?输入提示词:
"Help me finish the sentence: I used to…"
AI 语法纠错
写完自查,输入:
"Check my grammar."
AI 升级句型
追求高分,输入:
"Make this sentence better for the exam."
学生真实范文句参考
I was poor at running, but I didn’t give up.
My P.E. teacher told me to keep moving every day.
With his help, I did better in the sports test.
Now I realize health comes first in our life.
04 Post-writing
互评展示 + AI点评
Peer Review
小组内互评,分享写作思路与亮点
AI Feedback
智能工具辅助,优化语法与表达逻辑
“Writing is rewriting.” — Focus on improvement through sharing and feedback.
小组互改与全班展示
1. 小组互改
Read your partner’s passage and circle the good words and sentences.
2. 全班展示
Invite 2-3 students to share their excellent passages.
Tip: Be active and respectful during the discussion.
AI投屏点评
Essay Score
13/15
Good points
You used some good phrases like "never gave up" and "made great progress". These expressions show a positive attitude.
Suggestions
You can add more details about how your teacher helped you. Specific examples will make your story more convincing and vivid.
05 Summary & Homework
课堂总结 + AI拓展作业
课堂总结
回顾本节课核心知识点,巩固基础理论框架,确保大家掌握关键概念与技能。
AI拓展作业
尝试使用AI工具辅助完成实践任务,探索技术赋能学习的新路径,提交创新报告。
注意:作业需在下周课前提交至学习平台,优秀作品将获得额外积分奖励。
课堂总结
Health is the first wealth.
健康是人生的第一财富,是我们奋斗的基石。
Sports help us grow up better.
运动不仅强健体魄,更能塑造品格,助力我们全面成长。
作业布置
常规任务:作文完善与誊写
请仔细检查并完善你的作文内容,确保逻辑通顺、无错别字,然后工整地誊写到作业本上。
AI 拓展任务:智能运动计划
Ask AI to make a "Daily Sports Plan for Me" for your school life. 尝试用英文与AI交互,制定专属运动计划。
Deadline: Next Monday | 请将作业提交至学习通平台
Thanks for listening!
Keep moving, keep writing!
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本教学资料由教师原创构思,借助AI工具辅助内容撰写与优化,并经本人全部校对,修改,内容版权归上传人所有。
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