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仁爱科普版八年级英语上册
Unit 5 Amazing Places Reading for Writing
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Unit 5 Amazing Places Reading for Writing
课标要求
依据《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版)》八年级人文景观主题教学要求:
1.语言能力:能读懂西湖示范说明文,精准提取位置、长宽尺寸、景观特色、游览方式四类写作素材;熟练运用It lies in…、比较级、描述景物形容词;掌握英文海报固定写作结构,独立完成80词左右地标宣传海报写作,书写规范、语法错误少。
2.思维品质:建立“总起—位置尺寸—特色景观—游玩项目—推荐结尾”五层写作逻辑;借助表格分类梳理客观事实、主观评价两类写作素材,做到作文内容均衡、有细节、不空洞。
3.文化意识:以国内西湖为范文载体,能自主选择长城、故宫、黄山、埃菲尔铁塔等中外地标创作海报,在写作中传播中国名胜,感受多元世界风光,建立文化自信。
4.学习能力:会从阅读文本中摘抄可用写作句型;利用表格提前梳理写作数据与素材;写作完成后对照4项清单自查拼写、句型、内容维度;小组交换作文,给出可落地修改建议。
学习目标
1.知识目标
① 核心方位句型:It lies in the west of Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province. / It is in the center of…
② 尺寸描述句型:It is … kilometers long / wide. / Its average depth is … meters.
③ 景观特色句型:It is famous for its beautiful lakeside scenery. / It’s a must-see attraction.
④ 游玩活动句型:Visitors can take boats, ride bicycles or walk around the lake.
⑤ 海报完整结构:Title(标题)→ Opening(开篇总起)→ Body1(位置+尺寸)→ Body2(特色景观)→ Body3(游玩项目)→ Ending(推荐号召)
2.能力目标
① Activity1:双人对话,选定一处地标,口头说出地点、外形、特色3条基础素材;
② Activity2:精读西湖范文,完成信息提取表格(内嵌标准答案),摘抄3组可复用写作句型;
③ Activity3:依托表格素材,按照六段式结构完成英文海报写作,字数70–90词;
④ Activity4:对照4项自查清单修改作文,小组互评并标注2处以上修改点。
3.素养目标能使用规范英文海报完整、细致介绍一处名胜,愿意制作英文文化宣传海报向他人推荐中国景观,主动传播中华风光文化。
学习重难点
学习重点
1.掌握六段式地标海报写作框架,熟练使用位置、尺寸、景观、游玩四类标准句型;
2.精读范文提取精准数字、景观细节,用表格梳理素材,写作内容有数据支撑、不空洞。学习难点均衡分配写作篇幅,不会只写位置忽略景观与游玩活动;正确区分事实与观点穿插使用,句型不重复、不单调。
课前预习
1.背诵本单元7大地标单词:Mount Huangshan, the Great Wall, Tian’anmen Square, Bird’s Nest, Niagara Falls, Big Ben, Mount Fuji;熟练朗读It lies in…方位句型;
2.提前选定一处地标(西湖/长城/故宫任选其一),提前查找2个基础信息:所在省份、一处特色景观;
3.预习西湖范文,圈出文中数字、游玩类句子,预习写作可用句型。
评价任务
1.双人素材讨论评价:Activity1能完整说出地标名称、所在城市、1处特色景观,语句通顺,达标;
2.范文表格提取评价:Activity2表格位置、长宽、水深、景观、游玩5项信息全部填写准确,摘抄3组句型无误,达标;
3.海报写作评价:Activity3海报六段结构完整,覆盖位置、尺寸、景观、游玩四大维度,包含1组数字描写,拼写、语法错误≤2处,字数70–90词,达标;
4.互评修改评价:Activity4能对照清单找出同伴作文至少2处问题(拼写/句型/内容缺失),并写出修改方案,达标。
教学过程
环节一:读写课导入(5分钟)
1.导入提问:We have learned many amazing places this unit. If we want to introduce West Lake to foreign friends, what can we write? 引出本课任务:Write a poster to introduce a famous landmark.
2.出示西湖海报范例,板书海报六部分结构:Title / Opening / Location & Size / Scenery Features / Activities / Ending;带读四类核心写作句型。
环节二:Activity1 双人小组素材口头讨论(7分钟)对话支架(学生可直接套用):
A: Which landmark do you plan to write about for your poster? Where is it?
B: I choose … It lies in the … of … It’s famous for its …
A: What can visitors do there?
B: They can take boats or ride bikes around it.
两人一组交流预习地标素材,互相补充景观细节,为写作积累内容。
环节三:Activity2 精读西湖范文,完成信息提取表格(15分钟)
西湖范文原文:
The West Lake lies in Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province. It is 3.3 kilometers long, 2.8 kilometers wide and 2.5 meters deep on average. As a Chinese saying goes, “Heaven above, Suzhou and Hangzhou below”. There is always something to see and it is beautiful all year round. As for the beautiful landscapes, the Broken Bridge is a must-see. To explore the lake, travelers can take boats, ride bicycles or just walk around it.
✅Activity2 信息提取表格(内嵌标准答案)
Information type
Details from the text
Location
in Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province
Size
3.3km long; 2.8km wide; 2.5m deep on average
Famous scenery
the Broken Bridge; beautiful all year round
Activities for visitors
take boats, ride bicycles, walk around the lake
Famous sentence for writing
Heaven above, Suzhou and Hangzhou below
课堂操作:学生独立阅读原文,填写表格;教师逐空核对答案,指导学生摘抄文中3组写作句型:
1. It lies in … Province.
2. It is … kilometers long, … wide and … meters deep on average.
3. Travelers can take boats, ride bicycles or walk around it.环节四:Activity3 依托表格素材,独立完成地标海报写作(18分钟)
写作分步指导,给出西湖范文海报模板(学生可替换地标改写):
Step1 Title(醒目标题):
The West Lake — A Beautiful Landmark in Zhejiang
Step2 Opening(总起1句):The West Lake is one of the most famous places in China.
Step3 Body1 位置+尺寸:
It lies in Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province. It is 3.3 km long, 2.8 km wide and 2.5 meters deep on average.
Step4 Body2 景观特色:It is beautiful in four seasons. The Broken Bridge is its most popular attraction. An old saying says “Heaven above, Suzhou and Hangzhou below”.
Step5 Body3 游玩项目:Visitors have many fun choices. They can take boats on the lake, ride bikes along the bank or walk to enjoy nice views.
Step6 Ending(推荐号召):Don’t miss the wonderful West Lake if you travel to Zhejiang!
写作要求:替换自己选定的地标,保留六段结构,必须加入一组数字描写(长宽/高度/面积),字数控制70–90词;教师巡视,纠正It lies in介词、比较级、单词拼写错误。
环节五:Activity4 作文自查+小组互评 + 课堂小结(10分钟)
1. 四项自查清单(学生逐条核对自己海报):
① Structure: Has title, opening, location, scenery, activities and ending?
② Content: Has location, size, scenery and visitor activities four parts?
③ Grammar: No wrong prepositions (in / of) or comparative mistakes?
④ Spelling: No spelling mistakes of landmark words?
2. 小组互评操作:交换海报,对照清单标注至少2处问题,并写下修改建议,学生根据建议自主修正作文。
3. 课堂完整小结:
① 写作框架复盘:海报六部分结构,四大必备描写维度(位置、尺寸、景观、游玩);
② 句型复盘:方位、尺寸、游玩三类万能句型,写作结合客观数字与主观赞美,内容更充实;
4. 布置分层课后作业。
分层作业
基础必做:
1. 抄写四类核心写作句型3遍,背诵海报六段写作结构;
2. 工整誊写课堂完成的地标海报,修正课堂标注的拼写、语法错误。
提升选做:
1. 给海报手绘对应地标简笔画,额外增加2句景观描写句子;
2. 脱稿完整口头朗读自己的海报,录制朗读音频,时长30–45秒。
板书设计
Unit 5 Amazing Places Reading for Writing
一、Six poster parts: Title → Opening → Location&Size → Scenery → Activities → Ending
二、Four key sentence frames:
1. Location: It lies in the … of … Province.
2. Size: It is … km long, … wide and … m deep on average.
3. Scenery: … is a must-see attraction.
4. Activities: Visitors can take boats, ride bikes or walk around.
三、Self-check list: structure / four dimensions / grammar / spelling
学后反思
1. 学生写作容易缺少尺寸数字,文章空洞无细节;后续强化Activity2表格数字提取,写作强制要求加入一组尺寸数据;
2. 方位介词in / of混用,增设3道方位句型填空小题课前巩固;
3. 学生互评只会笼统评价,标准化四项清单规范学生修改思路,让修改建议精准落地。
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