内容正文:
中考英语写作满分宝典 班级:_______________ 姓名:________________
缩句与扩句
· 我会缩句吗?
1. 因为天气好,他昨天和两个好朋友在操场上激烈地打了篮球来提升他们自己的球技。
中文主干:___________________________英文主干:____________________________________
2. 保持身体健康的秘诀之一就是每日在公园里运动半小时。
中文主干:___________________________英文主干:____________________________________
· 我会改写与扩句吗?:扩写法(每一个要点,都能翻倍扩充字数)
第一:名词「加修饰」——最简单零难度,新手必练
原句短句:I like playing basketball.
拓展后:I like playing exciting and interesting basketball in my free time.
✅ 口诀:名词前后修饰语,目、原、时、地往后塞
人物:lovely / kind / outgoing事物:beautiful / meaningful / exciting时间:after school / in my spare time
扩句练习:学校举办一个派对。__________________________________________________________________
第二:动词「加原因+感受」——90%作文都能用
原句:Playing basketball keeps me healthy.
拓展:Playing basketball keeps me healthy, because it makes me strong and relaxed after busy study.
✅ 万能句式:
- ..., because it can help me... - It makes me feel happy/relaxed/confident. - I learn a lot from it.
扩句练习:学校举办一个派对。
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第三:句子「加细节画面」——把一句话写成一小段
原句:When I was 10, I loved basketball.
拓展画面:When I was 10 years old, I watched boys play basketball on the playground for the first time. The ball flew beautifully, and I fell in love with it at once.
✅ 写景/写事万能细节:
- 在哪里:on the playground / in the park - 怎么样:happily / quietly / carefully
- 看到了什么、听到了什么、心情怎么样
扩句练习:学校举办一个派对。
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第四:长短句合并「升级复合句」——高分拉开差距
把2句简单短句,用 when / so / not only...but also... 合成1句高级长句
原2句:I learn to play basketball. It makes me healthy.
升级:When I learn to play basketball, it not only keeps me healthy, but also relaxes my mind.
扩句练习:学校举办一个派对。
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逐步扩句训练:先确定主干,再添加枝叶。
1. 他打篮球
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1. 他昨天打了篮球。
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1. 他昨天在操场上打了篮球。
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1. 他昨天和两个好朋友在操场上打了篮球。
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1. 他昨天和两个好朋友在操场上激烈地打了篮球。
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1. 为了提升他们自己的球技,他昨天和两个好朋友在操场上激烈地打了篮球。
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1. 因为天气好,他昨天和两个好朋友在操场上激烈地打了篮球来提升他们自己的球技。
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扩句+改写 例:考题提示信息:Tom是一名记者。他住在泸州。
一般写法:Tom is a reporter. He lives in Luzhou.
改1:使用连词:Tom is a reporter, and he lives in Luzhou.
改2:同义句:Tom works as a reporter at a TV station, and Luzhou is his hometown.
改3:同位语:Tom, a TV reporter, lives in Luzhou, a beautiful city famous for 1573.
改4:从句使用:Tom, who is a reporter at a TV station, lives in Luzhou, which is a beautiful city beside the Long River and is very famous for its wine----1573.
改5:高级句型使用(倒装+定从):Not only does Tom have a good job at a TV station----a reporter, but also he lives in Luzhou----the City of Wine, which is a beautiful city beside the Long River and is very famous for its wine----1573.
改6:_____ __________________________________________________________________________________
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文章开头、过渡、中间、结尾常用满分句型
一、开头:快速点题,亮出观点
1. 引出话题(用 lately / nowadays 开头)
· Recently, the problem of ... has attracted people's concern.(最近,……问题引起了人们的关注。)
· Nowadays, it is common to hear / see ...(如今,……是很常见的。)
2. 表达观点 (议论文常用)
· In my opinion, ... is important / meaningful.(依我看来,……很重要/有意义。)
· I strongly believe that ...(我坚信……)
· As for me, I agree / disagree with the idea that ...(对我来说,我同意/不同意……的观点。)
3. 记叙/介绍某人某物
· I'll never forget the day when ...(我永远不会忘记……的那一天。)
· My name is ... and I'm a 15-year-old student from ...(我叫……,是一个来自……的15岁学生。)
· I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing.(很高兴听说你要来北京。)
4. 用“众所周知”或“俗话说”引入
· As we all know, ...(众所周知……)
· As the saying goes, “...”(俗话说得好,“……”)
· It goes without saying that ...(不言而喻,……)
5. 用于书信或发言的开头
· I'm writing to share some ideas about ...(我写信是想分享一些关于……的想法。)
· Today I'd like to give a speech on ...(今天我想做一个关于……的演讲。)
6. 描述现象或趋势
· More and more people are beginning to realize that ...(越来越多的人开始意识到……)
· There is no doubt that ... has become a hot topic.(毫无疑问,……已经成为一个热门话题。)
· 过渡句(第一段最后一句)句型(议论文)
Let me tell you what we can do to make Luzhou a better city.
1. So, here is some of my advice on what we can do to make Luzhou a better city.
1. To work out the problem, here are some tips/suggestions on what we can do to make Luzhou a better city
1. We should not neglect the tips listed below on what we can do to make Luzhou a better city
1. Have you thought about what we can do to make Luzhou a better city?
二、中间:逻辑清晰,内容充实
1. 列举观点 (First / Second / Third)(初级孩子必会)
· First,/Second,/Next,/Then,/Finally ...
· Above all,/Besides,/What's more, ... / In addition, .../Also, /Last but not least,...
· On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ...(一方面……另一方面……)
2. 举例说明 (for example / like)
· For example, ...(例如……) 注意后面跟句子
· ... like=such as(这里such永远不大写) ...(……比如……) 注意such as 后面跟名词或短语
· Here is an example: ...(这里有一个例子:……)
3. 比较和对比
· ... is the same as ... / ... is different from ...(……和……一样/……和……不同)
· Some people think ..., while others believe ...(一些人认为……,而其他人相信……)
4. 说明原因(because / for / due to)
· The reason why ... is that ...(……的原因是……)
· This is because ...(这是因为……)
· One of the main reasons is that ...(主要原因之一是……)
5. 表达目的(to / in order to)
· In order to achieve this goal, we should ...(为了实现这个目标,我们应该……)
· To solve this problem, the government / school / we need to ...(为了解决这个问题,政府/学校/我们需要……)
6. 表达结果(so that / as a result)
· ... so that we can ...(……这样我们就能……) 注意so that后跟句子
· As a result, ...(结果,……)
7. 提出建议(should / it's better to)
· We should ... instead of ...(我们应该……而不是……) · It's a good idea to ...(……是个好主意。)
· Why not ...? 为什么不……呢?/ · 祈使句(动词原形)
8.表示递进:
9.表示转折:But, However, Although (虽然,但是不能连用)
10. 添加更丰富的逻辑连接词
· In fact, ...(事实上,……) · As a matter of fact, ...(实际上,……)
· To be honest, ...(老实说,……)(To tell you the truth, ...)
3、 结尾:
1. 总结观点 (in a word / all in all)
· In a word, ... is really important.(总之,……真的很重要。)
· All in all, only +状语 ... can we ...(总而言之,只有……我们才能……)这是一个很有力的倒装句
· To sum up, I have shown why ...(总结一下,我已经说明了为什么……)
2. 表达感受/展望未来
· I believe we will have a bright / wonderful future.(我相信我们会有一个光明的未来。)
· I hope my advice will be helpful to you.(我希望我的建议对你有帮助。)
3. 提出倡议 (let's / it's time to)
· Let's take action from now on.(让我们从现在开始行动。)
· It's our duty to protect the environment.(保护环境是我们的责任。)
4. 用反问或感叹收尾(有感染力)
· Isn't that a wonderful thing?(这难道不是一件很棒的事吗?)
· What a meaningful day it was!(那是多么有意义的一天啊!)
5. 表达感谢或祝愿(常见于书信)
· Thank you for your time and consideration.(感谢您的耐心阅读和考虑。)
· Wish you all the best / good luck.(祝一切顺利/祝好运。)
· I'm looking forward to your reply.(期待你的回复。)
6. 呼应开头(让结构完整)
· That's why I will never forget that day.(那就是为什么我永远不会忘记那一天。)
· As I said in the beginning, ... is really worth doing.(正如我一开始所说,……确实值得去做。)
四、几个万能高分句型
★It is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.做某事对某人来说是……的
(常见形容词:easy容易的;important重要的;necessary必要的;difficult困难的;convenient方便的;possible可能的;impossible不可能的;dangerous危险的;useful有用的)
1.对我来说学好英语很容易。__________________________________________________
2.早起对你来说是一件好事。__________________________________________________
3.拍照对他来说是不可能的。__________________________________________________
4.帮父母做家务对我们来说是有必要的。________________________________________________
5.回答这个问题对于你们来说很难。_________________________________________________
★I believe/think/hope…+宾语从句(宾语从句:充当宾语的句子)
1.总之,我希望我们将一起过上更幸福、更绿色的、更美好的生活。
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★状语从句
1.当我们有不同的想法时,我总是耐心地和他们交谈。
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2.两年前,我在和我同学打篮球的时候受了严重的伤。(一般过去时)
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3.如果每个人都尽最大努力去保护环境,我们的地球会越来越美丽。
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★高分句型:倒装句的使用
1. Only+状语(副词、介词短语、连词+从句、)+情/be/助+主语+…
只有到那时我们才有机会实现梦想。_________________________________________________
只有用这种方法我们才能取得进步。_____________________________________________________
只有当我们意识到规则的重要性我们才能建设一个更好的社会。
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2. Not only+情/be/助+主语+…, but also +句子
不但我们将举行一个盛大的仪式,而且每个人都会收到一份惊喜。
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★高分句型:强调句的使用
强调谓语:我们坚信只要我们全力以赴,我们就一定可以成功登顶。
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强调其他成分:是我的初中生涯(活)给我的整个人生带来了巨大的影响。
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