周17-3-Wednesday 投诉信&启事（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢应用文+读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语应用文写作同步教学课件，聚焦投诉信与启事两种新体裁。内容涵盖审题谋篇、结构框架、美文诵读、佳句积累及提分技巧，提供模板与实例支架，助力学生掌握写作要点。 资料特色显著，融合核心素养，语言能力上提供多样化表达模板，如投诉信分点陈述问题的句式。文化意识方面结合跨文化情境（如英国购物投诉）。思维品质通过逻辑结构培养分析能力。学习能力借助教考衔接（关联人教B2U3等单元）提升效率。实例丰富如健康栏目征稿启事范文，能帮助学生提升应用文写作水平，为教师教学提供系统参考。高中学生需强化应用文写作以应对考试，此资料提供全面指导。

Wednesday　投诉信&启事 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 Writing 1　投诉信 | 德育+智育 | 投诉商家 　　假定你是李华,正在英国学习,上个月,你在网站上订购了一份报纸,商家不但没有按时发货,而且你收到报纸后,发现缺了3张,请你就此给商家写一封投诉信。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 教考衔接:人教B2U3,北师大选B2U4;请参考素材18 “投诉”,附录一~二 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 审题谋篇 文体:投诉信 人称:第一人称 时态:一般过去时(描述订购、收货、发现问题的过程) 读者意识:分点陈述问题和细节,“道歉和补发” 是对应问题的直接解决方案 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 结构: 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 Dear shopkeeper, I couldn’t feel more annoyed about (对……感到生气) your service when receiving the newspaper you had posted, so I’m writing to make a complaint. 说明写信目的  Last month I purchased a newspaper from your website. To my dissatisfaction, it was not until ten days later that I received the newspaper. Moreover, what shocked me was that three pieces of the newspaper were missing when I received it. 说明投诉原因 Shouldn’t you apologize to me and send another one?提出解决办法 美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 I hope you can take my complaint seriously to avoid damaging your reputation (破坏你的名声/名誉) and image. Looking forward to your early reply. 表达期待  Yours, Li Hua 美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 佳句　Moreover, what shocked me was that three  pieces of the newspaper were missing when I received it.(主语从句+表语从句+状语从句,说明投诉的原因之二)  第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 [提分技巧] 题型解读 投诉信常被用来解决诸如消费者利益受损、正常生活或工作受到干扰等问题。投诉信不同于申请信或邀请信,要直截了当、掷地有声地表达自己的观点,不能拖泥带水。 写作步骤 第一步:表明身份,交代要投诉的问题;第二步:说明投诉的原因、具体的问题及产生的后果;第三步:提出解决方案。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 素材18　投诉 [模板佳句] ①I’m writing to express my disappointment/dissatisfaction with the rude attitude of your waiters to us. 我写信表达我对你们服务员粗鲁态度的失望/不满。 ②Dissatisfied with your poor service, I couldn’t feel more annoyed so I cannot help but make an immediate complaint. 我对你们糟糕的服务很不满意,气得只想立即投诉。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 ③I’m Li Hua, a customer who bought a book from your website a week ago.There exists something wrong with several pages. That’s why I’m writing to complain. 我是李华,一周前在你们网站买了一本书,有几页有问题,所以我写信投诉。 ④Personally, it’s time your service should be improved to live up to the customers’ expectations. 依我看,现在是你们改进服务以满足顾客期望的时候了。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 ⑤Worse still, several pages in the book are missing, which makes it impossible for me to make sense of the book. 更糟糕的是,书里有几页不见了,这让我根本无法理解这本书的内容。 ⑥Much to my dissatisfaction, the cellphone is not easy to operate, causing me much inconvenience. What’s worse, it often breaks down for no reason, which shows its poor quality. 令我很不满意的是,手机不容易操作,给我带来了很多不便。更糟糕的是,它经常毫无理由地出故障,这说明它的质量很差。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 ⑦I’m annoyed to have been provided with such poor service, and I’m certain I have the right to ask you to deal with the problem. 我对你们糟糕的服务感到很恼火,我确信我有权要求你们来处理这个问题。 ⑧Hopefully, you will take the matter seriously and get it solved. 我希望你能认真对待这件事,并解决这个问题。 ⑨I do hope you will take my complaint seriously and get it settled as soon as possible. 我真心希望你能认真对待我的投诉,并尽快处理它。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 ⑩I wonder if you could refund my money, or you could have it repaired or changed. I hope you will do what you can to settle the problem. 我想知道你能否退款,或者把它修好或换掉。我希望你能尽力解决这个问题。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 [黄金模板] Dear George, I’m Li Hua, a member of your website. Recently I have met with so many problems when using it that I’m writing to make a complaint.表明身份,交代要投诉的问题 Much to my disappointment, some contents aren’t updated in time, making it impossible for me to learn about the latest related to my present school lessons.投诉事由一 Worse still, I find some reading materials improper 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 for us students to read.投诉事由二 Frankly speaking, your service requires to be improved to live up to the users’ expectations. 提出解决办法 I do hope you will take my complaint seriously and give it due attention.表达期待 Yours, Li Hua 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 Writing 2　启事 | 德育 | 校报健康栏目征稿启事　 　　假定你是李华,是校报主编。最近校报新增健康栏目,请用英语写一则征稿启事,内容包括:1.稿件内容;2.稿件长度;3.投稿方式。 注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 教考衔接:人教选B3U2,外研选B2U2;请参考素材19 “启事”,附录一~二 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 审题谋篇 文体:启事 人称:第一、第三人称 时态:现在完成时(说明 “已新增健康栏目”)、 一般现在时(提出征稿要求、说明投稿方式) 读者意识: 针对学生,应说明“稿件写什么、投稿是否方便” 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 结构: 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 Contributions Wanted Aiming to help us students raise health consciousness and keep healthy, we have set up a new column called Health in our school newspaper.说明目的 This column mainly carries articles related to (与……有关) health. Therefore, you are expected to write anything focusing on the topic as long as it is informative and interesting. Moreover, different opinions on some phenomena regarding health will be warmly welcomed. The length of the article should be limited to (限于) 400 words or so.稿件相关要求  美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 Please send your contributions to the Editorial Section or e-mail to healthcolumn@sina.com.cn.投稿方式 Looking forward to your contributions. Health Section 美文诵读 佳句　Aiming to help us students raise health consciousness and keep healthy, we have set up a new column called Health in our school newspaper. (分词短语作状语)  第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 [提分技巧] 题型解读 启事常见的是招聘启事、征稿启事、寻物启事、招领启事等,启事的关键词作为标题,正文应具体简洁地写明目的、要求等。启事不用写称呼,言简意赅。 写作步骤 第一步:说明目的(招聘、征稿、招领或寻物);第二步:说明具体内容;第三步:报名方式/投稿方式/联系方式。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 素材19　启事 [模板佳句] ①By participating in a wide range of activities, you will benefit a lot. 通过参加多种活动,你将受益匪浅。 ②Those who are interested in the activity are expected to scan the QR code and fill in the application form. 如果对活动感兴趣,请扫描二维码并填写申请表。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 ③It was this morning that I happened to find a car key on the bench in front of the cinema. 就在今天早上,我碰巧在电影院前面的长凳上发现了一把汽车钥匙。 ④The handbag, brand new and red in color, can be generally described as follows. 一个全新的红色手提包,情况大致如下。 ⑤The owner of the bag is expected to contact me as soon as possible. 希望包的主人能尽快联系我。 第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 [黄金模板1] Contributions Wanted The magazine/newspaper, 　　　　(杂志或报刊名称), is very popular with 　　　　(杂志或报刊面对的读者)throughout the country. In the coming year, we will create a new column called 　　　　　(新栏目名称). All 　　　　(杂志或报刊面对的读者) are welcomed to write to us. Your article can be written in 　　　　(稿件要求).  You can send your article 　　　　(稿件投递方式)before the deadline 　　　　(截稿日期). Pick up your pen quickly and there is nothing better than to get your reply.   第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 [黄金模板2] Lost and Found I’m Li Hua, a student from 　　　　(学校名称). It’s about 　　　　(所捡到的物品).  　　　　 (捡到物品的时间), I found 　　　　(物品) lying 　　　　(地点). The 　　　　(物品) can be generally described as follows. It is 　　　　(描述物品的特征). What’s more, 　　　　(描述物品的其他方面).  The owner of 　　　　(物品) is expected to contact me as soon as possible. My phone number is 　　　　(电话号码). It is better to make an appointment in advance.   第 1 页 Week 17　应用文写作新体裁 $