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Tuesday 解说词&祝贺信
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Writing 1 解说词 | 美育 | 学生摄影作品展解说词
假定你是李华,本周末,国外友好学校学生将参观你校的“最美校园(the Beauty of Campus)”学生摄影作品展,请用英文准备一篇解说词,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.相关介绍。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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教考衔接:外研B2U4;请参考附录一
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审题谋篇
文体:解说词
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时(介绍展览现状和价值)
读者意识:解说需让国际学生感受到真诚的欢迎并对展览产生兴趣,要快速抓住展览的亮点(主题、规模、特色)
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结构:
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Distinguished friends,
A warm welcome to our school!表示欢迎 Now, I’d like to give you a brief introduction to the students’ photography exhibition themed “the Beauty of Campus” being held in our school.点明主题
The exhibition features a total of (总共) 160 photographic works and runs for two weeks, where you will see snapshots (n. 快照) of our wonderful school in different seasons. With distinctive images, these artworks display
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the artistic beauty (展示艺术之美) of our school. Each piece of artwork has its uniqueness, giving visitors a strong visual impact (强烈的视觉冲击).相关作品的介绍
That’s all for my introduction. Next, feel free to enjoy the artistic talents of us students!邀请欣赏
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佳句 The exhibition features a total of 160 photographic works and runs for two weeks, where you will see snapshots of our wonderful school in different seasons. (定语从句)
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Writing 2 祝贺信 | 劳育+智育 | 祝贺朋友在生活技能大赛中获奖
假定你是李华, 你的留学生朋友Tom在“学生生活技能大赛(Students’ Life Skills Competition)”中获奖,请用英语写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表示祝贺并肯定其努力;2.分享你的一项生活技能。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
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Dear Tom,____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
教考衔接:外研B1U3;请参考素材17 “祝贺”,
素材12 “生活与学习”,附录一~二
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审题谋篇
文体:祝贺信
人称:第一、第二人称
时态:一般现在时(表达个人感受、分享日常技能)、一般过去时(说明过去的努力)
读者意识: 写给留学生朋友Tom,写作时需肯定其努力,让Tom感受到自己的付出被看见、被认可;分享贴近日常的技能(烹饪),避免因文化差异导致误解
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结构:
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Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled to know that you have won an award in the Students’ Life Skills Competition.提及对方成就 I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.写信目的
Your success comes as no surprise to me. It was your tireless efforts that contributed to your remarkable achievement.肯定其不懈努力 I am truly proud of you!表示骄傲
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As for me, I’m somewhat skilled in cooking various dishes, among which, fish is my specialty. I often devote my free time to preparing tasty fish dishes for my family on weekends.分享自己的生活技能
Congratulations again! Wish you all the best! 再次祝贺+表达祝福
Yours,
Li Hua
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佳句 It was your tireless efforts that contributed to your remarkable achievement. (强调句)
[提分技巧]
题型解读
祝贺信是由于某种原因向收信人道贺的信件,除向对方道贺外,还可表达祝福、期望等,语言应热情洋溢,满怀喜悦。
写作步骤
第一步:点明祝贺的事情,并向对方道贺;第二步:详述对方为取得成功所付出的努力;第三步:再次祝贺。
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素材17 祝贺
[模板佳句]
①I have learned with delight that you have won first place in the competition.
得知你在比赛中获得一等奖,我很高兴。
②I’m writing to offer you my warmest congratulations on your victory in the competition.
我写信是想对你在比赛中获胜表示最热烈的祝贺。
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③You must have worked really hard to achieve such a high level of Chinese proficiency.
你肯定非常努力,中文水平才会这么高。
④In the past two years, you have kept on practicing erhu every day, which helps you stand out in the talent show.
在过去的两年里,你每天都坚持练习二胡,这让你在才艺表演中脱颖而出。
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⑤We are just as proud as we can be of you and send our congratulations.
我们为你感到无比骄傲,祝贺你。
⑥Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for all the good future in the world.
请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和最美好的祝福。
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[黄金模板]
Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first place in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.说明要祝贺的事情,表祝贺
“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but you have also competed in various Chinese chess contests.详述对方为此所做的努力
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So I’m so happy that you became the champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.
Congratulations again.再次表示祝贺
Yours,
Li Hua
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