周9-6-Saturday 提分读后续写（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢应用文+读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，聚焦读后续写训练，包含Week 5和Week 9的续写材料，提供原文情节线、续写要求、分阶段情节指导（如衔接过渡设计）、美文诵读示例及佳句、语料积累等学习支架。 资料特色突出核心素养培养，通过佳句赏析提升语言能力，分阶段情节指导（如“急转弯应对”“朋友鼓励”场景）培养思维品质与学习能力，创新设计续写步骤与主题升华方法，帮助学生掌握续写技巧，提升逻辑表达，为教师提供结构化教学资源，适配高中各年级，尤其助力高三备考。

Saturday　提分读后续写 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was packed and ready to go skiing for the first time. It felt like I was about to take an adventure with the world at my feet. Feeling empowered, I knew something brilliant was going to come out of the trip. I was more than excited at the thought of spending an entire week with my best friend, Lindsay, hanging out and enjoying winter. 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 Early Monday morning my youth group boarded our bus for the ski trip. Once at the destination, we saw the skiers floating so easily and gracefully down the slopes. By the time I got my skis and boots, I was confident I’d be a fantastic skier. During the lessons, I mastered the art of skiing within 30 minutes. After spending most of the time practicing again and again on the run for beginners, we were able to fly down the hill by the end of the day. In the evening, we all felt extremely tired. Complaining about the pain our ski boots had caused, Lindsay and I decided we weren’t skiing the next day. Well, of course, our friends wouldn’t hear of that. 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 So, the next morning we found ourselves in line for the ski lift, which wound its way up the high mountain. Lindsay and I stared helplessly at each other, our eyes showing nothing but fear. After I got into the lift, I sat totally still on the chair with my eyes tightly shut, not daring to look outside. The lift rose so fast that before I knew it, I had floated up the mountain. When I finally opened my eyes, I found myself at the top in one piece. Thankfully, I was still alive! 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 Standing at the top of the long slope, with the skis pointing downward, I realized I was shaking. I glanced at Lindsay and found that she was scared too, for her poles kept tapping rapidly against the sides of her boots. Taking a deep breath and gathering all our courage, we gave each other an encouraging nod and both took off. At first I barely moved, but slowly I allowed myself to gain some speed. Soon I was shooting down the mountain with my heart beating wildly. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 　　Then a sharp turning suddenly came into view.___________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 　　I was on the point of crying when I felt a hand on my shoulder.______ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 请参考附录二~六 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 基本要素 主要人物I, Lindsay 原文情节线“我”第一次去滑雪,相信自己会成为一名出色的滑雪者→“我”在第一天进行基础练习,并且第一天结束前就能滑下山了→第二天“我”真正开始滑雪时,才发现滑雪没有那么简单。 主题克服恐惧、战胜自己 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 续写情节 第一段 衔接①:衔接首句“然后,出现一个急转弯”,可写“我”如何应对这个急转弯,结果如何。过渡句:“我”此时的身体状况和内心的感受。衔接②:尾句衔接第二段首句中的“我正要哭”,写“我”面临的困难。 第二段 衔接③:衔接首句“我正要哭的时候,感到有一只手搭在我肩上”,可写这个人是谁,“我”有什么反应。过渡句:朋友的鼓励→继续滑雪→顺利滑到山脚下。结尾+主题:(协同原文首段中的go skiing for the first time+升华)战胜恐惧,充分享受第一次滑雪。 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 　　Then a sharp turning suddenly came into view. I knew I had to stop, but I was moving too fast to control myself. I tried everything, but in vain (徒劳的). There was only one final option—falling over. After rolling for what felt like forever, I lay still, head dizzy. Worse still, my joints were painful and every muscle hurt. I knew there was no way I could keep going. When I struggled to my feet (挣扎着站起来) and brushed the snow off, the terrible truth hit me: I still had half the mountain to go! 美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 I was on the point of crying when I felt a hand on my shoulder. It was Lindsay. “I have to quit,” I said hopelessly. Pointing to some skillful skiers, Lindsay said, “Look, they are skiing so easily. Come on, I believe we can make it, too.” Looking at her determined expression, I was instantly inspired and seconds later we were both skiing down the slope. Along the way there were a few more falls, but we were not defeated. At the bottom, I glanced up (抬头看) the mountain and felt a wave of gratitude and pride (感到感激和自豪). Thanks to Lindsay’s encouragement, I had overcome my fears and enjoyed my first-time skiing to the fullest. 美文诵读 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 佳句　①After rolling for what felt like forever, I lay still, head dizzy. (动名词作宾语+宾语从句+独立主格) ②When I struggled to my feet and brushed the snow off, the terrible truth hit me: I still had half the mountain to go! (when引导的时间状语从句) 原文续写语料积累　①glance at 瞥见　②gather all one’s courage 鼓足勇气 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 $